new ff meet.....pyar ishq..... - Page 4

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Originally posted by: tadashi

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sorry love ...m working on the end...kal paka it'll b updated....

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lalit sahab ne muskurate howe pucha:" tum meher ko pasand karte ho na?"

preet ne lalit sahab ko dekha r bola:"nahi dad mei meher ko pasand nahi karta" uske bilkul serius jawab ne lalit sahab ke chehre ki smile foran gayeb kar di....



preet:"mei meher se mohabbat karta hun" yeh sun kar lalit shab ke chehre par pehle se bhi gehri smile thi...

preet:" mei yeh nahi kaho ga ke muje us se pehli nazar mei pyar ho gya...aisa kuch nahi tha...shayed mei use kabhi ghor se dekhta hi nai lekin us raat jab mera hath jala toh muje bohat dard ho rha tha..lekin jaise hi usne mera hath pakra dad dard bilkul gayeb ho gya...usne bina apne hath ki parwa kiye mere hath ko tham liya...us waqt ek naya ehsas pyda huwa mujh mei...mene bohat chaha ke mei uske bare mei na socho lkein phir ek bar wo mere samne thi...us raat jab wo chand ko bethi dekh rahi thi toh mei yeh teh nahi kar paya ke chand zyada khubsurat hai ya wo lekin akhir mei man gya ke woh zyada haseen hai...muje muhabbat nai karni thi dad...lekin phior bhi kar betha......r us din mall mei jab usama ne uska hath pakra toh dil chah ke use jan se mar dalo...wo kon hota hai meher par haq jamane wala"

lalit sab abh khul kar hanse:"beta g aisa koi haq waise toh apka bhi nai hai"

lalit:"beta apni mom ko galat mat samjhna..wo pasand ki shadi ke is liye khilaaf hai kyunke uska ek bhai tha..maa baap ka sahara....lekin usne ek middle class larki se shadi kar li...phr ahista ahista us larki ne usko fdamily se itna dor kar diya ke usne sab ko bhula diya...bas tumhari mom ko bhi yehi dar hai keh kahi tum log bhi use bhula na do"

preet aj pehli bar yeh sab sun rha tha..

preet:" dad mei kafi had tak mom ko samajh chuka hn r mene dekh liya hai ke bahu chahe wo apni marzi hi ki kyun na laye lekin yeh masle kabhi khatam nahi hn ge is wajah se mene faisla kiya tha ke mei shadi nahi kari ga...ash ko mei pyar nahi karta tha...wo achi dost thi..usne muje prupose kiya toh mene socha ke is rishte ko barhaya jaye..mom ne jab mana kiya toh muje dukh nai huwa lekin jab mom ne ash ke ghar ja kar uski insult ki toh mujhe bohat bura laga r tabh mene b faisla kiya ke shadi nai karo ga"

lalit:" r meher iske bare mei ab kya khyal hai?" lalit sahab ne shararat se kaha

preet:"uski haisyat sab se alag hai dad..usko mei kisi ki khatir nahi chor sakta.."

lalit:"kya usko pata hai ke usne kis pathar mei surakh kar diya hai?"

preet:" nai abhi nai btaya lekin bta dun ga"

lalit:" mehrbani karo us bachi par pehle se hi chiriya sa dil hai uska..tum choro mei bta dn ga"

preet ne coat pehnte hwe unhe dekha:"aise hi pyar mei karta hn btao ga bhi mei"usne shararat se smile kiya..

lalit: "theek hai jald bta do lekin khabardar jo use darya toh" " r jaldi a jao harman ne shor machaya hai ke engagement ke liye deir na ho jaye"
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meher kab se khari darwaze par sab ke ane ka wait kar rahi thi..

anil:" ap kis ka wait kar rahi hn meher?"

meher:" uncle lalit ke ane ka ..."

anil:"oh acha" or wo bhi darwaze ki taraf dekhne laga....

meher pichle do din se soniya ke ghar rehne ayi hwi thi...soniya r uski mom zabardasti use apne sath le aye the...r yeh anil soniya ka cuzon tha jo pichle do din se meher ke age peeche chakar laga rha tha jo meher ko bilkul pasand nahi tha...

