Na Jaane Kyun pg28 - 12 june 13 - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: moon_mine

wow!!!!that ws awesome!!!!!!

thnx fr such a long update!!!!!!
really watng fr the cute nokjhoks of premeer!!!!!!
lovd the cute muskaan also!!!!!

thank you 😃!!!
hope you enjoy every other chapter in the same
tc
heer193😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sonia7

awesome loved it

so pre and heer live in the same building
loved their cute fights
update soon
thanks for the pm

thank you 😃!!!
will update as soon as possible...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

I gt ur pm bt cnt snd u pics m on mob thn not a problem dear , i hope ur lappy gets fine soon coz i m missing ur ff's and os very badly....

ok i rd the updt bt i cnt see the pics
so i hp premer is rly premer
clear my dbt via pm plz let me knw Thu u hv usd premers photo fr premer
or nt via pm plz ok updt ok i will try sending thru pm....if possible...
rckd .....................ye kya hai samajh nahi aaya
sale landlord ki wat laga di hehe 😆😃😆
nd
god so listns hr bas meri hi nai sunte huh meri bhi nahin sute
oh gd 1 bldng my gudnes d fgt bgns haha haaaan........ to aur kya ab hogi roz nai mahabharat.......just kiding
wel kido is so swet huh
nd no wopies tht u dnt updt earlier 😔
dnt b sry
luv
aishu

luv
heer193
Edited by heer193 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivangi2092

luved every bit of it!

their fights were awesome !
really looking forward for the next part!

thanks alot !!!😃😳
will update as soon as possible...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: samrocking30

awesome part
luv premeer fight

thanks!!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: NIMMY

simply awesome yaar......... i love that Pic of harshad thanks 😳

loved the update thank you!!!😃 Heer left Prem just like that............
I have on doubt and can u tell whts her real name......... sorry my story doesnt allow that....and why do we need it it is of no use in my stry.....so let it be....anyways if you want you can make guesses
Prem running behind Heer they are certainly going for CWG...........ah i remember the speed at which heer used to run in KDMHMD......once she even followed Gaurav aka Prem and met him...........that one was really fast while seeing i said to my mum she is definately going for next olympics.
and this time u used scarf yaah you know its different......... our Prem was left wid only payal in the show....but yet i hvnt decided....
silly me whts wrong with me......... still cant get over Kis desh neither can i and i too dont think will ever get over it.......well actually never would
Hated heers land lord................... she gave him a good lesson
Poor girl had to go wid so much troubles...........
loved it when she was day dreaming about Prem😃😃😃
Thank god she got a place to live and that was cheap
Loved when Prem entered again............. i always love a part much more when the Harshu factor is there😳
Loved there convo. 😃
Heer thought he was not 4 real..........
But he is and i was super happy coz of that😃
Loved samrat & gunjan.................
Heer and Prem cute fights
loved Muskan..........
and Prem was soooooooooooooooo sweet............... after all he was holding sugar in hand hmmmm...........
loved the ice-cream dialogue of muskan to prem
waiting 4 more
will do that asap
she closed the door on his face
ah She simply forgot ATTITHI Devo bhava.............lolz
loved it
thanks alot

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sadhz

awesome part.............haha ph fighting was cute😆........heer is soooo angry on prem...........hey but u said her real name is nt heer😕..........plzzzzzzz jaldi confusion dur karado...........awwwwwww muskan is soooooo sweet....................thnx for the pm............update asap...........................

thank you!!!
sorry my story doesnt allow to reveal it
but u can have guesses till then
will update asap
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

superb!!!...

love the entry of gunjan,samrat and muskaan!...
wow!...prem and heer are now neighbours!...interesting!...
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pm!

thank you
*bow*
😊😃😳😃
will do that asap
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi!!!
here is the next part
it is a bit boring
but promise next one will be fun
shaadi ki taiyariyon ke saath
sorry this part is required for the story line
do tell how is it and press like button
do comment
Recap : so now we have names for anjaana anjaani i.e. prem and heer (i dont know how many of u have noticed this that PREM is also a name given by anjaani....coz actually nobody asked about his real name...so i was wondering...) prem runs after heer from station...but when he reaches outside she was gone....on the other hand heer tries to rest and remembers how she left him in train.....when she reaches her apartment she finds her landlord renting it to someone else...she creates a story there and the other tanents leave the house and so does she....while she is finding house for herself.....a man appears who has a to-let board ...she gets a apartment.....after taking rest when she hears her doorbell ring she finds Prem in front of her...a few sweet nok jhonk takes place and then appears two new characters gunjan and samrat who welcome them and invite them for a wedding in their house....after muskan requests heer agrees to come for wedding and so does prem........
other people in update
heer's dad
heer's mom
rajeev-sumit


