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Posted: 15 years ago
"thank you dear, your saving me from my mama!!!
LoL funny!!!!!
Loved the update!
Update soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
it was a great update
im sure heer will be shattered when she finds out the truth that prem is not her husband
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
this heer really seems to be a nautanki baaz !!! freaking seeing a film.....!
ha!! may be she lost her memory and sanity watching some BT serials!! LOL !!!
waiting to know the truth.
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Posted: 15 years ago
I m sooo sorry selvy for not commenting for such a long time...
I just went through all your ffs and omg i luvvvv thisss onneeee
Its soo funny how Heer annoys Prem and hahahah if I had a
mom like Gayatri I would runaway heheh
really hope Prem falls in love soon
thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice part
prem is so clever
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Posted: 15 years ago
Shot 5
nice update poor Heer, got cheated by Prem..
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Posted: 15 years ago
i love this treasure update asap
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Shot 6

Prem entered the house in evening with tension. Lalit planned to move to India with family in two weeks. So last minute works sucked all his time and energy. Loosening his tie shouted 'Ramu kaka, get me something to eat.' He rushed upstairs skipping two steps at a jump. He opened the room silently thinking Heer may be sleeping.

The scene in front of his eyes gave him shock. Heer is standing in the middle of mess. All the things from his closet are on the floor. Papers and files scattered all over the room. Prem stepped in 'Heer, what is this?' Heer turned with a sad face. Her face soaked in sweat. He placed his things on the couch. He switched on the A/c and went to her. He took out his hand kerchief and wiped her face 'why are you standing like this? Why can't you call a servant to arrange these things? What is the need of doing all these now? Did you had dinner?'

Heer not seems to be interested in any of his questions. She is waiting for him to finish the list of questions. Like a kid 'Prem, I searched the entire room.' Prem confusingly 'for what?' Heer 'for our picture.' Prem sensed some other problem is on the way. Heer pointed the bedside 'your picture is here.' He pointed the wall 'ma and dad pictures are there. But' she showed her index finger with a sad face 'not a single picture of you and me.' Sadly 'not even our marriage picture.' Prem is shocked.

Prem made her sit on the bed 'Heer, I'll get you one. Why are you thinking about that now?' Heer pushed his hand away 'no Prem I want it now. Where is our marriage pictures?' Prem 'Heer listen.' Heer 'every time you are telling something when I ask about our marriage.' Prem calmly 'Heer, now you go to sleep.' Heer sat on the bed folding her hands across her chest. 'I want to see our pictures now.' She jumped out of the bed and stood before him and ordered 'show me now.'

Prem already in tension lost his patience. He slapped hard on her face. she fell on the bed. She is shocked. Prem shouted 'How can you get our picture when we are not married at all.' Heer shocked and looked at Prem. Prem running his fingers through his hair 'I did a mistake.' Heer got up and held his shirt collar 'what you said? We are not married. You did mistake. What mistake?' Prem 'ha I'm not your husband.' He stopped sensing his words.

Heer stared at his face. 'you are not my husband. I'm not your wife.' She started breathing heavily and repeated those words several times with struggle. Heer hand loosed from his shirt and she started fainting. Prem grabbed her in his hand before she fells down. He made her lay down on the bed.

Keeping her head on his chest, he remembered doctors words 'have to handle her carefully, Mr. Juneja. Slip of the tongue may lead to danger for her life.' He hit his head with his fist 'oh shit.' He pat her cheek 'Heer, open your eyes.' Heer murmuring 'you are not my husband. I'm not your wife.' Prem held her close to his heart and caressing her cheek 'Heer, I just joked. You are my wife and I'm your husband. Sorry Heer I joked. Heer open your eyes. You are my wife Heer. You are only wife.' He repeated several times kissing her forehead with tears.

Heer fast breath came to normal. She opened her eyes and looked at Prem. Prem with tears and between sobbing 'Heer, I was just tried to give a shock. I thought this shock will help you to gain your memeory.' Heer smiled slowly 'its not real. You are my husband.' Prem nodded wiping his tears 'ha. You are my wife.' She snuggled into his arms and giggled 'ha it's a joke.' Prem held her tightly and breathed a relief.

Ramu kaka knocked the door with food. Prem made Heer sit properly and went to get the dinner. Ramu kaka 'Heer beta too didn't eat.' Prem 'okay. I'll take care of her.' Prem closed the door and kept the tray on the bed. 'why you didn't eat?' Heer 'I was searching for our picture. But' Prem understood she is going back to original question.

