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Posted: 13 years ago

updating!!!!:)..and thank u fr waiting di
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: iheartChai

Very nice attempt on your first FF 👍🏼

Keep up the good work!


aww..thanks grace..thank u so much..just trying to learn a bit from all of u... thank u so much..fr taking time and commenting... love ya grace..always there to encourage..thanks once again
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ummesulaiman

Best wishes for a Happy Diwali 😛.
Just got the message about your FF. Always nice to read something new related to Kis Desh.
But why are you putting yourself down about not writing well? 😕
I read what you've posted so far and think you should be congratulated 👏 on a nice beginning.
You made Meher and Maya sisters...you know I'm a Meet fan so this should be interesting.
Please add me to your PM list and update soon.😊


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Posted: 13 years ago

yeah dear updating nw...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hello thanks every1 fr ur support
updating chapter 3

lets have a quick recap
premeer wedding heer's bidai prem consoling heer
their entry in the house family teasing especially rishi and preet
all family members intro premeer bedroom prem explaining heer
becoming friends starting their journey towards marriage with friendship
family bonding heer's first day
heer preparing kheer balraj coming to meet his daughter
so this is what happened in the previous chapter
any new reader here is the link to previous chapter
chapter 2

chapter 3

All the men of the house got busy in some work while the ladies went to kitchen..heer also followed them.. heer saw her mother in law working..she went to her and said.." maa aap rehne dijiye main kar loongi" gay3 " heer miane kaha na tu jake padai kar..beta ur exams are fromn next week" heer " nahi maa main kar loongi.. aap jake aram kijiye" gay3 " ma kehti hai na.. don't worry tu bhi kam kar lena lekin exams hone ke baad. Lekin abhi jake padai kar" heer could not say no..she left to her room'

Premeer room..

Heer entered thr room..prem " vo tum jo subahe books dhund rahi thi mil gayi?" heer " ha vo papa aye the na to unhone layi thi".. prem " okay..to tumhare exams agle week se hai na?" heer " ji" .prem " agar tumhe koi difficulty hai to mujse punch sakti hon..thoda bahut mujhe bhi ata hai" heer " jarur".prem " vo heer main tumhare liye koi gift..hani laya I m sorry. Heer v" nahi prem iski koi jarurat nahi hai..and waise bhi we are friends so no sorry and thank u. prem smiled . heer opened her books..and started studying.. here prem opened hi s laptop and started working.. both in the middle were staring at each other' heer completed a bit of studying.. they were called down to have their lunch.. at the dining table it was all teasing.. again.. and after lunch all were back to their room..

Prem noticed that heer was having some difficulty studying something..although she was not telling him he could make out from her face that she was stuggling with something..he went near her and said " heer vo koi problem hai kya" heer just looked up. " actually vo mujhe yeh samaj mein nahi aa raha tha.. I knew it but suddenly I cant remember anything.. god knows how.. I mean like.." prem " I know it happens sometime.. don't worry I will help you.." heer " lekin aap kaise ?" prem " are maine bhi to mba hi kiya hai na..aur tum bhi to usi mein specialization kar rahi hon na jisme maine kiya hai.." heer " mera matlab vo nahi that.. I mean apko aur bhi dusre kam honge na..to main apko disturb nahi karna chahti thi.. prem " are is mein disturb hone ki kaunsi baat hai..apne dost ki to help kar raha hoon..kyun so.. abhi aap ki permission ho to kya main apki help kar sakta hoon?" heer smiled and noded a yes.. prem started explaining her.. and heer as a small kid was listing everything to him.. he solved all her difficulties.. heer told prem that she will go down and help ma and come.. prem noded a yes..

Heer came downstairs..and saw every one sitting..

Heer came down.." maa kuch karna hai to bata dijiye main kar loongi" gay3 " nahi beta maine kaha na.." she was cut off by heer " ma main abhi padhayi karke hi ayi hoon..aap battaye na" gay3 " kuch nahi hai beta to aa yahan baith." Veera " bhabhi bhayya kaha hai?" that time prem came down.. rishi " yeh rahe mamu aa gaye.. mami ke piche piche mamu bhi" premn heard it and caught rishi in his hand.. and said " bohat bolne laga hai tu aaj kal" Harman " bhayya use kyon data rahe hon..sach hai vahi to kaha" preet " bhayya aap ki shirt pe yeh ink kaisi lagi..jaha tak main janta hoon aap to apna sara kam laptop pe karte hai to phir yeh.." ??? prem " han vo heer ko kuch pada raha tha..to lagta.." preet interrupted " acha bhabhi ko pada rahe the.. hume to kabhi nahi padaya" kiran " preet chup kar nahi to yeh firse bhag jayega.." kulraj " aur yeh dekho yeh yahan par kitni nervous ho rahi hai'chup karo tum dono" preet " thik, hai di". Lalit " beta age kya karne ka socha hai?" heer " kuch nahi dad ek bar bas yeh exams khatam ho jaye.."
lalit " agar chahe to company join kar sakti hon..isse prem ko bhi help ho jayegi" Harman " dad isse to company ko nuksan hi hoga..bhai ka adha dhyan bhabhi par rahega.. to aise main kam pe dhyan kaha lagega?" preet " va bhai kya baat kahi apne..main bhi yahi kehne vala tha" heer " ma vo main paani pike ati hoon" she said this and went from there.. prem " han vo mujhe ek important clind se baat karni thi main bhi abhi ata hoon"

Gay3 " kaha tha..chale gaye na.."

Soon it was dinner time..