***jindagi do pal ki***
'ok! ok! i m going....by the way i live on next floor
hope to see you soon .......it is just below yours...'
she turned around and closed the door with a bang!!! and that too on his face
'whouu....easy lady!!!' rubbing his nose he went to his flat with a smile....
after closing door, she went to her bed....lyed on it and closed her eyes.......her face went soft and a tear fell from them......
the scene dims and gets foggy......
2 months back****
the scene gets cleared , ringing of a cell is heard and shows...
Heer comes running and opens the door of her (earlier) apartment.....gets in, closes the door.....runs to where her charger is .....plugs in the switch and sits on the mat kept near it....she is looking very happy and has a wide grin on her face....she looks at the phone and her grin becomes wider on seeing the name that is flashing on it....after confirming that cell was on charging she presses talk button-
'hello, mumma....hi!!! (she says in full volume as she is very happy and excited) kaise ho aap?....(without even waiting for her reply she continues...) pata hai yahan pe bohut maza aaraha hai....and the best part is....... meri job lagne ke baad mera pehla conference shimla mein hi laga hai....so this means i m coming home to meet you all and that too in one day actually 2 days par pakka parso subah pahuch jaungi....(she kept talking without a hault...but suddenly hears silence and a quite sob)....and ...and...hey....what happened ma.... main aa to rahi hun...aur aap rona band karo......... i had been away from home for 4 yrs before too for my college .....(but sob didnt ended instead grew louder )come on mom stop crying....ab dekho main abhi 3 mahine pehle hi to aai thi na ghar...aur ab phir se aa rahi hun why are you crying ??? stop crying mom....'
'sun beta....wo....tu ghar aaja bache....teri badi yaad aarahi hai....tu aaja phir baat karenge......bye...'
'bye ma...luv ya...take care'
after hunging up she had become all sad , the excitment visible on her face was lost...
because she knew something much worse had happened ...she knew her mother very well and also the reason, it must have been the same reason which was why came back to mumbai after a hot arguement with her mom 3 months back....but eventually they had sorted that on cell...but her mother wouldn't have let that go off her mind and she knew this tym she has to go and end all this once and for all.....
next day she boarded her train early in morning and when she reached chandigarh she went to meet an old friend of her who hadpffered her ride till solan from where she was supposed to go by herself to shimla.....
travelling alone was something she had learned when she was very young around 9 or 10 years she had been studying in shimla in a school that was far from her house and she had to go by herself till there and in a month she knew every road of shimla...and from that age till now she did all by herself....her father wanted her to realise every harsh reality of life and wanted to mak her independent so that everyone would be proud of her...he did upport her but only indirectly and this was never shown to her...she understood all this only when she saw other girls getting worried and feeling helpless whereas she did everything on her own and was perfect...she had become fearless of everything....
As she reached shimla...she hugged her bag tightly on her chest and shivered as it was mid-december and shimla was cold she took out her jacket and took the another bus to her stop and in less then 25 minutes she was in front of he house ....and was shocked to see a big lock on it...., she went to her neighbour and got to know that her father was admitted in Indus hospital....she threw her belongings in her neighbours house and went there... when she reached there she first met the doctor and after talking to her went to her mother and brother....
'didi!!!.....' exclaimed a boy and came to heer and hugged her
'kaisa hai? '
'main to theek hun.....but mom is hyper....u know'
'yaah i know...i will handle her...'
'pichhli baar ki tarah...'
'oh...pls shut up'
'fine go to her main sabke liye coffee lata hun'
'ok...'
and she went to the room where her dad was admitted
she went in and saw her dad in between different medical machines and his hand attached to drips on both hand one of glucose and other of blood
