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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: moon_mine

first of all m very sorry that i didn't see it!!!!!😭

secondly a big congrtatulation to u for ur result!!!!!!! party!!!!!!🥳


n nw comg to the ff.......

well all i cn say s that i simply lovd it!!!!!!!!

premeer my fav couple.....n one whole part dedicated to them widout ny disturbance frm nyone......

wat more can i ask for!!!!😍

i hope prem realises his love for heer asap!!!!!

create more situations where he can deeply luk into her eyes!!!!!


thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago
THIS POST WILL HAVE LINKS OF ALL THE UPDATES OF CHAPTER 4.CLICK ON THE FOLLOWING PARTS IT WILL DIRECTLY LEAD TO THE PAGE.

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Posted: 14 years ago
HERE IS THE NEXT PART GUYS!PLZZZZZZZZZZ LEAVE UR COMMENTS AND DO HIT THE LIKE BUTTON PLZZ IF U LIKE IT.



THEY ARE IN THE ROOM FOR MORE THAN 2 HOURS RIGHT NOW.PREM TOLD EVERYTHING ABOUT HIMSELF TO HER.HE SHARED ALL HIS MEMORIES EITHER GOOD OR BAD WITH HER.HE ALSO NOTICED THAT WHENEVER HE IS TELLING HER A GOOD MEMORY SHE ALSO FELT THE SAME JOY AND WHEN HE TOLD HER ABOUT THE THING WHICH GAVE PAIN TO HIM SHE GOES THROUGH THE SAME PAIN AS HE WAS GOING AT THAT TIME.



ATLAST HE MADE HEER LOOK INTO HIS ALMIRAH. WHEN HE OPENED THAT HEER SAW A 'MANDALIN' PLACED OVER THE CLOTHES.



HEER: TUMHE YE PLAY KARNA ATA HAI!THIS IS MY FAVOURITE INSTRUMENT.


SHE SAID IN EXCITEMENT.


PREM:HAAN! LOG KEHTE THE KI BAHUT ACHA PLAY KAR LETA THA.


HEER: SACH PREM! I JUST LOVE THIS INSTRUMENT.IT'S MELODY IS VERY SOOTHING.PLEASE PREM KYA TUM EK BAAR ISE MERE LIYE PLAY KAR SAKTE HO?




PREM WAS ABOUT TO REFUSE HER BUT WHEN HE LOOKED INTO THOSE BIG CAPTIVATING EYES HE WAS AGAIN LOST IN THEM.THIS TIME HER EYES WERE LOOKING LIKE THAT OF A SMALL CHILD PLEADING FOR SOMETHING.HE WAS JUST STARING AT HER.HE FORGOT ABOUT WHAT SHE IS SAYING OR ANY OTHER THING HAPPENING AROUND HIM.WHAT HE REMEMBERED WAS THAT HE IS LOST IN SOMETHING VERY BEAUTIFUL.



HEER WAS CONTINUOUSLY ASKING HIM TO PLAY THAE MANDALIN.BUT HE DIDN'T REPLIED FOR ONCE INSTEAD HE WAS LOOKING INTO HER EYES AND HE FELT LIKE HE IS LISTENING TO SOMETHING VERY MELODIOUS AND SOFT EVERYTIME SHE SAID ANYTHING TO HIM.


HEER CAN'T UNDERSTAND WHY PREM WAS LOOKING AT HER LIKE THAT.SO SHE PLACED HER HANDS ON PREM'S SHOULDERS AND SHAKED HIM.


HEER:PREM R U ALRIGHT?



PREM: HAAN.


HEER: PREM TUM KAHAN KHO GAYE THE?AGAR TUM NAHIN PLAY KARNA CHAHTE TO KOI BAAT NAHIN.


SHE SAID REALIZING THAT THIS MAY HURT HIM.


PREM: NO.I WILL PLAY IT.


PREM DON'T KNOW WHY HE AGREED TO PLAY BUT HE WAS FEELING UNABLE TO REFUSE HER.HE FEARED THAT IF HE WILL SAY NO TO HER THE CUTE SMILE THAT SHE IS HAVING RIGHT NOW WILL BE LOST AND HIS HEART DON'T WANT TO LET THAT HAPPEN.


