~~'MILAN'~~-part 25 and on pg120[28th may]

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meeshti jain

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

hey !!!

awesome update !!

loved it !!!!

heer shouldnt throw the anger on his father !!!

soo prem is trying to escape !!!!

but these family members wouldnt let jim go

update soon

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newt2007

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

nice update

Preet and Veera teasing sceence is lovely.

update soon.

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Harpreet Randhawa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

It's not boring i loved it!!!
plzzzzz do update soon!!
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nspn.92

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

nice update.😊

Update soon....

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sukrutha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

ppl plzzz do comment something 🤔 😭

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427936

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

very nyc................concept waes great i hope soon heer will love prem....plz update soon....

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sonia7

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

awesome update

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i wonder wat everyone would say if they find out heer doesent know how to cook

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Annwesha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#98

nice update !!

not boring at all..liked it..

do continue asap..

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sukrutha

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Posted: 15 years ago

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sukrutha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#100

CHAPTER 6

Prem:mein office jaa raha hoon aaj.
ALL:what!!!!!!!!!!!!
Prem:aap log aise kyun chilla rahe ho...."closing his ears.
Kulraj:tum paagal hogaye ho kya....shaadi ke pehli din heee..........
Prem:nahi di mujhe jaana padega.
Lalit:haan Prem aaj tum kahi nahi jaa sakta."making a angry face.
Prem:nahi baauji,mujhe jaana padega
Preet:ohhhhhh...come on PB app ek sentence ko kitni baar repeat karoge,you are not going to office.
Prem:stop it Preet.....woh bauji woh kya hai ki i dont have more time.4 din baad hum Mumbai chale jaayenge.....so before that I have to finish my work here.bus 2 meetings hai,usse katam karke aajaaonga.
Kulraaj:Prem...tum meetings ko cancel karo....who said you to keep the meeting on ur first day of marriage...huhh......bechaari Heer ke baare mein toh socho.....'making a pleading face

That time both Premeer looked at each other.Prem started to tell her in facial expression to help him and heer nodded her head in positive assuring him.

Heer:wohhh....nahi toh mujhe bura nahi lageega.its ok,important kaam hoga....so........
Veera:app bhi bhabi,kya jodi banaayi hai rab ne......ufffff.
Kulraj:ye le ye bhi......kya Prem ne tumhe kal hi manaa liyaa tha kya......?????????

Heer:aisa kuch nahi hai"she kerp on replying without meeting anybody's eyes......
SHE was crying.She was feeling a bit bad for talking to her father sooo rudely.

On the other hand Prem wanted to go to office so that he will not stay with Heer.If he did he couldnt control himself.He could not see her crying in their room all the time.He thought that if he stayed away from her she could feel free and think some thing.If he stayed at home,his siblings would always make them stay together and that may make Heer a bit uncomfortable.Even though he wanted her to stay in font of his eyes all the time,he couldnt make up to it.He was helpless.

Heer also wanted him to go to office.After all that happen yday night it was difficult for her,not only for her for both of them.She wanted to cry her heart out but not infront of Prem.Yes he is like her friend,but he is also her husband,dont know for how long so......

Thinking all these they had their breakfast and Prem left to office even without looking at Heer.He only took his parents aashirvaad and went off.Heer was going on looking at him "he dint even look at me..........why....???????"

HOPE U PPL LIKE IT
SORRY CUZ I WAS NOT ABLE TO WRITE ANYTHING PROPERLY.
IT IS NOT THAT GOOD BUT IT IS NECESSARY.

ppllzz.....ppllzz.......pplzzz.....ppllzz...comment and press the like button

sorry i couldnt give u ppl long update.

Edited by blufate.14 - 15 years ago