'kya hua aapko....ice skating kar rahe the kya?'she said to him with a smirk
'haan ghar par bore ho raha tha na....tu to thi nahi tang karne ke liye isiliye...'
'you could have gone to...skating rink it would have been safer...(she said as she went closer to him, ignoring her mother who had an expression yahan-bhi -shuru-ho-gaye and hugged him tightly not hurting him)namaste daddy'
'namaste bache....tu kyun aai....main theek hoon jarur teri ma ne bulaya hoga tujhe...'
'aapko lagta hai main mom ki tension ko seriously leti hun ....she has an habit of making things serious and worse....aur tension lena to unka janam sidh adhikaar hai...(she said as she winked and smiled at him) i have a conference so that is why i am here....kaise ho'
'ready to go for next world skating championship'
'hahahaha...'both daughter father laughed but her mother was all very serious
he pointed heer to look towards her mother and relax her...
she gestured with her eyes to him to relax and she will handle everything
in the mean while her brother came and gave everyone coffe wxcept his father
'aapke saamne coffe peena achha nahi lagta aap to piyoge nahin.......so we are going out tab tak you rest....chal oye (she said as he hitted her brother on his head and taking her mothers hand in her took her along with her outside....)aap bhi chalo.....why to make him jealous hamari coffe ko najar lag jaegi...'
after coming out
'di i m leaving ....mere friends wait kar rahe hain....'he said to heer in her ears but it was loud enough to be heard by their mother
'kush!!! tujhe itna nahi hai ki tere daddy ki tabiyat theek nahi hai.....sirf khelne ki padi hai...'she started scolding him
'but ma....he is fine.....ask didi ...(he turned to her and said almost in a volume less then whisper) ...di kuch karo na'she showed him her hand assuring him that she will help
'ja tu...... tune bada yahan koi problem solve karni hai....badaega hi ja ...but but but....stop brother....shaam ko gaadi le aana hum khana le aaenge bahar se....dad ka khana didi ke ghar se aajaega'
'didi?'
'haan jawahar ki sister'
'ok....main le aaunga aate waqt...bye'
'bye'
they didnt give single chance to their mother to interfere.....and she knew though they were always fighting like cat dogs but when she was against one they both would join and were inseparable
he ran away from there as if he was out of central jail
heer turned to her mom
'hey cheer up mom he will be fine you know....wo mere daddy hain....he will be fine.....kuchh nahi hai....sirf ek fracture hai...'
'do'her mother corrected
'yaah i meant that only ki ek thoda sa major hai doosra to minor se bhi kam hai.....dont worry he will be fine in a month and meri conference bhi ek mahine ki ho gai hai so i m here....do everything is sorted...stop worrying...nahi to meri miss universe mom ke chehre par dark circles aa jaenge...'she said as she hugged her mom
returning the hug her mother too smiled.....
a month passed as if tym was running and
on 14th january
then on the last day of her in shimla....she got a call from her boss, after talking to him, she came to the room where her father and mother were resting
on seeing her face, her dad raised his eyebrow to ask her what happened
'nothing much , (a grin came on her face and grew wide from one ear to other) mere designs pass ho gaye hain and i will be here for 15 more days ....(she said as she hugged him)'
'bus 15 din , ek mahina ruk jaati to tera birthday bhi celebrate ho jata yahan'
'haan pata hai....but already main pehle bhi chhutiyaan le chuki hun...ab phir li to mujhe office se bahar phek denge'
'chal theek hai...'
after hearing this convo her mother's face hardened and suddenly softened....heer saw this and asked
'kya hua mom?'
'kuchh nahin...'she said and went to the kitchen....
after 10 days
on 24th jan
while she was working in her office branch, her cell rang and when she picked it up she heard kush who sounded very scared and tensed
'kya hua kush...is everything fine?'
'di! jaldi se hospital aajao....main mom ko le jaraha hun....she suddenly fainted we are taking her to the hospital....dad ko call kiya tha but he didnt pick up his cell it was switched off may be he is in his meeting he is in sundernagar na....come soon going to Indus only'
'main aati hun'
