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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sadhz

nice ff great 1.....................
update soon................... do pm me

thankyou friend😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: snehaheer21

hey plse add me i want noe wat happened to heer dat nyt hope sumthing doesn't happen between crap rishab and heer

thanx dear😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hajz95

awesome😃 conti soon😉 love this ff

thanx dear😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi people! Here is the next part and it is very long. Sorry I didn't update yesterday as I was not able to complete this chapter. Anyway enjoy reading! This part is the continuation of the flashback.

PART 4

Heer was trapped between Rishabh and the wall.

" Aj tum mujhe akele mil he gaye. Humesha Prem ke saath he rehti ho aur mujhe ignore karti rehti ho tumhein pata hai ke how much it hurts me. You are so hot Heer. Tum shalwar suits main bhi hot lagti ho. Bohot gussa ata hai jab tum mujhse baat bhi nahin karti. Prem tumhein aisa kia deta hai haan? Mujhe bhi batao. Heer plz just sleep with me for once." Rishabh says while moving his fingers seductively allover Heer's face then to her neck and removed the dupatta from her neck. Heer shouts for help when her dupatta falls on the floor.

Heer said disguestingly, "You are insane."

Rishabh angrily said, "INSANE! Tum mujhe pagal samjhti ho."

Rishabh moved his hands down to Heer's waist and he started coming closer to her to catch her lips.

Heer shouted, "HELP."

Rishabh got angry and slapped Heer due to which her head hit the ground and started bleeding. A fresh stream of tears started flowing from her eyes.

Rishabh lied on top of Heer and she started hitting him in an effort to save herself from this monster.

She shouted while protesting, "PREM!"

Prem on the other side very difficultly saved himself from that chipko girl.

Prem heaved a sigh, "Phew baj gaye."

He started looking for Heer, he went to an empty corridor. He heard a sound of a girl shouting for help then he recognized the voice it is of Heer. Prem reached in front of the room and he can clearly see the scene in front of him through the window. Prem shouts, "HEER!"

Rishabh said, "Come-on Heer only once main tumhare saath zabardasti nahin karna chahta."

Rishabh heard someone is taking Heer's name. He turned around and found Prem there. Heer took this opportunity and pushed him. She saw Prem and shouted, "Prem!"

Prem hit his fist on the glass window and it broke he jumped through it. Heer ran to him and hugged him. She started crying, "Acha hua Prem tum aagaye warna Rishabh mere saath." And hugged him again.

Prem asked, "Kia karne ki koshish ki is ne tumhare saath?"

Heer told him the entire story that what Rishabh had tried to do with her. Prem blood boiled, his eyes red in anger, his hands into a fist. He went near Rishabh and started beating him like he'll take life out of this monster. While hitting Rishabh he said, "Toone MERI HEER ke saath zabardasti karne ki koshish ki. Himmat kaise hui usay haath lagane ki."

Heer was looking at Prem in shock when he said 'Meri Heer'. Heer had never seen Prem this angry in her whole life. Heer can see possessiveness in this Prem.

Heer held Prem's shoulder as he was beating Rishabh like a mad man. Heer is afraid if Prem kills him then what will be the consequences.

Heer said, "Bas karo Prem plzz. Wo marjayega."

Prem hit Rishabh's head on the wall and says, "Marne do usne tumhein choone ki himmat ki hai. Main nahin churunga."

Heer said, "Prem tumhein meri qasam churdo usay plzz."

When Prem heard this he instantly leaves Rishabh and points his finger to him, "Sirf Heer ki wajah se chur raha hun warna main tujhe khatam kardeta. Ainda agar aisa kuch karne ka socha bhi to mardunga. YAAD RAKHNA!"

Prem took Heer's dupatta which wa lying on the floor and puts around her shoulders, he lookrd at the wound which was bleeding, took out a handkerchief from his pocket and tied around Heer's head and put his arms around Heer's shoulder assuring her that she is completely save now.

Both was leaving the place when they heard Rishabh saying, "Tumne aj jo mujhe itna mara hai na Prem uska badla main lekar rahunga. Jo zakham aj tum mujhe dekar ja rahe ho na Prem wo to kuch waqt main khatam hojayenge liken jo zakham main tum donun ko dunga wo zindagy bhaar tum logon ko dard dega."

