OS - Perfect Valentine's Day ~ 14/02

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Today Valentine's day.

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Perfect Valentine's Day

Shot 1

Heer is lying in the bed without opening her eyes. Today Valentine's day. Prem has promised to make this day memorable for her. It is their first Valentine's day after they found out their love after 20 years.


Prem and Heer were fixed by their grand parents when they were just few years old. That time Prem was 5 and Heer was 4 years. After that Prem went to Canada with his father Lalit Juneja and mother Gay3. Prem grew up in Canada with Heer as his love and Heer in India thinking Prem as her husband. Her grandma always taught her everything about love.

After 20 years when Prem returned with his parents and siblings, Juneja's found only Heer and her sister Meher alone in this small Village struggling for their daily life. Lalit took Heer and Meher with him to Canada. He decided to get them married to his children there. Prem and Heer wanted to live as lovers for few days. Lalit and Gay3 understood their feelings and decided to leave to their own decision.

Heer slowly opened her eyes to see Prem's first surprise for the day. She sat on the bed with a wide open eyes. Room filled with red and white flowers and heart shape balloons. She saw a small pack next to her on the bed. There is a paper pinned on it. 'Get ready. wear this dress'. signed by Prem. She touched his sign on that paper. She smiled 'this is my first surprsie for the day.' She opened the pack. A pink dress. 'everyone gives red. Prem choosed Pink.' She pouted. 'there is something behind this pink'. She took the dress and went to washroom.

In few minutes she took shower. She wore Prem's gift dress. She looked herself once in the bathroom mirror. 'Perfect selection. But' she opened the door saying in low voice 'these gifts are not important to me. I want to see you Prem.' She stepped out of the bathroom and lifted her head. Prem standing in fornt of her with a wide open hands. She ran into his hands. He kissed her forehead 'I love you Heer.' Heer buried her face into his chest wrapping her hand around him. 'I love you too Prem.' She hugged him tight while she increased his tightness. They stood silent for a while.

Heer lifted her head from his chest 'Prem, tell me.' both are still in each others hug. Prem rubbed his nose on hers 'what?' Heer giggled inhaling his love 'red symbolizes love. but you gifted me pink dress.' Prem gave a quick peck on her lips 'so this is my angel's confusion.' Heer 'ha'. Prem 'love can't be expressed with words or gifts. It comes from heart. Colour is not the big deal. and red is old fashion.' Heer pouted 'oh'. Prem pressed his forehead on hers 'ha. but' Heer repeated 'but' Prem 'your bridal dress will be red only.' Heer 'why? that too I'll choose pink or something else.' Prem shook his head 'no way.' Heer 'why?' Prem 'already done.' Heer got excited 'is it? I want to see.' Prem 'can but on our wedding day.' Heer jumped inside his hug 'so bapuji fixed our marriage date.' Prem 'ha' shook his head. Heer kissed his cheek 'when?' Prem 'have enough time. Next year Feb 14'. Heer sadly 'next year.' Prem 'ha.' Heer like a kid 'why so long?' Prem 'I want our marriage on valentine day.' Heer 'today also Feb 14.' Prem 'its so near. We just met 3 months back. I want to' he gently moved his lips on her cheeks 'romance with my angel.' Enjoying his love 'can do after marriage also.' Prem looked at her face 'there is big difference in romancing with you as lover and wife.' He pressed his lips on her nose and started nuzzling her face with his lips. Heer remained silent enjoying his love with closed eyes. He kissed her eyes. 'I have a gift for you Heer.' She opened her eyes. He let her to the couch. He made her sit. Heer anxiously looked at Prem. He knelt before her. He took payal out of his pocket. Heer face lit up. Prem put around her ankle and kissed her legs. Heer 'Prem, what are you doing?' Prem 'kissing' Heer 'but' Prem quickly knelt before her resting himself on her lap 'only I have the permission to kiss you anywhere.' Heer shyly smiled and shook her head. He cupped her face 'now I can even listen to your steps.' Heer looked at his lips with love. Prem understanding her thought 'come on. Why are you waiting?' Heer shyly smiled and looked away. Prem 'I'm not leaving you today.' He turned her face to look at him. Heer 'I don't know Prem'. Prem 'no one will teach you all this.' Prem 'no' she just pushed him away. Prem 'give me one. I'll give you what ever you want.' Heer 'without kiss also you will give everything I ask for. I know.' Prem pleaded 'Heer one'. Heer leaned forward but shook her head negatively and smiled shyly 'Premmm'. Prem got up and sat next to her. He remain silent to give her sometime. He know today Heer wants to give him a kiss on lips but will take little time. He is looking at her face lovingly.

