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Neha

@Pumpkinn

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

Fabulous update !😊

It was full of Premeer !😉

Enjoyed every bit of it !👏

Every scene was soo beautiful !😊

Cant wait for their honeymoon !😳😳

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newt2007

@newt2007

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

soory i dind't comment for the last few parts but i read it as soon as u updated.

all the parts were amazing.

really you are good in expressing the realtionship bondings.

enjoy every bit of it.

this part Prem and Heer in their first day after marriage. Heer as a responsible wife, DIl and daughter. Prem as caring husband, SIL and brother.

its wonderful part.

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shivangi2092

@shivangi2092

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

wonderful part!

really loved it!

sorry for not commenting on earlier parts!

I was xtremely busy with my xams!

loved Prem-Heer's romance in both the parts!

the last part was....☺️☺️☺️..

thanks for the pm!

update soon!

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aliyah

@rhtpkcm

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

loved it.... it was great

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sherma

@sherma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

nice part. full of premeer romance,thnks for pm.

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Lisa

@Aymee

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#146

Great update Grace.

Grace, I have to say that this is the best afterglow I have ever read 😆. Poor Prem and Heer 😆. I loved it 😃.

Prem and Heer's shower scene was cute and sexy. I still can't believe Heer is still shy but we know that won't last long 😉.

My first favorite part of this chapter was when they arrived home and was about to kiss, before they went inside, Preet opens the door and as usual interrupts them 😆. Hand it to Preet to always to interrupt their romantic moments so shamelessly 😆. That is what I always loved about Preet on the show, he was the only one who could do that and us fans wouldn't be upset about his interruption but laugh at him getting dirty looks and his ears pulled by both Prem and Heer 😆.

My second favorite part of this chapter was when Preet, Harman and Veera started teasing Prem about him and Heer having children. Prem's response was perfect which not only kept the younger siblings quiet but also scared them, knowing very well Prem will tease them after they got married. But nobody can top Kulraj. She has to be the best older sister for Prem 😆. When she told Prem that she was already married and began to tease him, I couldn't stop laughing. Kulraj was the only sibling on the show that could tease and embrass Prem and get away with it.

Grace, honestly, I love how you were able to bring Preet and Kulraj's characteristics from the show to your FF.

I really had a good laugh in this chapter.

Thank you for the PM. I can't wait to read your next chapter.