abhi bhi uska kareeb khara hna use kafi bura lag rha tha...tabhi usne lalit uncle ko enter hte dekha...

wo khushi se unki taraf gayi...

lalit:"aray yeh kon ha? who r u beautiful lady? hum ne apko pehchana nai? kyun samrat harman pehchana tum logon ne?"

usne aj soniya ka hi pasand kiya huwa white choridar pehna huwa tha jis par silver kam tha...sath mei bas ankhon pe kajal r lipstiack ka izafa kiya tha jo use bohat hi laga dikha rae the....

aise bulaye jane par wo sharma kar re gayi

meher:"uncle aunty nahi ayi?"

lalit:" aray dulhe ki maa ke baghair b rasam ho sakti hai ..lo woh a gayi?"

usne dekha toh wo dushman jaan bhi unke sath hi khara tha....

lalit sahab preet ke pass gaye r ahista se bole:"kyun khubsurat lag rahi hai na?"

preet:" dad yeh ladka kon hai meher ke sath khara?"

lalit sahab ne anil ki tarf dekha:" kon anil..yeh soniya ka cuzon hai"

preet:" toh yeh meher ke itne kareeb kyun khara hai?"

lalit sahab ne sharat se preet ki taraf dekha toh usne gusse se unhe dekha:"dad please"

lalit:"acha yar gussa kyun hota hai"


stage par harman r soniya dono hi bohat ache lag rahe the...sab photos khinch rahe the....lalit sahab use bhi stage par le aye r wo samrat r preet ke sath khari ho gayi...
mangni i rasam khatam hoyi toh mehman jane shurw hoye toh wo bhi stage se utar rahi thi jab preet ne use awaz di

preet:"suno"

us ne mur kar preet ko dekha...

preet:" ab yahan r rehne ki zarurat nahi buhat reh liya yahan..chup chap ja kar car mei beth jao"

preet yeh keh kar stage se utar gya...

ajeeb admi hai pehle toh baat nahi karta r ab jab karta hai toh sirf danta hai..meher ne dil mei socha r stage se neeche utar ayi...

soniya ki mom r sinya dono hi use force karne kagi ke wo unke sath ghar chale lekin wo ghabra gayi...

soniya'S mom:"han na meher aj humare sath chalo"

meher:"nahi aunty mei kal a jao gi"

soniya:"nahi na mehe aj chalna parega"

anil:"please meher g man lijiye na humari baat"

preet ka anil ka youn bolna sakht bura laga tha jab ke lalit sahab apni hasi ruke khare the...

lalit:"nahi behen g aj meher ko humare sath jane dein ..humara ghar b sona ho gya hai iske bagaie kal mei khud ise yahan chor jao ga.."

wo sab parking area mei a gaye toh meher lalit sahab ki car mei bethne lagi toh

lalit:"meher mujhe harman se kuch zaruri kam hai tum preet ke sath uski car mei a jao"

wo chup kar ke preet ki car mei beth gayi..age samrat betha tha r preet drive kar rha tha...

achanak raste mei car kharab ho gayi...preet r samrat car chek kar rahe they jab ke wo car ke andar bethi thi..meher car se bahar nikal ayi...

samrat:"yeh to theek nai hogi..lagta hai mechanic ke pas le kar jan parega..aisa kare bhai ap taxi le kar mehr ke sath ghar chalein jayen mei car theek karwa ke ata hn"

preet taxi dekhne age chal para toh meher samrat ke pass a kar boli

meher:"tum inhe car theek karne do na..tum chalo mere sath"

samrat:'ap samjhi nai..agar raste mei apka koi ashiq mil gya toh mei apko usse kaise bachao ga..yeh kam bhai kar sakte hn"

meher :"yeh konsa kissi jin se kam hn"

usne jaise hi peeche dekha preet khara tha..

preet:"yahan taxi nai mile gi..main road tak jan parega..jabke agar hum walk karein toh ghar jaldi puhanch jayen ge..."

phir wo mehr ki taraf dekha r bola:'kya khyal hai chal lo gi"
wo bas sar hila kar reh gayi...