she said took a half day leave and went there....her mother was being treated and the doctors were all around her
after half an hour doctor came out
'dr.! wo theek hain na?'
'aap kaun hain unki?'
'main unki beti hoon'
'aap mere saath aaiye'
she nodded and followed her and with each step her worry and tension was increasing,
they reached to her cabin and entered it
'come sit'
'hmm...'she gave a slight nod and sat
'beta.....tumhari mom waise abhi to theek hain but the problem isnt actually on her body its inside it and you know what it is...it is her heart....beta tum jaanti hi ho she is always having high bp...and now to tell you the truth she is a heart patient....unka dil bohut kamzor hai....unhe jitna ho sake khush rakho....unhe kisi bhi chinta ya worry se dur rakho....agar unhe aadat hai pareshan ho jaane ki baat baat par....to wo cheezein unke saamne na karo jo unhe pareshan kare....pls beta take care of her...prevention is always better than cure...haina?.....dawaiyan de di hain...bus ab tum dhyaan rakho unka....theek hai?'
'yes doctor!'was all she could say
she got up and came out of the cabin with her heavy heart and went to her brother
'kya hua di? is she fine?'
she smiled a little to assure him everything was fine
and hugging him said
'dont worry she will be fine....hum dhyaan rakhenge unka....just ek hi baat wo jo kahe bina argue kare maan jaana....ok'
'hmmm...i will....dad ka phone ab bhi nahin lag raha'
'koi baat nahin i called sharma unclegave him the message'
he nodded and both went in the room where their mother was lying....on seeing her pale face heer knew what was required to be done...
in next 3 days they came back home....and after 10 days
6th feb
in evening
she came to her mom took her hand and before her mother could ask she said
'mom, i m ready...'her forehead wrinkled and suddenly loosened as she undertoos her daughters answer
'sach mein....'she said all excited
heer smiled
'haan aap jo bolengi main wahi karungi'
'bilkul nahi....tumhari jindagi hai jo tum chahti ho wahi hoga....'
'hello dad! .....(she said as she took his bag and kept it on the tanle)welcome back!!!(she gave him a glass of water)we will discuss this later aap dono rest karo'
'par....'he tried to say
'bus dad....its ok aaj nahin to kal ye hona hi tha....to aaj kyun nahin'
saying this left,
'tum galat kar rahi ho uske saath...pyaar ka fayeda nahin uthana chahiye'he said to his wife
'faayeda?...are wo meri beti hai main jo karungi uske bhale ke liye hi hoga aur maine uske saath jabardasti nahin ki hai...woh khud maan gayi hai...maine to kaha bhi nahi tha'
the wrinkles on his forehead increased and he stopped her from saying anything further gesturing by his hand
they both slept
In 2 days her mother had become all fine and was working in full swing with full energy....seeing her mother fine she was happy
she suddenly felt a weight on her shoulders, she turned to see who it was
'are daddy aap!'
'tu khush hai ya sirf inke liye maani hai'
'what do you think?'she asked to change the topic
'jo bhi karna apne liye karna beta...main jaanta hoon tu jo bhi karti hai usmein sab ki khushi ka dhyaan rakhti hai...aaj kisi aur ki khushi ke liye apne aap ko daav par mat lagana....ye khushi jyada din nahin tikegi....agar apne liye karegi to sab khush rahenge warna tujhe gumsum udaas dekh wo hi sabse jyada roegi....'
in her answer all she did was nod and leave
after
on 13th feb
'gud morning ma!!'
'gud morning beta! wo aa rahe hain aaj kitna achha hua na aaj hi sab ho gaya...aaj ka din bada shubh hai'
she said and went to kitchen, without realising how her daughters face fell on hearing that
but someone else did notice it....................
'gud morning di!'
'morning kush'
'why are you doing this to urself????.....'
'what? kya kar rahi hun main?'
'you think main chhota hoon to mujhe ghar ka kuchh ata pata nahin hai? kyun?....haina?'
'nahin yaar tu to sab se bada hai aur kal se main tujhe old mcdonald bulaungi theek hai!'she said with a naughty smile to change this topic
'aapki smile ...it isnt reaching ur eyes'
and her face fell...she got up and went to washroom
in afternoon
her room was filled with all sorts of indian clothes, saaris and suits
'tu ye pehen ye tujhe suit karta hai,.... nahin ye pehen isme thodi patli lagegi....'
her bro entered the room while munching an apple
