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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
wht happened y is prem shocked??? plz do update soon!
awsum update n thx for d pm dear!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
it was a bit sad update...prem n heer not talkin to each other!!

i can see misunderstandings cumin on our premeer way...plz don't do that!!!

it nite be rajveer n heer hugging each other which coz prem to be shocked😭!!!

no misunderstandin b.wthm plzzz!!!


update soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
will u update it noww????

please do it!!!

nobody is updating nowadayss😔!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
im jus writing for vrushika...
CHAPTER ...9...
Prem is shocked to see tat heer entering wid RAJVEER into her office nd veera is already present there...
she is facing her back towards de door nd RAJVEEER on his knees is proposing her...nd makes her wear de ring in her finger...
veera hugs her nd RAj...
prem is really shocked nd tears starts to roll down his cheeks...thinks
"heer tum agar RAJ sey pyaar karti thi to mujh sey shaadi kyun ki...heer tumhein kia RAj sey pyaar tha...heer tum aisei to nhi thi...tum ney mere saath aisa kyun kia...tumney RAj key liye birthday plan kia...aur..aur...PHIR TUM NEY USEkI SHIRT JALNEY per gussa aya aur meri per nhi...tum ney RAJveer key liye mujhey dhoka dia...heer tum ney aisa kyun kia...ab mein bhi ek faisla ker chuka hoon..."he moves frm there...
IN HOME...
heer ..veera nd rajveer reaches at home...all r w8ing for dem...wen PREm is standing at de stairs...
PREM"heer ruk jao wahan aur tum bhi..MR"
all shocked seeing at prem
heer sees tat PREMS eyes r red
heer:prem kia hua?"...tum theek to ho na...taking his face in her hands...
prem pushes her hands bak...
Prem"wah heer...wah ..itni achi acting ker leti ho socha bhi nhi tha..."
heer:prem ye tum kia keh rahey ho mujh kuch nhi samajh a raha"
prem"tumhein kuch samajh nhi arah...nice joke"
RAj"prem wat HAPPENED???"
PREM"RAj tum chup karo...buht mazza aya meri zindagi barbaad ker key..."anyways CONGRATULATION both of u...engagement jo ker li hai...
all shocked
MAA"prem tum aisey kyun keh rahey ho...heer aisa kyun karey gi..."
PREM:maa woh aisa ker chuki hai..aur veera bhi in key saath mili hui thi..."glares at VEERA
veera"bhai ...aisa kuch nhi hai..aaap"
prem"mujhey samjaney ki koi zaroort nhi hai...mein ney sab kuch apni annkhon sey dekha hai..."
heer"prem..p"
prem"bilkul chup...ek daam chup.."nd slaps her...
PREM"heer mujh mein kia kaami thi jo tumney ney RAJveer sey sagai karney ka faisla ker lia...hmm bolo...pyaar bhi dia...tumhare paas parivaar bhi tha...aur kia chahiye..."
heer is silent nd tears starts to roll down her cheeks...
prem"NIKAL JAO IS GHAR SEY hamesha hamesha key liye...'
heer"prem ...tum..."
prem"GET OUT..."
veera"bhai..."
prem "SHUT UP"
heer"prem ...meri baat to"
prem"i said GET LOST..."
veer"heer bhabi aap bhai ko kyun nhi batati keh yeh sab aisa..."
heer"veera...bas aur kuch nhi...rishta wishvaas sey banta hai...aur jahan wishvaas na ho...wahan rishta kia..."
PREM"heer tumhare pas bas 2 min hain...yeh ghar chod ker chali jao...apney rajveer key saath"
heer"mujhe kuch nhi chahiye prem...im going...forever"
tears rolling down frm both of thier cheeks...
heer left de house ...no body hv dere dinner...
veera"aaj mujhe aap ko apna bhai kehtey hua sharam ati hai...huh"
all stand at deir position wid de tears in deir eyes...
RAJvEER cums into de house
PREM"tum yahan kia karney aye ho..."
RAj"mein yahan saachie bataney aya hoon"
prem"kon si saachie...mein sab janta hoon"
veera"aap kuch nhi jantey agar aap kuch jantey hotay to aap heer bhabi ko ghar sey na nikaltey..."
prem"to phir kia hai saachie"
veera"yeh key...jis din ki aap baat karrahey ho...birthday ki...woh raj ki birthday mein heer bhabi nhi theen...balkey RAj ki gf.thi...aur heer bhabi to rastey mein aap key office utr gayein theen aur aap office mein nhi they...aur jab hum wapis a rahey they to hum ney heer bhabi ko pick kia tha...uss key baad woh shirt...woh is liye gussa ho rahi theen kyunkey woh shirt RAj ki gf ney us ko di thi keh jab woh us ko propose karey to yeh shirt pehn ker aye...aur aaj unhoney apni gf ko propose kia tha...heer bhabi ko nhi...yeh sab sacchi hai..aur agar aap ko yakeen nhi hota to woh rahi RAj ki gf usi sey pooch le jia..."
all r shocked to c gf of raj...
RAj"haan prem yeh hai meri gurlfrend...MS.ASHLESHA ...meri is sey engagement hui hai"
prem"wat??..tum logon ney mujhey pehley kyun nhi bataya..."
preet"sab ney aap ko bataney ki koshish ki thi..per aap ney nhi suna"
prem"han..par...mujhey ab heer ko wapis ley ker ana hoga...'he runs...jus wen phone beigns to ring...
veera picks it up"wat??...aisa nhi ho sakta sir...its impossible..."
all juneja turns towards her...prem cums running
"kia hua veera kis ka phone tha...???"
"bhai woh woh"...
here i stop...
keep w8ing...
hope virushika u r happy...
its jus for u...
wid LUv
SAIRA
guys do comment yaar...plzzz...i luv reading comments...w8ing for ur comments⭐️
Edited by hibbaamir - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65