khali raste par wo r preet ja rahe the..usne nazar utha kar preet ko dekha jo seedha chali ja rha tha..lekin achanak pta nahi kahan se ek fakeer nikal aya r unke sath chalne laga wo ghabra kar preet ke sath ho gayi...

fakeer:" beta khuda ke nam par de do...allahn tum dono ki jodi bnaye rakhe dekho kitna sohna mard diya hai usne tujhe" wo yeh sab meher se keh rahi tha....meher ne ghabra kar preet ko dekha jo use dekh rha tha...phr wo fakeer preet ke pass a gya r kehne laga:" beta ..kuch madad kar do..itni pyari biwi hai tumhari...tumhara joda sada bana rahe"

achank meher ne dekha keh preet us fakeer ko 500ruppes ka note nikal kar de rha tha..

preet meher se:"chalo"

meher chup kar ke preet ke peeche chalne lagi..us ne mur kar fakker ko dekha jo abhi bhi shocked ki si halat mei kabhi us paise kom kabhi preet ko dekh rha tha."

meher:"ap ne us fakeer kp 500 rupees kyun de diye:" wo puche bagair na reh saki...

preet:" mujhe uski dwa achi lagi r phir usne meri r meri biwi ki tareef ki i think wo itna toh deserve karta tha "

meher ne confuse expressions ke sath preet ko dekha jaise samajh kar bhi wo na samajh pa rahi ho...wo dono ghar puhanch gaye toh lalit shab un dono ka intezar kar rahe the...unho ne meher ke confused expressions r preet ke gussa dono dekha..meher apne kamre mei chali gayi jab ke lalit sahab ne preet ko bula liya..

lalit:"kyun btaya meher ko"

preet:"apke tareeke se btane ki koshish ki thi"

lalit:"kya matlab?"

r phir preet ne fakeer wala sara kisa unhe suna diya...

lalit shjab se sun kar zor se hasne lage....

preet:" ap hans rahe hain...mene use itna clear btaya phir b use kuch samjh nai aya balke moun khol kar muje dekhti rahi jaise pta nahi mene kya keh diya ho.muje lagta hai agar mei use seedha i love u bhi bolon ga na toh wo pehle mera chehera dekhti rahe gi phir behoosh ho jaye gi.."us ne chire hoye bola to lalit shab r hasne lage..

preet:"achi kismat hai meri pyar kiya bhi toh ek dafar se"
r phir wo khud bhi hans diya....

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meher gaytri aunty ke kamre mei ayi jahan harman r lalit sahab pehle se mojood the....

meher:"aunty ap ne bulaya?"

gaytri:"han meher ao...kuch puchna tha tumse? tumhe anil kaisa lagta hai?'

meher:"g?" usne confuse expressions se unhe dekha...

gaytri:"han wo kya hai na anil tumhe pasand karta hai...abhi baqaida propsal toh nai aya lekin tum soch lo uske bare mei..acha larka hai..family bhi achi hai..toh tumhara kya khyal hai?"

lalit sahab ke chehre par dukh tha..tumhe apne bacho ke ilawa har kisi ki khushi dikhai deti hai gaytri unho ne dil mei socha..

wahan meher nazrein jhukai soch rahi thi yeh toh mene kabhi nahi socha tha...jis ko pyar karti hn wo toh.....

gaytri ko jab meher se koi jawab na mila toh boli:"meher btao?"

meher:"aunty jaise ap theek samjhe"

gaytri:"khush raho beta"

gaytri:"hum soniya ke ghar ja rahe hn tum chalo gi sath" unho ne shararat se use dekh kar kaha...toh meher ki gardan r jhuk gayi jabke harman hasne laga...

meher wahan se uth kar chali gayi...

gaytri:"harman chalo ab deir ho jayegi warna"

gaytri b uth kar lounge mei chali gayii toh preet kamre mei enter huwa...

harman mithai uthae kamre se wapas ja rha tha jab preet ne use bazo se pakra kar rok liya...

preet:"tum kahan bhage ja rahe ho?"

harman:"apne susral ja rha ha hun..le ap bhi mithai khaein"

preet ne mithai dabbe se uthate huwe pucha:"mithai kis khushi mei hai?"