Heer slowly turned and looked at Prem who is patiently waiting for her kiss. Heer 'Prem, I don't know.' Prem 'there is nothing to learn in this Heer. me too not trained in this.' Heer gave a look. Prem 'promise. I don't have any training in this.' Heer 'really?'. Prem shook his head up and down like child. Heer slowly inched forward 'should not get disappoint.' Prem 'why should i?' Heer 'I heard some not satisfy' Prem didn't want her to confuse herself more. he quickly pressed his lips on hers. Heer surprised. He captured her lips lovingly. Heer slowly melted in his kiss responded slowly. She closed her eyes enjoying the new pleasure. Her hands moved up to his dense hair for support. His hands gently caressed her cheeks.

They spent satisfied amount of time and break up from the liplock. She buried her face shyly into his chest. Prem hugged her. He stroked her hair lovingly. Her fingers played on his chest. he kissed her head 'I love you Baby.' Heer 'me too.' She kissed his chest.


Their lovely moment is interrupted by 'PBBB'


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Heer lifted her head from his chest. Prem confusingly 'Preet'. Preet knocked the door again 'PBB'. Prem and Heer got up and rushed to the door. Prem opened the door. 'Preet, what happened?' Preet entered the room pushing Prem and Heer inside. Preet 'PB, you take Heer babhi and go through the back door.' Prem 'why Preet?' Preet 'PB do what I say. Bapuji and ma told this to do.' Heer 'Why?' Preet 'bahbi there is no time to explain. Pack your things. Our manager will bring the tickets to the airport.' Prem 'airport?' Preet 'ha PB, go.'

Meher came in. 'di, I'll pack your things. Preet you go and bring jiju's things.' Preet 'ha. PB hurry up.' Preet ran to Prem's room. Meher opened the closet. Heer 'Meher what is happening here.' Meher 'di, we don't have time to discuss about that now.'

They heared screaming Prem name from downstairs 'Premm Premmm'. Prem is shocked and looked at Heer 'this is Sanjana's voice.' Heer 'but she is no more.' Prem 'ha, 10 months now. then how?' Meher 'ha Sanjana' Prem is about to run down. But he stopped and looked at Heer. he took her hands and ran down. Meher screamed 'jiju'. Heaing Meher's sound Preet came out of Prem's room. 'what happened?' Meher 'jiju is going down.' Preet and Meher ran behind Prem and Heer.

Prem came down with Heer. When they reached downstairs 'Sanjana'. Sanjana ran to Prem and hugged him. Prem 'Sanjana, where did you went all these days?' Sanjana 'I was in the hospital. Don't know what happened to me. after meeting you i went in the car. but after that I saw myself in the hospital. Bhaiya said I fainted.' Prem 'but I thought you.' Rishab interrupted 'she is fine now and wanted to see you. that is why we came here.' Rishab 'Sanjana, you sit here. I'll talk to Prem' Sanjana sat in the couch at a distance. Rishab's wife supriya come and stood next to Prem.

Prem looked at his father and mother who are standing nervously. He looked at Preet and Meher giving angry look at him for not listening to them. He looked back at Heer. He looked at Rishab 'ha tell me.' Rishab 'Prem, Sanjana forgot everything happened on that day.' Prem confused. Supriya 'her head got hurt because of her attempt to jump from the clif. She didn't forget everything. But she forgot few things. Including' she paused 'your refusal to marry her.' Prem is silent. But he sensed something and stretched his hand backwards and held Heer's. He pulled her little closer behind him. Rishab noticed Prem's reaction.

Rishab 'telling that to her now.' he looked back at Sanjana 'will put her life in danger.' Prem 'so'. Rishab 'you have to accept her love now.' Supriya 'from the time she opened her eyes she is asking only about you.' Rishab 'we didn't inform you when we found her in unconscious state. That time doctors didn't give any hope.' Prem 'She knows my love for Heer.' Supriya 'she didn't remember anything.' Prem angrily 'she jumped from the clif only after knowing about Heer. then how she forgot that alone.' Rishab 'don't know. She remember only about doing that programme with you in the college.' Supriya 'don't you remember that day also one accident happen and she was in the hospital with head injury.' Prem confused.

