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-SnowKid-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#441

u updates after soooooo long...........thnx for updatin
bt wt u ended this ff..............*cry*
btw endin was great..........prem remembered his heer ...........
ridhhimma loves armaan *shock* thnx god she realized it ............
thnx for d pm .............this was one of my fav ff

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Namrata Kumari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#442

loved the update

thank u 4 updating

bst of luck 4 ur results.......

so ur back .......... updating

and now u r ending this ff on a happy note......

Prem and Heer r back together

now we can officially call them PREMEER

welcome back Prem......... back with complete memory......back to his heer and chahat

loved the way Heer wanted Prem to meet Chahat and tell her he is her dad......... she wants her angel to knw tht he is her dad........ she knws how much she had been missing her father

and Prem being the bst father wanted his baby to sleep and take some rest as he doesnt wants to disturb his baby while she is sleeping..........love u 4 tht and more Prem

and both arguing abt they should wake her........they should nt

awe see now finally our sweet angel princess Chahat is awake................. and asks them why r they fighting like mommy daddy

and our intelligent chahata told him tht she knw s he is her father........... sooooo cute akhir beti kiski hai

and promises nt to leave them.......

and the family scene Prem holding his both sweethearts in his arms

loved it

heer's line was so funny

and heer calling every1 in the gang to tell Prem got his memory back loved their reactions

Arjun : kyaaaaaaaaa??????????? Omg I am coming abhi abhi
Arjun : arohi utho arohi utho , happy days are back again

Kashish : hello ! ahhhhhhh heer heer main main abhi aati hun
Kashish : preet get up or I will kick you utho uthooooooooo

Armaan : what ! uss gadhe ka dimag thik ho gaya ohh god I will be there nowww

that armaan called our Prem gadha........ he didnt knw tht the gadha oops prem was listening

and well arjun is right if i knew tht Prem will get well this way i would have done the same.........no ways i love Prem cant see him get hurt

and then Premeer decide to tell Riddhimma

thank god she told she loves Arman.........

and Premeer didnt need to unite with someone crying over it........

loved the way Prem told- " I am already booked" and i dont need to break ur heart

Arman being called gadha by Ridhimma

and yes.......

em : life is perfect ,
Heer: I bet it is for the lovers
Prem : can we atleast go for a honeymoon you know
Heer: no mr juneja I aqm officially not married to you and I don't do honeymoons with strangers
Prem : aww koi baat nahi pehle shadi hi kar lenge assi , huh biwi ko honeymoon pe le jane ke liye shaddi karni paregii hayeee isse better options aur kah

loved it

and the epilogue...... arohi is gonna deliever a baby the sitituation was sooooooooo funny

Arjun : arohi I promise I will never ever touch you again , I mean I didn't know it caused so much pain

Arohi : you still don't idiot and stop blabbering

But arjun went on blabbering saying he was so very sorry and all and prem and preet were laughing like maniacs hearing him

awe now Prem wants kids.......... its nt a end but a start of a beautiful story.............loved it

Prem went beside heer and said
Prem : sorry to say jaan I wont promise anything like arjun
heeR: I knew that
prem : hihi but ofcourse because I want to see you holding my baby , I wanna experience all that I missed when chahat was born
heer who was on the verge of tears just nodded

heer: we will get a bro or sis for chahat
prem : ahh now I wont be satisfied with only one
heer: you are insatiable …
prem laughed jamming heer in a bear hug saying now I have a small angel like arohi which will probably turn into a chatter box like her and aww new one I am very dearly trying to bring you some company and everyone laughed with him

so thank u for being such a wonderful writer

Prem........ Prem Prem Prem Prem

ughhh........dont have words to say abt him...... just love him ..........

