FF Jaaneman Chap 6 updated Pg18 25/3 pm sent later - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Loved Chapter 1!
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Awesome update!!
Cant wait till they meet in Delhi or maybe even before!!!
Plzzz update soon!
Cant wait!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: newt2007

lovely update.
Thanks 😃
Megher called Preet Monkey 😆 and a slap😭
yup lol aww dont cry it was for fun 😆
Preet so cute
yup he is 😃
Prem and Heer meeting part is lovely. same track repeated for both.
glad you liked it
Preet commenting about marriage. funny.
yup it is thanks for liking it
now Prem and Heer are meeting Harman Maya marriage.
yup they are
waiting update soon.
Thanks for liking and commenting means a lot to me will update today 😃

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That was a lovely chapter Mariam!!Loved Meets scene..A hilarious one😆

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Originally posted by: samrocking30

nice and awesome update

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Originally posted by: srikrithi

loved premeer & meet intro.
seems like its time for all 4 to meet in one place.
continue soon.

thanks for liking it wait and see lol 😃

Originally posted by: 0711rokxoxo

Ooooohh I loved it sis...

thanks glad you liked it 😃
Preet and Meher fight was hilarious... glad you liked it
haha... monkey aur upar se thapad..wow someones hot.. yup she coudnt tolerate his flirting 😆😆
Yes... mujhe lagta hai Prem cant live without calling preet.. he is very close to him 😃
Preet watch out dear tumhara bhai tumhari chutni bana ne aaraha hai lol yes preet has to be carefull 😆
Yikes!! I luv Premeer meeting.. thanks glad you liked it 😃
omg theyre meetin again in India!! yeah they are
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Originally posted by: harshiitii

its lovely

thanks glad you liked it 😃
premeer are going to meet in harman maya's marriage yeah thats my plan.
wating for some romantic premeer's scenes you will see some in the marriage then after that 😃

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Greek god well thats what Prem is .........update soon ..........add me 2 ur PM list plzzzzz

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Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Just read both parts, and they were great

thanks aaliyah glad you liked it 😃
Meet are so funny 😆, cant wait for their next meeting thank you glad you liked it 😃
Looks like Prem and Heer will meet at Harman and Maya's wedding yeah thats my plan for now
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Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

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lovelyyyyyyyy update!!!!! thanks glad you liked it 😃
the meet scene was nice.... thanks for liking it
so premeer have met...waiting for their first convo now!!!! yup they have and that will be soon too
both'll meet for harman's shaadi now.... yeah thats my plan for now 😃
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Originally posted by: -BabyCupid-

Awesome update!! thanks glad you liked it 😃
Cant wait till they meet in Delhi or maybe even before!!! thanks wait and see
Plzzz update soon! going to update in a bit
Cant wait!! thanks once again 😃
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Thanks!

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FF Jaaneman Chapter 3
Hey guys thank you so much for your comments and to all those who press the like button aswell I really appricate it well here is the next chapter 😃
London 12:00, Noon.

'Uff yeh itnee lambe line hai. And I need to reach back to university in an hour too. Oh god, hurry up.' Heer said to herself whilst waiting in the long queue to get herself ticket for Delhi for Maya's wedding.

'Hello, Mr Sharma? Yes Prem Juneja here. Yes thanks I'm fine. Please can I have a first class ticket to Delhi for next week? 'Prem spoke to his travel agent whilst sitting in his oversized office room.

'Date? Erm... Okay, the Monday which is coming up, so in two days. Is that confirmed?' Prem said finalising his seat over the phone. 'Thanks Mr Sharma, ill come pick up my ticket in half an hour personally. See you later.' He finished and turned his phone off. Getting up he left his office, and headed for the travel agents office to pick up his ticket, and finalise any other things.

'Hurry up, how long does it take to book a ticket.' Heer said to herself. There was one more person in front of her, who was taking a while to book his ticket. When the person finally left the office, Heer sighed in relief as she would be next. Walking up to the window, she told the man the dates of her departure and arrival back in London.

'Er, Tuesday would be nice.' Heer requested.

'Sorry mam, Tuesdays flight is booked up to the maximum, there is however one final seat on the Monday, would you like that one?' he asked.

'Fine, just give me that one.' Heer said quickly. She stuffed her ticket and passport into her bag, and walked full speed up to the door; she was late and had to reach back to university in exactly ten minutes. Not looking up, and concentrating in zipping up her bag , she didn't notice when she bumped into a person.

