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Shot 14

Prem is sitting in the bed checking random channels. Heer climbed next to him. She looked at him as if she is expecting something. Prem kept the remote away switching off the TV. Heer slowly 'today i'll get whatever i want. Am i right?' Prem smiled 'yes Pari. What do you want?' Heer 'i want to cuddle into your hands.' Prem took a breath 'okay. don't have heart to say no to my Pari.' He opened his arms. Heer quickly cuddled into his chest. Prem 'only today.' Heer 'thanks Prem.' Prem kissed her forehead and hugged her tight. Heer kept her head on his chest.

Heer 'Prem, when did you find out me as Pari.' Prem 'as soon as you entered my cabin.' Heer lifted her head to look at his face how?' Prem holding her with his one hand ran his other hand finger on her lips 'these cute lips and lovely eyes.' he pat her cheek 'enough for me to identify my Pari.' Heer 'then why you didn't tell me?' Prem 'just wanted to make sure you are my Pari.' Heer 'how?' Prem 'i collected details about you.' Heer 'what do you know about me?' Prem 'ummm. Pune Girl.' He laughed. She buried her face into his chest. he hugged her tight 'so you talk so much about me.' Still in his chest 'no. only about Pune.' Prem 'because of your father, you stayed in many cities of India, why Pune alone so special?' Heer 'just like that.' Prem smiled and stopped teasing.

Prem 'tell me how did you identify me?' Heer looked at him with a teasing smile 'with those captain Haddocks stupid words.' Prem shyly smiled Heer 'and your angry behaviour. You didn't change' She laughed 'why you stopped it now?' Prem 'i used those words to remember you. now you are with me na. So I stopped.' Heer 'what?' Prem teasingly smiled. Heer started hitting his chest lovingly 'do you mean i'm captain haddock.' Prem stopped her by holding her hand 'no. you are snowy.' He laughed. Heer with a fake angry 'i'm dog. Who are you then?' Prem 'i'm Tin Tin.' Heer 'oh yah' he pulled her up and nuzzled his nose on hers. She forgot herself for a second in his touch. She became silent enjoying his move. Prem whispered 'you are my Pari. Angel in my life.' He cupped her face 'good night.' Heer smiled 'good night.' Both drifted into sleep without further talk. Both cuddle together and slept.

Morning, after staying together silently watching morning sea from the bed, Heer went to washroom. Prem rested his back on the board silently stayed recollecting their confession. His mobile rings. Prem seeing his home number, sat straight to attend the call. Gay3 'Prem, how are you beta?' Prem 'fine ma. How are you and dad?' Gay3 'we are fine beta.' Prem 'ma, is anything important?' Gay3 'no beta. Just wanted to know when are you returning?' Prem thought 'ma only told to spend some time here. Then why suddenly she is asking about my return.' Gay3 'Prem' Prem 'ha ma.' He quickly 'i'll try to catch tomorrow afternoon flight ma.' Gay3 'okay beta.' She disconnected the line. Prem called his office and asked his manager to book tickets for next day afternoon flight. After that he is sitting quietly as he is still confused about his mother's call.

Heer came out of washroom wiping her face. she saw Prem sitting with confused face and holding phone in his hand. Heer sat next to him 'Prem' Prem came to present. He looked at her. She 'what happened?' he 'Heer, we need to go home tomorrow.' She 'no problem.' She paused 'everything fine Prem?' Prem 'ma called me now. She wants to know my return date.' Heer started wiping her hair 'so what? May be ma is missing you.' Prem thoughtfully 'she is the one who told to spend as many days possible here.' Heer stopped wiping her hair 'is dad okay?' Prem 'ma said they are fine.' Heer little scared voice 'are they planning to fix your marriage with' tears threaten to come out of her eyes. Prem quickly cupped her face and wipped her tears 'Pari, i didn't come all the way from Canada to disappoint you. you are my wife. Its my promise.' He hugged her 'don't get doubt in that.' she shook her head in his shoulder. He rubbed her back. Breaking their hug, Prem looked at her face 'you call your parents and talk. They might be waiting for your call to wish you.' Heer shook her head. Prem kissed her forehead 'after that we do some purchase here itself. We won't get time. I'm asked to book tickets for us in tomorrow afternoon flight.' He got out of the bed. Heer 'what purchase?' Prem bent down and caressed her cheek 'i want to buy something for my Pari.' Heer smiled. Prem 'okay, you talk to dad and ma.' He went to washroom.

