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~~~Part 26~~~

Ashlesha had somhow managed to carry back the very drunk Manmeet back to his house apparently where she also stayed temporarily until she was in Delhi with Prem. She made sure she didn't wake up his parents or he would have certainly been dead since never before had he drunk so much out of control. She was so mad at him for have had spoilt everything and continuous curses came out as she laid him down on his bed. "Koi kaam bhi theek se nahi karsakte tum." She was really upset.

Just then her phone rang and she picked it up in huff. "What is it?" she didn't even bother to see who it was and just stormed on the person.

"Calm down Ash, itna ghussa kyu horahi hain?" It was Heer who wanted to find out if Manmeet was alright. "I only called to find out if Manmeet was fine."

That certainly fumed Ashlesha further. "Os bewacoof ki to baat hee mat kar. Good for nothing idiot." She looked at him sound asleep and then turned around again frustrated.

Heer didn't appreciate Ashlesha bad mouthing Manmeet all the time, "come on Ash don't be so harsh on him. Whatever he is going to do is going to be for you and it isn't easy at all."

"Bari tarafdaari karahee hain oski?" Ashlesha was still in the foul mood. "Don't forget that you're only pretending to be his fianc and not going to marry him in reality."

Seriously sometimes Heer wondered in which circumstance she had made friends with Ashlesha. "Just shut up Ash and listen to me. I agree that the plan didn't work out the way we wanted tonight yet still it ignited the fire amidst Prem. His jealousy is reaching the peak now and I think even if he doesn't see Manmeet with Rishab our work would be done."

For a while Ashlesha thought over that and then spoke, "that is very good but you're forgetting that we're trying to break Veera's marriage with him too so we've got to show both the men together." She sat down to think further. "I've got another plan and I'll explain it tomorrow when we all meet up at your house."

"Ok and yes Maya called and told me that she and Harman are coming tomorrow to Delhi." Heer informed as by the way thing.

Something clicked in Ashlesha's mind, "that's great now she can help us further into this mess." Then both of them hung up thinking about what the future was going to bring.

RVS's residence

Most of the guests had already left and the left overs were on their way to leave. Prem had sat drinking from the time he came back inside after Heer left. Her foul words had disturbed too much and even the slight intoxication hadn't helped to calm his nerves down. He failed to understand why he felt so determined to stop Heer from being with Manmeet. It wasn't like he was going to take her hand instead, or was it? He gulped down the glass he held in his hand and just wanted to forget everything but it was very difficult.

"Never thought, you were a big drinker." RV sat down beside him after telling the bartender to make him a glass too. "Still enjoying I see."

Prem simply ignored that initially and continued drinking. He wasn't a regular drinker at all but since he saw Heer with Manmeet he just wanted to boggle his mind totally. He finished the next glass delievered to him and then just sat there.

RV for various reasons was very curious on his dismissive behaviour and wanted to know what was going on. "Is everything alright Prem because I don't see it that way?"

"Can I ask you a question?" Prem looked towards him with slight delirious eyes. RV nodded to agree. "Has it ever occurred to you how it would feel if your wife would leave you one day? You say you love her more than anything but isn't it true that love gives the most hurt?"

RV waited a minute before he answered that. "Well you see love is all about giving and taking really but you know when it hurts the most? When only one side is giving and the other side is only taking." He drank the glass and then turned towards Prem again who was listening with a lot of attention. "Yeh sach hain ke aksar ham jinse sabse ziada pyaar karte hain wo hi hame sabse ziada dard dete hain. Yet that doesn't mean it can never be prevented. There should be this level of understanding between the two which would automatically remove the hurt from the relationship. Or jab dard ho bhi to ose baat ne se wo chala jaayega." For some reason Prem just couldn't digest that as it was complete opposite in his case. "I know Prem how you must be thinking that I don't belong to this world and from some other planet maybe but believe me I live here only. Or zindagi ka koi bharosa nahi to jitni milee hain osme nafrat bhar ke kyu ose waste kare. Chaahe jo bhi ho, dard, dukh, pyaar, khushi sab kuch milkar hee sehna hain. That's what my Naina has taught me and it has worked till date." He put the glass down. "and if there is a lot of pain waiting in the future then that too I'm sure I'll have her beside me even if its me giving the pain."

Now Prem was touched by his words but still he saw RV as being too good to be true. Yes it was very easy to say but when the test time came, everyone end up forgetting all their promises. Just like his father did when he abandoned his family.

Soon Naina came over and disturbed them; reminding RV how it was about time they retired to their room. "Raj, I hope you're not drinking more than you should."

