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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Miracle_leo

awesome update,ash married to rajveer,what is going on? loved veera she is so sweet sis.i hope heer misunderstanding toward prem cleared ho jaye plz update soon n thanks for pm.


thanks for commenting dear!..😊..will update soon!
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Waitingggggggggg for u to update.......
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lovely one
curious waiting when the truth comes out and heer and prem gets reunited
please update soon
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I know u all wanna beat me for the delay in update I promised for monday but again I m late actually a friend of mine came to my house we were meeting after 1 year so that's why.........ok now coming to the update here is the next part sorry to those who were waiting for this from quite a time spl. sweta and coolchick m sooooooooo sorry....here is the next part plz leave ur comments and press the like button if u like
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"I am really very happy to see both of u together again Heer!" Ash said while Heer was busy in taking out a dress for Ash from Veera's cupboard.

This statement of Ash triggered Heer's anger and she replied her sarcastically.

Heer: Oh really? Well for your kind information Ash we are not together. I can't forgive him for the betrayal he gave me that night because of you

Ash looked at her in shock she can see anger and hatred for herself in Heer's eyes.

Ash: what are you saying Heer? That was not his fault! He didn't do anything.

Ash still can't believe on what Heer was saying. She knew that Heer won't believe her. But she also can't digest the fact that she don't know the truth.

Heer: what a joke ash? He slept with you for one night I saw you bith in the morning in that condition and you are saying that he didn't do anything.

Heer can't get what ash was saying.

Ash: yes Heer we slept on the same bed all the time he was just chanting your name. He didn't allow me to even touch him. He didn't looked at me even once.

Ash told her. Heer can't think of anything now her heart was saying to believe her but her mind was not ready to accept that.

Heer: "No you are lying''If that's the truth then why Prem told me that he slept with you. He never told me a lie then why ''.no you are lying."

She felt as if someone have snatched the earth below her legs. She felt weak on her knees and took the support of the nearby table.

Ash: That's because even he was not aware of the truth Heer but I told him after 1 week. He never betrayed you he Heer. He loves you a lot.

Heer went numb after hearing that. She had flashes of Prem stopping her from going away 6 years ago. Her mind also recalled the incidents when she insulted him badly and hurt him a lot.

Tears flowed down on her cheeks. She moved forward and slapped Ash hard on her face.

Heer: why'.why you did that to me?

She asked her crying. She can feel his pain now. How wrong she was in judging her Prem.

"Coz I thought you snatched away Raj from me. I love him a lot but every time he made a lame excuse to me so that he can go out with you. I loved him a lot Heer and I can't differentiate between the right and wrong when I got to know that you were in a hotel room for some time. I knew how much you love Prem So I decided to give you the same pain which I felt. But it was all just a misunderstanding Heer"

Ash tried her best to explain Heer her part of the story.

Heer fell on the ground. She don't know what t do right now. She was so wrong about him. He believed her when nobody was ready to believe her and on the other hand she didn't even gave him a chance to justify himself. Yesterday night's scenes started moving in front of her eyes she insulted him and accused him so badly in the SHIV MANDIR
(try to remember the original one).

The pain that she saw in his eyes last night. The determination to prove her right. She felt as if all these things were cutting her heart into pieces very slowly but very painful. Ash tried to console her but in vain her tears were not ready to stop. She wanted to cry out a loud when suddenly she heard a knock on the door.

It was Veera she came there to check whether Heer was alright or not. She knew that the truth will cause her very much pain but it was necessary for their future. They have suffered enough now she wants to end all their pains.

She knocked again on the door..

Veera: Aur kitna time lagega aap logon ko?

She made an excuse to check Heer's condition.

Heer heard her knock and after sometime her mind registered that. She got up from the floor and was about to open the door when she looked at herself." I can't go like that in front of Veera" she quickly wiped away her tears and adjusted her dress. Then she opened the door.

Heer: we are just coming Veera.

She said to her forcing a smile on her face. Heer tried her level best to hide her pain but Veera can see that in her eyes but she didn't said anything to her. Heer went out of the room quickly as she don't want Veera to suspect her.

