FF: Kaash... Aisa Hota note pg-50 *15/7/11 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: friendsforeverh

hey it was awesome.....loved it.... waise i too expected a little bit more from post leap KDMHMD..... so loving ur ff....do continue soon..

Please add me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: princess5341

love your ff and the name of it was soo good. love the concept. let me know when you write again! please!


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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: NIMMY

Saachi Prem ke dard se mujhe.......... bahut dard hota hai...........

loved Prems dialogue
imagining Him say those lines
loved it


thanks yaar!😃
mujhe bhi bahut dard hota hai😉

main to hamesha hi kuch imagine karti rahti hoon while reading a ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: harshiti8

great update...luved the ending..update asap


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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks! for pressing the like button guys!

Edited by shivangi2092 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi guys! here is the next part.It is quite short one but I promise that the next will be longer for sure.Plllllllzzzzzzzzzzz leave your comments guys! and press the like button if u like it and sorry for any mistakes.


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They were still hugging each other.Prem's arms were holding her tight and her arms were also like that .
Both of them don't want this moment to end.Her mind was saying to her that its not right but she didn't listened she was following only her heart.In past 6 years she missed the warmth of Prem's arms.she loves him so much but whenever she thought of Prem that night's scene came in front of her eyes giving her more pain everytime.

when they parted,Prem cupped her face and tucked her hair behind her ear which were falling on her face.Heer don't know what is going to happen next but she actually don't care for that she only want to live this moment with Prem feeling his love.

Prem: kitna kuch batana chahta tha main tumhe heer.

he said looking in her eyes.he was still cupping her face.

Prem: tum mere bare mein jo sochti ho heer main waisa nahin hoon.main itna bura nahin hoon Heer.Main hamare beech ki har misunderstanding ko khatm karna chahta tha Heer par jitni baar main tumse baat karne ki koshish karta hoon tumhare ilzaam mujhe tod dete hain Heer.

He was trying to continue more when Heer placed her fingers on her lips as she felt that he is facing difficulty in standing.

Heer: aur kuch mat kaho Prem.you need rest hum kal subah baat karenge.

and she tried to send him on the bed.

Prem: nahin main tumse abhi baat karna chahta hoon main ab aur intezaar nahin kar sakta.

Heer: plz Prem abhi tum so jao main kal tumhari har baat sunungi I promise.

Prem: par...

Heer: shhh.. please Prem.

this time he can't argue with her.He can't ignore the pleading look in her eyes.so he went to the bed and Heer covered him with the bedsheet.she turned to leave when he closed her eyes but suddenly she felt his grip on her wrist.she turned to look at him.

Prem: kahan ja rahi ho?Please mujhe chod ke mat jao main ab bardasht nahin kar paunga Heer please.

Heer knew this very well that if Prem can't avoid his pleading look she also can't avoid him like that.so she sat beside him then he shifted a little bit to give her space on the bed and placed his head on her lap and closed his eyes

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He rubbed his eyes and opened them when he realized that his mobile is ringing.He picked it up in his hands to see the no. it was Geet and his eyes became wide open after seeing Geet's name flashing on the screen.He picked it up immediately.

Geet: hello Prem? kabse call kar rahi hoon kahan the?

Prem: wo main...

He exactly don't know what to answer her as he can't remember the happenings of last night.He only remembered that he drank a lot and came in his room with Geet.

Geet: acha suno.corner table pe lemon water rakha hai pee lena u will feel better.

Prem: par tum ho kahan?

He asked her as he want to know what happened last night.

Heer: main Heer ke saath hoon.Hum Ambala ja rahe hain Heer ke ghar.acha Prem bye ab main rakhti hoon.

and she cut the call.

He felt rooted to his place when he heard that Heer is going to her house.

Prem: nahin ye nahin ho sakta.mujhe Heer ko rokna hoga.Then he dialled a no. in his mobile but in vain because the mobile no. was going not reachable.

He quickly ran towards the bathroom and got ready as he will have to stop them especially heer.
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plzzzzzzzzzz leave ur comments guys!


Edited by shivangi2092 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

awesomeeeeeee loved da update it was too good waitingggggg for next asap

Edited by sweta2005 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
updated😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hope evrythin is sort out...plzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shahrukh_divya

hope evrythin is sort out...plzzz


everything will be sorted out.
thanks for commenting😃

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