Gay3 went to Prem room thinking something. She searched his wardrobe restlessly thinking 'i saw that gift even before he left to Singapore.' She searched pulling out some of his shirts outside. She stopped. She stared at the wardrobe. She murmured 'it was here a day before he went to Singapore. Now it is missing. Is that mean he gave it to his love? How to find the girl?' she started rearranging the cloth inside the wardrobe. She is in her own world of investigation. She didn't notice Lalit entering the house. Lalit called her twice to bring her out of thought world. 'Gay3' Gay3 shook 'ha'. Lalit 'what happened to you?' Gay3 'i'm just rearranging Prem's shirts.' Lalit 'why suddenly?' Gay3 'he is coming tomorrow night.' Lalit happily 'is it?' Gay3 looked at him surprisingly 'why so happy?' Lalit 'now i have a plan.' Gay3 closed the wardrobe 'what plan?' Lalit 'day after tomorrow i decided to prem engagement with Ash'

In a fraction of second Gay3 face turned like a volcano erupting fire 'what?' Lalit 'why are you shocked?' Gay3 'can't you hear. I told you several time. I don't accept Ash as my DIL.' Lalit 'Prem likes her.' Gay3 'who told you?' Lalit 'Ash told me' Gay3 'what she told?' Lalit 'she told Prem accepts whatever she says' Gay3 angrily interrupted 'in business. Not in life. Are you gone mad. You are older and lost it.' Lalit 'ha Gay3 i'm getting old and want to see Prem's marriage.' Gay3 'i'm not against that thought. me too wants to see his marriage and grand children etc.' Lalit 'then why are you not accepting Ash.' Gay3 'i won't.' Lalit 'why? Give me one valid reason to reject her.' Gay3 'don't you know the reason.' Lalit 'it is past. Now DJ and Ash are not like Balwant.' Gay3 'DJ is the reason behind everything.' Lalit 'you didn't like' Gay3 interrupted 'yes. i didn't like DJ from the day she entered your house. Who is she? She is your father's friends dIL. Did she ever behave like that. she made a grand drama infront of your father and cheated her. You are thinking Balwant is the reason. But DJ is the true reason behind everything.' Lalit 'forget the past, Gay3. Now they are without anything.' Gay3 'forget? Which one you want me to forget. She chased us out of the house. Chased you out of your own house. Don't you remember how we struggled to do last rites of your father. How we ran to save our life? Don't you remember your mother's tears? She don't even get a chance to see her husband face?' Lalit 'even ma forgave them before her death.' Gay3 'she is a mahan. I'm not. This DJ spoke low about me. What she know about relationship?' Lalit 'she causally said about him' Gay3 stood like a kali avatar and shouted 'how dare she talk wrongly about a friendship like that. he is like my brother.' Lalit 'Gay3, this society will talk like that only.' Gay3 'you believed her too na. Don't forget because of him you are alive today. Don't think he did this to save you. he wanted to save his sister's sindoor. For me, he saved you. I will never forgive the person who killed my brother. I will never allow Ash to enter this house as DIL. Never. Don't dream.' Lalit 'if Prem likes her.' Gay3 'i already told you, I know how to stop Prem.' she stormed out of the room with anger pushing him who is standing on the way. Lalit is shocked to see Gay3's anger.