He grabbed her by the waist, "oh come on sweetheart, have I ever disappointed you?" He gave her the cutest smile which always made her melt no matter what. "You see Prem no matter how many mistakes I make she keeps forgiving them because true love is all about trust and loyalty." Then he moved in towards him to say something quietly. "and plus you should always admit the woman is right or they never shut up."

She obviously knew he was winding Prem up so she had to save the poor soul. "Just forget everything Raj is saying Prem as you must have realised by now how crazy he is."

"Of course I'm crazy." RV held her tight. "Me Prem ko wahi samjha raha tha ke kese is larki me mujhe pura ka pura paagal kardiya hain. I'm crazily in love with her." He smiled and pulled her closer where she almost fell on top of him. Then he kissed her on the side of her lip and they were just about to get too cozy when Prem quickly interrupted them.

"I guess it's really late and I should be leaving now." Prem stood up but slightly rocked to and fro due to the intoxication but he handled himself alright. "Thanks very much, it was a very good party." He began to leave.

Naina didn't like his condition and was a bit worried. "Raj I think you should help him go home." She stared after Prem whose step was somewhat out of order. He wasn't fit to go alone.

RV stood up and followed Prem and even urged to let him take home but Prem refused entirely and convinced RV that he wasn't totally drunk and could handle himself. It was difficult to argue with Prem so RV had less choice but to let him go alone. Yet he also worried about him because since the time he met him till date had found Prem's eyes too melancholic as if something very terrible had happened in his life. He just wanted to see Prem happy and feel the world's love and happiness around him.

As Prem drove home all he could think about was how Heer had no faith in him anymore. But then again could he blame her after the way he had always treated her. Probably he had no right to interfere in her life as who was he really? He was never going to be able to give Heer any happiness as he simply didn't believe in anything. Love and compassion were never going to enter his life. He reached home with that thought yet his heart was heavily burdened with the truths of life; his life.

Manmeet's house

Ashlesha had finally calmed down yet she hadn't dropped fretting about it and had been constantly moaning from the past half hour over the phone. "I'm telling you bhaiya this plan is a flop totally. He is never going to be able to pull it off." The person on the otherside consoled her and explained to her that they couldn't give up now. "I know, I know it's working with Prem Sir yet how will we get Veera and Nihaal together if Rishab is not set up?" she looked very glum yet her brother cheered her up and told her that their plan will definitely work and she just needed to carry on with it. "You know bhaiya; none of this would have happened if you wouldn't have been pulling all the strings. You really came to help me and I'm very grateful to you." He told her that he was always going to be there for her whenever she needed help and this was his pleasure. "Ok then I'll meet you tomorrow after I've discussed with the others." She cut the phone with a new ray of hope induced by her beloved brother.

Next morning at Heer's house

The five friends had met after sometime once again so they were thrilled. Maya had immediately gotten busy telling them everything about her honeymoon and life after marriage. Then she wanted to know everything that was going on and by the end she sure was exhausted. "My God so much happened behind my back and I can't believe you guys had fun without me."

"Well as much as it sounds fun, it really is a big mess." Nihaal sighed and looked exasperated.

Maya felt sympathetic towards him and hugged him. "Whatever it is Nihaal I'm still happy for you that finally you found that Miss Right which you always talked about."

Veera's ears shot up at that. "Miss Right? You had a list of expectations?" she raised her eyebrow towards him as if she caught him doing something suspicious.

"You won't believe it Veera, this man here was a total reserved geek in college and we all teased him about how he was never going to get a decent girl to like him if he continued this way." Maya explained on purpose making fun of him whilst he tried to stop her. "We'd never thought he would have been a romantic." All of them laughed and Nihaal just made faces at them all. Of course Veera defended him and then everyone teased him further.

Ashlesha saw that everyone was happy yet the main problem still existed. "I'm so glad Maya that you've come as now you can help us with this mess." She was back to sulking again.

Yet Maya assured them that not only had she just come to support them but she also had thought of a plan which would definitely work. Then she explained it all to them and after a lot of debate they all agreed with it and were confident that everything was going to work out.

After all that Meher remembered she had an appointment at the maternity hospital and since Preet was busy to come with her, so Heer decided to do the honours.

Maternity hospital

The place wasn't that much crowded yet according to the nation's popularity rate it could be said that many pregnant women were around. Therefore Meher and Heer had to wait for more than half an hour till the doctor was ready to meet them.

Finally when it was their turn, Meher blew a sigh of relief as she had been feeling sick so many times and felt weak too. Just when they walked towards the doctor's cabin they got a great surprise to run into RV and Naina who had stepped out of the cabin. "Mr. RVS you here?" Heer asked rathered curious.

