New mini FF: Kayamaat....promo on page 6 (5/2/11)

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Guys I am writing a ff. This idea is killing me for a few days. So i decided to write this idea as a ff. But it's a mini ff. Hope you will like it. Now i am writing the concept. If you like it and post your comment i'll write the first part soon.

CONCEPT

Prem was going to attend to his best friend Ranvir's wedding. Ranvir is his best and childhood friend. So he is very much excited about Ranvir's wedding and doing fum with others. He doesn't know what will happen with him tonight.

Ranvir was also happy about his wedding and he liked hte girl whom his parents chose for him. She is a nice girl and her name is HEER!

When the marriage ritual was going to start Ranvir's dad said: Stop! This girl can't be my Daughter in law! Everyone is shocked. Ranvir's dad explained that someone said to him about heer that she is not a Sanskari girl and has relation with many boys. He called off the marriage took away the barat.

Heer's parents shocked and didn't understand what to do now. but they understood that if now their daughter's marriage took off Heer will never be married with anyone.

He just shouted : WHO WILL MARRY MY DAUGHTER NOW????!!!!!!!

Prem: I...I will marry Heer.

That day Prem married heer but in the morning Balraj told Prem to go away from Heer's life and told him to give divorce to heer. Prem went away from there but after few days Balraj and Teji went to Juneja House to save their daughter........WHY????????

So how is it guys. if you want me to continue let me know and if you want i'll add you in my pm list.



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Concept Page 1
Part 1 Page 3
Part 2 page 5
Promo page 6



Edited by Heerbeauty - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sounds Interesting... Please add me to your PM list!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pls add me in ur pm list....n continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept \do pm me whenever u update
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Very nice concept .
Eagerly waiting for looking forward.
Update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept do continue soon
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Hey plzz add me also...
Nice concept...
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Awsome concept......plzzzzz add me to ur PM list...can't wait for the first part!!
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sounds good
add me to ur pm list plz!!
update soon!!!

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