Rishab 'just accept her love that is enough. We'll slowly make her understand.' Prem hesitated. Rishab looked at Heer 'Please, I'm begging for my sister.' Heer melted in his pleading. 'Prem' Prem interrupted 'Heer, don't talk anything now.' Heer 'Prem, just' Prem 'Heer, you go to your room.' Heer 'Prem there is' Prem angrily 'Heeer, do what I said.' Heer held his hand tight 'Prem just accepting her love is not going to do any harm.' Prem 'are you mad Heer?' Heer interrupted 'Prem, she is your friend. That you can't deny.' Prem 'i agree. she is just my friend. but she expects more than that.' Heer 'you have to think good for your friend. You have to save her life.' Prem 'Heer' Heer 'Prem, accept her love. I'm saying.'Heer pleaded to Prem.

Gay3 'Heer' Heer interrupted 'ma. please.' Gay3 kept quiet 'you are doing mistake Heer.' Preet and Meher tried to interrupt but Heer stopped them. Lalit silently shook his head and walked to one corner thinking 'why these two always struggles in their life?' Heer 'Prem accept.' Prem silent and looked at Preet who shook his head negatively signalling not to obey to Heer's words. Heer pleaded 'for me Prem.' Prem slowly shook his head in acceptance.

Rishab happily 'Sanjana, come Prem is calling you.' Sanjana happily came there and hugged Prem 'what are you discussing.' Prem stood silently. Sanjana saw Prem holding Heer's hand. 'Prem I love you.' she slowly pulled his hand out of Heer's. Heer stepped back. Sanjana 'Prem, you love me na.' Prem felt a pain in his heart and shook his head positively. Sanjana happily kept her head on his chest 'I love you'. Prem gently pushed her back looking around. Sanjana looked around 'I'm sorry. I forget the elders in happiness.' Prem gave a fake smile. Sanjana 'Bhiaya, today valentine day. I want to marry Prem today.' Everyone felt earth moving under them. Rishab happily 'ha okay, what Prem?' Supriya 'ya nice day to remember rest of the life.' Prem angrily looked at Rishab. Rishab pleaded.

Sanjana 'Prem agree with me.' Prem silent. Heer 'ha' Sanjana 'who are you?' Heer slowly stepped back. Sanjana turned and looked at Gay3. 'uncle aunty I want to marry Prem today.' They are also silent. Rishab 'Mr. Juneja, I'll make the arrangement.' Lalit and Gay3 thought he is just telling infornt of Sanjana. They gave their acceptance. Sanjana ran to Gay3 and touched her feet. She took blessing from Lalit. Rishab signalled Supriya to take outside. Rishab is silent until they out of the house.

Rishab 'thanks Prem. I never thought you will agree to marry her. you saved my sister's life.' Prem angrily 'I didn't accept for marriage.' Rishab 'just now everyone accepted.' Lalit 'Mr. Rishab, what are you thinking about us. Do you think we are clowns in the circus.' Gay3 'you came and told your sister's life is in danger and just asked him to accept her love.' Preet 'now you are saying to marry her.' Lalit 'I feel you are gone mad now.' Rishab 'She asked him and you all agreed.' Lalit 'we just acted.' Rishab 'she took that as acceptance.' Gay3 'but we didn't.' Rishab 'this cheating.' Prem 'you are trying to cheat us. Just go and tell you sister the truth.' Rishab 'no I can't she will die.' Prem 'that is not my problem.' Rishab 'she is your friend.' Prem 'just friend.'

Rishab 'Prem, think. She will die.' Lalit 'Mr. Rishab enough. Just leave.' Gay3 'you are spoiling our children mood today.' Rishab 'Please, Sanjana will die.' Argument continued between Rishab and Juneja's. Prem is no way in the mood to accept Sanjana.

Heer interrupted 'Mr. Rishab, Prem will marry Sanjana today evening. You go and make arrangements.' Complete silence filled the room. juneja's are shocked to hear this from Heer's mouth. Rishab surprised 'how? He is not even ready to listen.' Prem 'Heer, you are unnecessarily interfering in this matter.' Prem is about to leave saying 'Mr. Rishab, Heer is my wife. No one can take her place.' Heer stopped him. Prem looked at her confusingly. Heer 'Mr. Rishab, Prem will marry your sister. do the arrangements.' Rishab 'thanks. I believe you.' He went happily. Prem dragged Heer to her room.

