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Here is the update guys! sorry for the mistakes . pllllzzzzzzzzzzzz leave ur comments and hit the like button if u like it.



Prem and heer were sitting at the corner table of the hall.They were having their dinner in that hotel.

this dinner was ordered by heer as Prem gave the credit of their success to her only.he praised her choices for the dinner in his mind but didn't say it to her.

for that whole day they celebrated their success.

Heer didn't said or asked about Sanjana to Prem as he was looking very happy and she didn't want to spoil his mood.

after the dinner,Prem took heer to a disco near that restaurant.she never went to a disco before but she agreed to it only for Prem.

Prem also didn't mentioned Sanjana to heer.He did became nervous and felt awkward in the meeting but he can't feel more than that for her.he became quite normal after that meeting.He spent the whole day with heer and enjoyed it to the fullest.

Heer never saw Prem smiling like that for the whole day and she felt proud of herself being the reason behind that.

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Prem and heer were grooving to the beats on the dance floor.The beats were very fast and they were dancing very close to each other.they were in the disco from more than 1 hour now and didn't stop dancing.

throughout their dancing session Prem was smiling and it was only because the smile present on Heer's face.He was just living the moment and looking at heer who was wearing a blue denim jeans with a peach coloured loose shirt.

suddenly someone bumped into Prem from the back.

"Prem juneja right!"the person shouts on top of his voice when Prem turns to look at him.

Prem:Nihal tu yahan?

Prem also screamed in joy.His voice was enough for all the people present there to stop for a moment.but after that all of them were again dancing and enjoying except four people.i.e.Prem,Heer,Nihal and Veera.

they left the floor and stood in a corner.

Nihal hugged Prem to express his happiness.

Nihal: Prem.what a pleasent surprise.Its really good to see you after an year.

Prem:same here yaar.

then he noticed the girl standing with her it was veera.

prem: you are Veera khurana right!

he said pointing towards her.

Veera: no Mr.prem juneja I am Mrs. Veera Nihal Singh.

Prem: You got married?kab? kaise? kahan?


Nihal: yes.we got married.4 months ago.

Prem: this is a really nice surprise for me yaar.I never expected this to happen.

Nihal: well.you should always expect the unexpected.meri chod ye bata tu yahan kaise?

Prem: well I am here for dual purpose first for my business and second for my honeymoon.

Nihal's jaw dropped on this.

Nihal: you got married?kab? kahan? kaise?

Prem: yes.
his smile widened while saying this.
he was about to say more when he got a call from the home and excused himself as he can't hear in the music.

after that Nihal and Veera engaged themselves in talking about their college life and their friendship with Prem.they completely ignored Heer as they don't know her and even didn't noticed her with prem so thought her as just another stranger.


Heer was standing in a corner waiting for Prem to come.she didn't talked to his friends as she felt that first Prem should introduce her to them.

suddenly she felt someone's breath near her ear.then she heard something

"can I get you a drink?"

that person asked her in her ear?

Heer: excuse me! who are you?

she asked giving him a disgusted look.

"chill sweetheart why you are over reacting?

and came more closer to her.

she tried to go away but he caught her wrist and pulled her.

Heer: chodo mujhe!

he came more near to her and now their face was inches away.she realised that he was drunk badly.

"what are the plans for tonight dear.you can join me in my room on my bed."

that was enough for heer.she slapped him hard on his face and pushed him.this made all the guys to stop and look at them the music stopped and heer heard somebody shouting from her behind on her.

"how dare you?"

she turned to look at her.she was sanjana standing behind her fuming in anger.

Sanjana: how dare u slap my brother? tum khud ko samajhti kya ho haan?tum..(paused for few seconds trying to recall something) tum wahi ho na jisne wo contract mujhse cheena!

Heer: haan main wahi hoon.aur tumhara bhai iske layak tha.kash kisi ne pehle use ye thappad maara hota.

by this time heer's eyes became read and her anger increased 100 times when she saw Sanjana.