Prem was about to go and hit him but Heer held his wrist and said, "Leave Prem."

~~**~~

When the news went to the principal of the university he expelled Rishabh at once. Prem brought Heer to her house. Prem rang the bell Teji opened the door. Teji when saw Heer's forehead which has been bandaged she asked worriedly touching Heer's forehead, "What's wrong Heer?"

Heer not able to control herself hugged Heer and cried like a little kid.

Teji asked hugging her, "Kia hua Prem? Heer aise ro kyun rahi hai?"

Prem said, "Wo Teji ma aj uni main Rishabh ne Heer ke saath'" and told her the whole story.

Teji made Heer sit on the dining table and said, "Bohot acha hua ke principal ne usay uni se he nikal dia. Acha hua Prem ke to waqt per agaya warna pata nahin wo Rishabh meri bachi ke saath kia karta. Cheee! Bas kar Heer ab rona band kar sab kuch theek hai na." pacifying Heer although she was crying herself.

Heer wiped her tears and plastered a smile on her face. Prem knew Heer very well that she was only smiling for her mother so just to make her genuinely smile. He said, "Khane ki to bohot achi khushboo arahi hai. Aj apne khane main kia banaya hai Teji ma?"

Teji wiped her tears and said, "Aj to sab Heer ka favourite banaya hai maine."

Prem frowned and said, "Heer ka favourite. Eww! Phir to bilkul bhi acha nahin bana hoga."

Heer said angrily, "Chup raho. Mera taste tumse acha hai. Samjhe?"

Prem said, "Haan wo to pata hai jabhi main tumhara dost hun aur mera taste bohot bura hai jabhi tum meri dost ho." And ducks his head as Heer raised a glass to throw on him but instead of throwing the glass she started laughing.

Prem heart danced in joy when he saw Heer laughing he said, "Hansti raha karo achi lagti ho."

Heer's cheeks turned pink which didn't remain unnoticed by Prem, he said, "Are you blushing?"

Heer choked, "Nahi to." And drunk water trying to hide her blush.

Prem said, "Come-on Heer don't lie. Tumhein pata hai ke tum mujhse jhoot nahin bolsakti."

Heer hesitantly nodded and said, "Wo tumne kabhi meri tareef nahi ki na first time sunkar thora sa ajeeb laga."

Prem chuckled, "Don't take that seriously Heer main to sirf tumhein khush karne ke liye mazaq kar raha tha." And laughed.

Heer mouth wide open in shock but she too started laughing with him.

