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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update!
eagerly waiting for the next part
loved premeer's flashback scene
thanks for increasing the font size and pm
plz update asap
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl

hi anu,

finally had time to read it properly..... awwwwwww i loved da chapter!!!! chahat & prem's scene ws sooooooooo cute!!! yikes i miss premeer very badly😭😭 ur ff just recalls all da sweet memories of them and their sbs madness😍

loved preet tooooooooooooo.... he's my cutie pie & i love him to death....

continue soon

hugs

thank you nadini sis i loved your comment .its really a pleasure to read it you saying my ff recalls sweet memories of thier sbs .thankyou verymuch sis me too verybadly missing their sbs segements
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: NIMMY

so much suspense.................

waiting 4 the nxt update..............
Heer thinks he left her
Prem thinks she left him
wht happened ................. and who is behind all this
hope mayank is marrying nupur.............
Chahat so much like Heer...........Premeer ki pyar ki nishani

thankyou namru dear for the comments.
sure i will say you in next part how they seperated
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

p thank god voh bhai hai! what happened after all.. please disclose in next part! continue soon

sure dear i disclose in next part thankyou
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sadhz

awesomeeeeeeee part anu..................hehe mayank is heer's bro thnk god...............😲 heer thinks that prem is dead..................thnx for pm......................wt is reason behind PH separation........ sooooooooooooooooon......................waitinggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

thankyou sadhana i am sure i will say you in next part dear
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivangi2092

lovely update!

eagerly waiting for the next part
loved premeer's flashback scene
thanks for increasing the font size and pm
plz update asap

