Tujhe Bhula Diya In Goa ~PH~ (SS) Part 4 pg17 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Thanks very much for loving the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

awaazilicious Hi 🤗 Happy New Year 🥳 I love your gift 😆 Thank you. - Wishing u gr8 yr ahead


Some things got clarified.
Preet & Meher are always cute hehe. Loved that phone convo / fight/ argument. - yes they are very cute and thanks for loving that part

RV was 🤣 Preet seriously had too much to explain wow - hehehe yeh poor guy and well RV simply luvs to pull his friends' legs

Prem is interesting. I'm wondering what exactly is his past that he is in and out of the "wild side" that RV and at times Sid referring to. - hmmm surely he has a past which wud be revealed slowly

Sid is totally annoying but he helps move the story I guess. - yeh he is the negative part of the story

The title of the story and today's update is really v. intriguing. I'm already wondering what the connection might be 🤔 - thats gr8 as it got u thinking 😆

Ok you got me, I am eagerly waiting to find out more 😎 - sure


Pls edit this part - beginning of chapter says new year's eve so it's obviously 31st of Dec.. Typo here:
"The plan was set then that they were going to leave for Goa in RV's car that night so they would reach Goa on the 31st of January..."

Looking forward to see what'll happen next.
Thank you and all the best! - thanks for the wishes

Edited by awaazilicious - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

hey arwa😊 😃 - hey Shreya


shaina told me about this fic and said rajveer is also in this fic so i cant resist to the temptation of rajveer and dropped like a mango in this place😆 😉 😆 - hehe it was a gr8 surprise to have u here

story sounds great and the intro part was also awesome as there is rajveer also😉 😉 😉 poor him in the intro he got slapped 😭 😆 😆 and the intro of prem , preet and sid is also good 😊 😊 😊 - Thanks for liking it all. Yeh abhi to bus shuruwat hain aage aage dekho kya hota hain

but the thing is the person who is going to get married after two days where does he disappeared all of a sudden😕 😕 😕 and meher does not even know anything about that piece of news hoping that preet will be found in one piece 😆 😳 - hmmm well thats the whole story na


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks a lot for loving the part
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Thanks very much for loving it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: repunzell

superbb update 👏!!! - thanks very much


love the way u r unmoulding the storyyy😃!!! - I'm glad u r

sid is such a 😡!!! - yes he is

what happened in he past of prem which is y he is stoppin hinselff😕!!! would be interested to knoww😊!!! - yeh the mystery shall be revealed slowly

i hope prem n heer don't be carried away due to which prem will get embrassed againnn!!!! - aaah now lets see what happens


loved the way u show the bonding of these three frnds...it so cuteee😃!!!!! - yeh they are very close and glad u find it cute


love it, love it n yeahhh amazing update 😉!!!!! - thanks once again


thanx for the pm n updae soonnn!!!!! - ur welcome

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreyamathur_8

wonderful part 👏 - thanks a lot


so they were all set to go for goa and prem was still apprehensive to go their but preet made him agree to come with them and enjoy new year's party and the bachelor hood of preet but ofcourse due to preet's emotional blackmailing😊😉😆 - yeh being the less wilder Prem he prefers to stay home yet his friends know exactly how to grab his attention

rv is really too much he was embarassing preet infront of meher and poor meher she somehow believed rv but in the end she believes and loves preet very much😉 😉 😉 then again he wasn't successful in making preeet annoyed so he he went for for prem to annoy him but instead of annoying him it seemed that it was prem who annoyed rv by constantly saying i'll not go for the party🤢 🤢 but atlast he has to go for party with the trio😆 😆 😆 - hehehhe yeh he is a big prankster alright and loves to tease everyone especially his two friends

here rv was busy with someone else with the kiss that too without any introduction of the other person😉 😉 😆 but who is she and from whom she is hiding herself 😕 😕 - he got a jackpot or wo bhi bethe bethe 😆 the mystery shall open slowly

and in the end all of them celebrated the comeing year with ofcourse lots of taquila shots😉 😉 😛 - yes it was party time

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Noor_PremHeer

Hey.. I loved ur SS... - thanks very much


it so different... starting was really Good...confused me first...😆 But i really liked it when read it whole.. - aaaw I'm glad u really have enjoyed it till far

plz update soon..waiting..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshitideewani

thanks for the awesome update andd Thanks for the pm😃 - thanks alot for liking the update and ur welcome abt the pm

Happy new Year🥳to everyone - wishing u a gr8 yr ahead

It waas nicee flashback andd a😉 interestinggg onee , - I'm glad u liked it very much

Poorr Preeth 🤣andd Rv teasingg him - hehehe yeh he really got stuck

waiiitingg to know what happened in Prem college dayss - surely wud come soon
pleaseee update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2

Next morning

It was a terrible morning indeed and Prem could feel it as soon as he opened his eyes. His head felt heavy and his vision was blurring. Last night must have been too heavy for him to have felt that way yet his mind was numb in order to think. He pressed on his head and lazily got out of bed. He had the intentions of sleeping the whole day off yet he knew that it wasn't an option and even if he tried his annoying friends would disturb him anyways.