Heer dialled her home number. Balraj and Teji wished her. Heer is very much excited. Teji took the phone from Balraj hand. Balraj smiled thinking what his wife is going to ask Heer. He sat little away and studied his wife face. Teji 'first time you are spending bday without us. how are you feeling.' Heer 'ma, i missing you both.' She paused 'but Prem made this day special.' Teji 'is it?' Heer 'he ordered a cake. we celebrated together.' Teji 'very interesting boss. Gifted anything.' Heer 'ha ma. Diamond necklace.' Teji with a wide opened mouth 'diamond.' Balraj looked with a shock. Heer 'I have many things to tell you. i'll tell after i reach India.' Teji 'when are you coming beta?' Heer 'tomorrow afternoon flight. We'll be there by night ma.' Teji 'okay beta' Balraj signalled Teji to give the phone to him.' Teji 'Heer beta, papa wants to talk to you.' Heer 'ha ma.'

Balraj took the phone 'Pari, what is your boss name?' Heer confusingly 'Prem' Barlaj 'ha i know. do you know his father name?' Heer 'ha Lalit juneja. Her mother name is Gay3 Juneja.' Barlaj is shocked. Balraj 'are you sure beta?' Heer 'ha papa why are you asking like that?' Barlaj managed 'no beta. I just asked. Okay you enjoy the day.' He kept the phone. Heer looked at her mobile confusingly.

Balraj sat in the chair with a confused thought. Teji 'Prem surely loves our Pari.' She saw silent Barlaj with confused face. 'what happened?' Barlaj 'Prem is Lalit Juneja's son.' Teji is shocked. She sat next to him 'you mean Gay3's son.' Balraj shook his head. Teji 'then why are you sad? Prem loves Heer. Gay3 will surely fulfil her promise.' Balraj 'but Lalit won't allow this to happen.' Teji 'They don't even know each other. we never thought Prem will ever meet Heer. it is all God's plan.' Balraj 'i'm confused.'

Prem and Heer did lot of shopping in cruise itself. Heer 'Prem, this is too much.' Prem 'this is not even 50% what I have planned for you.' Heer 'its enough Prem'. Prem 'no this one you buy.' He is taking another dress for Heer. Heer pulled Prem out of the shop ' Prem, are you planning to open a shop in my name.' Prem 'no'. Heer 'then why are you buying so much?' Prem 'i like.' Heer interrupted 'i know. but i don't want now.' Prem sadly 'why?' Heer 'i can't wear all these to office.' Prem 'but i want to get all these for you.' Heer 'when i need i'll demand.' Prem 'you don't want now.' Heer 'ha not now. But later i'll ask. Sure. So be ready at that time.' Prem smiled 'okay.'

As soon as Prem and Heer returned to Hotel, Heer started packing things. Prem fell in couch 'Pari, you can do that tomorrow.' Heer 'nope. I want to finish everything fast. So that i can spend time with you.' He got up and came to her to sit with her 'you are going to be with me all the time.' Heer 'ha, but i can't be this much close with you.' Prem felt sad 'just few days Heer, after that you can be like the way you are.' Heer pat his cheek 'i know. i'm not sad.' Prem 'Heer' Heer busy taking out her dresses out shopping bag 'ha' Prem 'Heer, i need sometime to tell our love to elders.' Heer looked at him 'i trust you Prem.' Prem 'till then don't tell anything to you parents too.' Heer 'okay. but my ma guessed.' Prem put his hand around her 'even then.' Heer 'okay.' she kissed his cheek.

Heer showed her dresses 'Prem, i can't keep diamond necklace in hostel.' She paused 'and also i won't be wearing these.' Prem rested his cheek on her 'keep it in my suitcase.' Heer shook her head 'some new dresses too.' Prem 'okay Pari.' He kissed her cheek 'you finish packing. I'll order dinner for us.' he got up and left to next room as Heer started keeping her new dresses in his suitcase.

Gay3 restlessly rocking in her rocking chair in dark room. Lalit already slept. Gay3 want to know her brother like friend alive or not. She went back to those days.

