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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

interesting concept and I loved the first part...thank god Sanjana is out of Prem's life in the first chapter itself...I guess Heer was the girl whom prem loved and is the mother of his children...wonder what made him marry sanjana..looking forward to this FF

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Friends, I know many of you won't like Sneha in KDM. I kept Prem's daughter name as Sneha thinking cute Sneha in KZK. She attracted me most.
Part 2
Gaya3 after putting Sneha into sleep, came to Prem who is sitting in the hall. She sat next to him thinking the past.

Gaya3 is the one who selected Sanjana after meeting her several times in a mandir. She liked Sanjana's religious activity and traditional behavior. Prem didn't say any word against her proposal. Lalit also agreed when he saw Sanjana.

When the marriage was arranged, Sanjana insisted Prem to buy a mansion. Gaya3 too agreed because this house had only two bedrooms, kitchen and a small living room. It's a very simple house with less furniture.

Prem brought a big mansion and luxiourious furnitures as per Sanjan's instruction. They shifted to new mansion on the day of Prem's marriage with Sanjana. They never thought they are leaving their happiness in this small house.

After marriage, Sanjana's attitude changed. She never turned to look at the small mandir in the mansion. She is the one insisted to have mandir inside the mansion. Tradition means to be so far for her. He wore all kinds of western dress. Initially she started to meet some ladies saying they are her friends. Later she spent all most all the day out. She started coming late in the night. She sometime returned drunkard later it became regular.

Gaya3 tried to explain her the importance of family. Lalit got more sad and died in heart attack.

Gaya3 started asking about having children. Sanjana is initially angry but later oneday she said she is pregnant. Gaya3 is so happy. Those nine months Sanjana stayed at home.

Gaya3 thought the new coming into her life will change her character but after the delivery she again repeated the same. Gaya3 got fed up telling her and started caring for her grand daughter. Prem never opened his mouth to complain about his unhappiness. But his face clearly showed his failure in marriage life.

Gaya3 coming out of her past touched Prem's shoulder. She saw tears in his eyes. Gaya3 'Prem, forget her.' Prem 'Ma, I'm not crying for her. But how can she say her own blood is my illegitimate daughter.' Gaya3 'she actually planned to leave you very long back but she was waiting for the right time.'

Prem shocked. 'ma, how can you be so sure?' Gaya3 'I saw a very peculiar change in her attitude in past few months. Before she use to come home with some lady, for past 3 or 4 months a man dropped her in the middle of the night.'

Prem is now confused. Gaya3 'forget that Prem. That house and Sanjana always brought failure in your life. Sneha is your daughter. I don't have any doubt in that. She is your happiness and life.' Prem shook his head. Prem kept his head on her lap and cried. Gaya3 stroking his hair consoled him.

Next day morning. Sneha's birthday. Prem and Gaya3 woke up early. Prem sat next Sneha on the bed. She took her in his arms. Gently stroked her hair. She opened her eyes with a smile. He kissed her forehead 'Happy Birthday beta.' She put her hands around his neck lazily and buried her face into his chest. Prem 'Papa take you to mandir.' Sneha got out of his hand.

Gaya3 came in. she hugged Sneha 'happy birthday beta.' She kissed her. Sneha returned a smile. Gaya3 carried her to washroom.

In the other corner of Mumbai city. It is a small house. A little girl is sleeping peacefully on a mat with a smile on her face. A beautiful girl wearing blue color salwar sat near the little girl. Her name is Heer. She took her in her arms and gently stroked her hair. Little girl opened her eyes and smiled. Heer kissed her cheek 'happy birthday beta.' She put her hands around his neck lazily and buried her face into her chest. Heer gently rocking her 'Mamma take you to mandir. Come get ready.' little girl hugged her mother tightly.

Heer ticked her back. She giggled. Heer 'what Chahat wants today?' Chahat happily 'rasulla' Heer 'okay done.' Chahat got up and followed her mother to washroom.

After taking shower, Heer made her stand in the middle of the room wrapping towel around her. Heer took one frock. Heer made this frock with the cloth pieces which left after stitching dresses for her customer. She dressed Chahat. Chahat looked down at the new frock. She rubbed her palm on the dress. Heer 'did you like this?'

Chahat nodded her head 'ha.' She kissed her mother cheek. Both hugged.