There was a slight stumble in his step due to the hangover which he knew was going to take time to get off since he had drank after a long time. His body wasn't used to it. However he slowly reached the bathroom door and opened it up totally exhausted. Everything around was still hazy so he didn't pay attention yet he had totally not expected what happened next.

"Aaah!" a female scream totally knocked all the senses into him as he just stood there leaned against the door because he was shocked. She stood there in front of him totally bare and just stepped out of the shower. What was he to think? "My God you scared me." She calmed down and grabbed onto the robe and the towel.

Her casual behavior perplexed him and he fumbled. "What…who…who are you and what are you doing in my bathroom?" As well as being confused he was outraged.

"Very funny Prem." She made a face as she fully covered herself into the robe. "I don't appreciate the cold behavior so early in the morning." She got busy looking into the mirror and scrubbing her face.

Of course he couldn't understand what was going on. At one point he suspected that perhaps he wasn't in his room at all and it was possible that last night he slept in her room instead. How could he have done that when he didn't even know her? He had to find his friends and get out of there back to his room.

With hasty steps he got out of the bathroom and out of the bedroom to search for his friends back into his room. Yet when he stepped out he noticed that things appeared similar which meant he was in his room alright. But then who was that woman and how did she get there?

As he moved along in a hurry he failed to look down below and stumbled against something and fell hard on the ground. He groaned in pain and then looked up to see what it was and he became mad. "Oh Sid for God's sake put some clothes on." He complained as he got up and noticed how Sid was sprawled all over the floor of the hall with two women entangled with him. It appalled Prem and he just wanted to kick the slime ball. He grabbed onto a lying sheet and aggressively shoved it towards Sid. "Have some decency and cover yourself. Ugggh!" He got up and left from the sight.

One thing was confirmed that he was in his room yet the other confusion of the woman wasn't solved. Just then he looked up after had heard another voice of his friend.

"Prem, why are you yelling so early in the morning?" RV complained as he walked out in the hall. Just like Prem, his head was also heavy from the hangover and his whole body was exhausted as if he had participated in some sort of wrestling last night.

Prem walked up towards him as RV intended to make some coffee for the hangover. "RV, what happened last night?"

RV thought for a while yet everything appeared blank. "I don't know." He stared at Prem. "Why don't you tell me what happened?" he continued to poor the water in the saucepan to make coffee over the gas in the joint kitchen they had in the suite. Yes they had the option of ordering it yet he wanted a very strong one so he thought of making it himself.

It didn't please Prem as he thought at least his friend would have the answer. "What do you mean you don't know? I mean all I remember is that we were in the New Year's party and then it's blank."

The same situation had nagged RV too. When he woke up he also couldn't remember what had happened and how he got to the room again from the party. Everything was like a maze so he blamed it on the hangover. "You know Prem don't stress yourself and…woah!" he stopped when he noticed the two women clad only in a sheet each; get up from the hall floor. "What the…"

There wasn't much he could have said as the sight just shook him. It wasn't like everyday he woke up and found semi naked women in front of him. He just watched the two women walk off into one of the bedrooms and his mouth was left half open.

"There is no reason to be surprised RV." Prem looked totally pissed off. "When there is our Mr. Sid around then of course the dirt will follow." He tossed his head and then just slouched on the couch to relief his heavy headache.

Sid hardly appreciated Prem insulting him like that yet he also had a bad headache due to the hangover so he didn't feel like arguing. Instead he just swore under his breath and walked off towards Preet's bedroom to use the bathroom.

If things were blank then they had to be revived soon because Prem couldn't tolerate the fact that he found a naked woman in his bathroom. He couldn't have done anything like that? Not again. He pressed onto his head tight with his hands as RV joined him onto the couch with two cups of coffee.

RV put his hand over Prem's shoulder. "Just relax man." He offered him the cup. "Have some coffee and then I'm sure things would become clearer."

The two men got busy in drinking and distressing. Just then a woman stepped out of Prem's room and casually walked towards the kitchen as if she had lived there all her life. "What do you guys have for breakfast Prem?" she asked as she searched around even though she was aware that it was a hotel and not their apartment.