Falling down, all her things out of her bag spread all over the floor. now even angrier, she quickly gathered all of her scattered things and stuffed them into the bag, whilst cursing the person under her breath.

'Pagal, andha hai. I'm already late. Stupid. Duffer' she said to herself. Getting up again, she ran out of the agency and back to the university campus.

'Heer.' The person said to himself and walked into a private room to meet someone. Entering he sat on the comfy sofas and waited for the agent to arrive.

'Ah, Mr Sharma, how do you do?' Prem asked

'Fine my son. Here is your ticket. Booked for the coming Monday. Flight leaves at nine in the evening.' Mr Sharma said. Finishing up some other minor details, Prem left the office smiling in his thoughts about the bumping in with Heer. Walking towards the same coffee shop where she dropped coffee on him, he ordered the same and sat down taking his phone out to inform Mausi of his arrival.

'Bring Bring'

'Yo, Talking to Preet.'

'Preet.' Prem said sternly.

'PB, I meant Namaste. App kaise hai?' he asked changing his tone all of a sudden.

'Mein teek Preet, You? How's Uni going?' Prem asked.

'PB, I told you yesterday how Uni was going. Nothing is going to change in a day. And as for me, I am fit and fine.' Preet said.

'Preet.' Prem said once again.

'Sorry PB, so when are you coming to meet your beloved little brother?' Preet asked. Even though he joked with Prem a lot, he really missed his PB, and wished he was in Delhi with himself and Mausi.

'I really miss you PB' Preet said getting slightly emotional.

'Preet, tum roore hoon?' Prem asked, also getting sentimental.

'No, never! Preet Junjeja never cries.' He said. 'But seriously PB, when are you coming to meet me?' Preet asked.

'Monday.' Prem said simply.

'Na bro, I don't believe you. Really when are you are coming?' Preet asked.

'Preet, I'm really coming on Monday. Believe your brother here.' Prem replied.

'YESS! PB I can't wait.' Preet said. 'Wait, let me go and get Mausi, she will be so happy.' Preet continued.

'NO.' Prem said almost immediately.

'Why PB?' Asked Preet.

'I want to surprise her Preet. Right I'm coming on Monday. The flight is at night, so I will arrive on Tuesday morning. Make sure you're at the airport on time to pick me up. Okay?' Prem explained and asked.

'Yeh, yeh PB. I will try and remember. Ring me before you leave, just in case.

'Okay. Toh Mausi kidar hain?' Prem asked.

'Er, PB let me go check.' Preet said and went to look for Mausi. He went up towards her room and opened the door, seeing her sleeping he left there room, shutting the door behind him.

'PB Mausi is sleeping. Ring a bit later. Toh, did you get a call from Harmaan. Bechara is getting married.' Preet said laughing.

'Haan patta hai. That's why I am coming to Delhi, idiot.' Prem replied.

Both brothers carried on talking till late.

Delhi, Midnight, University Campus.

'Bring Bring.'

'Hell –ooo?' Meher said.

'Meher, did i wake you up?' Heer asked.

'Yeh di, doesn't matter. No problem na?' Meher asked.

'Yeh, everything is fine. I just rang to say that im leaving here on Monday night, so will reach Delhi on Tuesday morning. It's for Maya's wedding. She forced me to come.' Heer said.

'Okay di. I'll come and pick you up. I'll bring Geet along with me. Di we can stay at our own house for a few days until you are here.' Meher said, happy she would see her Di again.

'Yeh, as long as I'm there we will stay at our own house. And don't bring Geet along, we can go shopping after that, we need some wedding dresses.' Heer said.

'Okay di. Don't worry. Can't wait to see you again. Di i need to go to sleep know. See you soon' Meher said feeling tired.

'Okay, see you soon. Love you!' Heer said.

'Love you too di, Meher said, putting the phone down and going back to sleep.

Monday Night, London, Heathrow Airport, 21:00pm

'Here you go. My passport.' Heer said, giving her passport to the lady. She was checking in her luggage. Finally finishing, she picked up her ticket and left for the duty free. Looking around at the various shops she didn't realise when she bumped into someone. Moving her hair out of the way, she saw who it was. Not being able to move her gaze, she slightly whispered to herself.

'Prem.'

Ok guys here is Chapter 3 and sorry for any mistakes
feel free to criticize 😃
do leave your comments
Love Mariam
Edited by _Mariam_ - 15 years ago

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