harman:"meher ka rishta aya hai..anil g ko humari meher pasand a gayi hai..r meher ko bhi koi aitraz nahi hai..baki ki detail mei apko dosre round mei btao ga..ab mei chala" r wo kamre se bahr chala gya yeh na jante huwe ke kya bomb usne preet par giraya hai...

preet ab lalit ki taraf gusse se mura:"dad kya yeh sach hai?meher bhi anil se shadi karna chahti hai? agar wo aise chahti hai toh mei use shoot kar don ga"

lalit sahab muskra diye..."nahi wo tumhe pasand karti hai.."

lalit sahab b kamre se baher chale gaye tab thori deir baad preet hath mei mobile liye unke peeche lounge mei gya....

preet:"dad apko kaise pta meher ko mei pasand hn?"

lalit:"bas pta hai...ab meri jan choro"

ab preet ke sath sath uski ankhein b muskura rahi thi.....

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wo kitchen mei thi jab samrat uske pas a gya...

samrat:"kis ke bare mei soch rahi ho..anil g ke bare mei?"

meher:"mei kisi ke bare mei nahi soch rahi r na hi muje kisi se shadi karni hai" us ne chirte huwe andaz mei kaha..

samrat haste howe bola:"kyun koi r pasand a gya hai? uska nam btao abhi hazir karta hun"

meher:"mujhe koi b nai pasand"

samrat:" acha preet bhai bhi nai"?

meher:"unka yahan kya zikar.?"

samrat:"aray unka hi toh zikar hai"

meher:'or waise bhi unhe toh khud ek bar pyar kiya tha is wjah se toh khud ab tak shadi nahi ki"

samrat:"apko kya pta ke unhe ash se pyar tha ya nahi"

meher:"us din harman bhai ne bola toh tha"

samrat:"r apko yeh yad nahi ke mene bhi toh kaha tha ke shayed preet bhai ash se pyar nahi karte the"

meher:"toh phir ab tak shadi kyun nahi ki phir"

samrat chup hogya tabhi kitchen mei preet a gya...

preet:"kis ko kis se pyar hai bhai?"

meher ne apna rukh use dekh kar mor liya....

samrat:"wo meher keh rahi thi ke ap ash se..." r wo foran kitchen se baher chala gya...

meher ne bhi foran kitchen se nikalna chaha lekin dawrwaze par preet ne hath age kar ke use rok liya...

preet: "ash se mei mohabbat nai karta tha..wo meri achi dost thi..meine socha shadi ke liye jo understanding zaruri hti hai wo hum mei thi...mummy ne shadi ke liye mana kar diya toh baat wohi khatam ho gayi..mene shadi kyun nahi ki yeh lambi story hai phir kabhi btao ga.."
phr usne meher ki taraf jhukte huwe kaha:" meher jo mei tumhare liye mehsoos karta hn wo aj se pehle kabhi nai mehsoos kiya kisi ke liye b..tum sab se important ho...agar mei ash se mohaabat karta hta toh muje us se shadi karne se koi nai rok sakta tha"

meher ne ab nazrein utha kar preet ko dekha...na jane kitne hi pal wo youn hi ek dosre ko khare dekhte rahe..jab lounge ka darwaza khulne ki awaz par wo jaldi se bahir nikla gayi...

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lalit:" aray wah soniya beti ayi hai..ao beta andar ao" lalait shab ne soniya ko harman ke sath andar ate dekha toh khush ho gaye...kamre mei unke sath samrat r preet pehle se the...

lalit:"yeh lo beta mithai khao"unho ne dabba harman r soniya ke age kar diya...

harman:"mithai kis khushi mei?"

lalit:"btata hun..lekin soniya tum is time yahan..kuch kam tha?"

soniya:"g unlce wo maasi ne bheja tha ke meher se ja kar pucho anil bhaiya ke rishte ke bare mei...is wajah se ayi hn.."

harman:"lekin dad ab toh bta dein mithai kis khushi mei?"

lalit:"tumhare preet bhai ne finally shadi karne ka faisla kar liya hai"

samrat ko achank acho lag gya toh harman uki kamar par hath phere use sehlane ki koshish kar rha tha...jabke soniya hairani se preet ki tarf dekh rahi thi jo bohat shokhi se muskura raha tha...