Prem pushed Heer on the bed. Heer fell on the bed and looked at angry Prem. Prem looked at Heer 'are you mad?' Prem restlessly 'how an you Heer. how?' Heer silently got up 'no Prem i'm not mad.' Prem 'then why can you do like that?' Heer 'Prem, calm down. Listen to me.' Prem 'no no. instead of doing that I'll die.' Heer is shocked. Prem pulled her into his hug 'Heer, you love me na. then why are you doing like this.' Heer didn't respond. Prem 'tell me Heer, don't you love me?' Tears came out of her eyes. She shook her head 'hmmm'. Prem 'then why Heer?' Heer 'she too loves you.' Prem 'i only love you Heer.' Heer 'Prem, if you refuse she will die. I'll not.' Prem 'without you I'll die Heer.' Heer 'no Prem, you have to live with her if your love for me is true.' Prem 'what stupid?' Heer 'Prem marry her.' Prem 'I can't Heer.' he hugged her tight 'I can't. I love you.' He kissed her thinking she melt in his love and gave up that stupid thought. But Heer is no mood to back off from her decision. Heer gently pushed his face away from her. 'Prem, few minutes back you gave me promise to do anything for me.' Prem understood she is trapping him 'ya. You ask anything but not this.' Heer 'promise is promise.' Prem 'Heer' Heer stepped out of his hand 'Prem, last valentine gift.' She bit her lips to control her tears. Prem stood silent for a second. Heer 'Prem, please' she broke down in tears 'I'm asking you my valentine gift from you.' Prem shook his head in acceptance. Without looking at her face he angrily stormed out of the room.


Heer sat on the floor crying. She cried 'Prem i love you. i'm sorry. i don't want to hurt you. but i don't have any other way. Sanjana also loves you. I can live with your memories but she can't.' She cried and cried untile she felt there is no tears in her eyes. A thought striked 'if i stay here Prem will find a way to stop this marriage. I have to leave this place as soon as possible.' She quickly got up and changed her dress. She folded it neatly and kept it in her suitcase. She packed her things. She took all the things having Prem's memory. She didn't want to leave anything. She has decided to live with his memory but away from him. She closed her suitcase. She is about to pick up the suitcase, her payal came to her mind. Knowing Prem may feel bad hearing this payal's sound she decided to remove it. She sat on the bed to remove the payal.


Prem screamed 'mmmaaa'.

Heer looked up from his leg 'Prem' she ran out of the room towards Prem's shouting his name. She pushed the door open. The scene infornt of her made her scream 'Preemmm'. She ran inside. Prem is lying in the pool of blood. Heer knelt beside him. 'Prem Prem'. He didn't respond. she cried 'Prem Prem'. She tired to lift his head. Blood coming from the back of his head. She screamed 'ma bapuji Preet Meher'. She cried shaking 'Prem'.

Entire family members came to Prem's room hearing Heer's scream. Gay3 screamed 'Premmm'. Lalit 'how did this happened?' Preet shouted 'PB PB' Meher ran this side and that side. She picked up the phone and called the ambulance. Heer cried 'Prem open your eyes. Prem please Prem.'



In the hospital, all are tensed. Standing outside ICU. Doctor came out of the room. He gave a look to all family members. 'lot of blood gone. Can't say anything for next 4 hours. He has to gain conscious with in that.' Lalit 'anything serious?' Doctor 'I can't say anything without seeing the scan report. Need blood also.' Preet 'doctor, please' Doctor pat his back and walked along with him few steps. Preet returned with a sad face. Heer 'Preet, what is doctor saying?' Preet 'taken all the test. ' Heer 'everything happened because of me.' she cried. Preet consoled 'babhi, nothing happen to PB. He will be alright.' Heer cried 'I want to see Prem.' Preet 'no bhabi, they won't allow us now inside.' Meher 'di, jiju will be alright.' She made Heer sit. Heer was continuously blaming herself for Prem's current state. Gay3 touched Heer's head 'Heer beta, calm down. Do you have faith on your love?' Heer cried 'I broke his love.' Gay3 'no Heer. he loves you so much.' Heer 'I'm not worth to life in this world.' Gay3 hugged her 'shhh. Nothing will happen to your Prem. he is fine.' Heer cried in Gay3's shoulder.

Few minutes later, doctor came to check Prem again. when he came out of the room, Lalit interrupted 'doctor.' Doctor 'he is fine now but.' Preet looked up 'Thank God. Now he is okay then he can attend his marriage.' Doctor 'marriage? Whose marriage?' Preet 'my bhaiya's marriage today.' Doctor looked shock 'where is his would be wife?' Lalit and Gay3 looked at Preet with anger thinking 'what is the need to bring this matter now.' doctor 'I want to talk to her' Preet 'why?' Doctor 'its important.' All are confused.

