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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: meetun66

hey srry for not commenting before

bt i love the part
n seriously waiting for the next part
with twist ofcourse

twist it'll throw u into a million piecesss
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
sweet scorpio
,
harshiti8,
kptl,
You guysss ThanQ for hitting the like buttonnn
o nice of u peopleeee
enjoy reading the next partttt😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
Chapter3
Upd@t&

Monaya phone Heer she picks up then they tell her that they were going to Doc Heer says OK

After a lot of fun and small fights with Prem

Heer was driving way back home but then her car just turned off. It was not working.

Heer thought she would walk but then she changed her mind and thought she'd get home quicker with the taxi,

Heer : Taxi ??? She shouts
Taxi stops, the Driver looks Up, He seems very suspicious, He smiles but eyes were telling something else ..
Heer, Walks front of the taxi driver, She tells him the place and he says, Hmmm as a reply, she sits down.

The driver starts driving, The telly news is on, Heer is very much excited about television she gets a bit excited and tells the driver to turn on the volume even louder. Driver does so, the radio is currently talking about a new show replacing a Show from Star Plus and it's current shows fans are going crazy,

Heer : Fan ho to aisa ! Kyun Bhaiiya ?? *grins*

Driver : Sach Kaha Aap Ne !

All of a sudden, the driver starts to drive a bit faster, Heer is stunned but she isn't worried. But after a while the driver goes in another direction where as Heer's house is in opposite direction, Heer screams and tells the driver to stop, He does so, He gets out and tries to pull Heer out, She screams and shouts,

Heer : Leave me otherwise I will scream out loud

He doesn't let go off her, the road is all quiet and not even single sound can be heard not even birds or any kind of animal...

The driver tries to tie Heer with the Ropes, meanwhile Heer decides to stay quiet and see what the driver (kidnapper) tries to do, She plays safe ..

After sometime, a car light can be seen, The driver notices the car coming forward and Heer decides to Scream out loud, Inside the car there are two People, A Guy and a Girl !

Mohit Sehgal and Sanaya

Sanaya: Mohit ?? It looks like that some girl is screaming

Mohit: Yeah but from where is this sound coming?

Sanaya notices the guy trying to kidnap Heer,

Sanaya : Mohit she screams, and Points towards Heer,

Car Stops!! Mohit comes out of the car in a Filmy hero style,

Oyee ! He says to that Kidnapper, the Kidnapper pushes Heer aside and Comes forward,

Driver Tumhare liya Yahi Better Hoga, tum Choop Chap Yaha Se Dafa Ho Jaye, ( you leave from here quirtly)

Mohit : Kyun ?? Mujhse Darte Ho ?? ?? (Why? r u afraid of me??) Are you terrified

Driver : Get lost !

with all his strength, Mohit Punches the guy, At one go He faints *Bravo Mohit* 😃 👏 😛 😊

Sanaya Goes to Heer and Releases her

Heer: Thanx God u two came here otherwise

Just then Prem also comes{dair aye drust aye hehe.}

Mohit: Bro will u drop Heer sissy home

Actually Sanaya's hand it's injured so we were going to the doc but then when we were crossing we just saw her in trouble so{he explains all incident}

Prem nods and then they all leave.

In car:

Prem: You are always fond of such things right. So today you experienced so may be, you had fun there too

Heer: Yeah it was a great blow.

I was scared. But you just don't have a right to make fun of me 4 being scared

Prem: Now get out

Heer: What?? How dare you talk like this with your chum?

Prem: uhh

Heer I mean we've reached so just '.

Heer: U nah

So insensitive

U r impossible and ridiculous and

Prem without even looking once at her just leaves locking the car. Heer tries to open but all in vain. She remains there likely 30 minutes. Prem comes out eating ice cream

Prem :{ opens up the door} Oh I had forgot about you'

Sorry huh

It's the second time in these 3.6 weeks of knowing you right that I have locked you up

Heer: Just don't forget to breathe and eat.

Now clear my way

Prem moves closer to her face looking into her eyes

Heer: eeeww

Eeeee

Preeeeemmmm

She covers his face by her hand pushing it backwards with full vigor

Heer: Stupid

Thickheaded

Imperceptive

Prem: I will just say one word equal to your three

Gals are Dumbos esp my best friend miss. Heer Juneja haha

Prem moves away running into the mansion followed by Heer who is screaming his name with all anger and love mixed voice.

On the other side Mohit nd Sanaya return from the Doc

The two go to Nads Mansion.

Monaya are sitting in the hallway.

Mohit: we'll have dinner then you'll take the medication okay!

Sanaya: ok

Just then he sees her arm

Mohit: Its throbbing you probably nd stinging too right

Sany eat up quickly

You have to take medics too

Sanaya: No!

Mohit: C'mon

They have their food and Mohit makes Sanaya take the tablets by a small effort.

Sanaya: Now tomorrow first thing you will do is to get ur eye sight checked

Because you hit me so brutally.

Mohit:catching his ears: Sorry Sany

Sanaya: Sorry

Huh

Mohit: Sany I am so ashamed I will never forgive myself. If you don't pardon me.

Sany: Oh God! B is right you are so like Heer di so dramatic huh

God save me from this orangutan

Mohit: Ek to mein I m being so nice and you are calling me a monkey

Sanaya: Not monkey an orangutan

Mohit: Monkey and orangutan is the same

It's Okay I know you nd B you too r soooo

Justttt

Now on the other Sideeeee

Prem and Heer

Heer: Prem tumhein toh naa mein dekh lun gee

Ek bar Sanjana ko aaney do

Prem: She's mah Wife she's with meeee

Heer: Tohhhh

What do u mean she's with u

She's with me I m her friend. She trusts me more

Wife ka bacha

Since we were kidsss

Prem: Abhi konsa you've grown

You still are a baby from mind???

**Guys I know its short but my lappyz net explorer is not working well it takes so much time-likely 5-6mins in opening a single page that's why a teeniest weniest update and you know naa now I post longggggggg

But I could not make this a long one

Kuz of another reason too

That is

My exams begin on 23rd august and I have to study too for that purpose too Da ones who know me well know m a bookworm**

Edited by Hajz95 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

**heyyy howzz ittt**

twistttt😉

me 😭twist😛

u twist😛

love aaj kal😳

hows the starstruckk aaj kalll

Edited by Hajz95 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
plzz keh do yeh jhooth hai............yeh nahi ho sakta...............
sanjana prems wife
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
Nice part Haju Good Luck with your exams! 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
all the besttt for examssss
aww kidnapper hihih iprem der ayee durust ayeeee lol
tht get out thng was quite hihihihih

luved their nokjhokkk
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
awesome update
loved it
love the twist
mindblowing
cant wait 2 read more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
sanjana prem's wife????😲😲
nooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
awsum update yar...luved prem heer fight...yar..so cute.... abhi bhi bachi ho....heheheh🤣

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