"Actually we will or…" RV stopped at that as another shock hit him. If he wasn't mistaken then that woman actually came out of Prem's room and knew him too. "What the…" he glared at Prem and then back at the woman. "Itni bari baat chupai tune mujhse Prem?" he looked displeased.

For some time Prem had forgotten about her so he also was alarmed in seeing her again. Then again that was the biggest confusion which bugged him. "Just listen to me." He tried to calm his friend down. "Actually I…"

Yet RV didn't let him finish and grinned. "Wow Prem you actually managed to get yourself a jackpot last night." He laughed. "This is great."

It was another thing added in Prem's list of disappointments that morning. "Just shut up RV." His friend continued to laugh. "I've no clue what she's doing here and well…"

The situation just amused RV further. "Ab mere bhai itna sharma ne ki kya zaroorat hain? I mean we all are responsible adults here." He thought over that. "Ok let's just make that three since that Sid is just capable to be in the retard category. Anyways it's totally normal what you did." His arm went around Prem's shoulder as his teasing continued.

In return Prem glared at him. "This isn't the time to joke around RV." He got out of his grip. "It's a serious issue right now as neither of us remember what happened last night and finding a woman in my bathroom and that too totally bare isn't at all funny."

However the woman found it funny and she laughed followed by RV. "Oh come on Prem, you're complaining like a small child." She came closer to him and gave him a seductive tease. "You weren't that shy to see me without clothes last night."

It horrified Prem further. He couldn't have slept with her when she was just a stranger. He had once done it before in the past and it had turned into disaster so he just couldn't have done it again. "This doesn't make any sense." He sat back down on the sofa totally stressed out.

On the other hand RV introduced himself to her. "Hi, I'm Rajveer but you can call me RV. And you are?" he gave her a friendly mischievous look which he usually gave to all pretty women he met.

The woman also smiled. "Hi I'm Heer. We'd met last night in the party." She folded her arms across her chest.

"Really?" it surprised RV. "I don't think I would have forgotten such a pretty face." He winked at her and both of them just shared a good friendly rapport.

It certainly made Prem think. Perhaps she could help him jog his memory so he got up and stood beside her. "Ok then if we did meet you then what happened last night?" he gave her an accusing look.

His eyes were the ones which had enthralled her in her first meeting with him last night and right then they also held her into trance. Those eyes had so much hidden behind them which he didn't display at all. She had noticed something deep within him and for that very reason she was instantly attracted towards him. And last night was also part of it. "Aaah so are we testing Mr. Prem Juneja?"

That look tortured him. It was as if he was very familiar with that smile and those dove like eyes. He hardly remembered anything obviously yet there was an unknown connection he felt with her. Yes last night at the party he had met a woman at the bar yet it had happened so fast that he couldn't remember the face. However when he looked at Heer his heart thumped hard as if it told him something. Then she knew his full name so certainly she knew things he didn't. That didn't mean he trusted her but he wanted to find out what had happened. "Perhaps I am." He waited to make things clear. "How could I believe you when all for I know you might just be another money grabbing thug or a rogue?"

There definitely was something about his poise and attitude which had impressed Heer a lot. However last night he had been more subtle towards her but right then she saw a different side of him. "Ab itna to bharosa kar hee sakte ho mujhpe Prem." She ran her finger over his face. "After all I gave you hell of a great time last night to fulfill all your fantasies."

RV burst out laughing again. "Seriously she is too good." He clapped his hands. "I mean you must have done something Prem to have won her heart."

In return Prem glared at his friend. "RV shut up!" he warned him again yet he knew his friend wasn't going to stop. "Why don't you tell me each and every detail Miss…uh…Heer was it?" on purpose he tested her consistency. Yes from appearance she looked like a call girl but her innocent face said something else.

"Are you sure you want me to tell each and every detail?" she came very close to him and spoke in a silky voice. "Every single detail of the things you did with me?"

Of course Prem was trapped because there was no way he could allow her saying those things even if they weren't true. Since he couldn't remember he couldn't trust it yet it still was embarrassing. He cleared his throat. "I meant about what happened in the party." He made himself clear.

Just then RV stopped him. "Prem, osse poochne ki zaroorat nahi hain." He put the coffee cup down. "Sid had his camcorder with him and he was busily recording the party. I'm sure it shall have our answers."

Both Prem and RV immediately went to Sid's room with Prem more desperate than RV to reach to the answers. His image was tarnished and he had to clean it. If what Heer said was true then he would do anything to make sure he rectified his mistake with her and if it wasn't true then he was going to do something so harsh with her that she hadn't had imagined.

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