Doctor 'ask her to come here immediately.' Preet shook his head 'okay doctor.' Doctor 'after she comes I want to talk to you all.' he went to his room. Lalit angrily 'what is the need to call her now?' Preet 'doctor wants to talk to her something. She is marrying her. She has the right to know about PB.' Gay3 'don't call her.' Preet 'ma, doctor wants to talk to her.' Gay3 'I don't want to see her face.' Preet 'she is going to be you DIL soon.' Gay3 'I'll never accept her as my DIL.' Heer interrupted 'Preet, you call Sanjana and inform this.' Lalit 'Heer you are doing mistake again.' Heer 'bapuji, please now Prem's health is important to us.' Gay3 'stop all this stupid marriage that is enough. Prem will be alright.' Heer 'ma, that is not possible now.' Preet interrupted 'ma, Bhabi is not going to listen to us. Now we have to find out why doctor is calling Sanjana?' Gay3 sat down with tears. Meher consoled her. Preet called Sanjana and informed about Prem.



Sanjana came out of the doctor room. Rishab and Supriya rushed to her. Lalit and Gay3 came out with tears. Heer 'ma' Gay3 hugged Heer and cried. Lalit leaned back on the wall to steady himself. Preet rushed to Lalit 'bapuji'. Sanjana walked passed everyone. Rishab stopped 'Sanjana, what did Doctor told?' Sanjana 'Bhiaya, I can't marry Prem.' Rishab and Supriya are shocked. Supriya 'why Sanjana?' Rishab whispered to her 'after so much struggle we made him agree.' Sanjana in lower voice but can be audible to Juneja's 'I can't marry a HIV+' All are shocked. Supriya shook her in unbelief 'Sanjana' Sanjana in lower voice 'ha bhabi. Prem is HIV+. Do you want me to live that person? I don't want to die soon.' Rishab doubted 'are they doing any plan to stop this marriage?' He looked at Lalit and Gay3 who are also crying uncontrollably. He thought 'no one will be ready to announce their son as HIV+.' Sanjana 'I thought he is gentleman. Ufff. I'm saved. Come bhaiya we'll go. I don't want to see his face anymore.'

Heer struggled to believe the words heard from Sanjana. She looked at Gay3 'ma, what is she saying?' Gay3 shook her head 'ha beta.' Heer 'ma how is it possible? No ma. its not possible. Prem is not that kind of person I know.' Lalit 'doctor showed us the blood test.' Rishab 'we are cancelling the marriage.' Heer 'but Sanjana loves Prem. how can you' Sanjana interrupted 'not now. I don't want to marry a person with' she walked to Heer 'HIV+. if you are feeling pity for him then marry him. you too love him na.' Heer with a shock looked at Sanjana. Meher 'you lost memory then how you know Heer di loving jiju.' Sanjana 'just acted like lost memory girl. Actually I'm not. I wanted to marry Prem. I know he won't marry because of Heer. So we just tricked. No I'm not interested. He is free to you.' She looked up 'thank God saved me. bye. Happy married life.' Heer got angry. She wanted to slap her for playing between them. But she don't want to make scene here. She understood Sanjana is capable of doing anything. She cursed herself for allowing Prem to go through such a big pain. Sanjana walked away without any sadness.

Rishab 'Mr. Lalit we called so many people for wedding but I can't inform them about this change. So everyone will call you for the reason.' Supriya 'you can happily announce this good news to them.' Rishab 'this is the revenge for ignoring my sister and choosing this girl.' Supriya 'we are saved.' Both happily walked away.

Heer looked Lalit 'Bapuji, no need to cancel the wedding.' Lalit 'have to beta.' Heer 'no bapuji, Prem and I will marry in the same time. Just call every one inform the place change. Preet make arrangements for the marriage in our garden.' Gay3 kissed Heer 'thanks beta. I thought my Prem's life ended.' Lalit 'Heer, no beta. Marrying him is not good. that is what doctor also said.' Heer 'I can't live without Prem. I want to live with him even it is for one second.' Preet 'babuji, bhabi's wish. PB will be happy to hear this.' Gay3 'but don't tell this to Prem now, Heer. we can say that later.' All agreed.
Edited by newt2007 - 13 years ago
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Shot 3

It was a simple wedding of Prem and Heer but love filled one. Prem all the time staring at Heer. Heer whispered 'why are you looking at me like this Prem?' Prem 'I won't get another chance to see you blushing like this.' Heer 'why?' Prem 'wedding happens only once.' Heer 'if you want we can marry every month. Even every day. I'm ready.' Prem put his hand around her 'that is different'. Heer 'all are here.' Prem 'ya I know. They here to see us together. We'll give them full happiness.' Heer 'Premmm.' Prem 'Heeerr.'

