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Posted: 15 years ago
hey....
that was totally awesome!!!
wow..... they are getting married.... :D
that's so cool.... i just loved the premeer scenes.... :D
but wt's abt the mystery of the kids...??
hope we get to know soon...:D
pls update the next part soon... :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome updates
sorry i couldnt comment earlier its because i had my exams
al youir updates were amazing
thanks for the pms
and wow thats great that heer agreed to marry prem
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 13

Prem pulled Heer and ran to his room. Prem hugged her as soon as they entered the room. He kissed her cheek. 'I'm happy.' He kissed her chin and moved down to her throat. She hugged him tight as she found hard to stand without support. Sudden shower of love made her fly in the air forgetting her. Prem kissing more deep with love and passion 'You are my first love. Heer you are my first love.' Heer jerked in confusion.

Prem came to ralithy by her reaction. He understood her confusion. He broke the hug and moved to the window 'Heer I want to tell you something.' Heer moved near to him with confusion. Folding his hands across his chest Prem started his journey back.

~~FLASHBACK

Prem met Sanjana for the first time after Gaya3 suggested her as his wife. Prem didn't find any attraction towards her but as an obedient son he agreed to marry her. He went out for dinner twice by Gaya3's suggestion. Its like a formal meeting. They just talked about normal things. He thought she may be a shy girl. Sanjana wanted to shift the house before their marriage. Gaya3 too agreed as it is a small house.

As a son of business man, marriage was grand one. All the business men in India and abroad attended the marriage. Sanjana entered the house as Juneja family DIL. In their first night, Prem entered the room happily to see his wife. He saw her lying on the bed. His happiness shattered. He sat next to her on the bed. Before Prem open his mouth, She 'Prem, see I'm not interested in this stuff. I hate kids. So I don't want to have any physical relationship with you.' Prem shocked. He didn't hear anything after that. He went numb in shock. He never thought his happiness will come to an end within a day.

When he came back to world she is already sleeping peacefully showing her back to him. He moved out of the bed. He looked at the moon 'she is not the girl for me. I did the big mistake. I never felt any love on her. I should have informed that to Ma earlier. Now my life is gone.' But he hoped one day she will change. He slept in the couch.

Morning, Prem woke up and saw Sanjana still sleeping. He got ready and went to office. She got up and went down. When Gaya3 told her to make sweet that is their tradition. She ignored Gaya3 and went out. From that day she spent most of the time out of the house. Gaya3 and Lalit are shocked. Prem and Sanjana met rarely.

Days passed, she never returned home before 10. That too in drunkard state. As a traditional lady Gaya3 started bugging Sanjana for a kid. Sanjana got irritated. She started fighting with Gaya3 and Lalit for unnecessary things.

After few months, Lalit died in hert attack. But that day Sanjana said she is ready for baby. Prem is happy. She said 'I have a problem for that I need to meet the doctor.' Prem agreed because he thought she has changed because for his father's death.

Both went to doctor. After checking up both, doctor declared that Sanjana's has problem but can be solved by medical treatments. After treatment, Sanjana got conceived. Prem and Gaya3 are happy. Sanjana is quiet and lovely until the day she delivered the baby.

Prem was in cloud nine on the day the doctor gave his child in his hand. Sanjana went back to earlier behavior. She never cared about Sneha. Prem and Gaya3 spent their time with Sneha. Whenever Sneha crawled to Sanjana, she moved away with a hate. Prem 'why are you ignoring your child?' Sanjana 'she is your replica. I hate you. So I hate her also.' Prem shocked.

Prem is happy with Sneha. The day came he lost his business then she also left.

~~END

When Prem finished his story, Heer touched his hand. He looked at her face. Her face showed the sign of confusion. 'Prem' Prem covered her mouth. He slipped his hand around her waist and pulled her closer. 'I know you are wondering why I said you are my first love. So I wanted to clear that.' Heer stared at his face with confusion. 'Prem' before she continue he stopped her again 'I know Heer. Preet told me about you. you lost your husband before you accept his love. I know I'm your first love too. That is why I told about my past. ' He hugged her. She kept her face on his chest and snuggled closer. 'Heer, we both should forget our past which don't had any meaning in our life.' Heer didn't reply but her grip increased on his body showed that she wants his touch. But inside Heer feared about something which he didn't sense.

Prem teasingly 'do you want to stay like for entire night?' Heer lifted her head from his chest. She shook her head negatively. Prem sad. Heer smiled 'entire life.' She leaned back on this chest. Prem hugged her tight. He kissed her forehad.

