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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
nice update
the family part was cute
Prem-Heer meeting was nice.........
Please update soon.
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
Naina, great update.
I loved it when Prem and Heer bumped into each other. Heer clinging on to Prem was very cute and romantic. And the way these two were memorised with each other was very 😍 and 😳
Thank you for the PM. I can't wait to find out what they family is going to tell Heer.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
great update!
nice premeer meet.....thansk for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
awesome ff
i am a new reader
all parts r awesome
pm me when u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
@nisha1984: hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! hope you like the next update too! ahah and heer won't hear everything...well not yet, anyways.

@shirlys: hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting!

@-BabyCupid-: hi harpreet! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! ahah hope you like the next update too -love, naina

@SONALLI: hi! thanks a lot for reading and commentng! so glad you enjoyed this update! :)

@nspn.92: hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you liked the family part..=D

@suryavni: hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! ahaha loved reading your comment, and yes prem will have full family support in his mission to get heer....it might not be so much of a good thing though 😉 and preet and meher will definitely happen soon! can't leave one of my favorite jodis stranded and alone, now can i? hehe anyways, so glad you liked reading this, and i hope you like the next part too!

@shahrukh_divya: hi divya! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you liked this part! hope you like the next too!

@sweet scorpio: hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you liked the update! ahah yes ash and meher, taking care of all the problems 😆 hope you like the next parts too!

@-salma-: hi! thanks a lot for readng and commenting! so glad you liked this update...:)

@meetun66: hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you liked the update! ill definitely add you to the pm list! its always great to see new readers!

@NIMMY: haha hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! prem<3333

@premheer19: hi jyothi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! as always, i love reading your comments :) aha prem heer will hopefully come together soon, and i decided to make this an ff, so it will be longer than a few chapters :) and preet-meher will happen soon...their love story wont go anywhere without a few fights, na? 😆

@deepaanand: hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you really like this story...and haha ill try to make the parts longer..its just i dont get enough time 😆 but ill try...i promise :)

@premspadhu: hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you liked this update! aha prem-heer will only get better now =D

@Aymee: hi aymee! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! as always, absolutely love reading your comments =D ahah and the familys are always coming up with excuses, they'll be sure to do so this time too hehe

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@...Nikhita...: hi! thanks for reading and commenting! so glad you liked this part! hope you like the next ones too :)

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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
Hi Everyone! So I'm back with the next part :) Hope you like this too =D ps. i was watch KDMHMD on July 12th in the US, and i wanted to share, that was one of my most favorite episodes. the way Prem proposed to Heer, and Gayatri telling Prem to propose to her and awwwwwwww it was so cute :) miss that nice Gayatri soo much, and of course Premeer :)

Oh yeah the story. Well, here's the next part! Happy Reading! 😆

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Chapter 6:

The dining room suddenly became as silent as a graveyard. Everyone glanced at each other and immediately looked down on the table, not knowing what to say and how to respond to Heer's question.

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"Ma? Meher? Who did we meet?"

Everyone quickly glanced at each other, before Meher began fumbling for an excuse. "Di! Woh…uh Woh Mehta Uncle, we met him today remember? His daughter. She's getting married!" stuttered Meher, not really looking her sister in the eye for fear of being caught lying.

"Mehta Uncle? When did we meet him?" asked Heer.

This time, Ashlesha jumped in, "Yeah you were probably somewhere else di! Me and Meher talked to him today!"

Once again, Heer noticed the nervous glances everyone seemed to be giving each other. Something wasn't right, but she couldn't figure out what that was.

"Um…ok. You don't have to tell me if you don't want to, but there's no point in lying." Stated Heer, a little angry, the tone in her voice obviously changed, as she went back upstairs, back to bed.

"Phew. That was a close one!" whispered Ashlesha, glancing over at the parents, who all had the smiles returned to their faces. "But we should be more careful next time. Otherwise, the entire plan is going to go down the drain!"

"Han han. We'll worry about that later. So how did the two react? Huh?" questioned Gayatri, the smile and twinkle reappearing on her face. Lalit looked over at his wife, and chuckled at her excitement. "How else would they react Gayatri? They're probably thinking about each other right now!"

And soon the family was lost, each of them trying to imagine what Prem and Heer thought about each other after the meeting, what they were thinking about, and whether or not they were in loovee yet!

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The next day morning, Heer woke up, ready and excited for a new day. She had completely forgotten about bumping into that stranger the day before, and set about to do her work. As she was working away in the kitchen, making lunch for everyone, she heard Ashlesha come running into the room, "DII!!"

She looked up from the vegetables in front of her and turned to her sister. "Ashlesha? Is that really you screaming?" she questioned, her eyes widened n surprise.