Gay3 took Heer to Prem room. Several time Heer spent time in this room with Prem. Even then entering as his wife gave her happiness. She felt nervous. So many things happened in one day. As a family they went to several emotions. Heer's decision to marry Prem brought happiness to entire family. Heer didn't feel bad about Prem even after knowing him as HIV+. She loves him as her own breath. other things are not important for her. Living and dying with Prem is the only thing she want now. She want to keep Prem happy all the time. She know about this disease and confident Prem will be able to spent full life time with her. She is confident they can live as happiest couple in this world.

Gay3 made Heer sit on the bed. She sat opposite to her. She cupped Heer's face. She kissed her forehead. 'I'm very much happy beta. My wish came true today.' Heer smiled. Gay3 'waited for this day. Waited to see Prem and you together as husband and wife.' Tears of joy rolled down her cheeks. Heer 'all because of your blessings.' Gay3 pat Heer cheek.

Preet and Meher came in. Gay3 'you two what are you doing here?' Preet mischeviously 'we came to wish bhabi happy first night.' Gay3 'ya. They know. You both go now.' Meher 'ma, let us spent time with di. After that we won't get time.' Meher giggled. Preet 'ha. we won't be seen in their eyes.' Meher 'they will walking in sky alone.' Both laughed. Heer shyly smiled. Gay3 smiled looking at her bahu blushing. She kept her face strict. 'Heer Listen, I'm a strict MIL. In 10 months I want a angel like you.' Heer is shocked but didn't show. Preet 'ha babhi, we want a angel.' Meher 'ha di.' Preet 'I'm bored of playing with this moti.' Meher 'what?' she is about to hit her. Preet ran away shouting 'its your day bhabi.' Meher ran chasing him. Gay3 got up and kissed Heer's forehead 'God bless you.' She walked out of the room closing the door.

Heer is tensed. They have decided not to tell about his state to him. 'Now how will I stop him doing any physical contact. He is waiting for this day.' Her wait for Prem seems to be long. She is just recollecting the events happened from the morning. 'we started the day with happiness. But so many things happened between these few hours.' Her mind thought about doctor saying about Prem and Sanjana's refusal to marry him. 'I'm so stupid. I believed that girl and hurt Prem so much.' Her mind went to Gay3's blessing few seconds before she entered this room.

'In 10 months I want a angel like you.'

Heer thought 'ma knows about Prem's condition. But how can she expect baby. Even bapuji also said the same. What happened to them? This Preet and Meher too.' Before she could further think about that she heard door closing sound. She looked through her duppta. She saw Prem happily coming towards her.

He sat opposite to Heer on the bed 'atlast our day has come. How much struggled to get this day.' He removed her dupatta from her face. 'as if I'm seeing you for the first time.' Heer remain silent looking down. Prem is confused 'Heer, are you angry one me?' Heer didn't look up but shook her head negatively. Prem 'then look at me.' Heer again shook her head negtively. Prem confused more. 'Heer' he cupped her face and lifted to see his face. She closed her eyes. He ran his thumb on her cheeks lovingly. He looked at her beautiful face. He slowly inched forward and kissed her forehead 'I love you Heer.' She opened her eyes 'me too.' She looked at his face so close to hers. Her cheeks turned red. She smiled shyly. Prem 'hmmm. At last you open your eyes. What is this game?' Heer 'this is tradition Prem.' Prem removed her dupatta completely and threw it down.

Heer kept her palm on his cheeks. The white bandage around his head made her sad. tears came out of her eyes. Her fingers slowly touched the bandage. Prem put his hand around her and pulled her closer. 'Heer, why are you crying now?' Heer sobbed 'everything because of me.' Prem confused. then realising her fingers on his bandage. 'oh you are thinking about this.' Heer 'Prem, I'm' Prem covered her mouth with his plam. 'don't feel bad. That is nothing.' Heer 'but you' Prem interrupted 'this bandage is coming between our sweet now. I'll remove this.' Heer 'no Prem' she tried to stop him. but he pulled that out of his head and threw it down 'get last. No one can interrupt this sweet night with my Heer.' Heer got tensed 'Prem why did you removed this now?' she tried to check his head fearfully. Prem pulled her to sit properly 'nothing Heer.' Heer 'Prem you' Prem 'Heer stop worrying. Believe me. I'm alright. Don't need that bandage anymore.' Heer 'show me Prem.' Prem turned his head and showed the back to her. Heer fearfully kept her fingers on the place of injury. She got confused. Prem smiled seeing her confused face. Heer 'Prem got hurt here only.' She touched a spot. Prem smiled and made her sit properly. He leaned backward on the board pulling her on to him. 'its not there.' Heer 'but Prem I saw the blood.' Prem 'its not blood.' Heer 'then'