Thode Badmash Ho Tum

Thode Nadan Ho Tum
~~**~~
Prem and Heer were watching tv sitting on the sofa and suddenly Heer felt something heavy on her shoulder she looked at it and found Prem's head resting on her shoulder. Heer smiled at how he looked like a little kid when he is sleeping. She held his face in his hand stood from the place and made Prem lie comfortably on the sofa, she covered him with a blanket and sat on the floor and looked at his face lovingly. And remembered all the moments they had spent together in which they had fought together, smiled together and Prem saving Heer from Rishabh and Prem's words 'MERI HEER ke saath zabardsti karni ki koshish ki' still echoed in Heer's ears and went to her room but before entering her room she looked at Prem once again.
Thode Badmash Ho Tum
Thode Nadan Ho Tum
Haan Magar Yeh Sach Hai
Hamari Jaana Ho Tum
~~**~~
Heer went to Prem who was sleeping on the chair and started waking him up, "Utho Prem."
Prem like a kid, "Soone do Heer."
Heer smiled at his childesshness and said, "Utho Prem."
But Prem was not ready to wake up so an idea popped into her mind and she grinned mischievously. She went to her room and brought a bucket full of water. She asked Prem for the last time, "Prem uth rahe ho ya nahin."
Prem said, "Nahin,"
Heer said naughtyily, "To ab bhookto." And poured all the water on Prem.
Prem instantly woke up and started running behind Heer, "Heer ki bachi ruk ja. To nahin bajegy ab. Main nahin churunga."
Heer said, "Pehle pakro to sahi."
Both got tired and fell on the sofa and started laughing.
Prem said warningly, "Iska badla ek din zarur loonga."
Heer said, "Dikhenge."
Prem looked at wall clock and said, "Arey yaar 7 bajh gaye hain. 8 baje tak uni bhi jana hai tum na Heer tum bhi abhi tak tayyar nahin hui?"
Heer said hesitantly, "W-Wo Prem main aj uni nahi jarahi."
Prem brows furrowed and he said, "Kyun nahin jarahi? Kahin iski wajah kal ka incident to nahin."
Heer looked down as Prem was right. Prem put his hand on Heer's shoulder that gave Heer an electric shock allover her body, "Heer kal jo bhi hua usay bhool jao. Ab to Rishabh bhi wahan nahi hoga."
Heer, "Prem wo"
Prem cut in, "Heer agar tum logon se darr rahi ho to mat daro wo tumhein kuch nahin kahenge kal jo hua us main tumhari koi galti nahin hai aur waise bhi main humesha tumhare sath hun." And put his hand on Heer's hand reassuring her that he is always with her.
Prem said, "Acha ab main ghar se ready hokar uni pohonchta hun tum wahan chali jana. Ok."
Prem was heading at the door when Heer stopped him, "Arey Prem nashta to karke jao."
Prem said, "Heer waise he itna late horaha hai warna main Teji ma ke haath ka bana khana kabhi miss nahin karta."
Heer said, "Magar Prem tum khali pait."
Prem cut in, "Don't worry Heer canteen main kuch khaloonga. Pakka! To ab main jaon."
Heer nodded and Prem left.
Thode Badmash Ho Tum
Thode Nadan Ho Tum
Haan Magar Yeh Sach Hai
Hamari Jaana Ho Tum
~~**~~
Heer was waiting for Prem at the corridor dressed in a white shalwar suit which is Prem's favourite colour. She had done minimial make up and let her hair loose open it was for the first time she did this only for her Prem.
Prem came and tapped at her shoulder, "Hey Heer."
When Heer turned Prem was speechless he never saw her in such attire. He has seen her in shalwar suits but her hairs falling on her shoulders which Heer always made it in a ponytail and those eyes which were always beautiful but now they were different showing something different and her face were glowing with some unknown beauty.
Prem said, "Heer tum aj kuch ziada he different lag rahi ho. I mean you are looking beautiful."
Heer smiled and looked down shyly. Prem felt some unknown feeling rosed in him when Heer put her thick eyelashes down. Prem was staring at her like a mad man. Heer raised her head and both eyes met. They were looking into each other eyes lost in the world of love.
Meri Saanson Ki Jhankar Ho Tum
Mera Solah Shringar Ho Tum
Meri Aankhon Ka Intezar Ho Tum
Meri Emaan Meri Shaan Mera Maan Ho Tum
Both came into senses when they heard the bell ringing.
Prem said, "Class start hogaye. Jaldi bhaago."
Both ran to the class to attend the lecture.
~~**~~
Prem and Heer after attending the lecture came out of the classroom. Prem whistled as he saw a girl passing by them wearing a mini skirt. Heer looked at him angrily as she felt jealous and hit on Prem's shoulder.
Prem while massaging his shoulder, "OUCH! Ye kis liye tha?"
Heer glared at him, "Us larki per seeti marne ke liye. Tum kabhi nahi sudhar sakte,"
Prem said naughtily, "Kuch jalne ki boo arahi hai."
Heer looked at him and said, "Main nahi jaal rahi hun."
Prem said, "Maine kab kaha ke tum jaal rahi ho. Maine to sirf ye kaha ke kuch jaalne ki boo arahi hai."
Heer was speechless. Prem said, "Dikha got you."
Heer looked at him angrily and said, "Jao main tumse baat nahin kar rahi hun." And started moving faster.
Prem shouted, "AREY Heer main to mazaq kar raha tha." He speeds up his pace and blocked Heer's way, he said, "Plz maaf kardo." And held his ears making a puppy dog face.