Prem, Gaya3 and Sneha went to near by mandir and did pooja. After poja they sat in the mandap. Prem is silent and thinking about his daughter's future. He looked at her who is running around a pillar happily chasing some doves.

Gaya3 touched Prem shoulder 'Prem, Sneha always brought happiness in your life. Surely you will get something special today. Prem you will gain back everything in few months. You will be in higher level than before. Its your mothers blessing.' She touched his head. Prem always felt her mother blessing is his sign of victory.

They got up to leave. Prem is carrying Sneha in his hand walking along with Gaya3. He even sold his car. Sneha is watching all the shops in the road side. Suddenly she pointed 'Papa, want that.' Prem saw a big teddy bear sitting in the show case. Prem kissed her Cheek 'I'll get you that later.' Sneha shook her head and she leaned on to his shoulder.

Heer and Chahat went to nearby mandir. Heer carrying Chahat walked passed a shop. Chaaht noticed a teddy bear sitting in the show case 'mamma. Want tis.' Heer 'its too big. I'll get you another one.' Chahat never demanded anything. She shook her head in acceptance and started watching other things around on the road. Heer 'Chachi and Chachu are coming now.'

Chahat got excited. Chahat always loved her chachi Megher and Chachu Preet. She hurried her mother 'mamma fast.' Heer smiled and walked fast towards the house. They reached home. Chahat is sitting on the mat waiting for Preet and Megher.

Heer made Chahat's favorite rasagulla. She made that into small pieces and started feeding Chahat. Chahat happily eating and her eyes are frequently looking at the doors.

She jumped up and down 'Chachi'. she ran towards the door when she saw Megher entering the house. Megher and Preet hugged Chahat. 'happy birthday.' Heer 'say thank you.' Chahat 'tanks Chachi' her eyes are glued to the teddy bear in Preet's hand.

Preet gave her big teddy bear of her height. Chahat kissed Preet cheek and Megher cheek. Chahat tried to pull the teddy but is too big for her. She pointed a place 'here Chachu' Preet kept the bear down in the place where Chahat pointed. Heer went to kitchen to prepare food for them. Megher followed her to the kitchen. Chahat and Preet started playing.

In Prem House, Gaya3 made Sneha's favorite Rasagulla and simple food to celebrate her birthday. When they are about to sit to have food, Prem received a call. Prem face brightened up. After disconnecting the line, 'Ma, I'll be back in few hours.' He rushed out in hurry.

After two hours, he returned with a big teddy bear for Sneha, Same bear which Sneha wanted when they were returning from mandir. Prem gave that to Sneha. She is happily jumped hugging the teddy bear.' She kissed his cheek. Gaya3 'Prem, where did you got money to buy this?'

Prem handed a big cover to Gaya3 'Ma as you said Sneha brought happiness to our life again.' Gaya3 confused. Prem 'ma, we got our insurance money.' Gaya3 is happy to hear this. She thanked God looking upwards 'God heard my prayer.'

She gave some sweet to Prem 'now see Prem you will get only happiness. All your unlucky went away from you with that Sanjana.' Prem nodded. They started celebrating Sneha's birthday. Prem called Preet.
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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggg for next asap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
sooooooo sweet chahat could not move the teddy cause it was really huge
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
can't wait when prem and heer meet...............................
heer's entry was good
sneha and chaht's b'day 2gether............................
thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
hey !!!
awesome update !!
loved it !!!
so u started showing the similarities betwen chahat and sneha !!
great !!
i was correct that both are heer's daughter !!!!
meet are soo good !!!!!!
waiting
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
Loved the update. Heer entry was gr8. Waiting for Prem n Heer to meet
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
Superb update 😃..........
Sneha,g3 nd prem scenes wer really nice nd touching.......
Sanjana is really disgusting 😡...........
Heer,chahat scenes wer cute..........
Chahat nd sneha has a lot of similarities nd share the same b'day.........
Chahat is really attatched to her chachu nd chahci 😛.......
So sneha also got her teddy bear..........
Cant wait to know wat happens next.........
Pls do cont asap...........
Thanx 4 the pm........
Edited by anishajk99 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
awwww! iv gt a feelin sneha and chahat are twins and as sanjana didnt want 2 have a baby she took on of em! lol plzzzz make premeer meet asap! and update asapppp! thanx x!:D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
great




thnx 4 the pm



update soon


Kamal

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