New FF Heartbroken Chapter 1 pg.9 Aug.22 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: heer193

grt concept

do pm me

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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: newt2007

nice concept.

Prem character seems to be bad. happy Heer is not weak in this stroyline.
waiting for your first chapter.

thanks glad u liked it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: topsyturvy23

hey nice concept n not to mention infectious too
wanna read how the plot happens n how the story turns
just loved it
thanks for pm

sure thanks!
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Originally posted by: sadhz

nice concept.............. šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘šŸ¼ waiting for nxt part............

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

no offense but if ur only gonna work on one, this or the ss, i'd rather have u work on this.. i'm excited to see heer in a STRONG avatar and also my all time favorite jodi is in it.. MEET!!! but ur ss idea is good too..but if u are choosing one..i'd rather u do this:D

im doing both!
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Originally posted by: annwesha kayal

nice concept !!

sound interesting..

do continue soon..

thnx for pm.

sure will thanks!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hay guys i know suprised that im doing this ff well "NOTE: brainychild92 wanted me too so i did this is all dedecated to her!!! So here is the first chapter hope u will like it!!!

Chapter 1

L.A

"Prem PREM PREM" yelled someone "wht" said Prem waking up "Smantha is here" said Preet "Samantha?" asked Prem "who is she?" asked Prem "girl number 5 of the month" said Preet "ohh her ya soo?" asked Prem "soo Sanjana is here also" said Preet "and they are both here in different rooms and want to talk to u about something" said Preet

"i think marraige" said Preet "Preet everyone in L.A knows that Prem Juneja will never every get married" said Prem "i know but i think that they are serious" said Preet "Well Prem Juneja is never serious about a girl i will handel it dont worry" said Prem and got out of bed and went downstairs shirtless.

He first went to Samatha and said "Hay" said PRem "h-h-h-i" said Samantha looking at Prem's body!! "So why are u here?" asked Prem "Prem i... ..i...... i i think that we should be in a serious reltionship" said Samantha "why?" asked Prem "well Prem i want to settle down and have kids and a family" she said

"WOOOOO wait up u know and everyone in L.A knows that Prem Juneja will never ever get married" said Prem "but PRem i thought u loved me" said Samantha "i dont love anyone in this world rather than my brother and his fiance" said Prem "no u can get out of my house" said Prem and Samantha stomped away. "Ohh 1 down another to go" said Prem and went to the other room.
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Here in India:

"Heer Heer beta" said Teji "jee maaa" said Heer "vo mere phone book lakar aa" said Teji and Heer nodded she got the book and new that teji was going to call Heer's would to be husband Prem. Ever since she was a kid she always dreamed of becoming Mrs.Prem Juneja and in a week or 2 Prem will come and make me his bride" thought Heer with excitment and when Teji diled the phone it was ringing.

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Back in L.A

"So im sorry but Prem is not getting into any relationships ever" said PRem and Sanjana walked out of the house "sir" said Prem's butler "ya" said Prem "umm someone named Teji is calling from India" said the butler "who?" asked Prem "um tell her im busy and will call her later" said Prem and the butler nodded.

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In India:

"he's busy ohh it's okay but tell him to call me when he is done" said Teji "sure mam'm" said the butler and hung up "Prem busy hai" said Teji and Heer nodded shyly "Heer beta when u get married to Prem i want it to be the best day of ur life we have soo many preperations to do and i bet that is what Prem is busy with" said Teji as Heer just ran into her room. "Prem i know that u grew up in L.A and after chacu died u are taking care of his bisnuess and that shows how much u love ur dad so im not worried if u will be like those jerks that ditch girls when ever they want i know that u will be and are different" thought Heer smiling!

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Back In L.A

"Mr.Butler" said Prem "yes sir" said the butler "who is the Teji?" asked Prem "umm sir all i know is that she is from India and her and her husband were great friends with ur parents" he said and than left. "interesting" thought Prem and went to go and get changed. When he came downstairs he saw his lawyer sitting there "wht up Mr.Law?" asked Prem "Mr.Roy to u PRem" he said "okay so wht u doing here?" asked PRem

"well Mr.Juneja ur turning 22 in 2 weeks so it's time that i tell u about ur dad's and mom's will" said Roy "what will i mean in the oldest heir of this family and Preet is the second so half of my dad's money goes to me and the other half to Preet and Meher" said Prem "not soo fast PRem, yes Preet will get his share but u wont" said Mr.Roy "what why?" asked Prem "in ur fathers will he knew that u were....well what u are today so he made a will saying that Preet Juneja will get his share of the property,money etc. etc. but PRem Juneja will have to marry my best friends Balraj Maan's daughter Heer Maan who is in India waiting for Prem.
If Prem Juneja doesn't marry Heer before he turns 22 than all of his money will be given to the poor and he will be kicked out of the Juneja Mansion and will not get a single penny" said Mr.Roy as Prem was shocked and felt like laughing thinking of MARRIAGE!!

(PRecap: "dude there is no way im marrying the Geet chick" said Prem "it's Heer "dude" " said Mr. Roy "and if u love ur money u will" he said "but u know me PREM JUNEJA will never ever get married" said PRem "i have a plan Prem" said Mr.Roy "u will marry Heer but no one will know that she is ur wife i have a plan that will have u and Heer married but only for her family not for the world and after u marry her u wont even have to see her face again" said Mr.Roy and told Prem the plan as Prem was shocked and happy)

Dedicated to :Brainychild92 So how was it??? Please do let me know thanks!
Edited by -BabyCupid- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
hey great...wooww me first one...i m little bzy will comment later.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome

thnx 4 the pm


update soon



Kamal

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