Kisi Se Tum Pyar Karo(MeetSS)last pt...pg7 23/03 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: tadashi

haha, this part was soooo incredible filmy! ...i know😆😆but its okay I love filmy! okay I have to run.......whr to??

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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: meetun66

very nice

completely filmy......................
so glad meher also luv preet
so sweet...........
thanx 4 the pm

N im glad tht ur "glad"😃😃...Thanksss!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: srikrithi

hey great concept.
nice part. continue soon.

Thanks a ton dear!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: kptl

now tat i have to do my prt..ill be honest it was really good...thank u!!...and ya dat prt was malodramatic...😉...bhagwan se ladna aisi hi thodi hota hai.....bt m really happy dont think tat ive lost like prem have m happy bc meher understood her feeling for prem😆😆...so m sad bt at da sme time happy..like prem is...i gt it!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: alviraz

i likeeeee it !!! what do u mean? i dont understand 😛

Thanks ya...I meant u hv 2 do ur bit by givin me ur feedback!!!😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: monaghosh

FANTABULOUS👏 ...thankss yaa!!!!.....PREET IS CRITICAL😭 PREET TOOK MEHER'S NAME☺️ YUPPI MEHER ALSO LOVES PREETSHE DOESN'T LOVE THAT JOKER HARMAN😊 SHE SHUD HAVE TOLD PREET BEFORETHEN Y WAS SHE MARRYING THAT HARMAN😕 DONT MAKE
ANYTHING WORSE HAPPEN TO PREET😡NOW MEET CAN COME
CLOSER & ROMANCE A BIT 😃
KK MEANS OK I SHUD HAVE GUESSED😆....its kk😆😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: foxi

