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Neha

@Pumpkinn

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

awesome concept !
loved it !
do continue soon !
add me to your pm list plzz !

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Suhasini

@.Suhasini.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

hiiiiiiii divs................and good start.......................................and waiting for next update..........continue sooooonnnnnnnnn

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: -Sajdey-
please update

sry ha....my chapter got deleted so i hv to type it again wil take time.....by tonite or tomorrow mornin.....
sry..........

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: crystall
awesome concept !
loved it !
do continue soon !
add me to your pm list plzz !

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yeah sure.....will update by tonite or by tomorrow mornin as my info got deleted.....

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: suha_hasini
hiiiiiiii divs................and good start.......................................and waiting for next update..........continue sooooonnnnnnnnn

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thx....yup....will upda8 soon...

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

update comin now......
i completed ...quiet early...........

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

CHAPTER:-1

JUNEJA MANSION....
prem:maa mere naashta??
gay3:prem heer ne nasshta banaya hai use poch......
prem:tik hai maa....
heer:prem naashta ready hai...
prem:no...heer mujhe office ke liye der...horahi...hai...
heer:par prem......
[prem leaves for office widout any further discussion......]
gay3:heer zara yahan aana....
heer:jee maa...aaee
gay3:woh kya hai na heer hum sab ambala ja rahi hai...woh mein tumhare bauji kulraj meher preet....woh kya hai na hume wahan kaam hai...aur meher aur kulraj ko bhi aane ka maan kar raha hai....to kya tu ghar ko 3 dintak sambal payegi na...akeli??
heer:jee maa....mein sambal longi...aap log...jaa eeye....
gay3:hum bas thodi der mein nikal rahe hai..........
heer:thik hai maa....
chahat:mom mujhe skool nahi jaana...
heer:chahat................
chahat:mom mujhe bhi ambala jaana hai...plzzz
heer:par chahat phir skool kaun jaaye ga???
gay3:heer aane use usne bhi ambala dekha nahi hoga na...
heer:tik hai aap khe rahi hu to tik hai par prem?????
gay3:prem se mein baat kar thi hu...
[gay3 calls prem n asks him....]
gay3:prem..........
prem:jee maa kuch kaam tha?
gay3:haan woh chahat humare saath amabala aana chahati hai....
perm:tok hai maa....
[gay3 hang uo the phone...n says to chahat n heer that prem said yes......chahat is very happy on hearin this....]
chahat mujhe packin ke liye help karona plz...
heer:aacha baba chalo.....
[heer n chahat complete packin chahat's stuff............]
chahat sitin in the room watchin TV......
heer:chahat chalo ready ho jaoo jaana hai na..
chahat:mom time hai..plz mujhe TV dekh no deno....
heer:aacha baba....
chahat:mom mujhe sahil ki bhout yad aarahi hai....
heer:chahat ye kya kehrahi ho??
chahat:yes mom.....mujhe sahil se baat karni hai....
heer:par chahat tum to jaanti ho na...sahil hum se baat nahi larna chahat......
chahat:mom mujhe malum hai par mujhe bhout yad aarahi hai.....n starts cryin...
[mean time prem comes frm office......on seein her dad chahat stops cryin....]
prem:kya hua mere princess ko???
chahat:kuch nahi mom ne rula diya....
heer:meine????
prem:heer?????????
chahat:mom ne kaha ki mujhe tumhari bhout yad aayegi.... isiliye...aur kuch nahi.....
prem n heer:laugh.....
heer:chalo chahat time hogaya...
chahat:yup mom.....
[prem goes down stairs........to see if everyone is ready.....]
upstairs.....
chahat:mom mein sahil se kab baat karongi??
heer:chahat ye kya??maine kaha na sahil ka naam mat lena....
chahat:mujhe malum hai ki sahil ne hum se promise liya hai......
heer:tume malum hai na...phir bar bar ye sawal kyu???
chahat:sorry mom bhi nahi longi.....
heer:ok my angel...now go down everyone is wa8in....
chahat:yeah.....
[heer n chahat cum down n join everyone down.........]
lalit:aare chahat humare saath aarahi hai?
chahat:haan dadu...mujhe bhi ambala dekh na hai....
lalit:par tum to ambala mein born hui na??
chahat:no......
[evryone seein at heer as everyone thought that chahat was born in ambala...as after separation heer went to ambala....]
lalit:phir kahan????

precap: where was chahat born????.......stay tuned...nxt part on its way....

nxt part by2nite.....promise.....do comment n press like button plzzzzzzzz👏

Edited by fireblaze_divya - 15 years ago