|| OS - The End || Updated - Pt3, Pg4 *PMs Later* - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

Shweta you're writing sad story 😒

I'm never excited to read sad ones. But since I started this, I want to know what happened next 🤔
All your fault getting this to my attention.
Your message is good. Peace without war can avoid so much pain.
People never learn though, seeing all the troubles around the world that is going on 😆
Good try. Your writing is v. good and it was to the point, without so much of drag.
It was kind of fun to see your vertical dots to find out what was at the end , but so sad 😭

I want a happy OS from you next, to make up for all this sadness ok?😡

Please update it. I appreciate your thoughtfulness of giving an OS instead of FF.
People really should start FF if there is time to commit for it. I understand that.

Thank you for sharing your creative piece.


😳 😆. . . yeah, I am writing a sad one. Wasn't in the mood to write some thing happy-happy. Hmm, so thought to just pen down my frustration and tears on the paper. 😛

Yes, that's the worst thing...people don't learn and so many people are harmed, so many lives shattered. Hmm, thank you di...I hope the second part is good too but it is really very short.

😆, okay I promise to write a happy OS next. 😆
Its always a pleasure to share to get your comments and views on any creative piece of mine. 😃

P.S. - Hope I don't get shot... 🤢
😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
The second part has been updated but don't worry I won't end it here.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
aww such a sad os 😭
very nice
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
though it's a sad one ... bt i really liked it & thnx 4 d pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
very nice os ...
please keep writing more.. ..
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
very nice os👏... but sad one😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Gr8 update ya..loved it..
Yes..al stories can't hv happy ending..and i must say..this sad ending story touchd my heart..gr8 ya..
Keep it up..
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Hey Shweta 😒

Darn why did it have to be so sad. 😭
Your writing style and choice of words were very good so can't really pick anything to criticize here.
I'm happy about the way you write but sad about the content of writing 🤔🤓
Now since you told us it's true story so I can't get mad at you though - kind of frustrated 😡
ok I won't shoot u 🤣Glad my threat worked though as you really were forced to sit down and write for us 😆

Thank you 🤗 Next part next weekend please.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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simply Awsum OS!! 😊

Loved the way you are writing it!
Major Prem Juneja ! WOW!! his heer!! 😃
Ahhh... Loved reading it, its a sad one but superb!!

will you continue this?

TC! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey shwetu!!! it was truely a touching update!
it was really awesome.. lekin kitna saddy saddy update😭😭
loved it,, thank you so much for an awesome update!
thanks a toonnn.. so next update coming soon hopefuuly?

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