Sanjana: tumhari itni himmat! achi tarah se janti hu tumhari jaisi ladkiyon ko zaroor tumne kuch kiya hoga.kyunki ye to tumhara shauk hai na! ameer ghar ke ladkon ko phasana.

she was yelling at heer non-stop.

Sanjana:you should look at yourself in mirror once.jiske tum sapne dekhti ho na uske saath khadi hone ki bhi layak nahi ho.

Sanjana lowered her voice and started moving around her in a circle.

Sanjana: Kabhi socha hai tumne ki tum dono ek saath kaise lagte ho? agar wo aasman hai to tum zameen.tum uske saath chalti ho na log tumhe dekhkar hanste hain.tum apne saath uska bhi mazak banati ho.shayad uske servants bhi tumse zyada ache dikhte honge.tum use taqleef aur beizzati(insult) ke alawa aur kuch nahin de sakti.

and she goes on insulting her badly.this was going on when Prem entered in the disc.he saw Heer standing in middle and tears were coming out of her eyes.he saw Sanjana insulting her.his eyes became red with anger and he came near them.

he turned sanjana to face him.

Prem: shut up! just shut your mouth otherwise it will not be good for you.

he said looking into her eyes.

Sanjana: Prem. tumhe nahin pata ki ye ladki kya cheez hai.she betrayed you Prem.

Prem: maine tumse nahin poocha ki ye kaun hai kyunki main ise bahut achi tarah se janta hoon.

Sanjana: Par prem she is not right for you.tumhe nahin pata ki isne kya kiya?

Prem: tum hoti kaun ho mujhe ye batane wali ki kya sahi hai aur kya galat?

Sanjana: prem she was trying to seduce rishabh.

Prem: just shut up. one another word and I will forget that who are you.main apni heer ko ache se janta hoon wo aisa kabhi nahin kar sakti.agar tumne meri heer ke bare mein ab kuch bhi kaha to ye tumhare aur tumhare bhai ke liye bilkul acha nahin hoga.

heer looked at him shocked when he said "meri heer".

Sanjana: meri heer?

Prem: haan meri heer! she is my wife Mrs.Heer Prem Juneja and I love her the most in the world main uski aankhon mein aansu nahin bardasht kar sakta aur aaj uski aankhon mein itne aansu hain tumhari himmat kaise hui use is tarah insult karne ki? oh! I forgot ye tumhari purani aadat hai na.but now kaan khol kar ek baat sun lo agar tumne meri heer ko taqleef dene ke baare mein socha bhi then I will not spare you this time.aur aaj jo hua uske baad to main tumse itni nafrat karta hoon ki tumhari shakal bhi nahin dekhna chahta.

then he clutched heer's wrist and led her outside the disc.he didn't looked into her eyes and heer also didn't tried to say something they sat in the car and went to the home.
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I know that this was quite boring guys but promise you that the next update will be good.pakka promise plz don't kill me this time and pllllllllzzzzzzzzzzz do comment.I am waiting for ur reactions.😃


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Edited by shivangi2092 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

thanks for liking the prevoius post guys! hope u will like the next one also😃

can't believe that 20 people liked it! yippeeee


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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeee too loved it immenselyyyyyyyyyy now waitinggggggg eagerly for next asap
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shirlys

wow its nice................


thanks! and u r welcome here
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeee too loved it immenselyyyyyyyyyy now waitinggggggg eagerly for next asap


thanks! hmmm..last time also the comment was same
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Posted: 15 years ago
who said it ws boring??????
it ws absolutely superb!!!!!!!!
finally prem confessed his love for heer!!!!!!!
nw watng fr some premeer romance!!!!!!!!
hope sanjana wll nt intrude nymore....n doesn't take away the contract also!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part yaar
luved it
thnx for pm

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: moon_mine

who said it ws boring??????

it ws absolutely superb!!!!!!!!
finally prem confessed his love for heer!!!!!!!
nw watng fr some premeer romance!!!!!!!!
hope sanjana wll nt intrude nymore....n doesn't take away the contract also!!!!!!!


thanks yaar!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

nice part ,thanks for pm

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: samrocking30

awesome part yaar
luved it
thnx for pm


thanks!
you are most welcome!😃

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