'hum kapdo ki dukaan khol rahe hain kya? aap logo ne to naye business ki poori taiyari kar li hai...'
'shut up kush.....get out'his mother said and shooed him out of the room....
'business?'heer said to herself and smiled sarcastically on her state
in evening
bell rang....her mother dressed as if going for a wedding rushed to it and opened the door, a man entered who was nothing less than a fool and not only in looks
his height smaller than heer's or may be almost of hers....he was almost like football....and with him was his mother
'aaiye! aaiye!'
'hello!'
he said with a attitude which irritated heer on the very first note
heer's mother gave a slight nod in return with a small hello beta
'namaste pammi ji'greeted heer's mother to his mother
'namaste!'
'ye hai meri beti....(and turning to heer) aur ye hai rajeev aur uski mummy '
joining her hands she said namaste to both
his mother made a face as she expected her to touch her feet
she signalled heer to touch her feet but heer didnt do it
she had a notion that the first person she will touch feet would be her own mother and that after she will fulfill her dreams and bring the man of her life in front of her mother to show her
but everything her was way round
'beta aunty ke pair chho kar aashirwad lele'
'mom you know na....'
'ch....'
and heer turned to go in
'achha inhe leja drawing room mein'
'fine....aaiye'
when they setelled down, her father came in and saw them
he asked heer with his eyes who were they and she told
'daddy....ye hain rajeev aur ye unki mummy'
'namaste bhai sahab'lady said sitting and the guy never even bothered to get up and say anything and this again added to her irritation....
'namaste, mujhe thoda kaam hai sorry mujhe jana hoga'
her dad shaking his head left from there......even after his wife's pleadings all he said was
'tu dono ka dimag kharab ho gaya hai....wo haan kar bhi de main ye shaadi nahin hone dunga'
'are par...'and he left
she entered drawing room with tray and after a few minutes filled whole table with eatables and tea
'lo beta chai lelo...'offered her mother to rajeev
'main chai nahin pita....you know canada mein hum black cofee peete hain...'
'achha koi beta wo bana dete hain...'
'rehne deejiye aapko kahan aati hogi wo sab cheezein jo mujhe pasand hain....let it be...'
heer's mother signed her to offer something to him and his mom
taking a tray of ladoo's she offered
'lijiye aunty....'
lady smiling widely on sweets took three at a time
and filled her mouth with them....and said thank you with her mouth full
'koi baat nahi'
'have some'she said to rajeev
'what else do you have'he said in a coy voice
'what do you mean?'said heer sternly, his face hardened a bit
'kya main tum se akele mein baat kar sakta hun?'
'kyun?...'
'haan haan beta kyun nahi....ja beta inhe ghuma la ....'
'kya karti ho tum mumbai mein ?'
'main architect hoon wahan...'
'kitna kama leti ho?'
'itna ki main apna aur apni family ko aaram se sambhal sakoon'
he turned to her
'aur koi boyfriend ya kuchh...'
'mere past se aapka koi matlab nahi aur aap befikar rahiye ab aisa koi hai bhi nahi'
she was getting irritated with him , he had a rude voice didnt know how to treat women and on top of it in every two minutes he looked at her chest and that was making thing getting worsened
'humein andar chalna chahiya'
'ok tum to kuchh nahin puchhogi na...waise tumhe jarurat bhi nahin hai....waise bhi mujhe dekh kar puchhna hi nahin padta meri personality hai hi aisi....aur auratein sawal karein ye mujhe pasand nahi....wo sirf teen kaamon ke liye hoti hai
khana banana...bache paida karna...apne pati ki har baat man na bina sawaal kiye....'
'yaah ryt...'she said with a fake wide smile
they went in
'dekhiye i dont have much time saari baat seedhe seedhe clear kar lete hai....shaadi ke liye mujhe koi kami nahin hai....mere liye to line lagi hui hai ladkiyon ki....kyun mom?(her mother looking up from laddos saw him and then nodded...heer was sure she didnt knew what they were discussing) sari len den ki baat kar li jaaye to mujhe shaadi mein koi problem nahin hai'
'len den?kaisa len den'asked heer all confused
'wahi shaadi ke baad tum ghar par kya laogi apne saath'he said as if it was no a big deal for him
'main kyun laungi kuchh....main khud aa jaun wo kam....'and before she could complete her mother came in between
'beta ye sab baatein to theek hai....aap bataiye aap kya chahte hain...'