Next day morning, Preet and Megher with fear came into Prem house. Prem is sitting in the table reading the newspaper. Heer is feeding Chahat and Sneha. Megher came in shouting 'di'. Her sound expressed fear. Prem looked up from the newspaper. Heer wiping kids mouth 'Megher.' Looking Megher, Chahat jumped out of her chair and rushed to Megher. 'chachi.' Megher lifted her in hands 'di, is everything alright?' Prem and Heer confused.

Preet 'aunti called us to come here fast.' Gaya3 came out of kitchen with a smile. Prem and Heer smiled shyly. Gaya3 'Megher only happy news. Sit.' Preet and Megher settled in the couch. Chahat ran out of her hand and brought Sneha 'Chachi. Sneha.' Megher picked up Sneha and kissed her.

Gaya3 'Chahat Sneha you both go and play.' Chahat and Sneha ran to play with their toys. Prem and Heer came and sat opposite to Preet and Megher. Gaya3 came to Megher with sweet 'first open your mouth.' She gave her a sweet. Megher 'aunti.' Gaya3 cut in 'don't call me Aunti.' Preet and Megher confused. Gaya3 smiled 'call me Ma. I'm ma to Heer then for you also.' Megher confused. Preet understood. 'give me that sweet.' He dumped more into Megher mouth. 'Preet, I didn't understand anything.'

Preet 'Ma is talking about Prem and Heer didi's marriage.' Megher forgot to close her mouth in happy. Preet closed her mouth. Megher looked at Preet with surprised shock. Preet nodded his head. Megher slowly smiled. she jumped out of her place and rushed to Heer. She hugged Heer 'is it?'

Heer shyly smiled. Preet hugged Prem. Gaya3 'I want to finish their marriage on this Sunday.' Megher 'we don't have much time.' Gaya3 'simple marriage in mandir.' Preet and Megher agreed. Prem doesn't want to gather a big crowd decided to invite only their close family members and friends.

Sunday morning, Heer got out of his bed with a smile. She looked around. Gaya3 already got out of the bed. She got up and went to Chahat and Senha who are sleeping on the near by bed. She gently stroked their hair one by one placing a kiss on their forehead. She admired the way both sleeping. She looked the similarities. Both were hugging a small teddy. One leg stretched and other half folded and their dummy down. She smiled.

Megher came in. she saw Heer admiring the kids. She smiled 'di get ready.' Heer got up and went to washroom picking up her dress. When she came out of the washroom she saw Gaya3 standing with her bridal dress in hand. She gave the dress to Heer and blessed her.

Chahat and Sneha rubbing their eyes sat on the bed. Gaya3 took them to washroom. Megher helped Heer to get ready. Heer is sitting in her room. Chahat and Sneha came running wearing their new dress. 'Mamma' they kissed her on either side of her cheeks. 'Papa told to give you this.' Heer smiled and gave them kiss. They ran to give that to Prem.

Heer came out of the room. Prem waiting for her in the hall got up and took Heer hand. Preet went to start the car. Megher followed him. Prem and Heer walked holding the hand. Chahat and Sneha ran ahead to catch their place in the car. Gaya3 whispering a prayer followed them.

They reached the mandap. Prem helped Heer to get out of the car. Mandir is in outside the city. So not much crowd only their friends and relatives. Lalit and Gaya3 used to come here when they feel low. Prem sat in the mandap. Heer sat next to him. Chahat and Sneha stood near Prem. Megher and Preet kept Heer hand on Prem. Gaya3 tied their dupatta. Prem and Heer exchanged mala. When they took 7 rounds around the fire, both of promised that they will remain together in all the situations and not allow any outside force to destroy their relationship. Chahat and Sneha happily jumped and threw flower on them.

Gaya3 and Megher with tears watched them. Prem filled her maang with sindoor. Heer closed her eyes accepting his as her husband. Prem wore mangalsutra around her neck to claim her as his wife. As the pandit declared their relation as husband and wife, Gaya3 hugged them. They took blessing from her. Preet and Megher hugged them. Prem picked up Chahat and Heer picked up Sneha. They all kissed each other.

Prem and Heer took blessing from some of the elder relatives and friends.

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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
MeraCheekuVirat thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
...so at last prem n heer r married...
hope sanju doesn't create any prob..
.she is such bitch yar....
sweet scorpio thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome!!!
finally they are married!
i hope that no1 will create misunderstandings b/w them!
y was heer tensed wen prem was telling her about his past???
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Such cute part
Thanx for the PM
Look forward to the next part
suryavni thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi!!!
nice update.....
cute family moment in the last part....😉😊
Greeshma.... thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
so tehy got married....................

but i am still confused on what the secret behind their past on the birth of the babies................
SwathyS thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow😛 premeer got married👏
🥳


let me guess sneha and chahat both r premeer children
heer was Surrogate Mother or something
Edited by swa291 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
finally their marriage had happen hope the live happily

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