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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: monaghosh

AWSOME👏PLZ MAKE THIS FF A ROMANTIC MEET FF & CONTINUE😆

Thanks! and yeh ill try my best dear 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks to everyone for commenting!! I really really appreciate it.

Originally posted by: brainychild92

omg thankyou!!i've been looking for a meet ff to read since ever..lol i really miss em..lol so as u can tell.. i am going to love this..lol.. love how u made meher the STRONG one.. finally someone standing up to dj1

continue soon and plz pm me hwen u do..

I miss them too 😳 and yeah i wanted Meher to be the strong one for a change.
Im happy u like the concept. 😃 Will add u to PM list

Originally posted by: deepa101

Thanx for adding me to the pm list! Can't wait to read ur ff!!!!!😃

Thanks for commenting! I can't wait to update 😊

Originally posted by: unknown18

Nice concept!!! I loveeeeeee Meet too:D my fav Jodi! Plz add me to the pm list:)

Thank you! 😃 Yeah i noe same here- i luv them too ..

Originally posted by: foxi

hi...i jus love Meet.....they are tooo cute...nice concept...i like the strong meher..she'll give a hard time to Dj...looking forward to the meet moments....pls add me to your pm list

They r the cutest couple ever 😃😳 .. glad u like Meher in this ff.. shes pretty diff. then she is in the show. Thanks for the support 😊

Originally posted by: -salma-

great concept ........i liked it very much
love meeeeeeeeeeeeeet
waiting for the update!!

Thank you! Dont worry, i wont keep u waiting. the update will be up soon 😛

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

awwweome

add me 2 d pm list plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
continue soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Thank youuuuuuuuuu!!!!! ill be updating today so u wont have to wait too long 😃

QUOTE=sherma]nice concept.really like the jodi. pls update soon

Thanks! Yea ill update very soon! 😃

QUOTE=Mus@]hi have red ur ff concept and it's wonderful wanna know what will happen when meher will come O it would b soo exciting so plz plz add me in ur pm list i would reallly like to read ur every ff update
thanku
take care and update soon waiting eagerly
bye 😊

Thanks so much for liking it and commenting! Will update soon and i iwll pm as soon as i do 😃

Originally posted by: monaghosh

AWSOME👏PLZ MAKE THIS FF A ROMANTIC MEET FF & CONTINUE😆

Thanks! and yeh ill try my best dear 😳

Thanks again to everyone who replied, ur comments really bring a smile to my face. 😃 Next part will be up in a couple minutes

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 1

Meher- Taxi!!
A yellow taxi pulled up beside a girl. As the taxi pulled up Meher quickly put her luggage inside and sat inside. She rummaged inside her purse until she found the address of the Junejas.
M- Mujhe yahan pe jaana hain.
she showed the taxi driver and sat inside. thinking why did it have to be such a hot day. Looking down at her cute pink anarkali suit she realized that it was certainly a bad idea to wear such heavy clothes and she felt herself wishing the comfort of her sweatpants and tanktop. It seemed like forever until she finally reached the Juneja's mansion. As she took out her luggage she admired its grandess. It was huge! She payed the taxi driver then rolled her luggage towards the front door. She rang the doorbell excitedly. The door opened and their stood her sister, Heer.
Meher- D!!
Heer- Meher!
They both hugged each other tightly, both of them realizing how much they had missed eachother during the four long years.
Heer- Meher tu toh kal aane wali thi nah phir aaj?
Meher- Actually di mein aap ko surprise karna chahti thi isiliye maine bataya nahin ke meri flight change hogayi. Acha aap woh chodiye di aur batayi kaisi hain app!? Aap ko pata hain ek din bhi aisa nahin tha jab maine aap ko miss nahin kia ho.

Heer- Maine bhi tumhe bohat yaad kiya Meher. (wiping away a tear) Lekin ab tu agayi hain na. Ab main bohat khush hoon.