harman:"whattt???"

harman:"lekin wo bechri ladki hai kon"

samrat khanste huwe bola:"meher?"

harman r soniya hairan the..:"kya meher"

harman phir bola:"bechari meher pehle hi itna darti hai ab toh upar jane ke din a gaye bechari ke"

soniya:"haye aisa toh mat kaho"

harman:"tum janti nahi preet bhaiya ki harkato ko...bechari ke sath bohat bura huwa hai" harman shararat se preet ki tarf dekhta huwa bola...

soniya:"lekin anil bhaiya...."

harman:"aray choro apne anil bhaiya ko dekh nahi rahi humare ghar mei hi lovestory shuruw ho gayi hai"

lalit sahab muskura diye...

harman:"lekin dad yeh toh hai mom hath dho kar is shadi ke peeche par gayi hn...anil ka kya kare..lagta hai mom shadi karwa kar hi rahein gi"

soniya:"uski fikar ap mat karein..anil bhaiya ki mei aisi brain washing karo gi keh woh meher ko bhole se bhi yad nai karein ge.."

lalit:" soniya beta agr confirm hai toh btao..dekho mei koi risk nai lena chahta"

soniya:"uncle ap samjhe anil wala chapter close..preet bhai ne humare liye itna kiya hai toh ab bari humari ai"

soniya ki baat par room mei bethe sab log relax ho gaye....

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soniya:"helo aunty helo uncle"

gaytri:"kaisi ho soniya"

lalit shab bhi usko dekh kar muskura diye jabke harman bhi seedha ho kar beth gya...

gaytri:"soniya ek baat btao kuch din pehle tumhari mama ne itna shor dala huwa tha anil ke liye lekin ab koi response hi nai hai ..achanak sab ne kahmoshi pakar li hai"

soniya:"actually aunty anil bhai ko koi r pasand a gayi hai..."

gaytri:"aray jab koi r hi pasand thi toh mujh se pehle baat kyun ki...mene meher se bhi baat kar li thi"

soniya ne laparwai se kaha:"pta nahi aunty yeh to ab maasi hi jane ..wo kehne lagi ke ladki ke maa baap bhi nahi hn...r bohat kuch"

gaytri:"yeh kya baat hoi..maa baap nai hain matlab ladki achi nahi hai kia..itni suljhi hoi bachi hai meher...muje yeh baat sun kar bohat afssos huwa"

harman:"chore na mama..hum meher ke liye ek bohat handsome sa banda dhonde ge"

gaytri:han phir b.."

tabhi chai ki tray ke sath meher b lounge mei enter hoi r sab ko chai dene lagi...
jab se harman r baki sab ko uske r preet ke bare mei pata chala tha tha harman r samrat use younhi dekh kar shararat se muskurate rehte r tang karte the..toh wo in sab ke samne ane se jhijakne lagi thi....

soniya:"filhal toh aunty mei ap sab ko yeh btane ayi hn ke aj meri birthday hai r sham ko mei celebrate kar rahi hn r ap sab ko ana hai"

gaytri:"sham ko possible nahi hoga beta ..tum log enjoy karna..han gift tumhe zarur mil jayega"

soniya:"han muje gift chahiye bholiye ga mat"

lalit shab muskura diye...

soniya ab meher ki taraf muri" tume bhi ana hai"

meher ne jaise hi inkar karne ke liye moun khola soniya ne foran tok diya:"koi bahana nai chale ga..tumse mei gift nai lun gi"

gaytri:"han meher chali jana..waise bhi kahan tum kahi bahir jati ho" shayed yeh pyar thori deir pehle hone wali baat ka natija tha...

tabhi preet bhi a gya...

lalit:"tum aj bohat jaldi a gaye ho preet ?"

harman ne shararat se preet ko bethte huwe dekh kar bolne laga:"han ab office mei dil nai lagta hoga na"

gaytri:"meher gudiya se kaho preet ke liye ek cup chai bna de jaldi"

meher jaise hi uthi sofa se thora sa age chalne par ruk gayi kyunke use laga shayed uska dupatta phans gya hai..lekin jaise hi usne mur kar dekha preet ne uske dupatta ka ek kona apne hath mei pakra huwa tha r wo gayrti se baat kar rha tha....

