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Posted: 14 years ago
ahh finally relpying to ur comments fininshh noww i l be into updtt after some proof reading wait till thenn i know u cannnnnnn hihihih
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Authors note : hello friends { hides behind curtains} its late na hmm I knowwww butt here I ammm with an update with a new entry and a step towards the final meet hehehe enjoyyy

Part 39

prem was standing on the door when a bear hug jammed him and he was baffled , someone was hugging him from behind not someone its two persons hugging him and then it came
arjun and arohi : oh god prem uuuuu

and the words make riddhima turn her head in shock and heer was standing there with a smile that proved she is upto something and prem was looking at her with shocked face
and the thought in his mind was now what , riddhima will know everything and heer , how can she do this …….because he could see its all a plan the look on her face tells that …

prem looked helplessly towards them it was like everybody had a funny smirk on their face , as if they enjoyed his helplessness but only him and riddhima had an astonishing look

prem took a deep breath and started to act as he doesn't knows anything because that's what came to his mind

prem" what the hell ..

but he got cutted in the middle by arjun

arjun" I meant to say ohh god how much prem is there between u too , but before I can complete u looked at me so strangely like tumhari chori pakri gayi hoo arre u r engaged isme koi chori thodi na hai ya phir koi aur baat hai hmm or didn't u understand the meaning of prem , prem means love , love of ranjha for his heeriyee u got me

saying thisss arjun tried to suppress his giggle and prem looked at him with anger whereas riddhima gave a small shy smile

riddhima" ahhaah waise apaki tareef janab

arjun moved forward and brought a hand forward
arjun" m arjun punj

ridhdima shook the hand "nice to meet u

heer" okk guys agar aapki philosophy and love classes khatam ho gayi ho to can I talk

riddhima" so whats the plan

heer" as arjun and arohi are here we are planning for some fun in disc so I want u to join us

prem was angry so he tried to dissolve the plan " no we are busy

riddhima" what busy , no heer we are damn free and we will join u tonight but theres a problem last day I met a friend of mine in town , who just came here for some work , we actually know each other from school time and I promised to give him the company so u mind if I call him and introduce u all to him

heer" no problem we would be happy to meet him

riddhima" ok then see a in the evening u just leave amessage as u decide that where we will hang out

preet " sure

prem and riddhima turned to leave when heer called back

heer" riddhima u mind if I have a word with ur prem I mean harshad

prem was raged and the small tease by heer increased his anger

riddhima" he is all urs in the office do talk and I l go and take out the car okk

saying this riddhima bidded an adieu and prem kept standing with his back towards heer

arjun and arohi sat on the desk while preet stood near window

heer" riddhima doesn't knows that not only in office but everywhere u r all mine

prem turned abruptly and gave a glare to her

heer" did I say something wrong prem

prem " enough of ur drama okk this isn't going to make me fall for u but I l hate u more , what the hell were u trying to prove that I belong to u

heer: jo cheez meri hai usse prove karne ki kya jaroorat aur proof hi dena hoga to I have lots of

prem : u r mad

heer" u r not in a position to say that , I don't have a fault in my brain but u do

prem : ahh kal tak to bahot rona dhona kar rahi thi aaj kya hua huh in logo ne ideas de diye tumhe

arjun: hands up , humne kuch nahi kiya kar to tum rahe ho yaar apne dost ko ek hii bhi nahi bola tumne

prem : m not talking to u

arjun : man u don't need to tell me that , m also not talking to u I was talking to prem kyunki prem mera dost tha u know

prem : ohh god,it's a request plz don't say anything to riddhima she cant bear it

heer: we didn't said anything but don't u think u should say her the truth , the one u love should know everything and u think u love her don't u ?

prem : yes I do love her and I hate u

heer" baar baar ek baat kehne se who sach nahi ho jata

prem " aur baar baar tumhare kehne se main prem nahi ho jaunga

arohi : kehne ki kya jarroorat tum to already prem ho

heer" atleast once try to remember , try plz for me

finally heer was out of her determination and wanted to make him remember she was about to fell in emotional spell when a NO nod from preet made her realize that she cant act weak

heer" okk then so we will meet in the evening what for u r standing in middle of strangers

prem was about to say something but controlled his anger and moved out

heer: I promise u , u will have a wonderful evening PREM !

