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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#31

CHAPTER:-2

chahat:mein NY mein born hui....
lalit:NY??
chahat:haan NEW YORK...US mein...
hearnin this everyone is shocked dat how heer went to NY??
prem:tum india mein nahi hui..US....
chahat:haan mein 5yrs tak NY mein thi par 3 months phele hi mom ne yahan aane ka faisla liya isiliye...
gay3:heer chahat NY mein hui aur us waqt hum wahan hi the....
heer:maa mujhe kuch nahi pata tha...mein wahan job ke liye gayi thi..wahan mein nihal bhaiye ke saath reha thi thi...
prem:veera humare ghar har weakends par aati thi par usne hum kuch nahi bataya....
heer:veera ne bhi mujhe kuch nahi bataya...woh mujhe aur nihalk ko bol ke jaati thi ki woh aapne frnd ke ghar jaa raha hai hai..
lalit:woh sab chodo....sab bhul jaao...aur aapna aaj jiyo...
prem:haan bauji jo hogaya so hogaya...aab hume sab bhul kar aage badna chaiye...
everyone:haan......
chahat:phele hum ambala to chale....
everyone laugh......
all leave to ambala heer waves to chahat...
chahat waves to heer n prem......n blows flyin kiss to prem n heer...both return her...n the car goes out of sight..

everyone has left....now only prem n heer are alone at juneja mansion.....
heer:prem dinner lag du??
prem:nahi mujhe bhok nahi hai.....tum kaha lo....
[prem goes to the room...n heer starin at him wid teary eyes.......]
heer[in mind]:prem maine kya kiya ki tum mujhe baat nahi kar rahe....kyu prem kyu???
PREM N HEER'S ROOM.....
heer:prem kuch to kaha lo...tumhe bhok lagi hogi..na
prem:heer mein ne kaha na mujhe kahan nahi kahna...
heer:thik hai....jaise tumari marzi....
[heer goes to washroom......n cries her heart out...while prem sense sum kind of pain in his heart n sense sumthin wrong..]
prem goes towards washroom to knock the door...till then heer cums out wid her nite suit.....
heer:prem tum bhi tak so ae nahi??
prem:nahi woh mujhe washroom jaana tha....
heer:oh sorry tumhe mere wajse ruk na pada....
[prem goes inside the washroom.....while heer goes downstairs...to clean the kitchen.....]
prem cums out of washroom.....he cudn't see heer any were.....then he hears heer talkin to ramu kaka in kitchen....
prem goes to bed...while heer is down stairs cleanin.....
DOWNSTAIRS...
heer thinkin: prem tum mujhe se naraz kyu ho??
[heer didn't eat anythin.....as prem didn't eat anythin...so how cud she eat???????]
ITS 1.30AM AT NITE......UPSTAIRS.....
prem gets up to drink water but he cudn't see heer anywhere in the room...... he decided to go down n check heer....
prem:yeh heer kaha hai???
prem cums downstairs n is shocked to see......heer lyin on the floor....
prem rushes to heer.....
prem:heer...heer...kya hua...heer aakeh kholo......
but heer didn't respond anythin......prem got panicked.......he took heer to bedroom....n laid her on the bed....
prem:heer plz uutho...plz aakeh kholo...
but there was no respose....so he decided to call the doctor....
doc:i think she hasn't eaten anythin frm mornin...so its bcoz of weakness that she collapsed....
prem:remeberin bout wht happened since mornin.....
prem:thanku doctor n i will take care of her....
prem lays beside heer n thinks........heer ne subh se kuch bhi nahi khaya???mein nahi khata to heer bhi mahi...mujhe yad rak na chaiye tha....n drifts to sleep.......
MORNIN....
heer wakes up n sees prem beside her n his hands on her waist n cute smile on his face...on seein this she smile....but remembers dat prem is angry on so her smile fades away....
heer gets up n goes down...n makes the breakfast...prem cums down...n sees heer sittin on couch n thinkin of sumthin...
prem:heer mera naashta??
heer:still engrossed in thoughts...
prem cums n waves his hands in front of her n she cum bck to the world....
heer:haan prem tumne kuch kaha??
prem:heer mein tum se ek baat pochu??
heer:haan kya baat hai?
prem:heer tumne kal subhe se kuch nahi khaya na?kyu heer?...agar mein nahi khaunga to tumbi nahi khaogi??
heer:nahi prem mein woh....mein bas....
prem:heer mujhe kuch hai suna.....mujhe se promise karo ki tum khana khaogi....mein nahi khaya to bhi....
heer:par prem...........
prem:promise me heer...haan ya naa??
heer:thik hai prem mein khalongi..par ek shart par....
prem:kya????
heer:phele muje ye batao ki tum mujhe baat kyu nahi kar rahe ho??
prem:sorry heer woh mein tum se naraz tha kyunki tum ne mujhe chahat be bare mein nahi bataya....
heer:sorry prem...mujhe..maaf.kar...prem keeps in hand on her lips n sayz...
prem:sorry bol ne ki koi zarorat nahi hai...mein tumhe maaf kiya par ek shart par...
heer:kya???
prem points in fingers on his lips n asks her for a kiss....
heer:prem tum na kabhi bhi nahi sudroge....
prem:heer plzzz.....
heer:prem............
prem:heer.........
heer:aacha baba tik hai...aapne aakeh band karo...
prem smiles n happy....he closes his eyes...
heer cums closer.......n gives a quick peck on cheeks...n run away....prem opens his eyes n see heer smilin standin in the kitchen.....
prem goes to kitchen n hugs..heer frm behind.....
prem:heer...
heer:hhhmmmmm.........
prem makes heer turn n kisses her passionately......heer first shocked but then responds.....but the phone rings.....
prem gets angry n heer giggles...
prem picks up the fone... n asnswer...
prem:hello.....
voice:can i speak to heer juneja....
prem:yeah who is it??
voice:sahil...............
prem:sahil??????????
voice:haan sahil...US se....
on hearin sahil heer shocked n starts thinkin........y has sahil foned here????

