~~'MILAN'~~-part 25 and on pg120[28th may]

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...Nikhita...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

part 3...

niceeeee!

so heer got a friend in prem...ab uss friendship ko pyaar mein bhi badal do!

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...Nikhita...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

part 4.....

awww....so prem already thinks heer is his angel!

wonder how preet and veera will irritate them now.....

thanks for the pm!

continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Edited by blufate.14 - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

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nice update

thnks for the pm

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sweet scorpio

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Posted: 15 years ago

#85

poor prem!=(

i hope prem will get his love soon!

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sukrutha

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Posted: 15 years ago

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CHAPTER 5

Preet &Veera:hhhmmmm....ahem........

Prem and Heer left go each other suddenly when they came to know that there was somebody else present in the room other then them.

Preet:PB plzzz aap ye sab jab darwaaza band ho tab kijiye aise nahi......

Prem and Heer got embarrassed.Heer started moving to the dressing table giving a lame reason
Heer:wohh...il keep my bindi and come...excuse me....
Veera:par bhabi,you have already kept it........
Now Heer was speechless,she dint know what to tell....

At the same time Balraaj came there and saw Preet and Veera giggling.And Premeer ooked as if they were caught after doing crime or some thing.....

Balraaj came in"kya ho raha hai yahan.....????"
Preet:kuch nahi uncle aap apni beti se pooch lijiye...."and busted out laughing.Veera also joined him.

Balraaj:teek hai pooch loongi aur ek aur baat.kya mein apni beti se akele mein baat kar sakti hoon???Preeeeeeemmmm?????
Prem:why not uncle........sure.........

When Prem looked at Heer he could see the anger in her eyes towards her father.When he entered the room also he could see,but it increased when he asked for permission to talk to her.

Prem,Preet and Veera left the room and went down to the dinning table.

Balraaj:Heer beta......
Heer:mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni...."she showed all her anger today and she had that strength to do so.Dont know why,but still she could do it this time,which she was not able to do all these days,the reason maybe that she became somebody else's now.....she is the bahu of another house now.....they were her family.

Balraaj:ek mn meri baat.........'
his word were cut by Heer.
Heer:maine kaha na mujhe koi baat nahi karni......abb aap apne raaste par jaayiye aur mien apni....mein ab iss ghar ki bahu hoon......aap ki beti kab ki kho gayii....plzzzzz jaayiye aur phir kabhi mujhse milne math aayiye......jho kuch bhi aapne merel saath kiya hai usse mein nahi boolpaaungi....
PLEASE LEAVE"she was shouting with anger and was also crying......
By now Balraaj started to cry...
Baraaj:teek hai mein jaa raha hoon.....par tum Prem ke sath kush rahogi wahi mereliye sab kuch hai......mein abhi jaa rahaa hoon........"he said crying and Heer dint even care to turn around and see his face for the last time.She was angry....she dint see aal the good things he did to her but she could only think of that day when Rajveer left because of her father.

Balraaj went down.Heer wiped her tears and calmed herself and she also went down

Here Preet and Veera were busy teasing Prem while waiting for the breakfast.But Prem was busty with his file and was least bothered about what they were talking......
G3:kyun chidaa rahe usse aap dono.."while bringing the breakfast.

Lalit:are Balraaj aayye.....naashta kijiye....
Balraaj:nahi mujhe jaana hai,ek urgent kaam hai......"trying to hide his tears.
Prem saw this and came to know that something had happen up in the room between father and the daughter and he knew what it was.
Lalit:par aise kaise....nahi aapko khaana padege....plzzz.....
Prem saw Heer coming down.
Prem:haan bauji uncle ko ek meeting attend karni hai,usne mujhe bataaya bhi tha........usse jaane dijiye.....
Lalit:par....
Balraaj:next time aaunga na....khalunga.....dont worry,abb mujhe jaana hai
He said bye to all and left crying.

Heer came down and saw her father going she had tears but still dint let it flow.
They all assembled in front of the pooja mandir and they finished the pooja.
This time Premeerdid the pooja instead of Lalit and G3
After everything got over,it was the time for demand......

Preet&Veera:Bhabhi................We want sweet now................"thet shouted at the top of their voice.
Heer :par...
Preet:par var kuch nahi......humhe chayiye ......bus....
G3:sweet ke liye itna shor kyun machaa rahe ho.........
Kulraj:Heer tum mere saath aa.....yahan rahegi toh paagal hojaoge"telling this she took her into the kitchen.

Kulraaj:hmmmm........ab madam kya.....banaayegi..??hhhmm????haan keer banaayegi aur kya,Prem ka favourite jho hai....
Heer:hhmm....woh...hhmmm......?????"was lookinh that side this and not able to tel
Kulraaj:kyaa... baat hai....??????
Heer:woh........mujhe khaana banaana nahi aaata...."she sad sooo fast that Kulraj took some time to understand.
Kulraaj:kyaa.a......abbkya kare......???mujhe pata hai ki tum bina maa ke badi hui ho....so its obvious....koi baat nahi,abb mein thumhaara madad karloongi....par kisi ko math bathaana plzzz....top secret...sh......"she wisperd the lat 2 words in Heer's ears...
Heer just nodded her head.
Kulraaj helped her and she managed to prepare Kheer for everyone.....it took soe time as it was difficult for Heer and here otheres were getting impatient.Veera started to bang the table Jaldi..............
All were staring........
Heer came out with a bowl full of Kheer and everybody took a long breath....

All sat in the dining table......and started eating....
Kheer toh bohot acha banaa hai beta"lalit broke the silence
Heer looked at Kulraaj,and Kujraaj gave a assuring smile.Heer smiled back....
Even Prem liked it but dint open his mouth....All others told it was really yummy...
G3:vaise Kulraaj tum andhar kyaa kar rahi thi beta???
Kulraaj:.....vvooohh...maa main haan...voh mein usse saaman ki jaga....bahaa rahi thi....usse pata nahi na kahan kya hai....isiliyee..."
Heer breathed in relief.
Prem:Baauji ein aaj yahaan ki office jaana chaa tha hoon.Bohot din hogaya hai na....
except Heer all shouted Kya........??????

THIS TIME NO MORE PREMEERAND ITS MORE BORING......

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Edited by blufate.14 - 15 years ago