AS PREM LEFT heer watched the way blankly

Arjun " wooh that went well , he is badly provoked

Heer" he is hurt I saw it in his eyes

Arohi " and we want to make him see that u r hurt for that he needs to realize ur pain

Preet " now plan B lets make him jealous and see that is he still possessive as some habits never change

Heer" I still think this isn't the right way , he is not going to come back like this I know him

Preet "B positive for plan B, heer we need to do something we just cant wait , he cant marry riddhima this will spoil his your riddhimas life and don't forget chahat too is linked with this

Preet stood near heer and kept a hand on her shoulder

But heer knew from inside that she is being selfish and the adamant look she sees in his eyes is unnoticed by others, she knows if he doesn't wants no one can bring him back….

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EVENING 8:30 PM
As heer , preet , kashish, arjun and arohi sat around the table in a corner of the disc
Arjun and arohi were busy taunting each other and then saying flattering words to each other
Preet and kashish sat hand in hand looking towards each other
But one of the heart was disturbed and it belonged to heer , her eyes searched the crowd for him , her prem to come …and thennn she can see him coming inside
It was always the same for heer to look him
Those brown warm eyes , the innocent look formed on her face with his flying hair , the perfect arched lips , and his dress style which was a black rugged jeans and a black tee was making him look much much younger it was like the first time they met
But something has changed , her place has been taken by riddhima , she say her clinging on one of his hand and then she saw another male figure entering with their group who was holding one of riddhimas hand too , a tall , muscular , young guy

And in no time they were standing infront of heer

Heer saw prem trying to ignore her , whereas ridhdima was standing there with a high figh smile and the person beside her was looking at her

Ridhdima: hey guysss okk I said na I l bring my friend meet him this is Armaan mallik , we kinda are friends from school time

Armann : heya hope m not the unwanted guest

Arjun : n ono not at all we are proud that u came

Arjun went near heer and elbowed her
Arjun : got the right person for making him JJJJ I hopeee u can do it

Saying this arjun gave her a weak smile whereas heer was nervous

Armaan : met everyone shaked hands with them and then it was turn for heer

Armaan : u must be heer right huh ridhdima bugs me all the time about u

Heer : yupp this is heer mann

Prem was looking at them from the corner and the way both were talking was evoking a different feeling in him
And the most surprising part of the party was heers dress
Yes he has never seen her dress like that , its not that she wasn't looking good , she was looking more than good but that dress was too revealing for her
A blue jeans with a top which showed a lot of her neckline and then the top was even small as her skin between the jeans and top was also revealed and the way people were sometimes looking at her was driving him crazy as if he wants to go and take her out of the scene
And now she was talking to that armaan who first was trying to be more friendly with riddhima touching her here and there and now its heer , I swear if he doesn't keeps her hands off her then I l just shove off his neck

As he was thinking all that a thought rushed into his mind , why was he panicked I mean all in here are mostly dressed like that , talking to their dates and he shouldn't even care about heer its good that she is engaged in a talk with someone else atleast she wont torture him but an uneasiness was going on inside him which he also cant understand ….

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LhPxpT0Au5g [/YOUTUBE]


Jaane tu meri kya hai
Jaane main tera kya tha
Sath tere har pal
Saath har lamha tha


As his mind was racing to different thoughts riddhima came beside him and took his hand in here

Riddhima: so u mind dancing with me

Prem : riddhima m

Riddhima: oh cut it I didn't asked u think I ordered u

Saying this she dragged him to the dance floor

On the other hand preet and kashish too dragged themselves on the floor which was on fire with bodies swaying
Preet : huh aaj kitne dino ke baad we are having some quality time
Kashish : kya kare aapke paas hamare liye time hi nahi hota nahi to ghar mein isse bhi accha quality time we can share together u know just u and me
Preet : ahah naughty

Saying this preet nuzzled her on her cheek and kashish gave him a sexy smile

Arjun was looking here and there
Arohi : what are u looking at
Arjun : beautiful girls
Arohi : whattt
Arjun : I mean
Arohi : sab pata hai mujhe
Arjun : to ye bhi pata hoga that I love u and I love ur irritating expression
Arohi : sirf I love u bolne se pyaar nahi ho jata
Arjun : to kya kare aapke liye , actually public place mein kuch khaas nahi kar sakte if u wanna see love lets go back home
Arohi : shut uppp , u r such a flirt
Arjun : huh tumhe dekhkar ye quality apne aap develop ho jati hai

Saying this they walked towards the dance floor hand in hand

As the romantic song got mixed with the environment the bodies swayed on the beats with each other
The people on the dance floor felt each others physical appearance as well as their mind raced to many naughty thoughts