superb....thankss ya!!!...aww preet calling meher again and again.....and YESSSSSSSSSS... meher loves him tooo......yup!!!😃........i personally loved the end with meher thinking that Prem had gone mad....me tooo!!!.....continue asap😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part-4(Last part)
Before she could say anything the Doctor interuppted them....
"There is a good news for you guys...Mr.Preet is out of danger!!!"
Both Meher and Prem heaved a sigh of relief....Though for Prem he had two reasons to be happy!!!......
After an hour or so, Preet regained consciousness....He opened his eyes to find Prem standing on the edge of the bed, a huge smile plastered across his face!!!.........He shifted his gaze to find Meher sitting beside him....His hand was enclosed within her's.......Her eyes shed silent tears!!!....
"M-Meher tum yahan"....
"Sshh kuchh mat kaho....Doctor ne tumhe rest karne ke liye kaha hai!!"...
"Haan par...."
"Maine kaha na chup...", she said placing a finger on his lips...They both were lost in their own world only to be interrupted by Prem............
"Preet tu aaram kar.....main Meher ko drop kar ke aata hun.....bahut late ho gaya hai.....Uske ghar pe bhi kisi ko pata nahi hai ke voh yaha hai", said Prem.....
"Nahi Prem tum jao....main yahi rahungi", she said....
"Meher tumhe ghar jaana chahiye", Preet cut in...
"Nahi Preet main yahaan rahungi tumhare paas"
"Meher zidd mat karo....Ghar jao...tum kal subah phir aajana"
"Main kaha naa main kahi nahi jaungi...Prem tum ghar jao", saying so she gave Prem the famous 'Do as I say' look...He smiled at her knowingly and before leaving gave her a thumbs up which made her blush....Preet oblivious to their interaction looked at Meher, confused to see her turn red....
"Ab tumhe kya hua??", he asked
"Kuchh nahi!!!....Tum ab rest karo"
Nodding he closed his.........
After a few moments Preet suddenly opened his eyes as a thought struck him....
"Kal-kal toh tumhari shaadi hai na???"
"Haan", she said calmly...
"Aur tum yaha baithi ho!!", he said slightly raising his voice....Seeing her nod he flared up
"Are you insane Meher...Tumhe pata bhi hai tum kya kar rahi ho???", he said angrily
"Preet chill...tum tension mat lo"
"What do you mean tension na lun??.....Kal tumhari shaadi hai aur tum raat ke dhaai baje hospital mein baithi ho", he almost shouted.....
"Shut up Preet!!....Mujhe pata hai ki kal meri shaadi hai aur shaadi kal hi hogi...Ab main tumhare muh se ek shabd bhi nahi sunna chahti...Go to sleep!!!", she said in an authoritative tone...Preet nodded meekly in response and like a child follows his mother's instructions closed his eyes making Meher smile..........
The day's events and the accident soon took a toll over him and he drifted to a deep slumber............
Next Morning:
Preet opened his eyes to find the most wierdest sight in front of him...........The entire Mann family along with his friends,parents, Mishraji(the family lawyer) stood in front of him.......He looked at each person suspiciously only to land his eyes on Meher who was dressed in a red saree....Meher and saree?....He blinked his eyes to make sure he wasn't dreaming.....
"A-Aap sab log yaha??", he finally found his voice........
"Haan beta aaj shaadi haina isi liye!!!", said Teji chirpily...
"H-haan par aap log yaha kya kar rahe hain??", he said....The thought of his Meher marrying someone else was killing him....
"Shaadi ke liye", Heer said....
"Kya???....Mujhe kuchh samajh nahi aa raha"
It then struck him....He knew Meher wouldn't get married without having him by her side....He nodded at the realization....
"Mishraji", said Lalit.......
"Ji sir....Meher pehle tum sign karo"....He passed the papers to her....
Preet was so busy scanning the room to find Harman taht he failed to notice that Meher was holding the papers in front of him.....
"Preet", she called to draw his attention....Looking at the papers he looked at her questioningly....
"Sign karo", she prompted him....
"Huh?...Oh achha"..Obviously Meher would make him sign as one of the witnesses....
He took the pen from her and signed where she asked him to, trying to keep his shaky hands steady....His head was throbbing...This was it...He had lost her....forever.....
"Mishraji", said Meher handing the papers to him....
"Congractulations!!!...I now pronounce you as man and wife!!!..", he added jokingly....
"Kya??", he exclaimed...
Everyone in the room burst out into fits of laughter...."Congractulations Preet"....Saying this they left the room leaving Meher to deal with the ever so confused Preet....
"Meher yeh sab??", he asked....
"Shut up....Don't you say another word.....Vaise toh bahut bolte ho tum par apni dil ki baat nahi keh sake"
"M-Meher"
"Tumne yeh soch bhi kaise liya ki main Harman se.....Bhagwan na kare agar yeh accident na hua hota toh aaj meri Harman se shaadi ho jaati!!"
"Kya??"
Meher realizing what she said bit her tongue and continued..."Mera matlab voh nahi tha...But agar yeh accident na hota toh mujhe sab kaise pata chalta"
"Tumhe kisne?"
"Prem ne aur kis ne??", she replied irritadely..."You duffer pehle ye batao ke tumne pehle kyun kuchh nahi kaha??"
"Meher, jis din tumhari shaadi ki baat fix hui thi main tumhe propose karne wala tha!!"
"Uss din....Oh toh tabhi tum itna ajeeb sa behave sa behave kar rahe the", she said recalling the incident in her room but realizing that she was angry with him she continued, "Jo bhi ho the fact remains ke tumne apne feelings mujhse chhupayi....Tumne apne pyar ko yunhi jaane dia.....Koshish bhi nahi ki mujhe paane ki"
"Meher mujhe laga ki tum Harman ke saath khush ho"
"Khush my foot....Agar Prem mujhe kal nahi batata toh mujhe kabhi tumhare dil ki baat pata nahi chalti.....Khud toh tum devdas bann hi chuke the mujhe muft mein Paro bana dete!!!....Main-main tumse kabhi baat nahi karungi...I hate you!!!", she said leaving towards the door only to be stopped by Preet, who held her wrist...
"Achha toh aap mujhse kabhi baat nahi karengi huh??......And what did u say you hate me??"
"Haan, I hate you", she said...
"But i love you", he said huskily pulling her so that she crashed against his chest....
"Leave me Preet..", she tried to wriggle out of his grip...
"No"
"You can't stop Meher Mann from doing anything!!", she said challenging him...
"I know...But I can definately stop Meher Juneja, my wife from leaving the room....", He said with a smirk on his face making her blush profusely....
She was about to protest when she felt his lips seal hers making her go weak on her knees............The kiss was so passionate that it knocked off all her senses and soon she found herself responding to him with the same heat and passion!!!!!
The End
P.S: So here's the last part.....I'm elated....This is the first piece of writing that i have completed.....I'd like to thank all of you for appreciating it....I hope you enjoyed reading this......There is something i'd like to tell you i'll be busy with my exams which are starting from 8th of April.....So i'll not be able to update my fics till May.....I'm sorry but i'm seriously not prepared n i can afford to waste anymore time.....I hope you guys understand!!!
Luv you loads,
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww....finally ...ta was really good......i was jst confuse as preet bt m happy now....lol tat was funny da way meher tried to be angry wid him...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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That was just great
Loved the ending, especially this part:
"You can't stop Meher Mann from doing anything!!", she said challenging him...
"I know...But I can definately stop Meher Juneja, my wife from leaving the room....",
Thanx for the PM

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