'mom but...'
'dekhiye kam se kam ek 7 -8 lakh ki gaadi, aur ghar ka baaki saaman....ya phir gaziabaad mein ek flat....kam se kam 3 bedroom set'
'what?'said her astonished
'tu chup reh main dekhti hun....main sambhal lungi....beta rajeev ye to bohut mehenga ho gaya hai kuch kam jyada kar lo'
'kam jyada? mom yahan aap mera sauda kar rahi hain and wo bhi iske saath....mom iske saath look at him....ye mujhse bhi bura dikhta hai....'
'main besati bardasht nahi karunga main ja raha hun....'he said getting up but in pace so that they stop him
'nahin nahin beta tum baitho....ye to bholi hai nadaan hai.....'
'mom...?'
'tu chu reh....ja apne kamre mein'
she went in and was all pissed off with whatever was goin on
she remembered his demands and something striked her she took her laptop and sat on the dining table in front of them.....he looked t laptop and then smirked.....
after 15 minutes
'i hope saara sauda i mean lenden ho gaya hoga....kyun sumit ji?'
his face went pale
'sumit?'asked her mom not getting anything
'haan mom....inka naam rajeev hi nahin sumit bhi hai....ek ke saath ek free....aur is se pehle bhi ye mujh jaisi kitni ladkiyon ko reject kar chuke hain....aakhir laaaaaaaaaambi line jo lagi hai inke liye....inka police record itna saaf hai ki ab register kam pad jaate hain ink sharafat ko leke......aur pata hai bas 3 baar pehle shaadi hui hai inki....saale kamine....tujhe 7-8 lakh gaadi chahiye....kabhi apni shakal aaine mein dekh khud hi dar jaega aur tab apat chalega teri aukad kya hai?tu to cycle ke layak bhi nahin hai....'
bell rings....she goes and opens the door...police enters
arrests him and his mother and takes him
her mother was all confused and guilty about whatever happened
heer went out and came home only in morning
'kahan thi tu?'her mother asked as she opened the door
without answering she went inside
'are kisi ko batana jaruri nahi samajhti tum...main kitna pareshan thi tere liye'
'koi jarurat nahin hai mere liye pareshan hone ki...bus bohut ho gaya.....aur main didi ke yahan thi... dad knew it'
she said in a rude tone and went to washroom to freshen up
whole day went but heer didnt utter a word to her mom and neither did she tried talking to heer
at around 6
heer was passing from her mothers room when she heard her talking
'nahin sab galat ho gya....wo koi fraud tha...'
'hmmmm....pata nahi par isne sab kahin se pata kar liya aur use arrest karwa diya....chalo jo hua achha hua meri beti bach gai'
she shook her head....her mother was talking to someone and that too in washroom
she turned to leave but on hearing something stopped
'are maine use rokne ke liye bimari ka natak bhi kiya....tumse jhoot bhi bilvaya par sab kharab ho gaya....agar koi acha ladka hota to wo bhi aiyar ho jaati'
and that was it....the limits....the heights......how can she steep so low......?
in anger heer went out and
at her home it was eleven at night but she was no where, her dad too didnt knew anything....he called every friend friend of her but she was nowhere....she didnt even take her cell phone....suddenly bell rang
kush ran to see if it was her
'di? kahan thi aap? we were so worried....mom roe ja rahi hain...daddy bhi pareshan hain....where were you?'
she entere and saw her mother crying badly sitting on dining table, she got from her chair and hugged heer....but heer never responded.....all this while her dad was looking at them and understood that today everything was over
'kyun ro rahe ho....mari nahi hun abhi'
'ye kya bol rahi hai.....'
'sach'
'kya matlab?'
'yehi ki abhi main jinda hun aaram se ek aur naatak kariye hospital pahunchiye....apni dost ko kahiye ki wo mujhe jhoot bole aur hum ek aur rajeev-sumit se milte hain and this tym i promise mom i will definately marry him....'
her mother went pale
'kya bol rahi hai beta'asked heer's dad
'sach dad saxh bata rahi hun....u know she acted that she was sick and here i was dying every minute to see her in that state....'
'kya?'her dad said looking angrily at his wife
'yes dad....'and heer broke down and hugged him
'kyun kiya tumne aisa?kya mazak laga rakha hai ye'
'mazak maine nahin isne laga rakha hai.....mana ki maine jhoot bola par main bimar thi sach mein behosh h gai thi par wo sirf exhaustion ki wajah se that par main aur kya karti...ye shaadi ke liye maan hi nahin rahi thi...aap jaante hihain ye aisi dikhti isi liye iske liye ladke dhundhne mushkil hai ...jitni jaldi shaadi ho jaegi utna achha hai...'
