This os is abt premeer
Story'
Prem and heer are happly married
Heer is very good wife and a daughter in law
Sister in law.. and everybodies angel
She has a brother in law preet
Best friendz ash''..
She is 9 months pregnant
And her delivery date is soon to come
Premeer in their room
Heer is sitting on the bed looking at her cute husband searching smthng'.
Prem " hai bhagvan ab mai kya karoon. Yeh to milne ka naam hi nahi le rahe hai..
Aisa hi hota hai.. jab bhi koi chheez chahiye hoti hai nahi milti hai.. ab mai kya karroon
Ab yeh mujhe batayegi bhi nahi ki mai yahaan hoon'.
Ab kya karu
Heer starts laughing'..
Prem looks at her and says
Heer main yahan pareshan ho raha hun aur tum vaha haans rahi hon'.
Heer " prem mai madad kar doon?" maine ne tumse pucha tha par tumne mana kar diya!!! Phir se puch rahi hoon madad karu??
That time gay3 entered from behind'
" bilkul nahi.. tum apne jagah se nahi hilogi'kitni bar kahan tumse ki apni jagah se mat hila karu,'. Par tum kisi ki nahi sunti'
"Sahi kaha ma apne"added prem aur dekho na vaha betkar hans rahi hai mujhpar"
Gay3 "ye hansagi nahi to aur kya karegi!!!!"
Aur dekho tumne kamre ki kya halat bana li hai??
Prem " main kya karoon ma hamesha heer hi yeh sab karti thi" ab dekho na mujhe vo mil hi nahi raha hai/'.
Kya nahi mil raha hai??
Mai madad kar deti hoon...
Heer " ma vo aaj prem ka football match hai na to uske jute nahi mil rahe hai"
Gay3 " chal tu us taraf dekh main yahan dekhti hoon"
Both start searching'..
Atlast prem gets it under the bed'.
Ha mil gaye
Till then preet enters inside'
" hai bhabhi .. !!!!" aur yeh pb kahan hai???
Heer " hi preet ' tumhare pb bed ke niche hai"
Preet " bed ke niche??? Pb bed ke niche kya kar rahe hai???? Angel ke ane ke bad bed ke niche jagah dhudh rahe hai kya??? Romance karne ke liye??? Kyon ki jald hi mera yah meri pyari angel ane vaali hai!!!!
Heer started blushing.. gay3 " preet tu kabhi nahi sudnrega??
Preet screamed very badly " are bhayya chodo mein to bas majak kar raha tha??/
Prem " majak kar raha tha abhi dikhata hun tujhe?"
Preet ran and hid behind heer " bhabhi plz bachalon apke ik laute devar kon"
Heer "prem kyon us bechare kon tang kar rahe hon?
Prem " bechara??? Tumhe yeh bechara lagta hai??
Kis angle se heer???
Heer " har angle se??.. ab bahot hogaya!!!
Gay3 " ruko bahi tum log iske vajah se kyon lad rahe hon' aur tu preet ab adat dal de.. teri bhabhi ab tujse utna pyar nahi karegi jitna pehle karti thi???
Preet in shock " are vo kyon.. he kneeled dwn infront of heer" bhabhi aap kahi ja rahe ho kya???
Prem " nahi teri bahbhi kahi nahi jaa rahi hai
Balki teri/ tera angel ane vala hai na'isliye so obviously teri bhabhi unse jyada pyar karegi...
So sad preet ab tujhe koi pyaar nahi karega...
Akeli heer hi thi jo tujhe sab mein support karti thi aur sab se bachati thi'
Ab dekhenge''" prem said leaning on heer'
Gay3 " sach kaha prem tumne.. preet ab tum kya karoge??"
Preet " bhabhi dekho na?? yeh sab kya keh rahe hai.. kya sach mein aisa karogi to apke is pyare devar ka kya hoga???
Heer " prem kyon ise tang kar rahe ho'.???
Aur preet tu to mera pyara bacha mera best buddy mera best dost mera bahi hai na??? to mera pyaar tumhare liye kabhi kam nahi hoga.. thik hai''..''
Preet " thanks bhabhi u r the best.. samajne ki koshish kijye bhabhi kuch log jal rahe hai'"
Prem " hello yahan koi nahi jal raha hai.. and by the way tum dono ne yeh jo team banai hai na..
Use yeh mat sochna mai akela hoon.. mera aangel apne papa ka sat dega??? Kyon ma???
Gay3 " tum log mujhe isme mat ghiso" mai ja rahi hoon? And gay3 leaves from there
Heer " preet mai soch rahi thi ki angel ke liye ek chachi bhi le aye????"
Preet started blushing
Prem said " hai re kya kismet hogi us ladki ki jo preet se shadi karegi'??
Just then ash entered inside "
Preet maine tumhe kya kam diya tha??"
Preet " vo sry ash mai to bhul hi gaya' pb ke chakkar main"
Ash thik hai " vo prem jiju apka match 2 ghante mein shuru hone vaala hai"
"Are haan main to bhul hi gaya
Abhi tayyaar hoke ata hoon"prem left frm der
Heer was looking at preet and signalling smthng
Preet was bcmng red like a tomato
Till then ash said " are heer mai to tujhe poochna hi bhul gayi.. kaisi hon tum?
Heer " mai thik hoon.. bahut jaldi yaad ayi meri"
Ash " sry vo preet ke chakkar mein""
Ash got interrupted by heer " preet ke chakkar main?????"
Ash and preet both started blushing
Till then prem came outside " chalo chaltein hain"
All the best prem said heer"
Ash " heer tum nahi chal rahi hon??
