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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: reshurockz

Hello Vishwa.
I'm a great fan of harshad and Aditi!!!! Nd i', happy to see them as Prem and heer together!!!!!
Please continue and pm me wen u update!!!

Hey Reshu!
Yes I cant get them off my head...really love harshiti!!
will pm for sure😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: H-xx



k bk 2 da update will it was awesome update a big tanq 4 making rishab her brother instead of making him a villain
m pretty sure Nads di will da most happiest 1 here coz of dat 😉😛
awo heer feeling her prem around her m feeling 😔 4 her
nd bty where prem is no prem n ds update y yaar ? 😭
he better be n da next update else m ummmm will tell u l8r 😛
thanx 4 da PM vishu plzzzzzz do continue soooooooon

Hey di!!! Embarrassed
I am glad your doing all good and well
😆 yes I am positive Nadz di is going to be happy with Rishi bein good here
but i m missing her a lot...i havent seen her and no comments frm her as wellAngry
but anyways... 😆 I m sure everyone can feel Prem around them 😉
I m srry... prem will be der in the next one...promise Embarrassed
thank you soo much di...
luv yaa!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Motibah

Hey great ff! Please add me to the pm list 😃

🤗Hey Motibah!!
Thank you soo much
so glad u liked it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: AMMI6

sorry for late reply😳
call me ammi it is cool😎
like the introduction part of maan family
very interesting please update next soon

Hey ammi!
no problem..u take you time
tnks... see maan family isnt that easy to play around with
unlike the J ZOO where you can always crack some jokes 😉
and ofcourse faint 😆
thanks so much...
will update...ASAP!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Rose4yew

It was a very wonderful chapter.. Loved Maan Family....
I love Ashlesha...
Waiting for my Prem to enter.....

Hey sis 🤗
Aww...nice to see pple liking Ash..
😆 Keep waiting for Mr.Hottie
Thank you so much for liking the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey everyone!! I really loved all the comments and appreciation I recieved...thank you all soo much...and thanks to everyone that pressed the LIKE button 😳 I didnt make any siggies...very busy with hwk and my bro's bday...but I might add it on afterwards 😉 So since all of you girls were blasting on me to put Prem here...this one is totally Prem and no one else...so enjoy and hopefully you all like J ZOO (Juneja house) 😆
Chapter 3: J ZOO
God, it is so good to be back home again! I had leapt out of
my seat and stretched my arms, cracking a knuckle or two. I grabbed my bag that was placed on top of my seat in a little cubby like place, the air hostess shyly excused herself as she walked by me. I waited for the passengers ahead of me to descend through the stairs while I peeped out the window at the beautiful city that was lit with a pink skylight. It was almost evening but the sun had not drowned yet.

"Hope you have enjoyed your flight sir," the airhostess smiled and gazed into my hazel eyes.

"It would've been better with you around ma'am," I winked and turned across to the stairs.

My luggage had come out and I was now standing near the front gate, closed, I searched for my younger brother. Mean time I was reading the boards that were being waved all over the place.

"Hmmm... Nancy Ramchandra....."

"Ramakrishna...huh? yeh.... whatever...."

"Heer and Ash."

Huh? Heer and Ash, Ashlesha and Heer, Heer and Ash, I muttered those words out loud trying to gain some sense. Could it be that Heer Maan was in town? But, she is the fashion designer for Vogue magazine; would she have that much time to come in the middle of the season...would they allow her?

And Ash? She is the editor of Vogue...how was she able to pull this off? Par aisi toh hazaron Ash aur Heer hosakti hain... maybe I am just being a bit too paranoid about Heer.

"PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB!!!!!!!!!" A voice yelled from behind me and I didn't need to waste a second before embracing the tall man in front of me, my brother.

"Preet! It's so good to see you yaar! Kaisa hai?" I was delighted with his presence, being my better half he was unfortunately led away from me due to my parent's wishes. The wanted him to become someone worthy of being respected and wanted Preet to stay with them so he wouldn't get spoilt in my company. I always took that as a joke but 6 years ago they called him to India. I was shocked and surprised but my older sister, Kulraj and her husband, Kiran, took care of everything. Taking the opportunity to be with them and their 2 kids, Taanu and Kirtan, I moved in with them and they became my best friends.

Shaking off my thoughts I followed Preet to the Mercedes Benz, not my favourite car but it was something that represented pride in a country like India.

"So PB, kitni girlfriends rakhi hai?" Preet asked me in a very naughty tone. I was a well behaved and a mature man in front of my family, my parents' head's would bow from shame if everyone found out. So, in my casual voice, I replied "I don't think I have found any girls that deserve me."

"Aaaccchhaaaa... kher yeh sab chodiye... Maa apko bohot yaad kar rahi thi."

My mother is very special to me, just like they are to everyone else. Gayatri Juneja is not my real mother, balki woh toh meri stepmom hai, but she did not ever differ between me and her children, Harman, Preet and Veera. Me and Kulraj di were always very obliged of all the love she and my dad, Lalit Juneja showered on us.

"Mujhe bhi unki bohot yaad ayi thi... how's everyone else in the house?" I knew this would make Preet start blabbing until we reached home, our home was the 8th wonder of the world.

