FF ~~Falling for you~~ Part 8 pg38 Updated 2/10/11 - Page 16

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Posted: 14 years ago
thanx for reading shivangi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: NIMMY

loved it

prem came closer someone was expecting a kiss but he asked 4 food.......... but how adorable......... loved it
and then everyone teasing MEET & PREMEER...........
loved the last part

thanx Namrata
i always love ur comments
they really mean alot to me
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sadhz

Lovely part............... hey i expected kiss yaar.........bt its ok hope nxt time 😉 ..............................teasing scene was lovely...............loved it......................update asap.........................

will do
thanx Sadhna
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Noor_PremHeer

Hey Nabiha!!😛

Hey Darling!! awwww it was shoo i thougth!! i thougth Prem will kiss her😳..but he was Hungry😆😆shoooo cute!!!

It was Awesome Update!!👏👏

just sooooo Sweet!! and that scaring part was alos Funny and Nice!!
Good Going bacha!!👍🏼
update soon!!
Love ya!!🤗

thanx Noor
you know i alwayz wait for ur comment
thank you
now start writing ur update
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG, im back with an update.😲
Plz say thanks to Noor as this chapter is her idea
i started to write this yesterrday but because of my headache i couldnt carry on and Noor helped make me feel better so this update is for her🤗and Divya for pressing the like button on Noor's comment, it didnt go unnoticed by me.🤗
And also for Annwesha youll find out why as you read on...
And a special thankyou to all my readers. thankyou soooooo much for bearing with my horrible and ameture writing.🤗
anyway heres the next part....with some of the PHreaming gang too😛
Part 6- Special Update
At the end of the song everyone was laughing and as happy as ever. After an exhausting day they all decided to go to sleep and carry on the next day.
Noor' Oh, im soooo tired' stretching her arms out wide
Annwesha went straight to sleep too along with everyone else
Everyone had gone to sleep.....or had they?
Slowly Heer crept out from her tent along with Meher and Neha. Waqas, Prem and Preet crept out from their tent. Bhoomika, Sonia, Hifza and Noor crept out of their tents. Slowly by slowly everyone emerged from their places as quiet as possible incase they woke a special sleeping person.
(the scene fades away....what happening?)
the sun rose and gave out all its radiance filling the sky with brightness. Annwesha was the first to wake up. She was really happy.
It was the 9th of October, Her BIRTHDAY! She thought everyone must have been preparing something for her so she decided to check.
She rose from her tent to find NOTHING!
She looked in the tents to find them all asleep
Annwesha' Why are they all asleep? Theyre such lazy bones
She decided to lay down until eveyone woke up.
Nikhita was the first to wake up followed by Naina. They freshened up and got something to eat.
They said nothing about her birthday so Annwesha started a conversation
'its october isnt it?'
Naina ' yes.
Annwesha' Did something happen in October?
Naina' Yes, The battle of Hastings took place in 1066
Annwesha' Yeah, i know but something on the 9th of October...im sure something happened
Nikhia' I dont know lets ask the rest of the guyz as theyre all awake
Sonia came towards them
Nikhita' Did something happen on the 9th of october?
Sonia' let me think........yeah,in 1876 the first 2-way telephone conversation, 1st over outdoor wires on this day in history.
Annwesha realised this conversation wasnt going to go anywhere as they didnt remember so she headed off to get breakfast. But what she didnt know was that were just teasing her and they obviously knew what Annwesha was referring to.
in the evening, they decided to go for a walk in the woods. Mr. Jones did the register.
' Noor,Namrata, Hifza, Khatija, Sadhna, Harpreet, Naina, Sia, Mimi, Neha, Bhoomika, Nikhita, Ayesha, Sneha, Sonia, Heer, Meher, Vishwa, Yaz, Waqas, Preet, Prem, Natasha, Fatima, Greeshma, Sukruta, Kavya
everyones here so lets go'
Everyone set off. They were in their groups and started to look around. They were all excited when they heard Heer scream. They look ed around and she wasnt there Prem got worried so he told everyone to stay there. Afew moments had passed and they hadnt returned. Preet decided that he would go to check. he didnt return so meher went too and slowly by slowly everyone left until there was only Sia and Annweash left.
Sia' Oh, im so.... scared.... what if they have been eaten by some tiger (she was only pretending to be scared)
Annwesha' Dont be daft, there dont be tigers here
though she was beginning to get freaked out.
Sia' My mum loves me, i miss her soooo much
Annwesha' calm down, no..nothing...will..happen
she was shaking
they were in the middle of nowhere and didnt have a clue where to go. Sia tried to tease her more by sitting on the floor and shaking and pretending to cry she buried her head in her laps and was actually laughing.
