~Won't Give Up~ 12/12 UPDATED p16

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kiran

@kiran_28

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

that was a good one grace!!! 👏
its really bad that Prem and Heer had lost their child...and they were not talking to each other. 😲 😭
But i love the way they clear their misunderstandings and fears.
Love their romantic scenes 😳
And now the baby is coming again
eagerly waiting for the next
pls cont soon
thanx 4 pm

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

loved the update.. the accident part was really emotional...but glad that heer conceived again and now they are gonna welcome their baby to the world...

Brilliant.. fantastic.. update and looking forward to the epilogue...

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NOOR

@Noor_PremHeer

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Wow Grace!!!! last part made me so sad.. and i was anxiously waiting for Update.. Tough they lost that baby.. but it made their relation more strong..and now i understood the real meaning of this SS title..
loved the bathing scene! it was so well written.. and Prem's apology..it made me cry really..
and now baby coming 😃
Update it soon.. wana know if its boy or girl 😛

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Deshian4lyf

@Deshian4lyf

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Awwhhh thanksss Gracee! This was awesome! I had tears in my eyes reading this whole update!! Thank you for the update! Do update soon again! Xoxo

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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Grace 🤗 thanks for updating.
Phew big sigh of relief - PH alive and ok.
Lot of light moments and humour - I like how Preet Meher interacted in hospital. Also the way Preet mentioning fav donuts was a v subtle way of showing how much he cared. This scene made me hungry hehe
The way Heer reacted when she found out about the loss was v touching. I was shocked when I read she slapped the doc o m g
I really didn't like the way parents getting over protective over Heer , depriving the privacy of the couple. From this you bring up the important point and its v important to talk things over instead of avoiding. As shutting off the obvious topic isn't going to solve any issues. In this couple's case they needlessly suffered emotionally after the discharge.
Meher is true friend and an awesome partner in crime for Preet 😆 She helped PH come closer and realizing about what both were going through. Bathroom scene was fab - it seemed like a mini drama as it showed all kind of emotions.
I laughed when Prem was ordering Preet for gallon of ice cream for Heer and pint of ice cream for him 🤣 I guess that was expected for having been interrupted.

PH recovering fully and about to have baby is really awesome 😃 Prem seemed to be over protective after the accident. Hope he relaxes soon though that may not happen until after the baby safely arrive . I am very excited to read the next part. Thanks for the fun update. I enjoyed all the funny moments you added. Thanks for including Meher PH and also Preet PH scenes. I love the interaction.

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luvharshiti

@luvharshiti

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

the update was fantabulous. ..loved it ..

premeer scenes were awesome ...

waiting for the next update ...

please update soon ...

and thanks for the pm ...

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sowmya18

@sowmya18

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Loved it.. Waiting for the epilogue..

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Hey ...

The update was a total emotional roller coaster ride ...

Fist the accident ,thens the miscarriage , then Prem feeling guilty , tension in their relation , Preet & Meher got engaged , And the best part was how beautifully they sort out their problems ...

And now we are soon going to get the good news ...

Prem is taking the new role perfectly ...

Loved his concern for Heer ...

God bless them ...

But You are ending it ..

Will miss it ...

And it was a pleasure reading ...

You are an amazing writer ...

Keep up the good work ..