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Posted: 14 years ago

Loveeeed it! 😃

Edited by raazia00 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
GRACEEEEEEE why oh why are you such a good writer? 😍 Im out of words! God. I just really don't know what to say. After all this waiting finally we get what we wanted ☺️
LOOOL my favourite chapter EVER! I don't think I have ever read a chapter with so much concentration 🤣 ahaaa I swear I could actually feel my heart beating towards the end😆 Okay I know I probably sound crazy but that's just me.
Gosh I cant even begin to express how much I LOVED this chapter though! It was so passionate and HOOOOOOT 😍 The way you described it all was just ☺️ I cant believe they are FINALLY married and gah why are they are sooo cute!? 🤗
and loool loveeed all the teasing the two of them got before the wedding and can't WAIT for all the teasing they are going to get now 😆
Okay enough of my crap. Thank you soooo much for not splitting the chapter up into two bits 🤗 and thank you soo much for giving us such an awesomeee, hot, passionate and detailed chapter! Really love you 😃❤️
Okay byeeeee Im off to read it again now 😆😍
Edited by Motibah - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow !!! it was awesomeeeeeeee 👏 👏 👏
loved itttt ... waiting for the next part ..
thanks alot for the pms 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
What a update dear !😊
I soo very loved it !👏👏
It was soo very sensuous !😳
Finally Prem and Heer became Premeer in all terms !😉
Great update !😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gracy !!!!!! Why no PM for this part ☺️☺️☺️☺️ !!! i am silent reader 🤣... Do PM me next Time... Cant comment long, >>>> ☺️☺️☺️☺️<<<<,
have to study now🤓...
Edited by Waqas... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg omg.......mindblowin updates....both chapter were awesome....in 1st chapter loved the teasin scene........bt l loved 2nd update......lollz........it was 2 HOTTTTTTTTTTTT and romantic.......loved the way u described their romance......loved it loved it........thnx for pm........update nxt part soooooooon......cant wait nw.......
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Xxcoolchick1xX

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Way to go girl 😲...tht was one longggg HOT part!!! 😳 Luved the wedding part...Preet n
Meher laying a bet on who will do the hwk...Lol. Veera helped the girls n got the money of Prem along with others. 😃Glad the wedding got over smoothly...
The suhaag raat 😳
Update the nxt part asap n thnx 4 the PM. 😊



Yes, the last chapter was super long...haha 18 pages on Word 😆 Tried to add all the fun little elements of a traditional wedding...though most of what I know is based on what I have seen on Hindi television shows. And then the suhaag raat...what can I say 😳 Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Aymee

OMG Grace...

After I read the first part of the story (the wedding ceremony), I began to scream. Then I saw your comment about their honeymoon was on the next post, then I was shamelessly happy. 😆 😃 😆 What I mean to say was that I thought you were going to toture us by making us wait. Sorry 😳.
Now to the story. Loved how all the guys were teasing Prem about his big night. Poor guy 😆.
Ashleesha, Veera and Maya experiences with the guest was really funny. It was funny how Veera realized after it was pointed out that she lost Maya to the crowds. Maya's possessiveness over her food was cute and funny. Poor girl, I don't blame her either.
Wedding ceremony was great. I am glad the girls found Prem's shoes.
Premeer's big night was very sweet and 😳. I am glad they took it slow to enjoy each other for the first time. What was really sweet and romantic and very considerate was Prem asking Heer's permission to make love to her. I wish guys could be more like him.
Great job Grace. I am very grateful for giving us all these updates so close together. I look forward to your next chapter and Premeer's afterglow (see I told you I have no shame 😆). Thank you for the PM. I was really was surprised and happy you updated this chapter so soon.



I know I could have tortured you guys by stopping at the wedding but I promised that I would have all of that and them some done for you guys so I decided to update it all on one big chapter. Consider that an epic Maha Episode 😆

As for Premeer's Big Night...I thought it was fitting for them to ease into it...being this would be the first time for both of them. Anyways hope you enjoy the next chapter as it is aptly named Afterglow 😆 ....bit of spice but nothing warning worthy 😉

Edited by iheartChai - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: khajju

hii grace...finally our wait came to end and we got wht we was waitinggg for....aah we are soo naughtyy........omg wht a beautiful amd romantic chapter it was........luvd evey bit of it.....premeer marriage and then the phingoli....only one word hottt hottt hottt.........luvd the steamy romance of premeer....it was simply awesmeee....finallly prmeer are one in bth the waysss......premeer standing in the balcony hugging and staring at the moon...luvd tht scene........the dialogues of premeer wer great.....heheh girls letter to premeer......aww prem is soo caring and understanding....asking her permission and then sorryy........soooooooooo sweeeeeeeet.....marriage part was great.....so the girls won the game....this veera is a big cheater....lollzz.....prem was soo eager to go to sleep....heheh.....boys teasing prem was great....awww my poor prem away frm heer....he was leaving in kunals house following the tradition ...........and here heer......poor maya stucked in the guests helping them.....plate part was sooo funny...poor girl....nywayz thanks for pm and for this loooonngg chapter.....luking forward to the honeymoon trip....update sooon.



All you readers are so naughty...waiting for something like the Big Night. Glad it came out successful. I wanted a proper romance unlike what happened to Premeer the first time in Kis Desh with Veera interrupting and everything...no proper afterglow 😡 😆...Anyhoo, more fun, masti, and romance awaits in the coming chapters.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmeeli

🤗THANKS FOR SPOILING US DEAR😃 just LOVED the update🤗

😆😆hihihi really loved the bet of MEET, and I'm glad Meher won, now our darling Preet is going to make the homework, but I think Meher is so sweet that she will help him (I'm sure I would😳😆)
hihihi Veera is just sooo good😛 aaahw poor Maya is going mad with all this tension, but don't worry Maya; it's going to be right, isn't it?😉
Premeer finally married, well I don't have words to comment about that😳
anyways, THANK YOU VERY MUCH for spoiling us dear😃 and plzzz update soon😳 (wouldn't mind to get more spoiled😳😆)



Yes, I have thoroughly spoiled you guys 😛 Awww, you're too nice to help...hehe...Meher will have a handful with Preet that is for sure in the coming chapters.

Maya is going to be learning lots of things...don't know how well that learning is going to go though 😆

Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃

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