After what felt like a long time, Sia decided to head back
Sia' lets go that way maybe they're there or we might find some help.
Annwesha just nodded and held onto Sia.
They walked and walked until they came to some bushes. Annwesha was getting scared as it was pretty dark now. They pushed past the bushes when......... Annwesha screamed. She had the shock of her life. She opened her eyes to realise it only her friends and what were they doing?
they had planned a party for her. Annwesha was so happy her eyes filled with tears. She hugged everyone and they all told her about their plan.
Annwesha started to chase Sia when she found out that she had only been kidding about getting scared.
Vishwa bought the cake and they all sang happy birthday.
Annwesha' thanx everyone, this is the best birthday ever.
She was about to blow out the candles when Neha pushed her and her face landed in the cake.
Noor' Well thats the true taste of double Chocolate fudge cake, dont you think? Get right into it
and she started to laugh
Annwesha'Guyyyz! Stop it, well it is yummy
and she started to lick the cake of the side of her mouth.
Mimi' im hungry, i want some
and she grabbed a handful of cake and shoved it in her mouth
Greeshma saw and couldnt resist so she did the same.
Annwesha grabbed a handful and rubbed it all over Neha's face
Yaz' Say cheese
as she took photos of them
Vishwa' oh really
and in no time yaz was on the floor laughing her head off with a chocolate smudged face.
Sonia' you didnt even make a wish! Hang on
she took out 2 cakes now make your wish.
Annwesha closed her eyes and made a wish. She blew the candles out while everyone sang to her.
Hifza' Present time. Come on Annwesha open your gifts. So Annwesha opened her gifts.
Noor' i got you sugar free sweets as i thought your already too sweet and i dont want you to get diabetes.
Annwesha' My little pumpkin, what do i say to you? come here
and she hugged her really tight.
Prem, Preet and Waqas came along with their gift. It was made by their own bare hands. It was a necklace made out of leaves along with a tiara.
Prem' Here you are, you look just look like a princess now
and he hugged her along with Preet and Waqas.
Annwesha' Thankyou! this is the best gift ever. ill keep it for the rest of my life. Thats sooo sweet and adorable of you.
Everyone gave their gifts turn by turn.
Prem' now for the awards, firstly the bubbly friend and the award goes to ..... Noor
Noor' Oh, thanx for this award, i really appreciate it.
Heer' Now for the talkative award..... Neha
Neha' OMG, i was soo not expecting this thankyou guyz well you know i just want to say thanx to my mom, my sister my friends and.....
Hifza' Yeah, you really deserve this award (starts to laugh)
Prem' the most outgoing award goes to..... Khatija
Heer' the most imaginative award goes to....... Sukruta
Heer' The most supporive award goes to.... And i really agree with this because she supported me too.......Mimi
The awards were all given out.
Sia and Kavya got given the best friends award.
Everyone was holding an award in their hands except Prem and Heer.
Annwesha cleared her throat' Now i would like to give an award to best couple here....i think we all know who it is......Prem and Heer!
Prem and heer were shocked and embarrassed.
Annwesha whats all this? asked Heer
Annwesha' Its not only me giving this award its from all of us.
Prem and Heer got their award and later on Heer was staring at it, thinking if what everyone said was true. Prem came over to her.
Prem' So youre still looking at it, Come on Heer
Heer' What! its my first award leave me alone
Prem' Its a joint award, without me you wouldnt have got
Heer' whatever
Namrata came over
Namrata' lets have a photoshoot. its a time to remember and itll be fun. They took really weird pictures really really weird and wacky pictures. it was a time to remember forever.
the day once again ended in an abundance of happiness.
sorry... i couldnt give everyone an induvidual award as i couldnt think of enough catagories but really i wish to give all my readers a very special award.
Edited by pwincess1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mine!!
awww My jaan..
Best Of Luck!! take medicine plz!!
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HHMMmm😳!! wah jee wah!! Kya baat hai ap ki!!
chah gaye tussi tou😆😆
Great and Lovely Part!! though it was short but thats Realy sweet of u to write update for her and dedicate it to her!!😳!! U r Sweetest!!😛
Awesome!!👏👏👏👏
Edited by Noor_PremHeer - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Noor_PremHeer

Mine!!

awww My jaan..
Best Of Luck!! take medicine plz!!

sorry
i really tried to update but i really feel sick🤢
anywayz thanx
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pwincess1

sorry

i really tried to update but i really feel sick🤢
anywayz thanx

AWWwww!! Get well soon!!
Love ya!!
its okay!! nothing is more important than u!!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Noor_PremHeer

AWWwww!! Get well soon!!

Love ya!!
its okay!! nothing is more important than u!!😳

youre the best! 🤗

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