Heer helped gay3 and kulraj to prepare food. The food was cooked..it was brought to dining table. All were eating.. gay3 started feeding every1.. with her hands.. lalit " kya baat hai aaj bahut pyaar araha hai apne banchon par.." preet " dad saf saf kyun nahi bolte apko bhi khana hai?" every 1 laughed'heer just said she has some work in the kitchen and went from there.. every1 became quiet after she went..

Gay3 understaood everything and went behind heer.. heer went to the kitchen and started crying she was missing her mom..looking at gay3 feeding every1 she was missing her today.. gay3 entered in the kitchen. She said " heer " heedr wiped her tears quickly and said " maa apko kuch chahiye tha mujhe bata diya hota main lekar aa jati chaliye na chalet hai" heer was about to go.. gay3 caught her " ab ma se bhi chupayegi" heer turned around with teary eyes. Gay3 " teji ki yaad arahi hai na" heer just said a yes.. gay3 " are main hoon na..tu ro kyun rahi hon??? .. tu kya mujhe ma nahi manti?" heer " nahi ma aisa mat boliye.. aap hi to hon jisse mujhe itna maa ka pyaar mila hai" gay3 " to phir.??? Ro kyun rahi hai????.chal mere saath..."

Saying this she took her outside and made her to sit and started feeding her also..heer with love took all the bites.. preet Harman and veera just hugged.. lalit was happy.. even kulraj and kiran..prem was the happiest among all.. heer just hugged gay3/.. gay3 " aaj ke baad kabhi aise mat rona.. main hoon na tumhari maa..rote nahi beta.. tu meri beti hai..agar tujhe kisine kuch bhi kaha na..to mujhe batana" Harman :" aur main bhi to hoon na apka bhai" preet " aur main bhi" rishi " mami main bhi to hoon" heer just laughed..

Soon every one finished their dinner and left to their rooms to sleep..heer and prem wre in their room.. prem had just come after changing..heer was in the washroom..gay3 entered with a glass of milk..prem " are ma kuch chahiye hota to mujhe bula liya hota..aap kyun chali ayi???"

Gay3 " prem main apni beti ko almonds ka dood dene ayi hoon.. uski exams hai na" prem " okay" gay3 " lekin vo hai kaha" prem " ma vo actually change kar rahi hai" gay3 " thik hai main chalti g=hoon..ye garam garam dood use pila dena.thik hai..good night" prem " good night maa"

Gay3 left,'after 2 min or so heer entered the room. She found prem stii doing his work.. as soon as he saw her coming he said to her" vo heer ma ne tumhare liye dud bhijvaya hai pi lena.." heer " maa ayi thi..phir chali kyun gayi?" prem " vo bohut raat ho chuki hai na isliye"

Heer " okay aap bhi so lena.. main study mein jaakr padhayi kar loongi.. " prem " vo kyun tum yahan pe bhi kar sakti hon study mein kyun? Chaho to main yahan se chala jata hoon" heer" nahi vo actually meri vajah se aap ko bhi disturbance hoga na isliye.. main.." prem "are nahi aisa kuch nahi hoga tum yahi pe padhayi kar lena.. vo mujhe apna kam bhi to finish karna hai na.." heer " thik hai"..heer drank the milk..and both started doing their respective work..it was around 1'o clock..prem turned his attention towards the study table..and what he saw just brought a smile on his face..heer had kept her head on the table and was sleeping..she had a cute smile on her face..prem was just admiring it..he started laughing' he turned off the laptop..and went near the table..and called her name very sweetly" heer" still she did not wake up..he was not feeling like making her to get up from such a peaceful sleep..so het just lifted her in his arms and carried her till the bed.. he made her to lie down on the bed..he could see the innocence on her face..her face was as cute as that of a small child.. he just came out of his thoughts and was about to get up when his hand was caught by something..so he turned around and saw heer holding his hand..and sleeping..he slowly bent down.. her hold on his hand was tight..but slowly he managed to lossen it..he made her to lie down properly and covered her with a blanket.. he also was tired..so he also fell on bed and soon drifted into a sound sleep'

precap
more family scenes


so here the chapter ends
may be not upto ur expectations
so sorry for that
if in case any1 likes do comment or read or hit the like button
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critising accepted
i would be more then happy to get them
will surely try my level best to improve
that's a promise
love u all
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yeah forgot to mension one thing that is
please excuse my mistakes
love vrushika


Love is a fruit in season at all times, and within reach of every hand.
Edited by vrushika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago










butterfly

The part was really really awesome...



butterfly

Gay3 is so sweet.. loved her

Aww.. all the premeer parts were so cute...

And prem helping heer in her studies...

Hehehe.. the way preet was teasing prem...poor prem


Loved the family time...


butterfly

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Thanks for the pm

Continue super duper soon!!!

butterfly
Edited by zigzagway_sadi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
luv gaytri nd heer scenes
waiting 4 more premeer scenes
thanx 4 PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful...ff...continue soon.. cant wait for the next parts!!
liked the way u wrote...very interesting...
update soon...
Edited by premiti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...awesome update dr...👏
really cute...⭐️
aww...g3 is sooo sweet...👏and loved the whole juneja parivaar...👏
and prem helping heer in studies...😍😍
rishi and preet r giving nice treatment to premeer...😆.poor premeer ...they r running here and there to escape from this...😆😆
pls make heer to join in prem's office...😳
can't wait to see their office romance...😍☺️
thnx for pm...😃
update soon...😃
Edited by priyahmt - 13 years ago

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