Preet " nahi ash ma ne mana kiya hai"
Ash " jiju yeh kya hai apka final match hai aur heer nahi aa rahi hai?"
prem " tumhe pata hai na ash deleivery ki date nazdik aa rahi hai.. to aise mein ..
Ash interrupted " jiju main hoon na"
Preet " haan bhayya hum hai na"
Heer looked at both of them
Prem " thik hai.. lekin ma ko tum logon ko mana hoga??"
Preet and ash " thik hai"
After they conviced gay3
All of them left for the match..
It was a inter club football match..
And it was the finals'.
Match started..
Prem opponent team captain said to prem " match to aaj hum hi jitenge!!! Prem replied " dekh lenge!!!"
Heer was silently praying for prem'
Here both the captions came in front.. prem won the toss and the match started
Prem's team was really dng well..
Prem being the captian was centre of attraction
But heer was feeling very nervous111
Ash said " heer tum jiju se kitna pyaar karti hon na'!!! match vo khel rahe hai aur chinta tujhe ho rahi hai??
Preet " isi liye bhayya nahi chahate the'ki bhabhi na aye
Ash " sach me heer prem lucky hai"
Heer " janti hai ash agar prem vahan khel raha hai na phir bhi use pata chal raha hai ki mein kya soch rahi hoon.. aur lucky prem nahi main hoon"
Ash " thik hai baba tujse koi nahi jeet sakta"
Hear the match was gng in full swing
Prem's team was really playing good"
Half time
Prem came to meet heer
Prem " heer mera baby kya keh rahe hai??"
Heer " yahi ki uske papa kitna acha khel rahe hai.. aur vo mujhe andar se kick kar raha hai!!
Prem " karega hi meri tarah football khelega"
Heer " dekh lenge"
Till the n half time got over
Last 20 min of game were remaing
Match was on a serious point
e\after the break even the opponents were playing good..
hear heer was getting more and more worried..
she said looking at the tummy" baby dekh rahe hon na apne papa ko.. tum inki tarah football player nahi banna.. nahi to pehle hi meri jaan chali jati hai bad me pata nahi kya hoga?
Preet and ash stated laughing'
Suddenly heer screemed " ahh!!"
Ash and preet got panicked
They asked heer " heer !!!bhabhi !!! kya hua"
Heer said " take me 2 the hospital"
Preet told ash 2 take heer 2 hospital
Meantile he went and informed one of the substitute to inform prem
The substitute went and informed prem
Prem got tensed
Till then the opposite team captain came and asked prem wht had happened
Prem tol him everythn
He got an idea
He went and pushed one of the players
Both team players started fighting'
While the refree was busy all the players ran from the ground'
Heer was on the stretcher
Prem was holding her hand
All the football players were also there'.
Heer was shouting in pain"
Also prem was shouting
Heer asked prem " idiot tum kyon chilla rahe hon"
Prem " kyonki tum chilla rahi hon"
The doctor came and took her the the labour room
Prem also went inside..
Meanwhile gay3 also came there
She was getting nervous actually all were tensed
After some time they heard a voice of a baby crying
A sister came out with a cute daughter
Gay3 holded her in her hands.. ash said " bilkul jiju par gayi hai"
Preet asked the nurse how his bhabhi was ..
Nurse told them that they can go and meet her
They all went inside
All went and congratulated heer
Suddenly they noticed prem wasn't there
So preet asked " bhabhi pb kahan hai?
Heer pointed towards the bed"
Ash " yeh sab"
Doctor " darne ki kuch baat nahi hai" pareshani ki ,vajah se yeh behosh hogaye"
Prem got up and found himself in that state
He was really feeling shy
All stated looking and laughing at him
He got more enbarresed
Even his heer was laughing
Preet was making fun " pb aap ko chakkar agaye?"
Gay3 stoped preet " hum log sab bhar ja rahe hain prem tum thodii der heer ke saat ruko"
Aur ye lo tumhari angel
Gay3 handed prem his angel and all went out'
Prem and heer were alone nw..
Prem bent dwn and kissed heer on her forhead
He said " thaks heer"
Ab dekhta hoon mera partner agaya hai!!!
Heer stared at him at then at her angel
Prem " ab mai ise meri tarah football khelna sikhaonhga"
Heer " prem yeh football nahi khelegi doctor banegi'
Kyon nahi khelegi? Asked prem
Kyonki yeh ladki hai" replied heer
Prem " to kay hua.. maeri angel to football hi khelegi apne papa ki tarah" hai na beta??
Heer " nahi prem doctor..
Main iski mom hun"
Prem" to my dear wife mein bhi baap hoon"
Yeh to football hi khelegi
Heer " nahi doctor"
Prem" nahi football"
H " doc..
P " footba'"
H " doc'''''..
Outside every body put hands on heads
"Yeh kabhi nahi sudhrenge"
After 6 months
Heer coming running'
Behind she is wearing a baby carry bag..
There is her angel'
She is running coz the match is gng to start
Ash preet all have already reached'
The gates are closed
She doenst knw wht 2 do
She gets an idea
Climbs on gate and goes in'
There is her husband
Waiting
Prem: heer kitni der lagadi tumhe pata hai na tum aur angel mera matlab " chahat" mera lucky charm ho!!!
Heer " sry prem traffic...
Prem: rahne do ab match shuru hone wali hai...
Heer " best of luck prem"
Prem just kissed heer and his angel and said thanks and went frm there"
Past 6 months life had not changed a lot..
Chahat had got her chachi..
That is preet finally married aslesha
Prem was loving her en more"'
And that day of chahat's birth was the most memorable day in their life
Prem and heer lived happily
With their chahat
Preet and ash
The end
So that's it guys
My first attempt of writing
May b first and last
Do tell me hw it is
Criticism are accepted!!!!!
thank u all
CID