Ashlesha suddenly became aware of her screaming, and fumbled around trying to explain herself. "Woh..Di…Aaj kyun na hum bazaar jaye?"

Heer looked at her younger sister dumbfounded. Was this the same girl that would rather sit at home and read books more than anything else in the world? Ashlesha never ever wanted to go to the market. It was always Heer and Meher that were excited about this.

"Ash? Are you ok?" asked Heer, walking over to her, and putting her hand on her forehead, as if checking her temperature.

Laughing, Ash shrugged off her di's hand, and smiled "Of course I am di. I just thought it would be fun if we go to the bazaar together today, ok?"

Just then they saw Meher bouncing into the room, "Han Ash. Why not? The three of us can go in the evening and then eat dinner outside too, k?"

Heer once again just smiled, and nodded her head, returning to her work while her sisters excitedly left to their room, talking nonstop and giggling. Although she noticed this slightly unusual behavior of theirs, she didn't think much of it. Rather, she chose to just ignore it and continued making her parathas and sabzi.

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Meher and Ashlesha both rushed into their room, slamming the door behind them before they began openly laughing. "Oh! I'm sure Prem jiju is going to be so happy!" they squealed to each other.

Ashlesha then picked up her cell phone, quickly dialing a number she seemed to have memorized by heart. "Hello? Harman?" she questioned softly.

Harman was shocked and sweetly surprised at hearing the voice of Ashlesha on the phone. She had called him! Maybe she was thinking about him! However, his hopes were soon dashed when he heard her questioning him about her Prem jiju.

"Uffoo. Your Prem Jiju is right here. Talk to him" he grumbled, handing over his phone to his older brother who was looking lost in his own world. His younger brother though, seemed to have a wife smirk playing on his face, looking at Prem and Harman, both seemingly thinking about their girls.

"Prem Jiju. We talked to Heer di today, and yes the three of us are coming to the bazaar today in the evening. I hope to see you there" she giggled. Meher screamed from the background "You'd better be there Jiju. I want Heer di to fall in love with you ASAP!"

Prem, who had put the phone on speaker was smiling listening to his saaliji's words, while Preet spoke. "Oy! You don't have to scream you know Meher JI. We can all hear just fine."

Meher was no less in her response to Preet though .Grabbing the phone from Ashlesha, she said "Well. I wasn't worried about Prem Jiju or Harman. I was worried about whether or not you could hear, since you always seem to be so deaf."

Before Preet could retort angrily though, Harman grabbed the phone back from his younger brother and told Meher he would see them in the evening.

Meher plopped down on her bed after disconnecting the call. Grumbling to herself, "Humph, What does he think of himself? Always making fun of me. I'll see to him. Just let's wait and watch. He's dealing with Meher Juneja, not some koi short skirt waali who goes fida over him Grrr"

Ashlesha sat on her bed, hiding behind a book, as she tried to stifle her laughter, hearing Preet and Meher fight and argue with each other. How different those three brothers were? Prem Jiju was so calm and quiet while Preet was so loud and noisy and mischievous. Only Harman was the sane one, he seemed the most normal in comparison. Sometimes funny and sometimes quiet.

Lost in the thoughts of Harman, Ashlesha sat, smiling to herself.

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Heer called out to her younger sisters. "Ashlesha? Meher? You guys aren't ready yet? I thought you wanted to go to the bazaar!" She stood at the entrance to the front door, swirling her car keys around in her hand, waiting for her two sisters when she heard them squealing "Just a minte di! We'll be right downstairs!"

And fifteen minutes later, the three sisters were off to the bazaar, to explore the many shops, windowshop, eat dinner, the chat, the fast food. And just have the time of their lives. This was an open bazaar where each other stores were like huge tents, lined up one next to another in rows and columns.

Heer stopped her car and they set off, deciding to go to the sari stores first. However, Heer noticed her two sisters looking slightly distracted the entire time. "Guys?" she asked, snapping her fingers in front of their faces. "Guys, you ok?"

"Huh?" they both turned to look at their sister. "Of course di! We're fine. Um…let's continue the shopping." A few minutes later, Ashlesha got a phone call and she excused herself to go check. The minute she picked up, she heard Harman's voice on the phone. "Ashlesha? Where are you three? We've been here for the past thirty minutes and can't find you? Don't tell me you're not here yet…" he groaned.

"Oh woh. Actually sorry, hum..hum to bas abhi aaya hain. You'll find us at the sari shop by the ….." and she talked, telling him the specific directions as to where they were and telling them to get there as soon as they could. After hanging up, Ashlesha went back to Meher and Heer, still continuing to look around for the three men.