G3 - (Gayatri)- Arre Heer, sab batein bahar hi karlogi yah phir andar bhi bulao gi usse. Itne lambe safar ke baad thak gayi hogi bachari.
H- Ji maa. Aao Meher.
Meher stepped into the house and was immediatley greeted by the G3 and Lalit.
M- Namastey.
She was just about to bend down to touch their feet when Lalit stopped her.
L- iski koi zaroorat nahin hain beta. Humare yahan ladkiyan paon nahin chuti aur waise bhi tu toh meri Balraj ki beti hain.
G3- Jaise Heer humari beti hain waise tum bhi iss ghar ke liye beti se kam nahin ho.
Meher felt overwhelmed by their kind words.
G3- Acha Heer ab jao aur baki sabse milado Meher ko.
L- Haan haan. Sabse introduction karao.
H- Ji bauji. Chalo meher.
Heer lead Meher to the living room. There was obviously a celebration going on as she saw the house decorated and countless people, some dancing to music others gossiping. Of course Meher thought- Indian weddings! The celebrations always started way before. Before Meher could have a second look at the place she felt herself getting engulfed in someones tight embrace. The person had basically jumped on her.
M- OMG Ash! I can't breath yaar!
Ash let go- Sorry Meher. Lekin main apni behan aur apni best friend se itniiii dair bad mil rahi hoon na isilye double kushi.
M- Haan aur agar tumhari wajah se mujhe heart attack ajata toh tumhari double khushi double gham mein badal jati!
A- Aao mein tumhe sab se milati hoon. Actually sabse pehle toh tum apne jiju se milna chahogi na.
M- Of course. Main bhi dekhna chahti hoon ke kaun hain woh bechara jo meri pagal di ke saath shadi karne wala hain.
Heer smacked her on her shoulder- Kya Meher. Tum khabhi nahin sudhrogi.
M- Mazaak kar rahi thi Di.
She surveyed the room.
M- waise Ash tumhe introduction karane ki zaroorat hi nahi paregi. Woh kya hain na, main apni di aur uski choice ko bohat achi tarah se janti hoon. Di woh jo blue sherwani mein khare hain, woh hi hain na, Mr. Prem Juneja!
A- Wah Meher. Ur right.
M- See di! acha main abhi ayi. woh mujhe apne honewale jiju se kuch baat karni hain.
Meher winked at Heer and went towards Prem who was now facing the other way.
She tapped him on the shoulder and coughed her throat. Prem turned around.
M- HI!
Prem looked at her a bit confused- Ji? Aap kaun?
M- Shayad aap ne mujhe nahin pehchane lekin maine toh aapko ek baar dekhke hi pehchan liya! Aap Prem Juneja ho nah! Jisse meri di ke saath shadi ho rahi hain!
Then it hit him. P- Meher! Tum Meher ho na?
M- Teek pehchana Jij!
P- Lekin tum toh kal aanewali thi. Tumne kuch bataya kyun nahin? Hum tumhe air port lene aajate.
M- Woh actually sab mera plan tha. Sabko surprise dene ka. But thanks anyways. Waise aap bilkul waise hi hain jaise meri di aap ke baare mein keh rahi thi.
P- Acha. Toh kya keh rahi thi tumhari behan mere bare mein?
H- Yeh kya baatein ho rahi hain jija saali mein.
P teased- Kuch nahin Heer, woh bas Meher batane wali thi ke tum mere baare mein kya kya kehti ho.
H- Kya?!
M- Wohi nah di jo aap mujhe phone par kehti hein. Yehi ki ke jiju kitne smart hain, handsome hain, aur sweet hain aur-
Heer quickly covered Meher's mouth- Bas karo na Meher. Sabhi baatein aaj hi karlogi. Kal ke liye bhi kuch chordo! Chalo!
Heer dragged away Meher and introduced her to Veera, Kulraj and her kids and then Harman. Meher greeted all of them politely and even cracked a few jokes with Kul who she was already getting along with well. Then Heer told Meher to freshen up and took her upstairs. Meher entered her room.
M- Wow di! Yahan toh sab meri pasand ka hain! Mere favourite colour se leke mere favourite teddies se!
H- Haan woh Prem ka idea tha.
M- Awww. What a sweet jiju i have. TV bhi hain! Matlab mein bore bhi nahin hongi jab aab mujhe chod ke jiju ke saath romance karne jayengi. she teased
Heer punched Meher and told her to shutup.
M- Acha ab main fresh hone jati hoon. Arre di yeh washroom ke toh doh darwazein hain. Yeh doosra darwazan..?
H- Oh haan batana bhul gayi. Yeh doosra darwaza Preet ke room ka hain. Woh tum dono neighbours ho ab! Aur yeh washroom dono room se connect karta hain.
M- Preet? Woh kaun hain di?
Heer smiled- Prem ka chota bhai. Tumhe pata hain aaj agar hum dono ki shadi honewali hai toh woh sirf uski wajah se hain. Sach mein main bohat lucky hoon ke woh mera devhar hain. Acha ab tu yeh sab chod aur jao jaake fresh hojao aur unpacking bhi karlo. Mujhe neeche bohat saara kam para hain. Okay? Aur kisi cheez ki zarrorat hai toh batadena.
With that Heer left the room. Meher immediately started unpacking and just fell back on her bed and didn't realize when she fell asleep.

