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Posted: 14 years ago


Who is that someone who made u wait......i guess they need serious punishment..........


And here my comment about one of my favorite concept and favorite ff..........i dont understand one part is that now whether heer accepted prem's apologize.........and if so now what will happen....and thx veera is ok not as cranky as in show...........and now i guess gayatri will reach amabala and know abt veera........and now please make gayatri evil come out at least in ur ff..............

And i have to say one more thing and keep thsi word in ur little head of urs that is i always read all ur parts without any fail and i wait for them.....i guess i pm u for updates.....and sorry for not commenting on recent parts and this never repeat again............

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suha_hasini



Who is that someone who made u wait......i guess they need serious punishment..........


And here my comment about one of my favorite concept and favorite ff..........i dont understand one part is that now whether heer accepted prem's apologize.........and if so now what will happen....and thx veera is ok not as cranky as in show...........and now i guess gayatri will reach amabala and know abt veera........and now please make gayatri evil come out at least in ur ff..............

And i have to say one more thing and keep thsi word in ur little head of urs that is i always read all ur parts without any fail and i wait for them.....i guess i pm u for updates.....and sorry for not commenting on recent parts and this never repeat again............


oye! gayatri evil kyun??????????? she shared a superb bond with Prem and Heer when the show started and I just loved that!
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok! now I understood ur comment abt g3! definitely dear uska bhoot to main bhaga ke rahungi! lol!
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Posted: 14 years ago
updating in 10 more minutes............
Edited by shivangi2092 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am extremely sorry for the late update I know I broke my promise for updating earlier but I was extremely busy with my studies. This part may contain some grammatical mistakes I m not sure and if there is any then sorry for that.here is the update......


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Geet was sleeping when she eard a knock on the door of her room.She got out of the covers and stood up thinking that who might be disturbed her.She opened the door and saw an impatient Veera.She was fuming in anger and Nihal was trying to calm her down.

Veera: Mujhe tumse baat karni hai.

she said almost ordering her.

Geet: Haan bolo Veera kya baat hai?

she asked with a concerned voice.

Veera: Tum yahan nahin reh sakti.Tumhein yahan se aur Prem bhaiya ki zindagi se jana hoga.

She said looking in her eyes. Nihal tried to stop her from saying that but he can't.He was shocked to see her behaving like that.

Geet slightly understood that why she said that but for her assurance she asked from her.

Geet: Par kyun?

Veera: Kyunki Prem bhaiya ki shadi ho chuki hai aur wo apni patni se bahut pyar karte hain.Unke dil mein aur unki zindagi mein tumhare liye koi jagah nahin hai.Wo tumse kabhi shadi nahin karenge.

Geet: main janti hoon.

she said with a slight smile.

Veera: kya?

She was shocked to know this.

Geet: haan. Main janti hoon ki Prem aur Heer ki shadi ho chuki hai aur wo ek dusre se bahut pyar karte hain.Mujhe Prem ne ye baat bahut pehle bata di thi.

Veera and Nihal both of them were hell shocked they never expected this.

Veera: to tum Prem bhaiya se shadi kyun kar rahi ho?

Geet looked around and insured that Prem and Heer were not there then she asked them to come in the room and after that closed the door.

Geet: Main Prem se shadi nahin kar rahi. Main to ye natak sirf Prem aur Heer ko kareeb lane ke liye kar rahi hoon. Par mein unke bare mein zyada kuch nahin janti aur ismein mujhe tumhari madad chahiye.

She said looking at both of them and they nodded their head assuring her of their help.

Veera: Hum unhe vapas ek lane ke liye kuch bhi karenge.

All 3 of them smiled and then Geet told them everything she knows about Prem and Heer and their lives right now.

Tears rolled on veera's cheeks when she knew that her mom hates Heer and she will never allow her to enter in Prem's life again.Chahat's mention came as a surprise to both of them as Prem didn't mentioned about her to Nihal anytime.

Geet: I have a plan in my mind and I m sure that it will work if u will help me.

she said finishing the narration of her part the story.

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Heer: What are you doing Veera?