Balraj is working as station master in the village where Gay3 is married to Lalit. Balwant is son of Lalit's family friends. Both fathers are close and Lalit's father was feeding his friend's family. Balwant wants to grab all the properties from Lalit's father and want to kill all his family members. Balwant killed Lalit's father and kept his thumb impression all the documents to take over all his properties. He chased Lalit and his family out of house. Finally he wanted to kill Lalit, Gay3 and Lalit's mother too.

Lalit come to know about Balwant's plan. He decided to leave the village in the middle of the night. They came out of their hiding and started walking towards railway station. Lalit is clueless how to catch the train which passing that station around 2 in the night. That train won't stop in this station. ma 'beta, you ask Balraj's help to stop the train.' Lalit angrily 'why? Why should i? I'll find some way.' he gave an angry look to Gay3. Gay3 silently crying. Suddenly they saw two men behind them at a distance.

Balraj came to station as he heard Lalit is chased out of the house and expected him to escape in the night. He decided to help him. Balraj is thinking about how to stop the train in the station. A man came 'sir' Balraj 'what happened?' in hurry man 'sir, Balwant's men are chasing Lalit bhai and his family.' Balraj 'we need to stop the train to get them into it.' he thought 'you do one thing. You act doing something in the track. During that time i'll try to help to get inside the train.' Man accepted. He grabbed red flag and started sitting near the track like he is working on it. balraj changed the signal light to red.

Barlaj saw Lalit with Gay3 and his mother coming into the station in hurry. At the same time train stopped in the station seeing red light. Barlaj prayed a door should be open. He is happy to see an open door. Balraj shouted 'get in' Lalit quickly carried mother and made her sit in the steps. Lalit jumped in. Balraj grabbed Gay3 and pushed her in. He placed a cover on her hand. He shouted 'go inside.' Gay3 tried to say something. Barlaj touched her head with tears 'be happy Gay3. Everything will be alright.' With tears he stepped back and signalled to show green flag. Man showed green flag and the train started moving. Gay3 looking outside through the door with tears. Barlaj waved his hand with tears following down his cheeks.

Two men came behind. They tried to get into compartment. Balraj pulled them back. They started beating Balraj. Balraj fought with them until he made sure its difficult for them to catch the train. One person stabbed Balraj on his back knowing he is the one who helped them to escape. Gay3 shouted 'Balraaaj' Lalit pulled her in.

Gay3 inconsolably crying. Lalit's mother tries to console her 'nothing will happen to him.' Lalit didn't pay any interest. He is annoyed. Ticket checking man came. Lalit searched in his small bag. he struggled as he is without any paise. TC 'you all got into train while moving without ticket. Take fine for 3 members.' Lalit blabbered 'i don't have money.' Gay3 looked at Lalit and TC. Lalit tried to explain. TC is not in a mood to listen to him as he is already in sleeping mood.

Gay3 remembered Barlaj stuffing something into her hand when the train started moving. She started searching for it. she found the cover. she quickly checked the cover. she found money and ticket for them. she took out the ticket and handed over it to TC. Lalit confused. TC checked the ticket 'okay go and sit somewhere. There are few empty seats.' He moved away.

Lalit looked at Gay3 for answer 'how she got ticket.' Gay3 looking at the cover in her hand cried more. Mother consoled her. Lalit understood Balraj booked ticket for them.

Gay3 got up from her rocking chair with face full of tears. She wiped her tears 'my Balraj won't have died. He can't leave me just like that. I made a promise to him. He need to give his daughter to my son.' She decided to find out about Balraj. She prayed 'God Balraj should be alive.'

Prem settled in the couch 'we have two more hours Pari.' Heer settled next to him 'i want to be with you for next two hours.' Prem 'why are you so tensed about it?' Heer 'i won't get chance.' She looked down sadly. He cupped her face 'i'll be with you in the office. Only few hours you will be in the hostel without me.' He put his one hand around her pulled her closer 'what do you want me to do now?' he rested his nose one hers. She closed her eyes 'anything which makes me feel you.' he placed his another palm on her cheek. He gently ran his lips on hers. Other hand caressing her waist. She wrapped his neck with her hands. He nuzzled her cheek with his lips. He placed few feather kisses on her cheek and eyes. he pulled her into his chest. he hugged her tight. They stayed calm for a while. He kissed her head. 'only in front of others we are boss and secretary. When we are alone, you are my Pari and has every right to do whatever you want.' Heer 'Thanks Prem.' she looked at his face. he pressed his forehead against hers and smiled. She gave quick peck on his lips. Then shyly she buried her face again in his chest.