'haan aur isiliye aap mujhe kisi ke bhi gale mein baandh dengi'
'maine aisa kab kaha....aaj jo hua galti se ho gaya...;'
'ye galati aapne 3 mahine pehle bhi ki thi'
'are tab to...'
'koi jawab nahin hai aapke paas....'
'aaj jo hua so hua agli baar aisa nahin hoga'
'yes mom agli baar to aisa bilkul nahin hoga kyunki agli baar main yahan hungi hi nahi is sab ke liye....'
'kya matlab hai tera?'
'yehi ki main nahin aane waali ab aapke paas waapis..'
'kahan jaegi tu......'
'itni dur ki mujhe ye sab kabhi jhelna na pade'
'agar tu thodi tameez se pesh aaye na to koi bhi ladka maan jaaye par pata nahin tujhe kya ho jata hai lenden word subke'
'you think i m kidding....mom i m definately leaving....and raha sawaal lenden ka to wo concept mujhe kabhi samajh hi nahin aaya hai....ladki bhi do aur ghar ki tijori(safe) bhi khaali karo....'
'ye to reet hai...sab nibhate hain....aur waise bhi tu koi hur pari nahin jisse koi bhi shaadi kar lega,........jaisi tu hai humein dena hi hoga kuchh na kuchh.....kyun ji?'
'mujhe mat ghusao is sab mein........mere hisaab se to ab tum dono hi faisla karo aur aaj hi sab final karo....aur beta main tere saath hun...'
and saying this he left
'm leaving....forever and i will show you one day ki iss len den ke aage bhi ek duniya hai jahan sab achha hai....'
'tu roegi bohut roegi....agar ab na sambhli to saari jndagi roegi.....'
'no mom main aaungi ek din aapke saamne wo sapna pura karke.....laungi use aur dekhna aap us din uski aankhon mein itna pyaar hoga mere liye....ki aapko bhi sharam aa jaegi'
'kahan ja rahi hai....tu kahin hain jaegi...'
'main jaungi jarur jaungi...'
'par kal tujhe ek aur ladka dekhne aa raha hai...'
'i dont care'
'aur hamari izzat'
'aaj apne kaafi rakhi thi hamari izzat'
'tu nahin jaegi'
'main jaungi'
'ja chali ja....mila de mitti mein hamari izzat....mat aana kabhi waapis.....tuhe bhi aulad ka dard ek din rulaega....dekhna tu....'
.....and heer left her home without meeting anyone.....without even looking back once she went from there
leaving a single note which her mother read when she entered her room
'dear mom
i know u r hurt....par main bhi to toot gayi thi sach sunke....aapne mere saath hi dhoka kiya.....u were wrong....and look mom what gift you gave today on my birthday....1st time ever you didnt remember it...
urs....ab to wo bhi nahi rahi....loving daughter'
her mother cried as she opened fridge and took out heer's favourite chacolate truffle cake
'mujhe yaad tha beta....kabhi nahi bhuli thi...na aaj bhuli hun aur na hi kabhi bhulungi...'
heer boarded a bus and reached chandigarh , early in the morning
then she went to station and bought a ticket and boarded a train till delhi...in delhi she waited till 4 pm for 3 hours as no other train was available and then on her way whatever had happened was as worse as the meeting with rajeev/sumit....while running in train also to save herself only person who came to her mind were her dad and kush and to her heart was her mother
in her heart she had screamed her name loudly
*******
she opened her eyes as she couldnt take anymore....and was shocked to see prem standing on the door bending on threshhold a little
'tum?(she said getting shocked as she sat on the bed, cleaning her face) andar kaise aagaye tum?'
'darwaaje se...'he said
'niklo yahan se bahar....'
'itna dard kyun hain tumhari aankhon mein....'
and she looked at him helpless
***The End***
so here it ends
sorry for spelling mistakes
do tell me so that i can edit them
i know its boring but was required
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luv
heer193
Edited by heer193 - 14 years ago
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shivangi2092, snehaheer21, pwincess1, moon_mine, sonia7, sweet scorpio, shahrukh_divya, thank you very much for pressing like button
and also to all those who commented
pls this tym it is a bit boring but from next tym i promise only unlimited fun
because only serious part of the ff is over
i dont know how many saw this but i had relied for everyones comments
so if u had doubts which u asked
all of them are answered
u may check
luv
heer193
Edited by heer193 - 14 years ago

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