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kiran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Guys here is a surprise update for you 😉

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kiran

@kiran_28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Chapter-11

The party was really rocking.Heer was standing in the corner watching Prem and Sanjana dancing. Just then Kunal came and stood beside Heer. He smirked watching Heer's expression.

Kunal: Arre Heer tum yahan akeli khardi kya kar rahi ho. Dance kyun nahi kar rahi?

Heer (looking at Prem and Sanjana): Nahi Kunal mera mann nahi kar raha.

Kunal: Arre aise kaise chalega. Atleast ek dance to banta hai. Mere sath hi karlo, waise bhi koi lardki to muje ghas dalti hi nahi. Kum se kum tum to mere birthday ke din mere sath dance karlo. Please!

He extend his hand towards Heer.

Kunal: Please!!!!!!!!!!

Heer smiled and Give her hand in Kunal's hand. And went with him to dance floor.

On the same time on dance floor

Prem: I don't believe ki tum itna acha dance karti ho Sanju. Tum to chupi rustam nikli.

Sanjana (blushingly): Arre nahi aisi baat nahi hai. Bus aise hi thorda bohot dance kar leti hun.

Prem smiled and then he saw Heer and Kunal are dancing. Seeing Kunal's hand on Heer's waist, Prem's blood boiled. He don't know why but didn't like the fact that Kunal and Heer both are dancing so closely. Though he knows that Kunal and Heer are only friends, not more than that. But something was bothering him.

While dancing Kunal saw Prem was glaring at them. Kunal smirked.

Kunal (thinks): Oh ok so now Mr. Prem Juneja is jealous. Ab ayega maza. Very good Kunal keep it up!

Then Kunal purposefully tucked Heer's strands that was falling on her face, behind her ears. This made Prem more angry and jealous . Heer looked at Kunal confusingly.

Kunal: ummm'. Wo kuch nahi Heer, actually tumhare balon mae kuch laga hua tha to bus wohi hata raha tha.

Heer: Oh acha!

Prem was continuously looking at Heer and Kunal, but soon he was interrupted by Sanjana.

Sanjana: Prem muje tumse kuch baat karni thi.

Prem: Han bolo (then again looking at Kunal and Heer) kya baat karni thi.

Sanjana (nervously): ummm'' Prem yahan bohot shor hai. Kya hum bahar chalke baat kar sakte hain. Please.

Prem (irritately): Sanju yahi bata do na.

Sanjana: Prem please!

Prem (unwillingly): acha thik hai chalo.

Heer saw that Prem and Sanjana are going out and become more sad. Kunal was observing Heer's expression.

Kunal: Kya hua Heer aj tum itni chup-chap si kyun ho?

Heer: Nahi Kunal aisi koi baat nahi hai.

Kunal: Noway! Mae maan hi nahi sakta ki koi baat nahi hai. Kuch to baat hai. Khair chordo, mae abhi ata hun ok.

Heer smilingly nodded her head.

Preet was secretly drinking Beer with his friends. Just then Kunal and Meher came there.

Kunal (hitting on Preet's head): Abe saale! Yeh kya kar raha hai tu huh!

Meher: Oh Preet! Tum beer pee rahe ho, mae abhi Prem bhaiya ko batati hun.

Preet: Arre nahi nahi! Maine kuch nahi kiya. Wo bus yeh log zid kar rahe the isiliye mae to bus taste kar raha tha thordi si.

Kunal: Acha taste kar raha tha! Beta tuje to mae baad mein dekhunga. Abhi to tu or Meher Prem or Sanjana ke peeche jao. Wo dono abhi abhi bahar gaye hain. Un pe nazar rakho or pata karo ki un dono ke beech mein kya baatein ho rahi hai, ok.

Meher: Ok bhaiya!

Preet in James Bond + SRK style

Preet: Bond! James Bond! Naam to suna hi hoga, hmmm!

Meher hit Preet on his arm

Meher: O antic piece, nautanki band kar or chal ab.

Preet :Aj kal to kisi ke talent ki to koi kadar hi nahi hai.

Meher (irritately): Prrreeettt

Meher dragged Preet outside and Kunal laughed at them.