Gay3 called Nihal in office. Gay3 'Nihal, i want to your help.' Nihal 'ha aunty.' Gay3 'i want to find out about a man who worked in Indian railways.' Nihal 'Indian railways?' Gay3 'ha. Do you know anyone?' Nihal 'me don't know. but father of Prem's secretary is in Indian railways' Gay3 became curious 'is it? what is his name?' Nihal 'one minute aunty. I'll check her details.' Gay3 heard Nihal typing something in keyboard. Gay3 restlessly waited. Nihal 'ha aunty, his name is Balraj Mann.' Gay3 face lighten up 'Balraj Mann? where is he now?' Nihal 'ummm. he is in Delhi.' Gay3 'Prem secretary Heer? she is the one now went to Singalpore with Prem. am I right?' Nihal 'ha aunty. you might have seen her with Prem in project launching.' Gay3 'ha okay. thanks Nihal.' Nihal 'its okay aunty.' Gay3 'don't tell this to anyone.' Nihal agreed.

Gay3 happily kept the receiver. She thought 'Heer should be my Balraj's daughter.' she walked up and down in her room 'Prem loving her or not. Why he took her with him? Where is that gift gone? Is he gave that to her?' several question ran in her mind. She is determined to bring Heer as her DIL, if she is her Balraj's daughter, even if Prem doesn't love her. She decided 'tomorrow i must find out about Heer's father and their previous generation.'

Balraj opened his closet. He took a rakhi from a small box. He stared at it.

Gay3 and Balraj father's are friends and so their children. Entire Shimla knows it. they shared very lovely brother and sister relationship. After marriage Gay3 settled in Ambala. Balraj as an Indian railways employee posted in Ambala railway station. Gay3 always says his first posting will be in her place. Same happened.

Gay3 is waiting in mandir for Barlaj. Balraj came with a wide smile. Gay3 did ritual for Raksha bandhan. She tied rakhi in his hand. she 'where is my gift?' he 'gift? Oh no i forgot.' She turned other side 'you are always doing this.' he turned her to face him 'but i never kept anything pending.' She 'when will you give me your gift?' he 'this time i'm planning something different.' She gave a surprise look. He 'what ever you want. I'm ready to give you.' she 'very nice. Okay. i has one wish that you should give.' He 'sure.' She 'i want your daughter to be my DIL.' He laughed 'how do you so sure that you will give birth a boy and for me a daughter.' she confidently 'i know. and one more. You have to call her Pari.' He smiled 'why?' she 'she will be my angel. You keep any name but you have to call her Pari. now promise.' He promised with a smile. She looked at idol in the mandir 'listen God, i'm promising on you. my son will marry Balraj's daughter. now its your job to bring them together.' he laughed 'you put the burden on God.' She 'what is wrong in that? i want our brother-sister friendship to continue.' He touched her head 'i'll be happy if it happens.' Her smile faded away as she thought about Lalit doesn't likes them meeting and Lalit believing DJ's bundle of false story about them. He decided to cheer her up 'i forgot to show you. today morning bapuji send this picture to me.' He took out a cover from his pocket 'i need your approval.' She excited 'babhi's picture? show me.' She pulled the cover before he could hand it over to her. She opened the cover 'you don't even open it properly.' He 'i know its girl's picture. bapuji already told me in his previous letter. You must see her first.' She saw the picture. she read the details attached with that. she gave look to the picture from several angle 'ha. Perfect. She is my babhi.' He smiled 'okay then i'll tell bapuji.' She 'don't you want to see your future wife.' She teased 'beautiful or not?' He 'okay for you. okay for me also.' She showed the picture 'Teji babhi is really very cute.' He shyly smiled.