Heer smiled and ruffled his hairs, "Ok maaf kia."
Thoda Beimaaan Ho Tum
Thode Saitaan Ho Tum
Thoda Beimaaan Ho Tum
Thode Saitaan Ho Tum
~~**~~
Heer entered the kitchen where her mother was about to start cooking. Heer thought of cooking something special for Prem but the problem is she doesn't know how to cook food. She called her mother lovingly, "Ma aj kia pakh raha hai?"
Teji looked at her and said, "Mujhe kuch samajh nahin araha ke kia banaon aur abhi Prem bhi aane wala hai."
Heer said, " Ma main kuch pakao."
Teji looked at her surprised, "Aj suraj kahan se nikala hai. Heer Mann khud khana pakane ka bolrahi hain. Jab main tumse bolti hun ke Heer khana pakana seekh lo to immediately jawab aata hai ke mama main nahin seekh rahi to phir aj kia hua." And smirked naughtily.
Heer trying to find a better excuse to save herself from her mother's teasings, "Wo ma maine socha ke ab main baari hogaye hun to I should learn cooking warna mujhe apne sasuraal jakar taane na mile." And heaved a sigh of relief as her mother looked convinced by her excuse.
Teji said, "Wo to theek hai liken aj banayein kia?"
Heer smiled and said, "Prem ki favourite dishes banate hain. What say?"
Teji said, "Ok."
Heer with help of Teji cooked all of Prem's favourite dishes. She put all the dishes on the dining table with her mother and prayed silently that Prem like all the dishes. The doorbell rang and Heer knew who the person would be, she rushed to open the door and her heart skipped a beat at the view infront of her. Prem was looking so handsome, his white coloured shirt and blue jeans, his bangs were falling on his forehead giving him the look of a teenage boy. All and all he was looking like a GREEK GOD to Heer.
Haan Magar Yeh Sach Hai
Mere Bhagwaan Ho Tum
Thode.Ummmm Um U Mm M
Ummmm Nadan Ho Tum.
Prem flipped his finger to bring Heer back from her dreamland.
Heer said nervously, "A-aao Prem."
Prem smiled and entered the house and said sarcastically, "Thank God tumne mujhe ghar ke andar aane to dia warna mujhe to lag raha tha ke kahin tum mujhe bahir he khara rakhogi."
Teji came out of the kitchen and said, "Arey aagaye Prem. Chalo ab jaldi se garma garam khana khalo. Pata hai aj khana kisne pakaya hai."
Prem said, "Apne he pakaya hoga Teji ma is lazy ko khana pakana kahan aata hai." And chuckled.
Heer glared at him, "Beta aj khana maine he pakaya hai."
Prem said, "Maine nahin khana main zinda rehna chahta hun."
Heer said, "Khane main zahar nahin dala. Chup chap khao warna chalte bano."
Teji said, "Heer aise nahin bolte."
Heer said, "Ma ap mujhe he humesha bolti hain isko nahin bolti."
Prem said, "Acha meri ma ab naraz na hona. Kha raha hun tumhari haath ka bana hua khana."
Prem took out some sabzi and started eating making some faces. He checked all the dishes making some expressions. Heer bit her lower lip nervously.
Umm Umm Um U M Ummm
Umm Haan Haaan Haaan
Prem swallowed the food and said, "Ew ye kia hai Heer khana bohot bura bana hai."
Heer said sadly, "Kia maine itne pyaar se tumhare liye khana pakaya aur tum bolrahe ho ke acha nahin hai."
Prem chuckled and said, "Khana bohot mazedaar hai. Teji ma wo wali dish dejiyega wo to sabse achi hai."
Heer looked down shyly and smiled.
Hmhmm Badmash
~~**~~
Days passed and with each passing day Heer was falling in love with Prem more and more and more. She was sitting on her study table and was continuously writing something on the paper and pouted at it and tore the paper actually she was trying to write all her feeling on a piece of paper and then gave that letter to Prem she knew that it will risk their friendship but she also knew that if she won't do this she would not be able to live in peace.
Heer said angrily, "Kia hogaya hai mujhe, ek letter nahin likh parahi hun."
And started writing..
Mere Prem,
Mujhe samajh nahin aaraha ke main apne dil ki baat kaise is letter main likhon. Prem pata hai pyaar do tarah ka hota hai ek jo pehli nazar main he hojata hai aur dusra puri zindagi saath guzarne ke baad kisi moor pe ye ehsaas hota hai ke ap jiske saath bachpan se hain, jiske saath apne zundagi ka har paal guzara hai, jiske saath ap hanse ap rooye ho wohi wo shaaks hai jise ap pyaar karte hain. Aur mere case main bhi yehi hai Prem pata nahin ye ehsaas kab aur kahan aur kaise paida hau but I love you. Maine apna sara bachpan tumhare saath guzara hai and I always knew that I like spending time with you but now I realized that I love spending time with you. Tum jab bhi kisi larki ke saath flirt karte ho to mujhe bohot gussa aata hai aur saach kahun to jalan hoti hai. Tum mujhe jab bhi taang karte ho to mujhe acha lagta hai. Pata nahin jab tum ye parhoge to kaise react karoge magar main bas itna jaanti hun ke main tumse pyaar karti aur bohot pyaar karti hun apni zindagi se bhi ziada.
Heer.
Heer rechecked the letter to see did she write it correct, she smiled as she was satisfied and folded the paper and put it inside some book. And slept peacefully waiting for tomorrow but she doesn't know that tomorrow will completely change her life.
~FLASHBACK ENDS~

