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Khadija

@khajju

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

hey its an awesmee FF.
Luvd it to the core.
So premeer already met each other...likd it tht u didnt drag it with their meeting.
Premeer scenes wer mindblowinggg 😍 ..luvd their boldness.
Do continue soon.
Thanks for pm.

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aakriti

@aakriti120

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

wow..really intersting..waiting for the next part..😊

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luvharshiti

@luvharshiti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

lovely update dear...👏...thanks for the pm... will be waiting for the next part ...please update soon...😊

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repunzell

@repunzell

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

totally different FF...

roking it gurl...continue soon!!!

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Biya

@biyaahmad

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

wow!nice update.

really luved it..🤗

so,premeer already know eachother.and they met after 2 years.

and their romance.❤️hmmm.looks like they missed each other vry badly.😉

do countinue soon.can't wait to see what happpened next.

and ya thanks fr the pm.😊

update soon.😊

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kiran

@kiran_28

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

nice update!
luv premeer scences. they r not strangers. wow!

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647669

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: harshitideewani
Thanks for the the lovely updateee 👏
Heey it's my pleasure 😊
really loved the Prem and Heer's❤️ rommance and this shows how much they misseed each otheer
i'm glad you liked it
continue the great work and please update soon.😍
yes i'll hopefully update today if i have time

Originally posted by: priyahmt
wow...lovely update...
Heey thanks
so prem and heer already know each other and is in love...😍
waiting for the next
yes they already know each other, i didnt want to drag the meeting wanted to go straight to the story line lol and yes hopefully should be up today 😃

Originally posted by: seema.sharma86
so nice update prem and heer love each other before how cute...
so romantic in office,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
heer is so much bold to kiss his prem😛
Heey thanks, glad you liked it! 😊 lol yeah heer is very bold in this fanfic, both of them are 😆

Originally posted by: Pumpkinn
That was a total surprising update dear ...
And I loved it ...
Heey!😊 Glad it surprised you 😃 and glad you loved it!
Premeer not only knew each other but are soo much in love also ...
The fic has become more interesting now ...
Yupp they already know each other and are very much in love and has it? lol
Premeer scenes were amazing ...
The kisses were too good ...
Glad you liked the scenes and the kisses 😛
Update soon ...
Thnx for pm ...
Will do and no problem thanks for reading

Originally posted by: HARSHITI12
awsome..

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: khajju
hey its an awesmee FF.
Luvd it to the core.
Heey thanks glad you like it
So premeer already met each other...likd it tht u didnt drag it with their meeting.
Premeer scenes wer mindblowinggg 😍 ..luvd their boldness.
Yupp they are already married and glad you like their boldness i love it too 😊
Do continue soon.
Thanks for pm.
yes i will and no problem thanks for reading

Originally posted by: aakriti120
wow..really intersting..waiting for the next part..😊

thanks and the next part should be up soon if i have time 😊

Originally posted by: Oblivious
lovely update dear...👏...thanks for the pm... will be waiting for the next part ...please update soon...😊

Heyy thanks 😃 no problem thanks for reading and yeah should be updating soon hopefully lol

Originally posted by: repunzell
totally different FF...
roking it gurl...continue soon!!!

Hey thanks lol i will update soon 😊

Originally posted by: angelina_angel
nice one
continue soon

Heey thankss and yeah should update soon

Originally posted by: deshdeewani
wow!nice update.
really luved it..🤗
Heey thanks glad you loved it!
😃
so,premeer already know eachother.and they met after 2 years.
and their romance.❤️hmmm.looks like they missed each other vry badly.😉
yup they already know each other, and yes they missed each other very badly as you'll see lol
do countinue soon.can't wait to see what happpened next.
and ya thanks fr the pm.😊
update soon.😊
yes hopefully will update later and no problem thanks for reading 😃

Originally posted by: kiran_28
nice update!
Heey thanks 😃
luv premeer scences. they r not strangers. wow!
lol nopee no strangerrs 😊

Originally posted by: repunzell
update??? whn???

update will be soon if i have time 😊

Edited by sweet_girl234 - 14 years ago

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647669

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Hellooo!😃 glad to see that you all are liking the ff alot. i honestly didnt think it would get this reaction. glad to see you all like the last part 😉. now on to the update

Prem, Gay3 and Lalit were sitting around the dining table having their breakfast. It had been a week since Prem came back and he officially joined the office yesterday.Gay3 'Prem tomorrow I am holding a Pooja, and Preet should be back tonight, so tell Heer to come early tomorrow as i might need some help' Prem 'Haa Ma i'll tell her, but ma a pooja for what?' he looked at his mother. Lalit 'a pooja because all our family has come back and are together, soon Kulraj and Kiran will come here with the kids as well and i dont want any buri nazar to come onto our family' Prem understood while Gay3 nodded to show she was agreeing to Lalit. Prem ' acha ma i should be off, byee' He went to touch his mum and dad's feet for blessings, they gave him their blessings and off he went.