Hands around her waist. She is leaning on his chest and looking at his face with confusion. He placed his other plam cupping her cheek. Their faces are very close. He looked into her eyes 'Heer, I love you.' Heer 'I love you too Prem. but where' Prem interrupted 'I'll tell you Heer. I didn't get hurt. It's a drama.' Heer is shocked. 'Prem' Prem shook his head 'ha Heer, I can't think anyone else in your place. All these days I'm living with you. How can just bring another girl in your place? You can be generous but I'm possessive.' Heer couldn't speak further as Prem told the truth behind the injury.

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Prem angrily entered the room after failing to convince Heer. Preet and Meher who waiting for Prem looked at him. Preet 'PB, did bhabi agreed?' Prem angrily shouted 'she is not understanding my pain. For her Sanjana's love is important. She don't even thinking about my heart. How can she this to me?' Preet interrupted 'PB, we have only one way now. you have to do this.' Prem 'anything Preet. anything for my Heer. I want my Heer. if I fail to get my Heer then I'll die before this evening. I'll not marry anyone other than Heer. I'll die.' Meher 'jiju, we have planned. But we need your help.' Prem 'what plan?'

Preet 'I'll explain PB.' He looked at Meher. Meher shook her head and took a big bottle from a table. inside liquid was blood red. Prem silently waited to here their plan. Preet 'PB, we have created this liquid to cheat others as blood. We have to create a scene like you hurt your head.' Prem listened carefully. Meher 'we already informed a doctor and the ambulance is waiting in the road end.' Preet 'you just stay as injured. Rest we'll take care.' Prem got some hope and agreed to their plan.

Meher poured some liquid on the floor. Preet asked Prem to lie down on the floor keeping his head exactly on the liquid poured area.Meher poured some more so that it will look like blood coming out of his head. They placed some things in scattered manner. Preet gave a rubber ball in Prem's hand. 'PB, after we leave this room count 20. Then you throw this ball' he pointed a area 'here it will bounce and create some noise of pushing some things down.' Prem shook his head. Preet 'then you shout like you have fallen down.' Meher 'di will come hearing your voice. Jiju please be careful while di shouting your name.' Preet 'ha PB until we reach hospital you have to be careful and act nicely.' Prem 'I'll Preet. I want my Heer that's all.' Preet 'sure PB.' Preet and Meher showed their thumb up and went out checking one more time that everything is perfect.

Exactly after counting 20, Prem screamed 'maaa'. As expected he heard Heer's payal sound and first to open was Heer. Heer cried and screamed. Prem tried hard to keep himself calm. Then came Ma, bapuji. They also cried to make the situation worse. Prem internally cursed 'what this Preet and Meher doing?' Preet and Meher entered. Prem thought Preet will send them out. Instead Preet is also shaking him and crying. Meher who called the ambulance. Prem breathed a relief when he was shifted to ambulance.

Prem thought either Preet or Meher will accompany him in ambulance. Preet 'bhabi, you sit with PB. I'll come follow the ambulance with ma, bapuji and Meher.' Prem thought 'now how will I manage.' As expected Heer holding Prem's hand crying and blabbering something. Prem wanted to open his eyes and say its all fake. But he don't want to risk. Everything going good and he doesn't want to make any mistake.

Prem is pushed into ICU. Others waited outside. Dr. Kiran tapped 'now you can open your eyes.' Prem opened his eyes and saw Kiran and Kulraj. 'you' Kulraj 'ha, we are bhai and bhabi of PReet's friend Shyam. ' Prem 'oh thank God. Stop this marriage.' Kiran 'will stopping marriage help you to save from Sanjana.' Prem 'I don't know.' Kulraj 'don't worry we have a plan for that. stay calm.' Kiran cleaned Prem's head and put a big bandage around his head. 'Prem stay as if you are uncosncious. We'll create a scene to chase Sanjana out of your life forever.' Prem 'thanks Kiran.' Kurlaj 'can I send your Heer inside?' Prem 'no no. I can't resist myself if Heer comes and cried again.' Kiran 'no problem. We have answer for that also.'

Kiran came out of room and announced Prem's state. He didn't give permission for anyone to see Prem. Preet walked along Kiran. Kiran 'you have to ask something reminding Prem's marriage today.' Preet agreed.