SO HE PICKED UP THE MANDALIN AND SAT ON A WINDOW NEAR THE ALMIRAH.HEER ALSO FOLLOWED HIM AND SAT AT THE OTHER SIDE OF THE WINDOW.


THAT PART OF THE ROOM WAS NOT ENLIGHTENED AS MUCH AS THE REST OF THE ROOM BUT AT THAT NIGHT THE MOON WAS FULL AND WAS CLEARLY VISIBLE FROM THE WINDOW.


PREM ADJUSTED HIMSELF THERE COMFORTABLY AND STARTS PLAYING.HEER WAS LOOKING AT HIM WHEN HE STARTED PLAYING UT AS SOON AS SHE STARTED FEELING THE MELODY SHE RESTED HER HEAD AT THE WALL CLOSING HER EYES.


THIS MADE PREM LOOK AT HEER FOR A SECOND.BUT IN THE NEXT MOMENT HIS EYES WERE GLUED AT HEER'S FACE.



'SHE IS SO BEAUTIFUL'.HE THOUGHT.THE MOONLIGHT WAS DIRECTLY FALLING ON HER FACE AND HER FACE WAS LOOKING SO BEAUTIFUL AND INNOCENT IN THE MOONLIGHT.PREM NOTICED THE BEAUTY OF HER FACE FOR THE FIRST TIME.HER FACE WAS LOOKING SO ELEGANT AND BEAUTIFUL THAT PREM CAN'T MOVE HIS EYES EVEN FOR A SECOND.



PREM OBSERVED THE FEATURES OF HER FACE VERY CLOSELY.HER FACE HAS A DIFFERENT CHARM IN IT.HER NOSE WAS JUST SO PERFECT.HER SMALL AND BEAUTIFUL FOREHEAD WHICH ENHANCES THE BEAUTY OH HER FACE.HER CHEEKS WERE LIKE RED ROSES AND THEN HER EYES FALL AT HER SOFT LIPS.THEY WERE APPEARING AS ROSE PETALS.SO SOFT SO BEAUTIFUL THAT HE FELT AN URGE TO TOUCH THOSE ROSE PETALS WITH HIS LIPS.


SUDDENLY WIND STARTED FLOWING DUE TO WHICH HEER'S HAIR CAME TO HER FACE BLOCKING PREM'S VIEW.HE STOPPED PLAYING MANDALIN AND SLOWLY TUCKED HER HAIR WITH HIS HAND.



THIS MADE HEER OPEN HER EYES.SHE SAW PREM LOOKING AT HER.SHE CAN'T REACT EXACTLY BUT JUST LOOKED INTO HIS EYES AND PREM WAS LOOKING INTO HER EYES.



PREM: KYA TUMHE PEHLE KISI NE KAHA HAI HEER KI TUMHARI AANKHEN BAHUT KHOOBSURAT HAIN.

HE SAID IN A TONE NEAR TO THAT OF A WHISPER.

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb!!!!!!
another part of premeer only!!!!!
too good!!!!!
n too romantic!!!!!
thnx that u creatd so many chances of prem to see heer's eyes!!!!
so finlly prem hs realised that heer s beautiful!!!!!
nyws watng for the nxt part nw......where there wud be more premeer scenes....as this session s nt yet complete!!!!!
hai na?????
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: moon_mine

superb!!!!!!

another part of premeer only!!!!!

too good!!!!!

n too romantic!!!!!

thnx that u creatd so many chances of prem to see heer's eyes!!!!

so finlly prem hs realised that heer s beautiful!!!!!

nyws watng for the nxt part nw......where there wud be more premeer scenes....as this session s nt yet complete!!!!!

hai na?????



YES! THIS IS NOT THE END YET.BTW THANKS FOR UR COMMENTS.
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Posted: 14 years ago

nice ff..........do continue soon...........pls pm me when u update next..........

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part.............loved it..........prem played mandalin for heer sooooo sweet...........thnx for pm.......................eagerly waiting for nxt part...............................
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 14 years ago
shivangi di nyc 1 de only reason i call u di coz i 2 years smaller to u 👏👏👏 prem is experiencing wat love is 😳

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