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Posted: 13 years ago
hey kavs after a long time im seeing u updating...and its great...hmmm this time something different u wrote...and i loved whole scene baby...my like button is not working so pls excuse me for that...
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Posted: 13 years ago
I ALWAYS LUV UR UPDATE KAVYA DI! IT WAS FAB! THE WAY U WROTE IT AND EXPLAINED IT! TRUELY AWSUM! BTW THAT'S MY FAV SONG ALL BCOZ ITS SUNG BY SRK IN THE MUVI! I ALWAYS LUV UR WRITIN! THNKU O MUCH FOR AN WONDERFULUPDATE!
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice OS Kavya
wel done👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank youuu so much 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
pls upload ur other ff pls 😊
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update now
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Posted: 13 years ago

PRETTY WOMAN

It was Sunday morning. His favorite day of the week not because it's a holiday but it's a day when he can spend some time with his family and also pursue his passion for music. His band would be home that day. It included his brother Preet, best friend Karan and Karan's wife Kritika.

As he walked down the stairs, he noticed Preet already positioned near the drums with Chahat in his lap teaching her a few beats. He picked up the guitar and joined Preet. Both of them stared at each other disappointed. Karan wouldn't join them today as he had gone out of station. They didn't feel like composing anything.

"Arre bhai aaj Sunday hai phir bhi ghar mein itna sanata' kuch gadbad toh nahi?" Kritika walked in.

"Maasi" Chahat went and hugged her.

"Mood nahi hai" Preet said sulking.

"Papa please kuch gao na" His daughter tugged at his shirt sleeve and how could he resist that pleading look of hers which resembled her mother's. He picked her up in his arms and nuzzled his nose with hers agreeing to her request.

He couldn't think of anything to sing. Just then he saw his beautiful wife walking down the stairs.

Maine Jise Abhi Abhi Dekha Hai ,kaun Hai Woh Anjaani

Use Jitna Dekhon Utna Sochon,kya Use Main Keh Doon

He saw Preet and Kritika stare at him in shock first and then a smile as they recalled the song. Preet was charged up and he started off with his drums.

~~fb~~

"I'm really sorry Prem. I know tumhe aise kahin bhi jaake gaana acha nahi lagta per this is the first and last time. My boss will screw me agar meine uske bte birthday mein humare band se perform nahi karwaya toh." Karan pleaded Prem.

"Com'mon bhaiya mann bhi jaaona please' aapko toh pata hai meri kum % aane ke wajah se papa ne iss semester meri paise kam kardiye, mere pocket money mein help hojaayenge pleaseee'." Preet too joined Karan.

"Prem maann jaooo warna ye dono emotional atyachar kar karke torture karne waale hain" Kritika, Karan's girlfriend warned him.

"Achaa teek hai' teek hai' but what are we going to sing? Mujhe nahi lagta rock ya kuch chalega' kuch filmy choose karna hoga." Prem diverted his thoughts to pick the song.

"Yipppeee tum mangaye' yehi kaaafi hai' gaana aapne aap select ho jayega" Karan hugged him.

They thought of numerous songs but then dropped it citing one or the other reason. Prem was frustrated. All of them decided to take a break and walked out of their adda. They were walking aimlessly on the road. Karan and Kritika were discussing something while Preet ran to get something to eat. Prem felt a droplet fall on his face and looked at the sky. It seemed as if it was about to rain. When his gaze dropped back on to the road, he suddenly lifted his head to see a scooty stopped in-front of him with a sudden break. It was then he saw her. She seemed to be scared initially but as she got the grip, she smiled. It seemed she was trying it for the first time because someone was running behind her. He couldn't take away his eyes of her. She uttered sorry and rode past him. His gaze travelled with her in the direction she left.

Words fell out of him effortlessly'.