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: newt2007
oh i missed this epilogue.
cute scene. Prem won't promise anything like that.
we know Prem you can't.
why you didn't say how many kids now they have?
thanks for giving us a wonderful FF.

hey selvyy haha we knoww premm is a masterpieceee hihihihi lol now u need conting of kidsss ahhhhh i am not updatin behind the scenes 😛

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: -Jyo-
That was fantastic ending, i messed up with ur 2 ffs, again i ve read whole thing in fast forward. Now i am going out i ll cm back and edit it.
hahaha i cn understand i havent been updting for long thts wy ppl are all messinggg uppp
*Edited*
Premeer scens were awesome

Armaan : what ! uss gadhe ka dimag thik ho gaya ohh god I will be there nowww

such much woh ghdha hi hai, woh apne heer ko kaise bool saktha hai😉

Ridhima confessing her love for armaan😲😲😲

Jo hotha hai acche ke liye hotha hai😃😃😃

Finally everything is out, All is well if end is well😊😊😊

Epilouge was hilarious lol
Aww bechara arjun, arohi ke galiya suna pade, donoo ladki peda hui😊agar twins peda hote toh pata nahi woh aur kitna ladte😆

Last premeer scene was really cute.............................................

Glad u ended it with happy note,then when r u updating my fav ff of urs i know i ve not commented on last part, i ll do it now & plz plz update soon.

yeah yeah i l be updtinggggg othersss thnk u for beinggg a faithful reader till last

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: Tas17
Gosh Aishu......long time hun😆I was thinking of poking u thru pm's, but board exams na....thatz much much muchmore important
yeahh i was mrr thn busyy yarrr so sorryyyy
Now what do i say.....everything was just perfect....so perfect😳😃huhh m goody shoes i didnt d my last ff perfect ndd ppl were giving me tomatoess so no tragedyyy
The sleeping princess, Chahat was really sweet🤗
Riddhima's story was like a shocker😲....i was like what...all of a sudden this girl says that she doesn't love Harshad😕....but at the same time i was like WOW..cool...kabab mein haddi gayi 😆😳hihihiihi i rushed it off i knowwww
The Epilogue was awesome 😃👏....esp the last portion😳eww blush blushhh
~TASNEEM~😎

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: Xxcoolchick1xX
Great last Parts...really good...glad that Riddhima soon realised that she loves Armaan n not Harshad...atleast the kabaab mein haadi has gone...n Arohi gosh she made me laugh...cursing Arjun n then him getting freaked out...n we all know bout Prems promise he can't keep his hands of Heer. 😆
Thnx for a grear FF...really enjoyed it..

hey dear m glad u read and likedddddd tc

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
Wow!I rly loved d end.
heer: we will get a bro or sis for chahat
prem : ahh now I wont be satisfied with only one
heer: you are insatiable '
I liked this part very much

thnkss jasminee m glad u read and likedd it dearrr

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: Pumpkinn
Awesome update !
Loved it !
The ending was Perfect !
Great work !
Thnx for pm !

thnks dear m glad u likedd itt ttccc

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: premeeristry
😭 😭 😭 at last there comes the end of my fav ff 😭 .but thank god my doubt 🤔 of aishu not more on earth☯️ but went to some other planet gone wrong 😆 😆 😆.this is not enough for u 😕 you was suppose to tell rather than giving serious notes likeoyee sabaaa main abhi inda hun aur antaheen ko tragedy banne ke liye already bahot jutee paree hai mujheeee nd i was serious as i hd exams u knowwwe sooo sorry jaann

"ABANDONED till aprill

have xams so m going to updt after marchh endsss so till thennnn good byeeee "

well it was an amazing ending was not at all expecting this from u ...😆 wad a good ending😆🤣🤣 i cant hold it but i was suppose to coz i was reading it @12 of night .
the most awsomessttt thing was epiloguetu bhootni raat koooo bhatak raii haiiii
Prem : sorry to say jaan I wont promise anything like arjun

i can only expect such words from him😕 ......but dont know why i rememberd kis desh here 😭lo the md the kdm ending all shitttt
you gave it an deserving end 👏 aishu felt worth reading it😊 will miss it n had lots of memories with this ff😊.well giving an advice ab holidays to milenge na so start one more ff😍 .lol i hv 2 more ffs runningg let me finish another oe then i l start other if ofcourse i get timeeeee ndd yeah yeah so called logic of yrs abt silemnt readers luv u jaan tc
and to tell the truth am your silent reader guess how coz mein jab bhi teri ff's padhti hun tab silent hi read karti hun 🤣😆😆

love
saba