Kiran looked at the blood report in his hand. Kulraj took a black pen and gave to him. Kiran smiled and looked at the 've result against HIV. He drew vertical line to make it +ve. 'next round of drama starts now.' He got up and went out of his room.

Kiran went to check Prem again. When he came out of the room, Lalit interrupted 'doctor.' Kiran 'he is fine now but.' Preet looked up 'Thank God. Now he is okay then he can attend his marriage.' Kiran 'marriage? Whose marriage?' Preet 'my bhaiya's marriage today.' Kiran looked shock 'where is his would be wife?' Lalit and Gay3 looked at Preet with anger thinking 'what is the need to bring this matter now.' Kiran 'I want to talk to her' Preet 'why?' Doctor 'its important.' All are confused.

Kiran informed 'I'm sorry Mr. Lalit' Lalit and Gay3 is tensed. Gay3 cried 'what happened to my Prem?' Kiran looked at Lalit and Gay3 sadly 'Prem is HIV +ve.' Lalit and Gay3 are shocked and words refused to come out of their mouth. Sanjana 'what? are you sure?' Kiran showed her the report. Sanjana looked at the report. She gave the report to Lalit and walked out of the room. Kiran 'Mr. Lalit, its not ideal for Prem to marry anyone.' Lalit and Gay3 came out with tears.

Prem is discharged. Preet sent Prem and Heer in a car with dirver. Preet started the car. Lalit and Gay3 are crying in the back seat. Meher looked at Preet. Preet 'ma why are you crying now? bhabi agreed to PB.' Lalit 'Preet are you in sense. Don't you know Prem is' Meher interrupted 'bapuji, its not ture.' Gay3 stopped crying 'what?' Preet 'ha ma. everything is drama.' Meher 'di is adamant in jiju Sanjana marriage. So we planned a head injury. But Kiran bhaiya thought its not enough so he said jiju having this.' Lalit with a wide smile 'you both done a good job.' Preet 'this is not enough bapuji. We have to be silent until the wedding gets over. Even a small mistake will backfire. Bhabi will not agree to our cheating.' Gay3 'ha. Heer should not know these things now.'

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Prem finished 'after that you know everything.' Heer placed her head on his chest 'Prem, I made you suffer.' He stroked her hair. 'its not your fault Heer. but' he lifted her face to look at him 'understanding others pain is important Heer. You gave importance to Sanjana. But you forgot me. don't you think once how Prem will agree to this. we were married when we are few years old. We are living as husband and wife. Please Heer when you take decision ask me atleast once. We are one not two. Remember that.' Heer shook her head in acceptance.

Prem 'its already late. I don't want to waste time. I got you after a long struggle.' He kissed her forehead to mark the start of their love. both started kissing each other slowly and melted in love. Finally they became one. He kissed her forehead 'I love you'. Heer cuddled into his hug 'me too. Thanks Prem.' Prem teased 'don't say thanks so early. Many more to come.' She giggled in his chest. both slept having a perfect Valentine's day.


Its a Perfect Valentine's day for them.


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Edited by newt2007 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi selvy di!!! this was a fab update!!! loved it truely!!

it was so cute!! so touchy!! with almost all sorts of emotions!!

when i say cute!! it is at the starting!! and about sanjana i was having a doubt from starting only!!

it was a superb os!! ur first one right???

fantastic!! its always nie and pleasant 2 read ur stories!!

the start till end.. every short was breath taking
!!!

thank u so much for doing it for all of us!!!

love u!!!

waiting for more!!!

take care
vrushika~
Edited by vrushika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really nice OS👏
Edited by kiran_28 - 13 years ago
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#6
wonderful os...enjoyed reading...😃
Edited by Aditi_Premiti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: newt2007

Shot 3

It was a simple wedding of Prem and Heer but love filled one. Prem all the time staring at Heer. Heer whispered 'why are you looking at me like this Prem?' Prem 'I won't get another chance to see you blushing like this.' Heer 'why?' Prem 'wedding happens only once.' Heer 'if you want we can marry every month. Even every day. I'm ready.' Prem put his hand around her 'that is different'. Heer 'all are here.' Prem 'ya I know. They here to see us together. We'll give them full happiness.' Heer 'Premmm.' Prem 'Heeerr.'

yeh bas itna sa hi hai kya?😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
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-RES-

will comment whn u update fully...!!! update soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW.. an OS such a great treat..

really awesome os..

loved it..


do continue soon..

take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
thanks for update
really it was nice
good work 👍🏼

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