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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: anuu2010

dear plz continue the ff may be with heer have a child hood friend who wants to marry her like that.or seperate them by accident and both lost memory and starts to hate each other (they both went to unknown place) they do all thinks to dump each other and later fell in love and so onnnnn .dont hit me dear this idea just came .

shivangi plz plz continue the ff we crazy premeerians always ready to read the premeer stories so plz continue.and i couldnot comment for a month as i stopped reading ffs bcoz of my exams and project but sure after a month i will read and comment plz dear dont stop conitune pllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


thanks for ur suggestion!😃

actually I really like ur idea of accident!

I also thought sumthng like that!

ok! I m gonna continue this ff! ajnd with the "accident" story!
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Posted: 14 years ago

will continue!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sankita

yar contiune with this ff,we all r missing ouepremheer badly,and in this bad time only ff are helping us.plz yar continue with this


ok!!!!!! m continuing it!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sadhz

plz plz continue dear.........ok my thinkin power is nt that strong😆..............


I will continue....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

How about "TRUE LOVE"???....you know true love always wins and find its way:)


but I think its name of an ss written by selvy!

btw thanks for ur suggestion!
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Posted: 14 years ago
will try to update today!😊
Edited by shivangi2092 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know I m late but right now I don't have much time so without any bak-bak. Just wanna tell u that there is a little change in the last part of the previous update which I have added in this update.And I wanna say a biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.....g thanks as this ff reached its hundredth page thanks a ton for ur support! 👏Here is the update...

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When he got ready he came out of the bedroom searching for Heer. He saw her working in the kitchen and then without making any noise grabbed her from the waist and nuzzled his lips on her cheeks. She jerked on his sudden touch and when she felt his warm breath against her skin she started loosing her self control. His touch on her bare waist was making her go crazy.

He slowly sided her hair to expose the skin of her neck and shoulder and then started placing deep kisses on the creamy white skin of her neck and shoulder.She was feeling weak in her knees and for support she placed her hands on the kitchen slab.

She moaned softly and when he turned her face on his side and started placing kisses on the front side of her neck.Both of them were lost and He was about to kiss her when the door bell rang.Prem was not in a mood to go and open the door but she insisted him and after a small hug he went towards the door to open that.

He placed his hands on the door knob he was about to open the door when.....

"WAKE UP...WAKE UP...."

His alarm clock rang and he opened his eyes realising that it was a dream he didn't woke up earlier.He was watching a dream and cursed the alarm clock for ending his dream.He pushed the stop button of the alarm clock and rubbed his eyes trying to distinguiah between the dream and reality.

He looked at himself and tried to find whether all that happened was only a dream or real to some extent.He was covered by the blanket and was wearing only his shorts.Then he looked at the bed, the bedsheet was messed up and crushed all over.He smiled to himself and ran his fingers through his hair as he is now confirmed that yesterday night was not a dream.

The very thought of him having Heer close to him raised his body temperature.For him she is the most beautiful girl of the Universe.Her smile,Her almond shaped eyes,her lips,her long hair,her perfect figure and on above all that her beautiful heart all these things made him love her more and more with each passing second.

Then he looked around in the room searching Heer but she was not there.He heard some sounds coming from the kitchen.He quickly got out of the bed remembering his dream.He saw heer busy in preparing black coffee.She was wearing a mauve shade saree which was perfectly draped around her highlighting her curves.His dream flashed in front of his eyes.He smiled a bit and moved forward without making a noise but then he stopped and looked at himself.He checked his breath and then moved back as in the dream heer pushed him away because of his bad breath.He quickly went away from there but with caution to not make a noise and don't let Heer be aware of his presence.

He rapidly opened his Almirah took the towel and his clothes out and ran towards the washroom as he don't want to stay away from Heer even for a second and also don't want anything to come in between them.

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Heer was placing the breakfast on the table.Earlier when she went in their room to wake Prem up She found that he was already in the washroom so she decided to place his coffee and breakfast on the dining table.

Prem came out of the room folding the sleeves of his shirt.His hair were still wet.He was wearing a white shirt with black jeans.He saw Heer placing the breakfast on the table.He went ahead and stood behind her.Heer was still busy in arranging the breakfast and didn't noticed him.Suddenly she turned around and
collided with Prem and by mistake hit him on his chest.

"Ouch!"He winced in pain.

Heer saw him and her cheeks turned the dark shade of crimson.She quickly lowered her eyes.

"sorry" Heer whispered but it was enough for Prem to hear.

"It's ok"He replied with a smirk when he noticed that Heer was feeling shy from him.He was looking at her and wanted to look in her eyes but she was not ready to look in his eyes.

Prem moved forward to capture Heer but she quickly moved from there and grabbed the coffee mug from the table and handed it over to Prem.

Her eyes were still lowered and her cheeks were still red.

Prem took the coffee mug from her hands in one hand.Then she tried to go away.


"kahan ja rahi ho?he asked her and grabbed her wrist.Then he made her sit with him on one chair and sat next to him on the other chair.

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Sorry girls! I can't pm you right now! but plz leave ur comments and press the like button if u like it!
The good news is that I m gonna continue this ff I m still confused with the name so need ur help! njoy!

Edited by shivangi2092 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing!!!!!
though it ws a dream bt it ws very romantic!!!!!
lovd it!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
good u updated but bad the update is shot.........and by the way thx for continuing......

and what is this update is very small and nuthng lovey dovey are twists happened so better u give quick update next time.......and long too

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