That was their last meeting. After that meeting DJ created big story about them in the house. Lalit fully believed that. mother several time advised him to be silent. But Lalit totally as a puppet believed DJ and Balawant's word. Within a week, everything changed upside down. Balwant killed Lalit's father. Then only Lalit came to know about Balwant's tricks. Even then he believed DJ's story on Gay3's relationship with Barlaj.

After stabbed by Balwant's men, Barlaj taken to hospital. After great struggle for more than 6 months, Balraj came back alive. Took another 6 months to recover fully. Balraj not wanted to continue his service in that village transferred to another city. He came to Pune. He married Teji. He know Gay3 went to Canada after 6 months after that incident. After that her parents also died. Before death, Gay3's parents handed everything to Balraj and his father telling them to hand over to Gay3 when she returns. Till now Barlaj is taking care of Gay3's properties in Shilma along with his own property, with the hope one day she will return to her hometown.

Teji touched his shoulder. Balraj with tears looked at the rakhi 'my Gay3 is back.' Teji shook her head. With tears he 'as Gay3 prayed God brought Prem and Heer together.'

Prem dropped Heer in front of her hostel. He does want to give her a kiss before leaving. He gave her one in flight, still he wanted to give her one now. But he can't as the driver is next to him, he got out of the car. He asked the watchman to take her luggage inside the hostel. Since it is early morning, sun still not out of its place, driver and watchman busy taking out her luggage, there is no one around, he pulled her closer 'take rest. I'll come in the afternoon to pick you up.' She shook her head. He gave a quick peck on her cheek 'give a call as soon as you reach your room.' She shook her head. She squeezed his hand before walking inside her building. Prem sat in the car. He waited till she gave call saying reached her room.

Prem walked into his room. He didn't expect mother to be awake so early in the morning. Its only 4 am. He is surprised to see his mother coming to him with a smile 'how are you beta?' Prem gave a side hug to her mother after touching her feet 'fine ma. How are you ma?' Gay3 'want to eat anything beta?' Prem 'no ma. I'm not hungry. I want to sleep for a while.' Gay3 'okay beta. You rest.' Prem 'ma. I got something for you.' gay3 'for me' he opened the suitcase. He started searching. Heer only packed his things. So he is not sure where she kept Gay3's shawl. In the process of searching Heer's dresses came up. He didn't care. Gay3 is watching all those nice dresses. she is silent.

Prem got up pulling out a pack for Gay3 'ya. This is for you ma.' She opened it. she is happy to see his son's selection 'nice beta. Nice colour.' He gave her another packet of chocolates 'this is only for you ma.' Gay3 smiled looking at her favourite chocolates. He took another packet 'this is for dad.' He handed over the pack to her. She pointed the dresses 'this is?' he shyly smiled 'for my future wife.' She happily 'finally you find a girl for yourself.' He 'i found a girl for me long back. But took time to search for her.' She is confused. He managed 'ma, that is big story. I tell you later. For now. I found a girl. You will love her.' She is happy to hear this. Suddenly Lalit telling about Ash being Prem's love flashed on her mind. She decided to clear it. she 'Prem, what is her name?' he 'its suspense.' She is sad. He doesn't want to see her mother's sad face 'okay ma. Don't ask me who she is. But i tell you her name.' She happily 'that is what i'm asking you.' he smiled 'her real name is not Pari.' She 'is that mean she has a name Pari.' He 'ma you are very clever.' She teased 'Prem's mother. Should be clever.' He 'ma don't tell this to dad.' She 'why beta? Give her details tomorrow i'll talk to dad then we'll proceed.' He 'ma, i have some works to be done. After that i want you to tell this to dad.' She 'why?' he 'ma please.' She thought for a while 'okay. Prem.' Prem is happy. She 'you take rest. We'll discuss about this later.' Prem agreed.