Naina and RV smiled at the two ladies. "Well we just had an appointment with the doctor." RV looked really thrilled. "You see we are expecting out fourth little one." He rested his hand over Naina's tummy.

Heer and Meher exchanged glances as they found it amazing how Naina didn't at all look pregnant. "Wow congratulations but I must say you can't even say looking at you as you simply look so beautiful." Heer truly admired Naina and her well maintained beauty.

"Thanks and well I'm just three months pregnant so you can't see anything right now but see me when I'm a big buffalo then you'll see how beautiful I am." Naina joked and others laughed in with her.

However RV had to differ. "Oh come on honey you never look like a buffalo at all for me." He was very sweet and that was the reason why she loved him so much. "You know ladies I've been with Naina from beginning till end in all of her pregnancies. You see it wasn't her own contribution in producing the heir so then it's my responsibility too to take upon each and every pain she goes through in these nine months."

He truly was too good to be true and the two women simply didn't know how to praise him. Meher obviously wished her Preet had been like RV but then again she still loved him no matter how he was. She was going to make sure Preet also stayed with her all throughout her pregnancy. They soon said goodbye to RV and Naina as they totally forgot the doctor was waiting inside.

Half an hour later the two ladies stepped out of the office quite relieved with everything being normal. Meher was now five months pregnant and since it was her fitrst she was very cautious. Yet the doctor assured her that everything was totally fine and normal. "Next time I'll bring Preet for sure. That RV is really sweet and an ideal husband I would say." Meher commented as they descended the steps outside the hospital.

The next ten minutes were spent waiting for a taxi and during that time Prem had been stuck in traffic which coincidently put his attention towards Heer. He simply froze in staring at her as always and then his attention fell onto what she was trying to do. It was then that he saw she was trying to catch a taxi and then he noticed where exactly she had been. His mind boggled up entirely after seeing she came from the maternity hospital and that too holding a file. That only added up to one thing and it was horrendous. It just couldn't be possible but then again the incident had occurred between them so there were high chances. The horns behind him alerted him soon so he had to move on but after the scene his mind was terribly disturbed.

His day couldn't have been fouler as his mind couldn't concentrate on anything else but what he had seen in the morning outside the hospital. Heer had gone to the maternity hospital so was it possible that she was...he simply didn't want to dwell there at all. If that was the case then it was nothing but disastrous.

Ashlesha was somewhat pleased with his disturbed behaviour because atleast he left her alone the whole day. It was surprising for sure in the beginning but then she just felt good that their plan was working and he was going in the right track. He was improving.

The only thing he could think about was Heer holding that file outside the hospital. He just couldn't understand to think anything else as he knew it was his entire fault. He was the one who had done injustice to her yet if it was true then he was going to solve it.

He made a few phone calls per his accordance to find out what had happened on his side of the investigation against Manmeet. Now things had heated up and it was more important for him to find out all the dirt against that guy to make sure Heer was safe. And now there was an addition with her so she had to stay safe. "Is this information correct?" he asked the person on the otherside. "There better not be any mistakes." Then he cut the call and looked confident that he was going to get solid proof tonight for sure.

That evening

The gang had made the plan to go out to a night club to put their plan at work. Obviously they had to invite Rishab somehow and the only way that was going to be able to get done was if Veera invited him. She was totally agasint it at first but everyone convinced her and in the end she had no choice because it was all for the greater cause.

When she reached his palatial house she was very nervous and no piece of confidence existed but she had to do it. If she wanted a happy future with Nihaal then she had to do it. It was true that Rishab always gave her a creepy feeling yet all that had to be put aside.

It was a great surprise for Rishab to have found her at his doorstep and his lustrous eyes xrayed her from top till bottom as he always did. Even though he was gay he still knew how to look at a beautiful woman but of course he preferred men anyday. Then he most curiously enquire don why she had come all the while trying to be cosier with her. "To what do I hold this pleasure darling."

She couldn't have been more revolted at the way he addressed her. Yet she still put up a farce face to appear as friendly as could be. "Well I was thinking that if we are to be married then we should get to know each other more. I would like to spend more time with you."

The surprises coming his way by the minute and he had underestimated Veera. He had thought of her to be a meek quiet girl who wouldn't really insist on anything but here she was different. Then again if he wanted to continue his lifestyle he had to marry a dumb girl but Veera appeared to come handy and perhaps he could have fun with her too. "Of course darling I would love the same thing." He closed the distance between them and touched her in an uncomfortable way. "You should come here more often then."