Maine Jise Abhi Abhi Dekha Hai ,kaun Hai Woh Anjaani

Use Jitna Dekhon Utna Sochon,kya Use Main Keh Doon

Karan and Kritika shook him. He held them and started to sing'


Maine Jise Abhi Abhi Dekha Hai ,kaun Hai Woh Anjaani
Woh Hai Koi Kali Ya Koi Kiran,ya Hai Koi Kahani
Use Jitna Dekhon Utna Sochon,kya Use Main Keh Doon
Pretty Woman,hey Pretty Woman
Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman,pretty Woman

They got their song. Karan thought it would be perfect for his hardcore Punjabi boss' Daljeet mam.

~~~

She saw her husband sing and dance along with their daughter. She wanted to stand still and enjoy the moment but she had a lot of things to do. It was Sunday. Not only band time but also feast time. She had to take care of the lunch. She left to the kitchen.

He lifted Chahat in his arms and followed his wife to the kitchen. As his wife was busy chopping something, he placed his daughter on the counter and started to sing pulling her cheeks.

Sone Ka Rang Hai, sheeshe Ka Ang Hai
Jo Dekhe Dang Hai Kya Kahon, hairaan Main Bhi Hoon

He then pointed towards his wife who wasn't paying any attention to them and both father and daughter pouted. They gave a naughty smile to each other and went near her.


Yeh Kya Andaaz Hai, itna Kyun Naaz Hai
Iska Kya Raaz Hain Kya Kahoon

Both kissed on her cheek on either side and surprised her. She stopped her work in shock and gave an angry glance but on seeing their pout melted.


Woh To Pal Mein Khush Hai Pal Mein Khafa
Badle Woh Rang Har Ghadi

She picked Chahat and kissed on her cheek while her husband pointed his to which she showed her hand as if warning him that she would slap instead.


Par Jo Bhi Dekhoon Roop Uska,lagti Hai Hai Pyaari Badi
Use Jitna Dekhon Utna Sochon, kya Use Main Keh Doon

He caught her hand and pulled them towards him. All three started to dance together.


Pretty Woman,pretty Woman Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman Tum Bhi Kaho Naa Pretty Woman

~~fb~~

The party was on full swing and was waiting for the band to kick off. Prem started to sing'

Maine Jise Abhi Abhi Dekha Hai ,kaun Hai Woh Anjaani
Woh Hai Koi Kali Ya Koi Kiran,ya Hai Koi Kahani
Use Jitna Dekhon Utna Sochon,kya Use Main Keh Doon
Pretty Woman,hey Pretty Woman
Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman,pretty Woman
Tum Bhi Kaho Naa Pretty Woman
Ho Maine Jise Abhi Abhi Dekha Hai
Kaun Hai Woh Anjaani,woh Hai Koi Kali Ya Koi Kiran
Ya Hai Koi Kahani,use Jitna Dekhon Utna Sochon
Kya Use Main Keh Doon
Pretty Woman,dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman,tum Bhi Kaho Naa O Pretty Woman


Everyone was having a lot of fun dancing. Preet and Karan winked each other. Preet went towards the host, Daljeet and started to sing'

Yo Pretty Woman, listen Up Girl When U Feel This Way
Don' T U See The Sunshine, coming Out Today
You Got To Feel It Right Just Like Day After Night
Don't Let The Sunshine, out Of Your Sight
Cause I Can Feel You, can You Feel It
When I Say That, I Can Feel You Here
Can U Feel Me, when I Say That I Am Crazy About You
Pretty Woman

Prem shook his head in annoyance. He already warned them to skip that portion but these two monkeys would never obey what they were told. He took a sigh of relief when he saw the lady was enjoying it.


He then realized he forgot the lyrics of what he was supposed to sing. He was not able to think of anything. In this confusion, he saw her among the crowd with a wide smile on her face. The words didn't seem a problem now as they just followed out easily'


Aankhon Mein Hai Nasha,zulphon Mein Hai Ghata
Pehle Hamne Ada Yeh Haseen,dekhi Na Thi Kahin
Dekhi Jo Yeh Pari ,masti Dil Mein Bhari
Hai Yeh Jadogari,ya Nahi

His gaze didn't leave her as he came off the stage to be among the crowd. He joined the crowd in the dance and sang along'


Hoo, Natu Janu Kya Hain Naam Na Janu Main Pata
Par Itna Hai Maine Jana,jise Dekhle Ek Nazar Bhar Ke Usko Karde Vo Deewana
Use Jitna Dekhon Utna Sochon,kya Use Main Keh Doon

In few steps he was in front of her and unknowingly uttered "Pretty Woman" drowning in her eyes. He lost his words but the crowd by now was so into the song that they themselves started to sing and dance.


Pretty Woman,

Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman ,pretty Woman
Tum Bhi Kaho Naa Pretty Woman,
Pretty Woman,dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman,tum Bhi Kaho Naa Pretty Woman

Karan noticed Prem and Heer lost in each other's' eyes. He took the opportunity and introduced them to each other. Heer was his colleague. He could see sparks brewing between the two. That's how the story of Prem & Heer began and then it took a year for them to get married with their parent's approval.