"Oh! Everyone is eagerly waiting for you, and Maya bhabs and Harman bro are planning a b'day for Kul di and me and Veera going to arrange everything for it!" His face was shining and glowing!

"To toh gayi bhens paani mein....sab kuch oolat poolat hojaye ga," I said with a chuckle. Preet glared back and lowered his eyebrows pretending to be angered by my words.

My younger brother Harman Juneja got married to Maya Khurana, both being lawyers got along well and decided to take their four years of live in relationship to marriage. After they tied knots, the two decided to move from Mumbai to Ambala to stay with my family, who had returned from Canada 2 years ago. Maya and Harman have a been married for two years and our relationship with the Khurana's have increased. Veera, studying Interior Designing, is very close to Vishakha and Maya. Vishakha is very sweet and treats our family like hers. The only reason that I am here today is because of her, she is the oldest of us all but is very friendly.

"Accha PB," Preet gained my attention "Sanjana was asking if you were going to be able to attend her Art Gallery open house."

I was not very fong of Sanju's art, but I nodded to Preet. She was my fiance, and she deserved that much of importance. Sometimes she can behave like a little child, making faces and whining but she was a good friend, even though she is two years younger than me.

"Preet, I am so happy! I might get to spend my 26th birthday with you all!" I said with excitement, that would surely be a lot of fun.

"Haan! Are, yeh lo... ghar aagaya!" The driver stopped the car in a sudden motion. I was pushed off the seat and my hand touched the front seat.

I entered my palace like house that had brown bricks and a neutralising colour to give it a authentic look. I was greeted by whole family who by turn embraced me and excited me with all their deeds.

"Sab chup!" My mom's voice made everyone quiet, they quit hovering over me to tell their stories and sat down quietly on the sofa.

"Prem, beta kaisa hai tu?" My mom's calm action made me smile "Mein bilkul theek hoon maa, aur flight bhi bohot acchi thi." I knew her next question would be about the journey.

"Vishakha," I looked at her "Tune bataya nahi yeh Rishab kis khet ki muli hai?" I teased her.

"Prem tu bhi na!" She said with a fake anger.

"Di, bata dijiye naa... Prem bhaiya ko bhi haak hai jaane ka."Veera made a puppy dog face.

"Rishab works with me and is the CEO. He loves playing soccer and takes interest in almost all the sports."

"Oh yea! Bhaiya we went over to his house, that guy is just awesome and his a great athlete. Unke saath khelne ka bohot maza aayega." Harman recalled with great enthusiasm.

Maya followed,"Haan, uss din Harman aur Rishab jiju ne bohot maza kiya."

Beeepp! Kiran jiju's phone buzzed and told us that it was a text message from Rishab.

"He will live a 100 years." Bauji said.

"Rishab said that his sister's are here from London and he said it would be a good idea if we can arrange for dinner so everyone can meet them and also they can meet Prem." Kiran jiju read out loud.

"Aisa hai toh phir humare ghar pe khana rakho, kal ka." Bauji offered more like commanded.

"Rishab said that dinner tomorrow will be fine." Everyone started chattering again.

"Tum sab ek minute chup nahi beth sakte kya?" Maa was angry now.

"Maa... who is in Rishab's family and his sisters lived in London?" I asked curiously.

"Prem, woh Rishab lives with Chachu and Chachi as well so their daughter and his younger sister are the ones that came from London. He has a younger brother named Nihaal who is working with Microsoft, the youngest sister named Meher who is studying and then his cousin Ash and his sister Heer."

My mom gave a big grin and waited for me to nod or give a little reaction. All I could do was excuse myself and head upstairs to my room, Preet showed me the way and then I told him that I will go get freshened up. He left, I shut the door and walked inside the room. It was all blue and white, my pictures were hung all over the walls and my clothes had been layed out in the bed along with a towel.

I lifted everything and went to take a shower, the cool water pouring rhythmically made my head relieve all its thoughts and just made me blank. I ruffled my hair with the towel so the water wouldn't fall on my warm skin and cause shiver to run down my back. I didn't bother wearing the black T-shirt claiming "Almost Single" on the front, I pulled on my tracks and headed near the window.

The sun was setting now, the sky turning colours of pink, blue and purple. I let the wind wrap around my body. My muscles were shining and feeling loose under the light and my chisled chest was rising up and falling gently. I closed my eyes and a image flashed in front of them, a silhouette of two hands walking towards the drowning ocean.The sunset reminded me of lovers, it reminded me of a library, it reminded me of london and it reminded me of a girl named Heer.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you so much for awesome update of prem and his family 👏
next time mores scenes of prem and heer ❤️
please update next part as early as possible 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMMI6

thank you so much for awesome update of prem and his family 👏
next time mores scenes of prem and heer ❤️
please update next part as early as possible 😉

Hey Ammi!!
Thanks so much for the comemnt...
Its my pleasure writing abt Prem😳😆
and for sure there will be a whole PH scene of their first meeting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yay! Only Prem 😆...he's such a flirt.

So he's got a fiance? 😕

But then he's remembering Heer rather fondly...I'm assuming some playboy ways of his broke them up? Heer seemed to be rather heartbroken and haunted.


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