His hand was like thorns and she wanted him to stop. Of course she couldn't be rough and had to apply style. She also used her seductive weapon to convince him. "That's a sweet thought but I would prefer to go out."

Rishab wasn't that turned on with the intimacy yet was intrigued by her boldness. "We could do that too." He wanted to go forward to kiss her but she moved away in time.

"That's why I came here." She stood up and maintained distance from him. "I love going to the night clubs and so wanted to ask you to join me tonight." She turned towards him with one of her cute smiles. "I hope you love going to them too."

He thought about that and decided it wasn't a bad plan at all. That way he would be able to convince her and trap her further by gaining her confidence. Then that way she was going to be under him for sure. He agreed and then both of left for the club with her informing thr rest that they were on their way.

Heer's house

The rest were thrilled and Manmeet was terribly nervous again but after a lot of hammering from Ashlesha he became confident that he could pull it off.

"Why aren't you ready yet?" She looked at Heer in an appalling way.

Heer stared back making a face. "Why? I'm not going anywhere." She looked confused too.

Ashlesha so looked as if she was going to scold her right then and there. "What do you mean you're not going anywhere? Of course you're going. We all are going as a team rememeber."

"You know Ash I don't go to any night clubs and especially we'll be going all the way to Delhi and not anywhere local." Heer looked worried.

It didn't affect Ashlesha much. "I don't care whatever it is. Come on Heer you're going. I mean our plan is about to come to an end and you'll miss all the action." She wasn't going to listen to anything at all. Then she fretted about the lack of party fashion Heer had and she had to wear something hot and happening for the club. Heer was so against it but still ended up wearing one of the black party dresses Ashlesha provided her with. "Now you just wait the main action is going to take place at the club and its going to be hell of a show." She clasped her hands together in excitement and couldn't wait to get there and put their plan into action.

Edited by awaazilicious - 14 years ago
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god prem thnks heer is pregnant!!!!
really xcited to knw wat he does nxt!!!!
do update soon!!!!
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ohh my goddd prem drunkk and angryy hayeee i can give anything to get himm hahaha uske nashe ka fayda uthana hahahaha
lolz nania and rv so sweettt lolzz ab kya hoga ?? prem agar sach janega ki unke beech uch nahi huaaa too .. lolz he is thinking heer preeggy hahahahah abbb club mein kya hogaa mar jaani main tooo hahahahaha

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Yayyy... we got an update!!!!



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The part was really superb and awesome!!!








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Jelaous prem...



I just loved Rv.. the way he expalained to prem about love...
that just so fantastic!!!


Hope this gives so sense to prem!!!

But no..
our prem can't understand so easily..


Truly loved Naina and RV relation


Hehe... now the misunderstanding.. about heer being pregrant...
What it is gonna lead to?????

Its getting really exciting!!!!

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Eagerly waiting for the next part'

Continue super duper soon!!!





Edited by zigzagway_sadi - 14 years ago
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dats was so awsum..!
Prem thnks Heer's preg...wow..!! cnt wa8 for d show down nw...hehhe..!!!
thnx for d pm dear...n update soon plz..!
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nice update yaar
prem think dat heer is pregnent, interesting!
luv RVS and prem scene
i m looking 4ward 4 next update
cont soon
thanx 4 PM
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where were u arwa 🤗
thanx a lot fro the pm 😃 its been such a long time

Hmm...now therez gonna be a big misunderstanding...but i guess i'm gonna love the jealous Prem more😉😳

update soon.

Loved ur update ❤️


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Posted: 14 years ago

omg that was a fab update it was so nice..

i mean prem like...
he is drinking... that 2 thnkng abt heer...


loved neha and r...

they are also a cute couple.. but i mean like...
prem just saw her getting out of the maternity hospital and he thnks that she is pregnant..

that so...
i mean..
wht is he gng 2 do nw????
hopw no problem...

between them..
and wht are they planning to do at the disc...

hope their plan really woks...

the update was...


thank you fr teh wonderful update and pm...




The next ten minutes were spent waiting for a taxi and during that time Prem had been stuck in traffic which coincidently put his attention towards Heer. He simply froze in staring at her as always and then his attention fell onto what she was trying to do. It was then that he saw she was trying to catch a taxi and then he noticed where exactly she had been. His mind boggled up entirely after seeing she came from the maternity hospital and that too holding a file. That only added up to one thing and it was horrendous. It just couldn't be possible but then again the incident had occurred between them so there were high chances. The horns behind him alerted him soon so he had to move on but after the scene his mind was terribly disturbed.

loved this part...






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