~~~~

The song and dance ended. Preet took Chahat and Kritika out to get something leaving Prem & Heer alone. Heer was preparing lunch while Prem came and hugged her from back.

"Kya baat hai aaj bohut pyaar aa raha hai?" Heer landed back in his arms

"Pyaar toh hamesha se hai lekin aaj toh jyaada bad gaya" He said tightening his grip.

"Kyunnn??" She asked turning in his arms to face him.

"Kyunki aaj se mujhe tumhe Pratham ke hisse ka pyaar bhi dena padega!!!"

"Pratham???? Matlab!!!!" First Heer was confused but then as she recalled the name'

"Haan Heer doctor ne subah kal karke confirm kiya ki you're expecting our second child. Humara Pratham aane wala hai"

"Wowww Premm'." She became speechless.

"Thank you Pretty Woman for coming into my life and blessing me with two little stars!!!" Prem wiped her tears of joy and hugged her.

Just a random thought about a day in the life of Premeer...

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Edited by Kavya.... - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
di another os???? omgeee aaj kal to hamari nikal padi...
it was so so so cute!! just like u!!!
how do u write such wonderful things>?>? awww i forgot u r miss perfectionsist finally!!! it was superb!! i loved it...
hmm actually i dnt have words.. u write so fab that i fall short of words!!!
so no much writing in this!!!
coz i dnt have anythng!!!
from the start till end!! everythng was awesome!! now whenever i hear this song.. i imagine premeer!!! i was PHrooling PHreaming... it was PHabulous!!
awesome 1... so so s
especially the way prem sang..and heer on scooty??? wow.. and also pratham wow yaar!!! that was super duper cute!!!! the song suited them so well cute.. aww i loved it..another one to my collection!!!
yippe!!!! thank u so much di..for taking time out of ur busy life
and doing and writing this for us!! thanks a lots!!! my sweet cute sis!!
love u!!1 muhaa <3..

love u!!! and now write love of my life 2 jaldi se!!! waiting!!! ek aur os bhi chalega!!!

THANK U PREETI WOMAN FOR WRITING SUCH A PHABULOUS UPDATE FOR ALL OF US..THANK U!!!:)








love u loads
~vrushika~
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Edited by vrushika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
dats is nice very very lovely update 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb duperrr awesume updateee kavyaaa👏👏

i'm actually surprised wid awl ur updates cumin up...thats soo kool...u're backkk...yaayyy⭐️

the update was awesume sweet n cuteee😃

premeer, karan, kritika n preet are always the zabardast people to write on⭐️

nice job girlll😉

do cume up wid more OS n plz do complete up ur pending work...i mean ur other SS N FF...v're waitinggg!!!

thanks for the awesuem OS!!!

update soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
SPEECHLESS! IT WAS FAB! ONE MORE FAV SONG N DAT TOO SRK! HAYYE MEIN MAR JAWAN PREMEER N SRK KYA BAAT HAI! CUMIN TO UPDATE IT WAS DAMN CUTE! LUVED THE WAY U EXPRESSED PREM'S HEART THRU D SONG! BEAUTIFUL! WAITING FOR MORE!

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