He sat next to her 'Heer, we got married in London. Then we shifted here for few months. So we didn't bring much things from there. Then you met with accident so we didn't get time to think about anything. These things dad bought here when he visited now and then. Soon we are moving to India. There we will put room full of our picture. Okay.' He pat her cheek and smiled. Heer too smiled with sorry face 'sorry Prem.' Prem 'its okay. Now you start eating. I'll be back.' he took his towel and headed towards the washroom.

Heer hit her head 'I'm a mad. I doubted Prem.' She started eating silently because she don't want to give him trouble now. When Prem came out of washroom he saw Heer eating quietly. He sat next to her and touched her head 'nice girl.' He too started eating. Both finished dinner and went to sleep. Prem is so tired so he slept immediately. Heer slowly moved to him. Prem lying flat on the bed. She tucked her hand into his hand and slept.

Next day, Prems' friend Karan came to visit him. He saw Heer coming out of the kitchen with a tray. Karan whispered 'Prem, this servant seems to be beautiful.' Prem 'you sit first. You started commenting as soon as entered the house. How was the trip?' Prem and Karan sat in the couch. Heer served cool drinks to them. Karan stared at Heer as she stood silently there. He thought 'why she is standing here?' Heer wished him 'namstae ji.' Karan spit his juice 'Prem' he laughed 'like your hotel here also.' Prem cut in 'kaaaraaan' he tried to calm him down thinking 'now Heer will introduce herself.' Karan looked at Prem face with confusion and thought 'why he is behaving odd in front of a servant?'

Before they finish their thought Heer 'I think you are confused. I'm not a servant. I'm Heer. Prem's wife.Heer Juneja.' Karan confused 'Heer Juneja? Prem's wife?' Heer blushed. Karan looked at Prem with confusion 'Prem what is happening? When did you married? Sanj' Prem interrupted 'Karan you first drink this.' Prem almost pushed the glass into his mouth.

He turned to Heer 'Heer, how many times I told you not to wear saree. See you are struggling to walk. Go and change.' Heer obediently nodded. She turned to her room. Prem 'lift your saree a bit and walk. Careful.' Heer nodded and walked away.

Prem looked at Karan who is sitting there with confusion. Karan leaned forward to Prem, tesasingly 'I thought you and Sanjana are in love. Now who is this girl?' Prem 'Karan, its not real. Just drama.' Prem explained entire thing. Karan shook his head 'do you want me to believe this? You are treating her as your wife.' Prem 'no Karan.' Karan 'You are already fallen for her.' Prem 'I love only Sanjana.' Karan 'what I saw few minutes back is more than drama Prem. Do you telling me to believe this?' Prem 'you misunderstood.' Karan confusingly 'why are you taking care of her like your own wife?' Prem 'its just a sympathy. I have to return safely to her husband. That's all.' Karan 'no you won't be able to live without her.' Prem 'don't confuse.' Prem changed the topic.

One Week Later,

Juneja's landed in Delhi, India. They headed towards their mansion. Ramu kaka accompanied them as he too wanted to return to India after a long time. Lalit pressed the door bell 'what is Veena di doing? Why she kept the door closed?'

Veena is Lalit's elder sister. She didn't marry. She stayed with Lalit till he was in India. When he decided to move out of the country, Veena stayed back in India. She is very traditional and gives first preference only to God. She frequently visits temple in India. She spends most of the times in mandir. Lalit already informed Veena that Prem got married to Heer when she was in the pilgrimage trip, so not able to inform her.

The door opened and Veena appeared with the arti. Veena smiled 'welcome home.' Gaya3 stepped in. Veena 'Prem stand with Heer.' Prem stood with Heer. Heer excitingly holding Prem hand waited for Veena to take arti.

Veena is about to round the arti in front of the couple, she stopped. Others looked at her with confusion. Gaya3 'what happened di?' Veena 'bahu, where is your mangalsutra?' Except Heer others are shocked thinking 'now we got into another problem.' Veena gives importance to each and every small thing.

Heer 'I lost it in an accident.' Gaya3 'we made new one. Waiting for a good day.' Veena gave the arti to a servant. 'Ramu you keep Heer's things in guest house.' Lalit and Gaya3 are shocked. ' why didi?' Veena ordered 'Prem you take Heer to guest room. I don't want Juneja's DIL to enter the house without mangalsutra.' Gaya3 'didi, they are married and just' Veena cut in 'Gaya3 you know about me. Get freshen up. We have to talk about this. We'll meet in the guest house after one hour.'