Leaving a confused Ash and happy Veera in the room.

I m not sending pm to any1 as this is a short part and the next part still needs a finishing I will pm u all on saturday as I will update that most probably on saturday.again sorry for the late and short update.....

Edited by shivangi2092 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I m really having a problem with the font size of my update.........................................
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without much bak bak here is the next part plz leave your comments and hit the like button if you like it!
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Prem's heartbeats were still very fast. He was tapping his fingers impatiently on the table. He was constantly looking at the stairs waiting for the girls to come down especially Heer.

He wants to know if the truth is revealed to her and if yes then he have to reduce her pain by any method. He should talk to her but he was not sure what she will be thinking of him. He also feared that if Heer won't believe Ash then what he will do coz then his last hope will be vanished.

Rajveer looked at his face and sensed that he is very nervous and looking afraid of something.

Raj: Kya hua Prem? Bahut pareshan lag rahe ho?

Prem came out of his thoughts and looked at him.

Prem: nahin…..main…main Pareshan nahin hu.

Raj: are you sure Prem?

Prem nodded his head and forced a slight smile on his lips.

Raj handed him a tissue paper and Prem looked at him questioningly. Raj moved his fingers on his forehead indicating Prem to wipe his sweat.

Prem: thanks.

He said wiping the tiny droplets of the sweat from his forehead. Raj just smiled and turned to look at the stairs when he saw Prem's face turned pale looking at the stairs.

Heer was coming down and she appeared lost in her thoughts. Raj looked at Nihal who was sitting with him and noticed the tension on his face also. He wanted to ask from him about the matter but chose to be silent at that time.

Heer came to them and sat on the chair next to Prem. Soon Veera and Ash too joined them. Prem froze on his place when he looked in Heer's eyes. Her eyes were red and he can see that she was crying. There was a lot of pain in her eyes he wants to look in those eyes deeper but she was not looking at him. Her gaze was down and Prem felt frustrated for that.

Heer don't have the strength to look in his eyes. She saw him waiting impatiently to come down. There was so many questions filled up in her mind and her heart was filled with guilt. She wants to ask him that why he accepted punishment for that sin which he never committed but the guilt she was feeling because of the way she behaved with him was stopping her to even look in his eyes.

They were eating their dinner silently when Veera's mobile rang suddenly. She looked at the phone and it was a message from Geet. Veera opened that and the message was…..

"They will be here at any moment. What's the situation now?"

Veera's already lit up face brightened more. She excused herself from the table picking up her mobile and went towards the guest room. Geet was waiting for her in the room. Veera knocked on the door Geet opened that and Veera quickly went inside after that they locked the door of the gate so that no one can hear them.

Geet: What's going on outside? Kya Heer ko sach pata chal gaya?

She enquired Veera.

Veera: bahar sabkuch plan ke according ho raha hai. Bhabhi ko sach pata chal gaya.

She announced happily. But then bit her tongue realizing that she was very loud. She quickly opened the door and peeped outside to ensure that no one heard her. She quickly closed the door and thanked god that no one heard her.

Veera: maine apna kaam kar diya hai ab tumhe apna kaam karna hai.

She said to geet.

Geet: maine bhi apna kaam approx. complete kar liya hai. They will be here any moment so be ready Veera.

Geet replied preparing Veera for the coming situation. Veera gave her an assuring look.

Veera: I m ready to face anything geet. Main bhaiya aur bhabhi ko wapas ek karne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hu.

Geet sensed that slight tears were brimming in her eyes.

Geet: ok! So I m going to perform the last step for completion of our mission commander!

She said saluting Veera. Veera giggled looking at her and then both of them laughed sharing a high five.

Both wished each other best of luck when they heard the doorbell. Veera took a deep breath and both of them came out of the room to open the door.

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Edited by shivangi2092 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesomeeeeeeee too goo very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsome Part!! Luved it!! Update the next part soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks shivangi
waiting for next to know what would be heers next step
update as soon as possible

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