About five minutes later, she spotted them making their way towards the sari shop. Quickly nudging Meher in the side, she indiated with her eyes that they should leave now. Heer, who was too busy looking at a beautiful dark green sari with golden embroidery and threadwork inside the shop, failed to noticed the looks her sisters were giving each other.

"Heer di?" called out Meher. "Ashlesha and me wanted to go and check out some books over there. We'll be back soon." She said, turning to walk away.

Heer quickly put down the sari she was holdng and got up, ready to leave the story. "Hold on. 'll come with you." She said, smiling at Meher and Ashlesha.

However suddenly, Ashlesha screamed out "NO!...I…I mean..no. We'll go ourselves and come back soon. No need to worry about us."

"You sure?"

"Han. Of course di. We'll leave now. You continue shopping" they said together, and turned to leave. Heer, although somewhat confused, went back and sat down. "Dikhao bhaiyya. Woh…aur woh sari…"

Meanwhile, Meher and Ashlesha practically ran to where they saw the three men waiting, hiding behind one of the other stores in the bazaar. "Phew. Di was going to come with us, and we had to make up some excuse saying we had to buy books. Let's get out of here" said Meher, grabbing both Preet's and Harman's hands as the four walked away, leaving Prem to stare at his lady love. She was sitting in the store, amidst piles and piles of colorful saris, looking vibrant and bright as she happily chatted away with the salesperson and the other women sitting around her.

"Bhaiya, I'm just going to go see this sari in the light" Heer said, leaving her bag and other stuff in the store, and slowly walking out in the sunlight.

This was it! Prem quickly began making his way through the crowds towards her, looking down at his phone, he bumped right into her, making it seem like it was an accident. She closed her eyes, clutching the sari tightly in her hands, bracing herself for the fall that was to come, but it didn't. The feel of a hand around her waist, gripping her tightly, caused her to slowly open her own eyes, and she was mesmerized, drowing the pools of brown circling in those eyes.

Only when the man slightly coughed did she realize the position she was in, and quickly tried to get up, balancing herself properly.

"Careful. Careful" he said to her, his deep voice low and husky. And he helped her balance herself before looking at her again and getting lost in that beauty. Oh how he wished she was his!

Prem slowly began chuckling to himself as he looked at her, standing wide eyed, still clutching that dark green sari in her hand.

"Wow. You again! I guess we both are just fated to meet by bumpig into each other" he smiled, a charming twinkly appearing in his eyes as he gazed at the woman before him.

Precap: Day at the Bazaar! Prem-Heer; Harman-Ashlesha; Preet-Meher!

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Phew. So that was Chapter 6. It was definitely longer than some of the other parts though not ginormous. I promise though I'll update soon, and I'm thinking the next part will be quite long, filled with Premeer, Meet, and Haresha (?) [does that name work 😆 ] moments....

But, as always, I hope you all enjoyed this part and I'm looking forward to reading comments! Please do press the like button if you enjoyed this part! And as always, do let me know if you want to be added to the PM list :)

Love,
~Naina
Edited by naina.patel - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87


ahah sorry :) i added a lot of random side comments hehe :) hope you like this part though!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
too gud naina....luved ash n meher's plan.....gr8 guyz....

preet n harman both were too gud....

the way prem bumped into heer was gr8.....

awsum update....do update nxt asap.......

thx for da pm....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
That was a really good update!
Can't wait to read more!
plz update soon
thnx for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi naina ur lucky to watch kis desh again on small screen, very badly i am missing it 😭 . yes it was the most heart touching scene, the way prem proposes heer no............i really dont ve words to explain it, it makes fall al over love with kis desh..........😍😍😍.have seen jail scene, it is one of my fav scene, it shows the blind trust in each other & how they stand for each other in worse situations. Ummm those were golden days of kis desh.........😊😊 Each and evry epi was adorable and prem dilogues were awesome, i just want to kiss REKA MODI'S hand,just loved it. OK now cming to update

Ha ha ha, heer dint hear them properly ye toh hona hi tha👏 Kya bhehane hai yar,Apni di ke liye kya kya karna padraha ha Ash-harman...........phele iniki love story set karado toh acha hoga😉. Loved MEET fight, plz inki fight end tak continue karo, unke ladaye ke bina maza nahi ayega padne mai😉.
Pyar mai kya kya karna padraha hai😆. Deko hamara prem ithne innocently acting karaha hai& warning heer to be carefull! kud heer se janbujkar takarakar kehtha hai destiy again made them to bump eachother😆 now i am eeegarly waiting to see heers reaction. prem ab saari ki dukan mai hai toh heer ki madad kardo saari select karne mai😉
UPDATE SOOON.........................................
with luv
jyothi
Edited by premheer19 - 15 years ago

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