Dil Ko Choo Liya ...note pg 72!! - Page 8

Originally posted by: Palkhi_08

Awesome update!!

want Premeer scenes tho...alone! like honeymoon?? :P:D

-Luv Pari

Originally posted by: ...Nikhita...

lovely update!

congrats again on the new thread....

dev's pain and feelings were beautifully described......and i loved the alter ego part!

wonder what heer sees....

continue soon!

Originally posted by: crystall

Awesome update !
Loved it !
Now what has Heer seen on the floor !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !

Originally posted by: tellycrazy

Hi Surya,

That was a wonderful update once again though it was more of Dev and his thoughts. I really loved the little snippets of Premeer that you threw here and there from Dev's perspective. Sigh, why can't this guy see that our jodi is made for each other and leave them alone. But as a writer you have done a good job portraying the feelings of a man broken in love and when the world looks bleak to him. I still cannot empathize with him since I am a die hard Premeer fan and cannot digest anything/anyone that come between them😆.

Tu janne na is one of my personal favourites too and that song was apt for the occasion. I was actually hoping for a bit more of Premeer in this update like how well they are settling into their married life and and the bliss that they are enjoying before you throw another hardball at them. I guess this time I can contend myself with a third person's view😃.

Coming to the end of the update, I am really curious to know what Heer found in Dev's room. Knowing you it could be anythiing 😆 So I am not going for any wild guesses but will wait patiently for your update. BTW I hope you and your daughter are getting better from feverishness. Take care and get well soon. We can wait for the update and take your time with it.

Originally posted by: NIMMY

seriously us ki wajah se Premeer romance is cutted

Originally posted by: deepaanand

hey surya,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,wow great update yaar.......feel sorry for DEV .......................uopdate soon.................

Originally posted by: 0577jj

Surya - again realistic & marvellous update ''😊 ⭐️

whole update completed with pure & natural human emotions & feelings. each thought & behaviour of characters u portrayed in this update was natural & real which simply owns by common man in sme moments of their life on sme unknown times'.😛

Well ,Devank ' a man who suffers hidden pain for an untold love & u made the rude look till now he received from the readers turned to a much softened ,understading gaze 'nicely sketched hauntings of Dev & plans he making to leave his past with her new life 'Kiran nice BIL.who scanned in & out of Dev & his conclusion-its good that there smeone who read the broken heart'😭.ever lasting memories of ones life 'cherishing chilhood & Dev got his pari at that age '.park scene were he comes to term up with unknown feel in his mind'& he can not always love his pari like earlier -its ur responsibility to find one for him soon'.bcoz he have no confifidence on his heart or head'.😕

Prem a man with all good qualities ❤️'how cunnigly he trapped Dev to the doctor & for friends rejoining how he teasing Dev'that whole dialogue of prem was superb 'its real friends talk'😃

I loved this Heer ❤️'in seconds she realizes its not her Prem by hearing heart beats & heat from the lying body - very good wife'the moment she understoods its her sonu again in seconds she changed to true friend with all authority for pouting ,scolding & its too good they went back to their childhood days talks '..😊

Surya'I know Dev's view simply locks in Heer's figure & for little masala in his eyes'but the description u given there - where where his anticipated eyes stopped'.his burning feelings'.😡😡😡

Nice couple..their cute moments'.Heer with her husband & her dear friend really enjoying the evng chit chat'& her question 'me loved the saree u given for Heer 'hmmm..really breath taking one for loving ends'..😉

Surya' place oneself in peak of mountain is not that painfull instead to stand in the top of needle'then why u given such heartbreaking moment to Dev'🤢 why u given that innocent open laugh to Heer? Why u given her that skipping from handrest to Prem's lap'.. Premeer moments really appreciating their tiny bit of romance & melting in each others care & all'❤️ 😊 but the painfull eye which is souring 'its really heartwrenchig'😭 first time my sympathy goes with Dev'& am not wish to use him Devank or devil from here onwards'

Song u taken nicely goes along with the situation 👍🏼 & u covered it with four days - wonderfull'⭐️. Dev's pain & Premeer in their self made heaven ' superb'😊

Wht this Heer frozen in her position -is that drugs or smething personal relate to her 😕.

Waiting eagerly for next update -on third thread starting u given an outstanding update👏 ⭐️ 👏.

Continue the fabuolous work soon'.😊 ❤️

Originally posted by: munam_13

R u surprised?? I am commenting after reading 83 parts???😆😆😆

Well I am... Surya.. you are awesome!! I love the way you write.. I can see the thigs literally happening in front of me.. and you know what I hate the character Dev... no doubt he's a gud man.. but a dangling kabab mein haddi 🥱.. But I m surprised I really felt sad bout him in your Kaise Batayen sequence. I think he'll be doping himself more now !!! poor chap..
Gr8 update yaar! I loved it a lot 😃

Originally posted by: blueocean_787

it was an awesome update!!! i want this Dev out of Heer's life.... me is afraid he cause problem to Premeer marriage life....

Originally posted by: 0711rokxoxo

OMG!!! Loved the premeer kiss !!! and the song was really romantic

poor dev... he really is suffering

really nice n emotional update

thnks for the pm