He went in his car, happy that he was going to have a good day tomorrow with his Heer. With a smile he entered the office and went straight to his cabin. He called the reception Prem 'Hello, send Ms Maan to my cabin please' receptionist 'Okay sir' He kept the phone down and opened his laptop and within a few minutes she came in. He looked at her to see what she was wearing, she was wearing a white shirt, and a grey blazer along with grey pants, she had her hair tied back in a pony and she had this big smile on her face. she started walking towards him. Heer 'Ha Prem why have you called me?' Prem ' Just, why can't i call my would-be-wife to her would-be-husband's cabin without any reason? He said with a smirk. Heer went closer to his chair and put her hand around his neck Heer ' Of course you can. but you should know Prem that we are in the office' she said this while bringing her lips close to his.

He looked at her lips and put his hands on her waist and brought her down to his lap. He brought her lips to his and closed the distance, between them. One hand was on her waist and the other hand on her cheek. she played with his hair and moved her hands up and down his neck. They slowly broke out of the kiss when they both needed air. Heer looked up at him and saw his big cheshire cat grin. She pulled his nose. Heer 'So, is this why you called me ? ' She said with a serious but playful glare. He put his hands around her waist. Prem 'Nope, i can get this from you whenever i want' He nuzzled his nose with hers. she giggled into his chest keeping her head on his shoulders.

Heer 'So why did you call me? ' she said while playing with his shirt buttons. Prem took one of her hands in his and kissed her fingers. Prem 'I called you because tomorrow you have been ordered to come to my house' Heer looked up at Prem confused 'Ordered?' He looked at her confused face and couldn't resist. He kissed the top of her nose. Prem 'Haa ordered by Ma, Ma has kept a pooja tomorrow and she wants her darling would-be-daughter in law to help her out and so she asked me to bring you tomorrow, and also bring your family, she's going to ring them today anyway but I just thought I'd tell you now, so you don't plan anything' Heer 'Oh right, yeah i'll surely be there' she said smiling. 'Anything to spend more time with my baby' she while pulling his cheeks. Prem 'oooh so your coming to spend time with me,heh' he said with a smirk on his face. Heer 'haa and to help Ma, anyway i've got loads of work to do, and i'm sure you have too so if you would be ever so kind to leave me Mr Juneja then i would be ever so grateful' Prem looked at her with a smirk growing on his lips. Prem 'Haan i will leave you, but on one condition' as he said this he tightened his hold on Heer's waist. Heer ' What condition' She said raising her eyebrow. He pointed to his lips, with his index finger. Heer just rolled her eyes 'What is that all you think about Mr Juneja?' Prem smiled 'well whenever your in front of me i can't let you go just like that can i?' She smiled and brought her lips to his Heer 'Anything for you' And then closed the gap between the two.

Prem was upstairs in his room, when suddenly he heard some shouting, he went downstairs to check where it was coming from and looked to see his dad running around after his little brother Preet and his mum just watching laughing. he laughed and went up to where his mum was. Prem 'another chaand joke?' He asked Gay3 'haa, this boy na he can't live without teasing his papa' Preet saw his big brother, and quickly went to him hiding behind him. Lalit slowly followed Preet 'PB, save me, look i just came back and he's already started!' Lalit, 'Prem thu hat ja, this boy as soon as he came, he started teasing me' Prem laughed 'Preet' he said while holding his ear 'Say sorry to papa' Preet held his ear with pain Preet 'Sorry papa' Lalit smiled and hugged him. After Lalit hugged him Preet went to his PB and hugged him and then hugged his mother. Preet 'Ma, i am so hungry what have you made quickly bring it, I hate the aeroplane food, it's so bland' He said Gay3 'aww come and sit down and i will serve you all food' all of them sat around the dining table and ate together as a family after a long time, they were laughing and enjoying the moment they were in.

After a while they all went upstairs, Prem told Preet about the pooja and went to sleep. Preet went into his room and the first thing he did was get his mobile phone out from his pocket and rang someone. He waited for the person to pick up. Preet 'Heeyy guess what i'm back! Miss me much?' Girl on the other end 'Prreeett! when did you get back! how come you didn't tell me?! when am i going to meet you?! of course i missed you ! ' Preet just sat on the bed listening to all her questions with a smile on his face Preet 'ala baba one question at a time, i got back today evening, i didnt tell you because i wanted it to be a surprise and you are going to meet me tomorrow at the pooja at home your're invited and i missed you tooo!' Girl 'Tomorrow?..oh yeah i can't wait, you should go to sleep you must be really tired'. Preet 'okay ma'am byeee ' girl 'Byee' and he cut the phone of and went to sleep with a smile on his face

sooo how did you like?...btw i havent spellchecked it yet so ignore the mistakes.who is preet's girl?😉 and how were the premeer scenes?

comment like or do both 😃

Edited by sweet_girl234 - 14 years ago