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Posted: 12 years ago
Note:- Guys i know that i have said earlier that i will update the next part soon...but friends now there is a problem 😕 and the problem is that my first semesters are starting from the last week of November till 15th dec...so guys i won't be able to update till 15th dec.😒 I m so sorry...till then pls wait patiently...SORRY 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_28

Note:- Guys i know that i have said earlier that i will update the next part soon...but friends now there is a problem 😕 and the problem is that my first semesters are starting from the last week of November till 15th dec...so guys i won't be able to update till 15th dec.😒 I m so sorry...till then pls wait patiently...SORRY 😭

no problem... will wait, best of luck for ur exam...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_28

Note:- Guys i know that i have said earlier that i will update the next part soon...but friends now there is a problem 😕 and the problem is that my first semesters are starting from the last week of November till 15th dec...so guys i won't be able to update till 15th dec.😒 I m so sorry...till then pls wait patiently...SORRY 😭



hey no problem..exams are more important...BEST OF LUCK for your exams
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmm 3 more days to go and then we will get an update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter-24


Prem, Heer, Kunal and Manmeet, they are sitting in Prem's college canteen, eating paneer roll.

Kunal (while eating):hmmm!!! Sach mein maza agaya yeh rolls khake. Yaad hai Prem, hum kaise accountancy ki class bunk karke, yeh rolls khane ate the yahan.

Manmeet: exactly aj bhi in rolls mein wo hi baat hai, jo kabhi humare time pe hua karti thi.

Heer: Han sahi kaha!!!

Kunal: kya sahi kaha!!! Tum to thi bhi nahi hamare sath college mein phir tumhe kaise pata.

Prem: kyunki, mae Heer ke liye specially yeh rolls pack karwa ke jata tha, isiliye.

Heer (teasingly winked at Kunal): huh!!! Dekha.

Kunal: han thik hai thik hai huh!!!

Manmeet: ok ok ab rolls to kha liye. Ab chilli potatoes order karte. Muje wo bohot pasand hai. Tum bhi try karna Heer, tumhe bohot pasand ayenge.

Heer smiled.

Kunal: ok so lets order.

Heer: umm ek minute Kunal, chilli potatoes ke sath honey chilli potatoes bhi order karna. Prem se teekha khana nahi khaya aja na.

Prem smiled looking at Heer. They ordered chilli potatoes and honey chilli potatoes. Kunal and Manmeet was eating chilli potatoes and Prem and Heer, honey chilli potatoes.

Manmeet (looking at Heer): arre Heer, tumne to chilli potatoes try bhi nahi kiye. Yeh lo khake dekho!!!

Manmeet put his fork near her mouth. Heer becomes uncomfortable.

Heer (smiled uncomfortably): umm manmeet mae kha lungi.

Manmeet: nahi abhi khao. Yeh lo.

Manmeet insist and Heer looked at Prem who nodded his head. Seeing Prem's acceptance, heer smiled and took the bite from Manmeet's hand.

Manmeet: tasty haina. Yeh lo ek aur bite lo.

Heer uncomfortably took another bite from Manmeet's hand.

Manmeet: Heer wo sauce lagi hai tumhare chehre pe.

Before Heer could wipe that sauce. Manmeet wiped it. Instead of using tissue his used his hand. This made Prem angry. He balled his hand into fist to control his anger.

Prem (angrily thinking): Yeh Manmeet apnea p ko samjhta kya hai. Chilli potatoes khilane tak to thik tha. Lekin ab to kuch zyada hi ho raha hai. Agar ab isne Heer ke kareeb jane ki koshish kin a I swear mae bhool jaounga ki yeh mera dost hai.

Soon Prem's thought was interrupted by the joyful voices.

Ash and Misha: Hello everyone

Heer (happily): Arre Ash, Mish. Tum log yahan.

Ash: Han tum to hume bhool ke yahan Kunal, Prem or Manmeet ke sath enjoy kar rahi ho. Tumne to hame invite bhi nahi kiya.

Misha: Right isiliye humne socha ki hum apnea p ko hi invite kar lete hai.

Heer: Arre aisa nahi hai yaar. Subha tak to mera aisa koi plan nahi tha. Wo to yeh log achanak se aye or kaha ki ready ho jao hum ghumne ja rahe hai. Warna mae hangout karne jaoun or tum logo ko, apne best buddies ko bhool jaoun aisa ho sakta hai kya.

Ash and Misha (happily): Kabhi nahi!!!

Trio hugged each other tightly.

Kunal: Arre tum teeno apas mae hi bharat milap karte rahoge kya. Hum log bhi yahan hai.

Misha: opps sorry'. Hello guys

Ash: han sorry hello'

Prem, Kunal and Manmeet: Hi!!!

Manmeet: so hum logo ki pait pooja to ho gai. Tum logo ko kuch khana hai?

Misha: Arre nhi, hum abhi pizza hut se pizza khake ayen hai.

Heer: ok so aage kya plan hai.

Kunal: kyun na hum sab "Ward Lake" chale .

Prem: Han good idea.

Prem (thinks): Atleast waha to muje Heer ke sath akele time milega.

Heer (thinks): Kash waha muje Prem ke sath thorda time akele spend karne ko mile.

Manmeet: han to chalte hain phir

Ash: ok lets go!!!

[ok guys here is the next chapter. Its bit short but mae kya karun yaar'forum band hone ke chakkar mae dimang hi kaam nahi kar raha. Anyways one thing I want to make clear and i.e no matter what I am not going to shift my FF to fanfic section. Or ab next chapter kab milega "no idea" hehehe whenever I'll get time I'll update]

Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmmm... this manmeet is trying to be over-friendly with heer... i am also angry like prem...

awesome update... fantastic...fabulous... and eagerly waiting for the next update... hope we get it soon :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear
Short and sweet
This manmeet is getting overboard
Premeer was cute and heer understanding prem and hesitating to get from manmeet and prem 's anger showed the depth of their relation.And prem used to get her paneer rolls and heer knowing prem's choice as honey chilli potatoes was very cute of them.
Good update dear
Hope we will get updates soon as your exams are also over
Now waiting for "Ward lake "trip.
Continue soon
Take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update ...👏
thanks for the pm ...
please update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update..
i hate manmeet..pls make him fall for ash or someone pls...and leave premeer..
looking forward to see premeer romance...
update soon
thanks for pm

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