PRECAP: WHY HAS SAHIL PHONED N WHO IS SAHIL? N DAT ALSO FRM US??

PLZ DO COMMENT......N PRESS LYK BUTTON......
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ......
hvin vacation to tryin to update...as much as possible....bcoz frm monday onwards till one month will not be able to update...goin to dubai...for n'joyin..............
ppplllllzzzzzzz guyzzzz comment...

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Anisha Jayakumar

@anishajk99

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Gr8 update........wonder wer chahat was born nd who this sahil is........now he is calling heer???felt bad for heer.......but now hope premeer r fine........... but this sahil?????????pls do cont soooon.........

Edited by anishajk99 - 15 years ago

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Awesome update !
Loved it !
Dying to know who is sahil !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !

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harshiti_16

@harshiti_16

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#34

oh....go its sooo nice dear loved it serously awesome............

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: crystall
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Dying to know who is sahil !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !

yeah u wil cum to noe....soon....

n thx for commentin..

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#36

hello okk so they weere in ny and this veera was the culprit hihi prem is angry hmm and heer didnt ate anything sati savitri type gosh the phone rings on time ihh no romance and with romance there comes the thriller sahilll ?? now whose this ?????///

waiting to know

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Motibah

@Ilovepie.

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#37

gr8 update!:) waiting to find out who sahil is! :)

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Motibah
gr8 update!:) waiting to find out who sahil is! :)

yeah wil cum to noe in nxt update...

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen
hello okk so they weere in ny and this veera was the culprit hihi prem is angry hmm and heer didnt ate anything sati savitri type gosh the phone rings on time ihh no romance and with romance there comes the thriller sahilll ?? now whose this ?????///

waiting to know

thx for commentin yar....haan nxt update u wil cum to noe bout sahil acc to the further track....
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i think update will be full of prem n heer romance....

Edited by fireblaze_divya - 15 years ago