aww cho chweet
saira i just love u
that was so sweet of u yaar
its like u made my day 2dy
even after being so busy wth ur fast prayers...wht nt
so much of work
and u wrote it
thank u
thanks a lot
really means a lot yaar
i dnt knw hw 2 thank u
seriously
i m really glad
cant beleive still that u have updated
that to fr me
its like
wow
thank u
thank u
thank u
thank u
thank u
thank u

thank u so much i dnt have words to thank u
its really wowo!!!!


and nw talking abt the update it was ausum
but yaar history repeated..
prem slapped heer???
omg yaar
nw wht's gng 2 happen???
heer is gng 2 leave the house and go?
and then no leap plz
then prem will understand
and then no no plz
plz
plz
hey all misundersatnding
just bcoz of one small misunderstading
this prem na ekdum duffer hai
just does whatever he wants
atleast cld have heard wht she wanted to say
na
ab pachtavat hovat kya jab chidiya
chug gai khet
lolz
prem
what have u done
spoilt ur own life
with ur own hands
omg yaar
ab jao use dhudne
paile khuch suna nahi abhi bhago...
and wowo ash is his gf
that's nice...
oh!!! so nw secret is opened
hope so nw
all is well...

and saira stoped at a very important point yaar
any ways waiting fr the next one..
i m sure by veera's expression its looking that heer
is in the hospital
i m guessing so
and love u saira

here i stop...
keep w8ing...
hope virushika u r happy...
its jus for u...
wid LUv
SAIRA
guys do comment yaar...plzzz...i luv reading comments...w8ing for ur comments⭐️

😭😭😭
and yeah i m very happy that u updated but sad fr the twist😭

do update soon whn u get time
waiting
wwaiting
u made my day 2 dy
thanks a lotz
Edited by vrushika - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: vrushika



aww cho chweet
saira i just love u
that was so sweet of u yaar
its like u made my day 2dy
even after being so busy wth ur fast prayers...wht nt
so much of work
and u wrote it
thank u
thanks a lot
really means a lot yaar
i dnt knw hw 2 thank u
seriously
i m really glad
cant beleive still that u have updated
that to fr me
its like
wow
thank u
thank u
thank u
thank u
thank u
thank u

thank u so much i dnt have words to thank u
its really wowo!!!!


and nw talking abt the update it was ausum
but yaar history repeated..
prem slapped heer???
omg yaar
nw wht's gng 2 happen???
heer is gng 2 leave the house and go?
and then no leap plz
then prem will understand
and then no no plz
plz
plz
dnt seperate them
may b in the next part we'll get to see
so comments reserved

thnkss alot...
nd keep reading to know wat happens...
i understand wat u wan..bt to move forward i hv to bring dis track...😉😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
thnkss alot...
nd keep reading to know wat happens...
i understand wat u wan..bt to move forward i hv to bring dis track...😉

oh!!!! so they are getting seperated
😭😭😭😭
i m crying hear
nahi aisa nahi ho sakta!!!!!!!
plz r u thniking of taking leap????
:
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
thank u for the udpate bt a bit sad update 😔!!

history is repeating itself...prem slapped...heer left!!!

plz don't repeat kdmhmd tract!!!!

and v aso don't want SIX OR SEVEN years leapp plzzz!!!!

veera got phone call n got shcoked...definitely heer got in an acident n nw hospitalized!!!! i hope heer forgives prem n there is no severe damage heer!!!

plz update soonnn!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Awesome update..
WOW the part was as always superb
it always happens without listening to others direcly blames them for something... ufff prem bhi na😡... he should have atleast listened to heer...
Ashlesha ki entry😲.. hmmm hope she has no negative part... hehehe😆
Nooo... i dont want prem heer to be separated😭... plz bring them together😭...
Thanks for the pm...
CONTINUE SUPER DUPER SOON!!!
TC



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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
OMG! heer left prem...!! prem wil nvr learn of respectin heer!huh!
whose phone call is it?? is heer ok???
plz do update soon!!
thnx for d pm dear!

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