Armaan: its just you and me left alone u mind joining me on dance floor as I don't see a date with u
Heer: no m ok m just gonna sit
Armaan : don't worry trust me , m gonna keep my hands away from u , its just formal dance
Heer was about to say no but a wink from arjun forced her to take his invitation

As armaan took her to the dance floor he kept one of heers hand on his shoulder and another hand in his hand and he slightly holded her waist and swayed


Jaane kaisi kasak hai
Jaane kaisi tadap hai
Kyun ye aankhen nam hai
Jaane kaisa gam hai



Prems POV
As prem moved witth ridhima his eyes rushed through the dance floor and a cold shiver ran through his spine as he saw her dancing with armaan , she was talking to him and even didn't gave him a look , her lack of attention towards him was suffocating and he didn't know where on earth this weird feeling came from

Heers POV
Heer wasn't that much uncomfortable , the person dancing with her was a jolly person with good sense of humour and knows his limit , she casually moved around with him when a pair of eyes looking at her caught her attention , it was prem looking at her as like he was raged and any moment will create a fight because she knew those red eyes
And a sense of happiness was inside her as she got the feeling that he still is so possessive

Riddhimas POV
Riddhima took her face up from his chest and she saw him not looking at her whereas he was looking at different direction towards heer and that brought a different feeling in her ….and then she too looked at that direction and saw armaan and heer dancing
Riddhima : harshad aise mat dekho armaan hai hi aisa har kisi se ek rishta sa bana leta hai

Armaans POV
Armaan talked to heer and to him she looked as if she was a mystery , she didn't laughed too much and there was pain in her he can tell that and he even can see that she was staring at someone else and that caught his attention as he saw in that direction he could see that she was staring at ridhdimas fiance

A sharp pain went on his heart , to come back and hear that ridhdima was engaged to be married was painful , he has always adored her , that would be an undertstatement he thought , he always loved her but never expressed his feeling and now when he wanted to tell her , he cant anymore ….

It was as if everything was wrong …

Kyun aisi chubti hai tujhse duri
Kyun lagti hai jindagi yun adhuri
Chuaa kisi ne tujhko to laga ki
Dil mein kisine jaise aag laga ke
Duniya jala di hai meriiiiii




God has made this world to love , a decision can change everyones life , on one hand where two couples were happy but on the other 4 persons lives were on stakes , a decision would change everything
Some commeitments need to be made false to make new healthy relations

Riddhima didn't knows the truth , that's why she thinks she is in love with harshad , whereas heer knows the truth but can love her prem
Prem was confused that which life he should live and armaan didn't had a way out of this

Its like four souls are trapped …



Jaana dil jaana kaise tune na jana
Ke pyaar to hai ye jaane tu ya jaane na




That's all
Luv aishu

I know I su*K but I cant help it I cant get anything in mind and armaans entry was important in this to give the ff its final destination , I know the chapter was fishy so sorry guyssss , I will end this disaster soon …
guys have started a new ff do look
jag diya rasma ishq nah janta
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premdesh thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update

Heer making prem jealous
that one my favourite song😳
plz next part asap
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Posted: 14 years ago
this was nice.. so i think the gang is gonna find out about armaan's love.. wonder how theyll make him confess.. they might tell him the truth about harshad/prem..

continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

awsum update...!!! wow plan is awsum...tryin to make prem jealous n its wrkin awsum...!!!

n jaan thnku for updatin...!!atlast u update my dear aishu....nxt time no delay...!!!
awsum...!!!! update...!! wa8in for nxt..!!
luv..
dIvYa...!!!
Edited by shahrukh_divya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part aishu!

loved the way u expressed their emotions!

can't wait to read more!

so pllllzzzzz update asap!
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovd it!!!!!!
so prem s still possessive abt heer!!!!
let's see where it takes him!!!!!
watng fr the nxt part....
do update soon!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
i hopw prem regains his memeory soon..:)
conitnue asap
thanks for the pm
pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome loved it
loved heers confident
and ahahaaaaaa prem cant hide for long now heer is on mission lol
i wish armaan and rishima get together soon
poor armann never proposed ridhima and he thinks she is taken well everything is in heers hand now hope she succeeds in having her prem
luv arjun and arohi always having cute fights lol
kashish was being naughty normally is preet lol
thanks for the pm
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
aishu you updated at last.
wonderful.
Prem is jealous. loved the friends and their plan.
no need to feel sorry for riddima she have her arman.
Prem fast go to your Heer. he didn't jealous for Riddima holding arman's hand but he couldn't tolerate Heer dancing with Armaan.
now the stroy takes a new turn. love challenging Heer.

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