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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
great


thnx 4 the pm


sorry for the late comment


Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
bechara prem....................
heer make him crazy...
thankx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
nice part
As soon as he reached the hotel, he called his PA and asked her to cancel all his appointments. He went to his private room and closed the door. He fell on the bed and soon drifted into sleep.
this part was funny
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94

Shot 5

Prem 'ma, today morning she asked about mangalsutra.' Gaya3 got shocked. Prem 'ma we have to give her that now.' Gaya3 thought for a while 'I'll manage that situation. Don't worry.' Prem convinced. Gay3 went home 'come home earlier Prem.' Prem agreed.

Prem returned home in the evening. He saw Heer sitting on the bed and crying. Prem got shocked. He rushed in and sat near her on the bed. 'Heer, why are you crying?' Heer with tears pointing the front like a kid 'see Prem, she lovess him very much. He too love her but' her face showed anger 'this two old lady's separated them.' Prem just then looked at the front. Some movie is running in the TV. He released a relieved breathe. 'Heer, that is'

Heer shouted 'arrey. Do n't put that in her neck. You didn't love her. don't kill your love for those people. arrey arrey Don't. keep that in her maang. idiot, stupid. What you did?' she paused 'oh no.' her face showed angry and sadness. She angrily threw the remote down 'you idiot. You killed your love.' Remote went into pieces. Prem shook his head.

Prem put his hand around her shoulder 'Heer, it is not real. It is not real marriage.' Heer 'no he married her.' Prem smiled. 'it's a movie Heer. They are not really married.' Heer confused. Prem 'first stop watching this movies. I told you to watch TV for a time pass. But you became so attached to it.' Heer 'but Prem, he' she is still thinking about the movie. Prem 'Heer, watching like this not good for baby.'

Heer face showed some sign of understanding. 'okay. I won't watch.' Prem 'good girl. Now go and bring tea for me.' Heer nodded and went downstairs.

Prem fell on the bed flat wide opening his hand. Took a long breath 'OMG' he closed his eyes.

Heer went to kitchen and prepared tea for Prem. Taking some snacks in a tray she headed towards the stairs. Gaya3 stopped her. 'Heer' Heer turned and looked at Gaya3 who is coming with a small box in her hand. Heer went to her. Gaya3 'beta, see this is your mangalsutra.' Heer happy. 'ma, give me. I want Prem to put tha in my neck now.'

Gaya3 'beta, Prem cannot put mangalsura just that like that on your neck.' Heer 'why ma? he is my husband then what is the problem?' Gaya3 'beta, your original is lost in the accident. Its not a good sign.' Heer eagerly listened. Gaya3 'We need to do some pooja to remove that bad sign. Then after checking with pandit, we'll arrange the function. In that Prem will wear it back on your neck.' Heer convinced by her answer agreed.

Heer with tray went to Prem. She sat in the couch keeping the tray on the table. Prem came out of the wash room. he smiled when he saw Heer smiling at him. he sat next to her on the couch. Heer served tea to him. biting some snacks he searched for something around. Heer got up and came with her office bag 'you are searching this isn't it?' Prem smiled 'thatnks. I have some work.' Heer sadly 'you are always working.' Prem smiled looking at her cute disappointed face. 'just for an hour. Then I'll take you garden.' Heer nodded like a kid and sat near him. She silently watched him working in the laptop.

But the work didn't finish until Heer felt hungry. She called Ramu kaka to bring dinner. Prem had dinner and continued his work. While Heer sat on the bed with a book. After finishing his work Prem lay down on the bed. Heer is about to snuggled into his chest. Prem gently storked her hair 'Heer, this posture is not good for the baby.' Heer looked at his face.

Prem 'I read in a article. Pregnant ladies should sleep in left side posture. That gives comfortable position to breath for the baby.' Heer listened carefully. She turned to other side 'you mean like this.' She lyed down on her left side facing her back to Prem. Prem 'ha.' Heer 'but I feel lonely with out you.' Prem 'I'm hear. Behind you.' he looked at her through shoulder. Heer 'okay. For baby I'm agreeing.' Prem 'good girl. Good night.' Heer 'good night.' She drifted into sleep.'

Morning, Prem woke up with a fresh smile on his face. he slept peacefully because of his clever idea. He sat on the bed rubbing hishands. He saw Heer coming out of washroom in her maroon salwar. With a smile she leaned forward and gave a kiss on his cheek 'good morning Prem.' Prem whispered 'good morning' with a smile.

Prem got up. Heer stopped him. 'can't you give a kiss.' Prem thought 'she started again in the morning.' Heer waiting for his response. Prem 'first tell me brush my teeth.' He closed his mouth 'bad breath is not good for baby.' Heer smiled. Prem rushed to the wash room thinking 'this baby concept saves me now and then. Thatk you dear. You are saving me from your mamma.'
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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
me...


wow prem n heer scenes were too gud...luved the way prem convinced heer...

baby concept.....gud one...

awsum update selvy....
Edited by shahrukh_divya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
babys mama is giving chweet chweet prempapa a hard time cho sad


another great update
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
awesome


thnx 4 the pm


update soon


Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
that was a lovely update..............

loved prem's reasons for getting away from her in the name of child
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part...
haha.. prem is so clever.

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