FF.Tere bin na lage mera mann-chp 15 pg 69[18/08] - Page 9

Originally posted by: Prem4everRamsha

nice one!!! i wonder why prem and heer hate each other??

and why prem hates gayatri??

Its so sad teji has tumor :(

wow i loved the attittude of prem's it was so superb :)

welll thanks for the pm!!

pm me when you update!!

do update soon!!

Love,

Ramsha

Originally posted by: 0711rokxoxo

OMG surya di!! Y do u leave me breathless!!??

First of all you prologue scared me to death...like holy fugical

being Preet's wife!!!! But then I went to reading the chapter

which was certainly filled with loads of humour and intensity

the descriptions were just amazing!!

I love the way Prem and heer interact and the cute scenes between

Teji n her daughters...

its sad tht Teji has brain tumour but i m sure that heer n meher

donno abt it...snif snif

anyways do update soon

cuz i m dieing to read here

Originally posted by: Noor_PremHeer

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Originally posted by: iheartChai

Great 1st chapter! I'm very intrigued as what's going to come next.

Thanks for including more English this time around.

So far love Prem's character and Heer's too. Different is always good.

Can't wait for the next update.

Originally posted by: 0577jj

Delightful beginning'..⭐️⭐️

Heer started day with unknown face but his loving gestures in her dream

Teji & daughters sketeched on loving relation'..

mother & daughters worried abt how to cope the future '.

Heer's dislike on Gayatri's aid relate to Prem'

Long hair plays a nice part in story & eager abt why Heer adamant on short hair'sure it to relate Prem '.

Prem & Preet siblings talks'.. preet giving threat on facing Heer alone changes Prem from his plan'.. so Prem have soft corner on that portion of Gayatri's decision 'nice'.

Prem - Gayatri sequence natural way u described -a loving step mother who tried & tired on gaining her son's love.but still she persist ' loved the water scene b/w Gayatri & Prem Lalit silently tracing the effect of 'Heer' word on prem's attitude'..

Elevator scene & bracelet tugged on to Prem ' story kicked in right way'.

Anger talk b/w Prem & Heer 'The half word out from Heer ' it shows the possession that person holds on her life even in anger'..

Tremendous move with an entirely new approch given to characters'..👍🏼

Continue the Good work soon'.😊

Originally posted by: kptl

tat was mind blowing....
nd luv preet nd prem prt dat was awesome...
nd meher nd heer was tooo....this foursome are rocking.....
jst luv it....
even in anger she shout prem's name lol...

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

nice part!

but lot of confusions are there!

there are lot of mysteries to be discovered!

but really enjoying this new concept!

continue soon!

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

awesome


thnx 4 the pm



update soon


Kamal

Originally posted by: aaminaman

really nice update hmm totally different prem and heer and wat about preet he seems to be more cared about heer

Originally posted by: NIMMY

what an update yaar

Heer dreming about some1 and Meher usko utha deti hai

Prem he doesnt likes G3

and pata nahi heer se kya dushmani hai

aur yeh preet heer se milne ko mara ja raha hai........

aur woh braclet scene..........haye main maar jawan