Gay3 walked out of the room with happy smile. She is so excited now. Morning she got the message Barlaj is Heer's father. Now Prem loving Pari some how leading her towards success. Internally she feared these should not be just a coincidence. Gay3 decided to confirm everything before Prem announces his love to his father.

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Edited by newt2007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay I am first to comment on my favorite story
Didi You know I am so so so happy
You know how many days I am waiting to read this story
I really missed this story very much
Atlast when I saw the update
I was like so happy
A very big🤗 to you for updating
And the update was just so awesome
Oh so they Prem found her at the first sight itself? How cute
And wah So Balraj and Gaya3 are like siblings
That stupid bi*** Daljeet had destroyed their relationship
And Lalit why he is acting like a fool and whe want to get Ash married to prem.Yuck
Why can't he find the crocodile tears of that Daljeet
And Premeer they are so cute
What to say about them
The way they didn't cross their limits and heer understanding prem at seeing him itself
I am really excited to see their office romance
Prem didn't bother at all to get heer's clothes to home
And even told Gaya3 abt Pari
Now I am sure Gaya3 will surely unite them
How sweet of her in asking God to unite premeer
Balraj-Gaya3 realationship was also awesome
Balraj had really helped them very much
Now Please I request you very much to update soon next time
With every chapter you are making me greedy to read more
Now please don't make us wait for months to read next update
Please atleast give small small update in between
I really want to read of their office scenes after their trip
Please update soon
You are really an awesome writer
The update was really really very good
It was an all in one update like it contained emotional,sentiment,romance
Oh I still can't believe I read an update for this ss today
And please don't end it soon
I really like this premeer and this story very much
Hope to get an update soon
And Thank you so much for the pm
Take care
And please remember that we are waiting for your this sweet story
And please try to give updates frequently if possible

Edited by ragvir92 - 12 years ago
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its been so long ... i am going to back track and come back later
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Posted: 12 years ago
hope prem dad agree heer to be the mil of his house
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally we got an update from selvy di yipppeee
it was really cute update...specially Premeer scenes 😳
glad to know that Gayatri is in the favor or Premeer's marriage as she share a past with heer's father...and hope that stupid lalit should not bring that ash and DJ in between Premeer...as he hate balraj...
hmmm...lets see what will happen next
pls cont soon
thanks for PM
Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Yaaay 100 pgs 🥳

pg 99
Super cute ch
PH were adorable. Cute dialogues too.
Woah Prem's being super generous with gifts 😆
Eww the FB and Bauji simply lost his brain😲 I mean forgive and forget is fine but he is thinking of building relationship with DJ and family - he is a loser. G3 is right to yell at him. She should yell some more but I hv a feeling he'll just ignore her again 😆
FB showed bro sis relationship of Balraj and G3 v sweet. Wow so G3 gave pet name for Heer even before she was born wow. Balraj looks after g3's properties so nice of him.
One thing I'm confused about - munna and Pari met in Pune isn't it? In this ch / fb it's mentioned that g3 left right after the stabbing incident. Does that mean Pari and munna met in library but neither of their parents knew of this friendship? Bauji didn't like Balraj so i guess parents never knew.🤔

Nihal's help to G3 is v useful - yaaay.

I wonder what work Prem's talking about🤔 why he is building up suspense instead of going to see Heer's parents like G3 suggested. He's like the Prem in show - never get anything done right way he drags as long as possible like chewing gum😆

Ok now I want to see everyone else's reaction for this news :P

What else gonna happen Selvy ? Is Ash gonna visit Pari in hostel or anything weird ?

Waiting for next part pretty pls - we r die hard fans of Pari and Munna - cute Jodi 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
After a long time. Missing reading it.
Loved the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the update ...
superb update ...loved it ...
premeer scenes were awesome ...
eagerly waiting for the next update ...
please update soon ...
thanks for the pm ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ..
Read this story after such a long time ...
Loved it ...
Finally Perm and his Pari are together ...
Fantastic part ...
Waiting to read more ...
Continue soon ...

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