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awe Prem wants to marry girl of his moms choice..........

Lovely concept….😊

Prem, Sanjana & Rajveer childhood buddies –intresting

Heer against concept of marriage…..

Basement u ploted for story is wonderful….

Waiting for the formation of 'ZINDAGI'

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Shot 1

First day in MBA class.

Prem and Rajveer are sitting in a bench behind Sanjana. Seat next to Sanjana is empty. Prem is busy in his mobile playing games. Rajveer is looking around with the hope of finding a girl for him. Sanjana looked at Rajveer, teasingly 'Raj you won't get a girl.' Pointing her seat next to her 'this is going to be empty for next 2 years.' Rajveer 'don't say like that. My queen of heart will come.' Sanjana 'let see you have the guts to join our gang.' She whispered 'interestingly she has to love you.' she giggled. Rajveer gave angry look to her.

A girl entered the class hugging two note books. A small hand bag is hanging in her shoulder. She stood near the door and looked around. She is wearing a simple light blue color salwar and dupatta around her neck. Her hair neatly tied at the back. She saw a vacant place. She walked towards Sanjana.

Rajveer excited 'she is coming here only.' Sanjana 'Rajveer, are you gone mad. She looks like a village girl. Look at her dress. Very simple.' Rajveer 'but neat.' He pleade 'Please, Sanjana.' Sanjana gave a cheap look 'you and your taste.' Heer kept her note books on the table and sat next to Sanjana with a sweet smile.

Rajveer got excited. He signed Sanjana to talk to her. Sanjana 'hi, I'm Sanjana.' Girl smiled. 'hi, I'm Heer.' Before they continue further, professor entered the class. The half a day went hectic for them with introduction and some lecture.

When the bell for lunch rang, Sanjana 'Heer, come we'll go and have our lunch.' Heer picking up her note books got up. Sanjana looked back 'Heer, he is Prem.' Prem and Heer exchanged 'hi' and smile. Sanjana 'he is Rajveer.' Heer 'hi.' Ranjveer gave a little shy smile 'hi'. Sanjana 'we 3 are neightbours and studying together from KG.' Heer 'very nice.' Rajveer tried to talk but Sanjana signed him to be quiet. She whispered 'don't get excited you will spoil everything.'

Prem and Sanjana are always danced together in all the family parties. Rajveer is left alone. When Rajveer saw Heer, he decided to accept her as partner so that he need not to spend time alone.

Prem, Sanjana, Rajveer and Heer went to the canteen. They sat in their regular place and ordered their food. Sanjana 'Heer, what do you want?' Heer 'I don't want anything.' She pulled out her tiffin box from her bag and kept it on the table. Prem looked at her and went back to concentrate on his mobile with a smile. Sanjana 'oh you brought from home. From t'row no need to bring that. Here we'll get nice food. We are regularly eating here.' Heer 'but I don't like eating outside.' Sanjana thought 'she is a tough girl' she gave a doubtful look to Rajveer. Prem doesn't care to look at the scene. He is simply tapping his finger on the table and looking around.

As others got their food, all started eating. Heer ate her home food. Its curd rice and pickle. Sanjana made her face like she saw something bad 'curd rice?' Heer 'ha. I love curd rice.' Prem let out a giggle. Rajveer looked at him with confusion.

When Heer went to wash her hand, Prem whispered to Rajveer 'she is not a girl for you, my boy.' Sanjana too felt the same. She shook her head in acceptance. Rajveer 'please guys help me to get her. Except her no one seems to be beautiful in our class.' Prem shrugging his shoulder 'I can't help you. Its between you and Sanjana. Don't pull me into this stupid mess. I hate these kinds of helps.' He got up 'either you have to marry a girl chosen by your parents or you have to love one. Choosing a girl just for dancing and roaming around is stupid thing.' He walked out.

After the lunch, afternoon session started. Mostly all the students are in half sleep. Sanjana scribbled something to keep herself awake. Prem is busy checking mails in his mobile. Rajveer pretended to be listening the lecture just to give good impression to Heer. Heer is the only person in the class actively taking notes. Professor got excited seeing Heer sincerely taking notes and continued the lecture enthusiastically.

After the college hours, Prem left in his car. Rajveer forced Sanjana to drop Heer at her home. Sanjana uninterested 'Heer, I'll drop you at home'. Heer 'thanks Sanjana. But I can manage on my own.' She left without waiting for further conversation. Rajveer disappointed. Sanjana 'she is impossible Rajveer.' Rajveer 'this is our first day with her. please for me.' He pleaded. Sanjana half heartedly 'we'll see.'

Heer walked to her father's shop which is 15 minutes walk from her college. Balraj is also a big man few months back. he owned a big textile shop in the city. Garments are sold daily for lakhs. His elder daughter Visaka married Manmeet. It's a love marriage. Manmeet started asking money from Balraj torturing Visaka. He is a drunkard. Atlast to save his daughter's marriage life, Balraj sold his big textile shop and gave the money. But he couldn't save his daughter from committing suicide. Visaka set herself fire unable to tolerate Manmeet's torture.

Balraj lost everything now. After few months, for Heer he decided to start his business again. By selling all Teji and Heer's jewels he rented a small shop and started the textile shop in small level. His experience in that field helped him to earn for their daily life and Heer's studies. Heer wanted to do MBA so that she can help her father to come back in his business. But she totally lost interest in marriage.

Heer entered the shop. Balraj 'how is your college beti?' Heer keeping her things away 'its okay bapuji. I got 3 friends.' During day time Teji comes to help Balraj. After college Heer helped Balraj in sales. She arranged some dresses. She tallied day's accounts. Heer 'Bapuji, we have to buy few more latest fashion designed dresses to attract crowd.' Balraj 'this Saturday we'll try to get some based on the money we have.' Around 9.30 they closed the shop and headed towards their home.

Prem after college he went to his father's office. He helped him some works and returned home around 8. He finished his dinner and went to his room. He recollected his first day in class. Heer face came into his front. 'she seems to be reserved girl. Why this Rajveer is trying to get her attention?' he smiled 'he is going to get disappointed.' he closed his eyes.

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awsum update...lukin forwrd to it......

Rajveer phele nazar mein hi heer ka deewana..........not done........Prem toh usko bhaoo v nahi de raha hai..........

aww lol one look nd prm imaginnig abt herr awww
ndd lollll prm is a mobile addict or whtt all time on mobileee