Outside

Prem: Kya baat hai Sanju, kya baat karni thi?

Meher and Preet was hiding behind the bushes. Preet was continuously irritating Meher by doing James Bond's acting.

Sanjana: ummm Prem yeh baat mae bohot pehle se hi tumko bata dena chahati thi, lekin''

Prem: Sanju saf- saf batao ki kya baat hai.

Sanjana (nervously): Prem mae kehna chahati thi ki mae'''.

Prem: Han bolo!

Sanjana: Prem I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mae tumse bohot pyar karti hun. I really love you Prem.

Prem, Meher and Preet were shocked

Preet (shockingly): Haila! Kahani mein twist!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Meher (shockingly): Prem, Heer aur wo!!!!!!!!!!!!

Preet (shockingly): Nahi Meher! Prem, Heer aur Sanjana!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love Triangle!!!!!!!!!!

Prem was looking at Sanjana shockingly

[Guys that was the 11^th chapter. Now what will be Prem's reaction and how will he react, this will be revealed in next update]

Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago

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priya

@JugniPH

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

awesome part...
Thank god now prem knows wt's in sanjana's mind..
i hope he won't take any wrong decision due to any misunderstandings..
ok..i like kunal..and prem's jealousy part is really cute..
MEET part is really funny...
now update next part very soon...
k?
thanks for pm..

Edited by priyahmt - 13 years ago

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#204

kiran u knw wht? if right now u would have been there infront of me.. i wouldhave def killed u for stoping at wrong point!!!
and that sanjana i will to for sure kill her one day..
and now if prem does something stupid i will kill him
but it was a sweet cute update..and surprise bhi jo tha!
so love you for that.. lekin next update jaldi chhaiye..
please.. update soon.. and excitedly waiting for next part
btw.. i loved preet's dialogue
keep smiling.,. take care.. love ya..
loads of love
vrushika

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kiran

@kiran_28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: vrushika
kiran u knw wht? if right now u would have been there infront of me.. i wouldhave def killed u for stoping at wrong point!!!
and that sanjana i will to for sure kill her one day..
and now if prem does something stupid i will kill him
but it was a sweet cute update..and surprise bhi jo tha!
so love you for that.. lekin next update jaldi chhaiye..
please.. update soon.. and excitedly waiting for next part
btw.. i loved preet's dialogue
keep smiling.,. take care.. love ya..
loads of love
vrushika

hey bhagwan vrushu itna gussa!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😲relax dear kyun bechari us sanjana ke peeche pardi hai😆. take a chill pill baby 😉

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Scribbler M

@Scribbler184

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Oho...toh jealousy funda is being used. 😆 Hats off to Kunal!!!! 👏 And off-course hats off to you Kiran di...👏 👍🏼

Really nice update...I like the language you use...it is funny, cool and awesome. Like it.

Keep it up...tc

P.S. - Please do PM me next time. Thank you.

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kiran

@kiran_28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: -Shwetasri-
Oho...toh jealousy funda is being used. 😆 Hats off to Kunal!!!! 👏 And off-course hats off to you Kiran di...👏 👍🏼

Really nice update...I like the language you use...it is funny, cool and awesome. Like it.
Keep it up...tc

P.S. - Please do PM me next time. Thank you.

awww thnk u soo much dear for ur appreciation 🤗. next time i'll surely pm you 😃

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Scribbler M

@Scribbler184

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: kiran_28
awww thnk u soo much dear for ur appreciation 🤗. next time i'll surely pm you 😃

You do deserve the appreciation...😃 🤗 For such nice updates and for updating regularly. 😉 😳

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kiran

@kiran_28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: -Shwetasri-

You do deserve the appreciation...😃 🤗 For such nice updates and for updating regularly. 😉 😳

arre bus bus kitni tareef karogi meri, muje sharam ati hai 😳

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: kiran_28
hey bhagwan vrushu itna gussa!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😲relax dear kyun bechari us sanjana ke peeche pardi hai😆. take a chill pill baby 😉

gussa chodo kiran! sanjana ke pinche to i will be haat dhonke!!!
so better update soon