She asked her when she saw Veera preparing for food in the kitchen. She was more surprised as it was not looking as a normal preparation. Geet was also there with her and she was not feeling comfortable asking from her.

Veera: woh aaj hamare ghar par special guests a rahe hain ye sab bas unhi ke liye hai.I am sure aap unhe dekhkar bahut khush hongi.

Heer: Oh!

She replied wondering that who it may be.

Veera: can you plz tell me the time? mujhe taiyaar bhi hona hai.

She said looking at herself.

Heer: Its 6:30 right now.

Veera: Oh! wo bas aane hi wale honge.Bhabhi can you please prepare the dough?

Heer: haan bilkul! tum jakar taiyaar ho jao main kitchen sambhal loongi.

Veera then thanked her and went out of the kitchen.Geet also followed her as her dress was spoiled badly because of the oil which she purposely spilled on her dress.

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Prem woke up when he saw his phone ringing. It was a call from his office.The person was his manager who wants to inquire about the quotations of a deal which is to be sent. He answered him and gave him the proper instructions and then cut the call.

He rubbed his eyes and touched his neck when he felt a slight pain on his back.He left the room to have a cup of coffee just to refresh his mind.He entered the kitchen but can't move a step neither forward nor backward when he reached at the gate.

He was mesmerized by the sight he was seeing.Heer was preparing the dough and her hair were flying in the air disturbing her because of the table fan that was placed near her.She was continuously trying to get rid of the strands of hair coming on her face.

His lips curved into a smile seeing her failed attempts from her wrists to remove the hair from her face.The innocence on her face reminded him of the earlier times which he spent happily with her.

She was still trying to tuck her hair strands behind and in that attempt she got little flour on her forehead.Now she was appearing more adorable,more innocent and more cute to him.He was leaning on the door sideways waiching her cute struggle suddenly his steps started moving towards her till noe Heer was unaware of his presence but she noticed him when he came and stood beside her smiling.

Heer: tumhe hansi a rahi hai Prem?

She asked to him after getting annoyed by his behaviour specially by his smile.She was looking at him for an answer but he didn't replied.Instead his lips curved more reflecting a huge smile.

Heer: Premmmm!!!!!!!

She was getting frustrated at the way he was standing and just smiling at her.She would love to see him smile but right now she was in a mess and he was smiling at her.

Eventually both of them forgot their past and their relationship from past 6 years.what they remembered was their sweet moments they shared with each other and above that they remembered the love they had for each other in their hearts.

He placed his hands on both of her shoulders and turned her to face her back then slowly he collected all the strands of her hair which were disturbing her and tied her hair in a loose ponytail with the help of a hair band she showed to him.

then he slowly turned her again and started looking in her eyes she was also staring at his dark chocolate brown eyes in which she always found herself drowned while looking in them.

then he slowly brushed the flour from her forehead and realising that she smiled.Both of them were lost in their world of love and were looking in ech other's eyes but they came out from their own world of love when they heard the doorbell.they jerked feeling what they were into and Heer quickly came out of the kitchen only to be rooted on her place when she looked at the guests.

All the memories of that night flashed in front of her eyes.Those memories which haunted her everytime she closed her eyes were again fresh in front of her.The person she hated most in the world was in front of her hugging Veera in a friendly gesture.

"ASHLESHA" she uttered her name trying to believe that the girl who snatched her husband her love away from her was standing in front of her.

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plzzzzz leave ur comments and press the like btton it maybe the last update for a month as my xams are till 5 jan! plzzzzz don't be angry on me I will try to update if I get the time.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsome update!!
Luved it!!!
So Veera has planned to get Heer and Prem together!!!!
She had 2 call Ashlesha didn't she????!!!!
Update soon nd thnx 4 the pm.
P.S. best of luck 4 ur exams.
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Posted: 14 years ago


omg omg ash again in the picture...................i guess this time for good she is here...........and i remember the old golden scenes in the show when i read ur dough scenes....really thx alot for reminding them............now last ash part im tooooo despo now..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsum update luved it...ash??????? hope she doesnt create problems plz......!!! thx for da pm..!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow wonderful nice one
so veera planned to make premeer together
that was nice
i loved this part
thanks for pm
waiting for next part
update soon

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