thankyou shivangi dear sure will update next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi friends this part 13
In Delhi
prem and preet start to ambala with meher,gunjan and chahat.children enjoy their journey. preet drives the car prem lasts in thoughts.
<< Flashback >>
"After marriage prem heer lived happily but thier happiness soon faded away bcoz they last thier parents within short time of their marriage.they both were shattered preet and meher played a huge role to make them normal ."
"prem and heer sold all their business in brisbane and they moved to live in mumbai. thier life moved happily as premeer got thier sister and bro through meet."
"when chahat was two years old premeer went to andaman for a tour . unfortunately thier boat caught with an accident. heer was saved by sea guards.but when she woke up she couldnt findout prem and chahat . she searched for them but in vain they informed bcoz of heavy rain we cant identify the bodies too ."
"heer shattered at that time.she walked all lost she walked in the road she dont know what to do at that time mayanks car hit her .she felldown in the road .mayank took her to hospital she was unconsious for 6 months."
"meanwhile prem and chahat were drowned in the water at time lukily they got trapped in fisherman net and they were saved by them. but both were unconsious for a week after they recovered prem rushed to the spot and enquires about heer . but he cant know about her atlast a girl inform prem that heer is alive but dont know where she went. from that day prem searched heer but all went in vein ."
"mayank tried to findout about heer but he cant .so he decided to take care of her.heer gained consicous after 6months but was mentally disable.so mayank took her to ambala with him "
"meanwhile prem who searched heer in andaman lost all hope he decides to move to delhi with preet as he wants to give good care for chahat.but he kept his aunt daljeet in mumbai in a hope " if heer comeback on someday aunty will say the address of prem.but daljeet had bad intention she want her daughter maya to be married with prem ."
"after two years heer gained her memory along with mayank she goes to search for prem in mumbai but she can found only daljeet ,"
she says to heer "that prem and chahat were died " daljeet acts nicely with heer "she acts that she is staying here ng and waiting oneday one of the three will come " "she adds preet moved to abroad as he cant able digest prem's loss" . heer took prems photo and leaves the house as she belived daljeet.
"heer recovered from her grief slowly bcoz of mayank and robbie, mauli cared her as her sisiter . mayank postponed his marriage for the past 5 years to take good care of heer." " before 6 months he met nupur bushan and fell in love with her. they both agrees to marry eachother.mayank didnt reveal about heer's past to her."
"nupur was school mate of prem and preet she met prem in a meeting before 1 year .she knows prem's wife is lost but dont know full details about it.as preet askd her to not talk anything about this to prem.nupur wants to help prem but she decides to not to broke his heart"
<<flashback ends>>
mayank arranged house for nupur's guest just opposite to his house. prem and preet went there and took their rooms. chahat " dad chachu boring here plz take us out" .preet " done you gunjun, meher going let prem take rest " .chahat " chachu you drived the car then why papa has to take rest" gunjun " di mere prem papa has to take rest dont disturb him " the trio was surprised to see the convo of children ".
preet bent down to chahat and say if we are happy we can do loads of work ,if we arent we were tired without doing a single work prem is worried of his business now as a good girl say bye to papa and come with me "
atlast they gone out prem lost in thoughts he was diturbed by nupur's call
prems phone starts to ring he attends it was nupur " prem plz do me a help my jewels are with mayanks sister plz prem my sister gunjun and samrat not yet arrived so plz prem its important plzz plzz"
prem " nupzy okay i go but one thing you know if you pleads its nice" nupur " prem i give you nicely when you come here " both eneterd into cute fight atlast prem goes to mayanks house.
he walks inside the house he founds some guests but he saw someone coming to him with a happy face . prem found a joy of relief in his eyes he was confused to see him . mayank stops at a minute and asks are you prem juneja .prem says yes nupur sends me to take jewel from you sister .
he confusingly asked do you know me before. ?mayank just hugs him and says i am sorry bcoz me everything happened" prem confused by his behaviour of mayank and asks lot of questions
mayank simply says " i am nupur's fiance but i am the one who took your heer away from you "
prem shocked to hear this he asks what you did to my heer ? mayank wait wait your heer is fine and says the entire story about heer. prem eyes filled with tears he hugs mayank and says thankyou where is my heer. mayank shows the window
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prem jumped in joy to see heer there .heer looks at window and smiles and asks " oh prem you came today also its nice see i selected a dress is this good " what to do prem i have to act as a happy girl so what to do " prem just gazed at her with tears . heer continues " why looking if i touch you you will vanish you doing this daily "
prem jumps into the room through the window .heer still thinks she is imaging prem " she continues hey prem you are coming to me today good improvement but should not disappear okay" prem
moves to her he comes more close to her .heer looks into prems eyes she sensed something .prem puts his hands on her cheek and says heer i love you "
heer stunned to see prem .she realise its not her dream its real .
she hugs prem and cries and asks " where you gone prem i thought you were died " prem " who said that heer i am lucky heer i know you are alive so i still searching you " heer " i love you prem she kissed his forehead ,cheek " prem make her sit in the bed . " heer lyes on his lap and asks how is my chahat "
prem shows her photo from mobile " heer kiss her photo and says " prem i want to talk to her now " prem sure i msgd preet he will be here in 10 minutes " .heer asks her " will she recognise me prem ,will she talk to me ,how should i treat her prem asks heer i am so confused and tensed"
prem assures " i never said chahat you wont come forever and he says what he says to chahat about heer and asks how you conclude i was dead"
heer " i came to mumbai house but daljeet chachi said so " prem was shocked so new villy in our life"
heer " ya prem even sanjana and harmaan were good compared to her we have to find what behid this " heer "
prem you know i got a chance to sing in album" prem " heer i too fullfiiled your dream " prem " i know heer you live for me only we both fulfill each other dreams na "
heer " pushed him and says yes yes i foundout now you learnt how to jump into window properly " prem sensed her happiness he began to chase her ".
what will be chahats reaction to heer will be in next part? hi friends i finished part13 little bit long plz do read and say its bad or not
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
wow finally they found each other
thanks to nupur
thanks for the pm
cant wait for chahats reaction to see her mother😊
Edited by sonia7 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
waow awesome update really like nupur n mayank
and cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago


hmmmm hi anu dear......atlast premeer met which i wanted........and haha prem came to heer by jumping frm window....haaa mother and daughter are alike and now father also joined in same group.........

and i love u for getting mayank nupur in this story..........they are my bubbly pair.........waiting for chahat's reaction............

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