Prem and Heer headed towards the guest house which in the back of the house. Prem sat in the couch thinking about his bua. Heer opened her suitcase and pulled out the dress. She went to washroom returned wearing a salwar. She sat next to Prem drying her hair with the towel. Prem didn't notice single move of Heer. He is lost in his fearful thought about his bua.

After 45 minutes, Veena entered the house with Lalit and Gaya3. All settled in the dinning table and had dinner together. No one spoke anything. Veena carefully watched the scene. Heer is serving Prem with love and Prem also now and then chatting with Heer with a smile. Even then his face showed some fear. Lalit and Gaya3 are tensed and eating quietly.

After the dinner, all settled in the front of the guest house outside in the garden. Veena started the conversation. 'Gaya3, where is Prem and Heer's kundali?' Gaya3 hiding her shock 'di, we didn't bring that here?' Lalit 'di they are already married and what is the need of the kundali now?'

Prem is quiet. Heer is sitting next to him tucking her hand in his and rubbing her cheek on his upper arm. Veena 'Heer lost her mangalsutra in the accident. That is the bad sign for Prem's life.' Lalit and Gaya3 not able to counter. Veena 'okay I know about Prem's. Heers birthdate?' Prem quickly 'April 21, 1988.' He aimlessly flipped her passport when he was sitting in the airport. He thanked his memory. Veena 'okay. Yours i-s may 17 1983.' She scribbled something on the paper. After a few minutes silence. 'Lalit arrange the marriage for Prem and Heer t'row evening 7.' Except Heer, all are shocked.

Veena looked at Lalit and Gaya3 'what happened? Why you all looked shocked?' Gaya3 looked at Lalit. Lalit 'di, they are already married.' He paused 'then what is the need.' Veean 'no. we cannot just leave this.' Prem looked at Gaya3 with pleading face. Gaya3 and Lalit are always helpless when Veena commands something. Veena 'we keep it as family function. No one is invited.' Gaya3 is about to open the mouth. Veena 'its final. Prem you go to your room. I'll stay with Heer.' He pat his cheek teasingly 'you have to manage one day.' Prem gave a fake smile and got up. Heer held his wrist. Prem bent down and kissed her forehead 'good night.' Heer kissed his cheek 'good night.' Veena watched this scene and happy.

Lalit and Gay3 walked to their room with the sad face. Lalit turned angrily to Gaya3 as soon as they entered their room. 'see now you spoiled our son's life. Di is arranging for their marriage.' Gaya3 silent. Lalit 'every time you rbought one proble by helping others. This time you destroyed our son's happiness . even after knowing that he loves only Sanjana.' He stopped unable to continue after that in anger.

Gaya3 'Lalit, I know its my fault. But now we have to save Heer.' Lalit 'everytime you are talking only about Heer. Not once you thought about Prem.' Gaya3 'now whats wrong in putting this drama. Its not going to known to anyone.' Lalit 'we are India. Here relationships are important. T'row she will get her memory and someone will come and claim her as his wife.' He hit his head with his head 'what nonsense?' he sat on the bed. Gaya3 'okay. Come we'll tell the truth and kill her.' Lalit angrily 'you want me to add that curse also to our family.'

Gay3 'then what do you want me to do now?' Lalit thought for a while 'I'll go with Prem's decision.' Gaya3 'then go to sleep. We'll ask Prem t'row morning.' Gaya3 layed on the bed. Lalit looked at her with anger 'don't know how you are getting sleep even in this tuff time.'

Prem is in his room sitting on his bed. Sanjana face came in front of him. 'if I marry Heer t'row then how will I face Sanjana? How can I cheat her? She loves me.' Prem looked at the sky through the window 'did I made any mistake in my life? Why God is putting me in such a confused situation?' he fell on the bed flat 'Sanjana won't visit here for next one year even then if she comes to know about this?' he hit the bed 'God save me from this situation.' He is restlessly rolling on the bed thinking 'how to stop the marriage?' but his body take over his mind. He fell asleep without able to get answer.

Heer slept as soon as she hit the bed. Veena too slept happily. They are the only two happiest souls in that mansion now.
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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Amazing twist in the story.....
Veena di is simply superb.......
Premeer scene at the start shows that prem has some feelings for heer but unable to indentify.........
I agree with wat karan told prem......
Cant wait for the next update.....
Pls do cont asap...
Thanx 4 the pm...
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey plss conti soon

just can't

w8 for it

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