meher ne bebasi se preet ko dekha lekin use koi farak nai parha tha...preet ki taraf se aisi cheezon ka khatra hamesha use laga rehta tha..wo kisi ki bhi parwa kiya bagaier kuch bhi kar jata tha...

gaytri ne meher ko khada dekha toh boli:"aray meher khadi kyun ho ab tak"?

lalit sahab ne preet ko dekh ghorte huwe r dant peeste huwe bole:"preet lagta hai meher ka dupatta sofa mei phans gya hai zara churwa do..."

preet ne muskurate huwe meher ka dupatta shor diya...wo bhagti huwi kitchen mei a gayi...ab wo yeh soch rahi thi keh dobara kitchen mei jaye ya nahi...kyunke preet r pata nahi kya kar bethe...r phir usne decide kiya nahi kamre mei jana zyada behtar hai r wo apne kamre mei chali gayi..............

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soniya ne cake kata....r phir harman se kehne lagi:"harman mera gift do"

harman:"aray mei a gya hn yeh kya kam hai.r kya gift chahiye"

soniya ne hath age karte huwe kaha:"nahi muje gift chahiye"

preet ne ek wrapped box sinya ke hath par rakh diya:"soniya many many happy returns of the day..yeh tumhara gift hai mere or meher ki taraf se"

meher ne surprised expressions se preet ko dekha...

soniya to harman:"kuch seekho preet bhai se"

harman bejaye embarase hone ke shararat se bola:"inki toh kya hi baat hai"

samrat:"baat toh aj meher ki bhi alag hai ..aj bhai se nazar haat hi nahi rahi uski"

or meher to thei surprise sharmane ya ghabrane ki bajaye khushi se muskura di....

wo ab stairs se neeche utar rahe the...r meher soch rahi thi..keh shyed zindagi ne uska imtihan le liya hai....r wo insan jo uske sath chal rha ha uski dhaal ban kar hamesha uske sath rahe ga lekin shayed yeh pal kuch deir ke hi the...

samne achank riteish a ke khara ho gya...

riteish:"kyun us din tum logon ne muje akela samjha tha aj muqabla ho ga" wo apne sath 4, 5 log r lay aya tha jin ke hatah mei hockey sticks pakri hoi thi...

meher chup kar preet ke peeche ho gai...smarat mobile par police ka number dial karne laga..

preet:"harman meher r soniya ko ghar le jao"

harman:"lekin bhai"

preet:"jao harman"

lekin jaise meher age barhi riteish ne use apni taraf kheench liya..."aray aise hi jao..meher mere sath jayegi.."

preet age barha toh uske gundo ne use marna shuruw kar diya harman r samrat bhi is ladai mei shamil the...preet jaise hi riteish ki taraf barha usne use zor se muka mara...meher us se alag ho kar diwar mei lagi....riteish ne use uthaya or zor se ek thapar uske moun par mara...

preet: "meher"

achanak itni afra tafree ho gai ke kisi ko kuch pta na chala....riteish ki gun se kab goli nkli r preet ko lagi kuch pta na chala...preet zameen par gir gaya.....r meher uske qareeb hi behoosh ho gayi lekin akhri bar usne preet ka hath apne hath mei mehsoos kiya tha...........


last part tomorow................................
apart frm all the efforts it got too long so last part will b updated soon...njoy and do comment.....

@Riya .. its nt m bad or nt, its jst tht m not a hindi speaking person at all .. m nt from north India 😛 .. m still learning hindi 😆


*me reading the story 😃*

i have just read all the chapters. i just loved it. u did a very good job. plz continue soon.

will comment soon! I haven't read all of it yet, but i just want to say riya that you are so funny! haha i love the part where you called preet "dushman jaan" hahahaha

Omg! Riya! I am going to kill you if preet dies! Do criminals not get locked up for good in India? Waise did meher slap riteish? I wasnt clear on that part. But you cant kill preet!

OMG!!! yeh kya huwa? omgg!!! plzz continuee vvv sooon!!!!!