Preet bustled into his room. It had been a very long day he thought. He immediately went and jumped intop the shower. He soaped up his face and was just about to wash it when he realized that the water had stopped.
P- Ab yeh pani kyun nahin a raha! Zaroor yeh bauji ki harkat hain mujhse badla lene ki.
He opened his eye slightly- OUch!
the soap was in his eyes. He quickly wrapped his towel around his waist promising to take revenge. As of now all he cared was about getting the damn soap out of his eyes.

Meher who had dozed off was startled as she heard a voice.
P- Arre koi hain?? Mujhe paani chahiye.
Meher looked up and immmediately screamed- AAAAAAAaaaaahhhhh!
Preet thinking yeh kiski awaaz hain aur yeh chila kyun rahi hain? He touched his face and remembered he was completely covered in soap. Of course chilai gi Preet. Usne kaunsa tumhara handsome sexy face dekha hain. Uskeliye toh main bhoot lag raho hoonga.
P- Dekho main koi bhoot vhoot nahin hoon. Aur ab aise kyun khari ho. Mere liye paani leke aao jaldi!!
Meher quickly broke out of her trance and rushed to her bedside table and grabbed the jug of water. She came closer to him and then splashed the whole jug of water on his face.
Finally Preet thought. he let the water run down his face then opened his eyes to see his saviour. A girl looking like she was in her twenties looked back at him. Preet was suddenly lost in her brown eyes that were staring back at him horrified. When Preet continued to stare she blinked fervously and looked away trying to ignore him. When he wouldn't stop staring she finally snapped her fingers in front of his face.
M- Excuse me. Par aap kaun hain? Mere kamra mein kya kar rahe hain? Aur woh bhi bina kapre!!
Preet suddenly broke out of his trance and realized what he was doing while Meher turned away again so she wouldn't have to see him. Meanwhile Preet looked down realizing he was still in a towel then at Meher and then ran to the bathroom.
P- Shit!
Yeh mujhe kya hogaye tha uss ladki ke saamne. Pata nahin mere baare mein kya kya soch rahi hogi. Bad mein usse mil ke sorry bol dunga.
Meanwhile Meher just stood there. Wat the hell was that? she thought.

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ So there's my first update! 😃 hope you enjoyed it and weren't too bored. Please do leave a comment and feel freee to critisize. 😊
Edited by xxDaydreameRxx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice first part!!! Luvved the meeting between Preet and Meher🤣!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks 4 the pm. and nice update. really liked meet first meeting. do update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwesome
luv d way meet met 🤣
update nxt prt soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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FANTASTIC👏MEHER IS SO FUN LOVING😃LOVED THE CLOSE BONDING BETWEEN MEHER & HEER👏LOVED THE WAY MEET MET EACH OTHERPREET WAS CONTINUOUSLY STARING MEHER😉YEH TO MEET KE PYAAR KI SHURUWAAT HAI😛WAITING EAGERLY FOR THE REACTION OF PREET WHEN MEHER IS INTRODUCED TO HIM😍PLZ UPDATE SOON & DO PM ME WHENEVER U UPDATE😆
Edited by monaghosh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved it .
do continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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o wow..beautiful.. i am going to love this fanfic!1!1 continue soon!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
loved...it wasn't boring at all....meet encounter was great😃...and they are neighbours ...awsome😳....thx for making it long and for the pm....continue asap
sandeep

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