A sole tear dropped from Prem's eye as the guilt that how much Heer loved him and how much he had given her the pain. He looked at the frame of pic in his hand and said, "I'm sorry Heer."

Gayatri entered the room and saw Prem crying looking at some pic. She said, "Prem kia hua?"

Prem looked up at her mother and said, "Arey ma ap." Wiped his tears and placed the pic in the drawer.

Gayatri said putting her hand on his shoulder, "Bas beta bhool jao job hi tumhare saath hua hai. Move ahead in your life."

Prem said, "Kaise bhool jao ma maine us raat jo Heer ke saath."

But Prem stopped as he heard Preet saying, "PB." And entered the room.

Preet said looking at both his mother and his brother, "Is everything ok."

Gayatri said smiling, "Yes beta everything is fine main to Prem ko khan eke liye bolane aye thi. Tum donun baat karo." And left the room.

Preet said, "PB I need your help."

Prem said, "Kaise help Preet?''

Preet said, "Wo PB kia hai na main Meher ko date pe lekar jana chahta hun sirf ek dafa shaadi se pehle."

Prem said, "Shaadi to hone wali hai to date ki kia zarurat."

Preet said, "Kia hai na PB parsun mehndi hai aur uske baad ma milne nahin degi to isliye main kal Meher ko kahin bahir lekar jaana chahta hun."

Prem said, "OK batao kai karna hai."

Preet hugged Prem and said, "Thankyou PB. Aapko kuch ziada nahin karna bas Meher ko kal hospital se pick karna hai aur wahan pohonchana hai jahan main usay likar jana chahta hun but main usay surprise dena chahta hun to ap ye kahiyega ke ap usay shopping karane leker jarahe hain.theek hai."

Prem said, "OK."

Preet said, "Acha ab jaldi khana khane aajaye." And turned to move but suddenly he turned once again and asked, "PB Heer di kaisi hain? Itne dinun se unse bhi koi baat nahin hui."

Prem was froze at his position when he heard Heer's name, Prem doesn't Preet to know that what he had done to Heer otherwise he'll hate him. So to escape from the situation he said, "Wo theek hai Preet. Chalna neeche chalet hain mujhe bohot bhook lagy hai."

Preet found this strange but he ignored it and both brothers left the room to have their dinner.

~*~*~*~

No precap as I haven't decided what will be next. Sorry for any mistakes. Don't forget to leave your valuable comments and press the like button if you like.

Thanx

Neha

Edited by harshadeewani - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
awsum update neha.....luved it.....flashbck was awsum...thnkgod.....prem was on time....hope nuthin much has happened in flashbck.....luved it...awsum update...do update the nxt part asap..plz...don't delay.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
nice update
arre yaar
wat did prem do aftr all??
jaldi bataoon na

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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
what did prem do...........what happend with heer
suspense continues..........
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#89
wowo awesome update! thank god prem rescued heer from rishabh...but do reveal the mystery behind prem's actionss

thanks for the pm! and continue soon :)

~Naina
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
Loved the update. Flashbacks was good. So Prem knew that Heer loves him. What did Prem do to Heer.

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