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Posted: 15 years ago
oh my god first of all i didnt expect that all this will be heer's dream i mean her getting married to prem and having his baby
wow
anyway as it is now a dream but still i like the present too and heer's possessiveness towards prem and i hate this sanjana
i love the story line seriously selvy u are great hats off to u
thanks for the pms and i will try to read the other updates soon too and will comment
thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey great part, really liked prem'heer's parts lol
im glad that prem isn't that fond of sanjana, maybe he also loves heer...
anyway cant wait for more
do continue soon
Maheen xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 62
awesome update but very shocking too...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Lovely update……😊

Prem unknowingly hurt Heer's feelings while Heer herself not understanding

the real conversation b/w Prem & Sanju…friends giving advice to Sanjan –nice part.

Heer taking stern decision on being with Prem as herself forever….its good Veera

pointed probable location of Heer & Prem in darkness figured his Heer….Loved the anger & patching up looks of Prem & both enjoying their time by renewing their childhood &Heer very tricky asked wht her mind needing answer & Prem given the exact reply wht she expected…..Heer with her soul interaction & her stubborn decisions…..Icecream scene very nice & both prefers to sleep like their childhood period ….

Hope this happy Prem soon realise wht Heer desires for their life……😉

Fabulous one….⭐️ waiting for next part…..Continue soon…

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update..
waiting when Prem will realize his love for Heer
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow......fabulous update!
lovelyyyyyy premeer scenes......
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
😲 all wat happend b4 was just a dream ummm😕
i'm shocked !!!!!!!! can't belive dat ups
but gr8 twist yaa it was Unexpected but even though 😛
but plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz don't make prem marry dat sanjana🤢
hope he'll realize dat wats btw him nd heer is more dan just friendship
anyway its fun 2 read all ur FF's nd all of ur updates is awesome😃
plzzzzzzzzzzz do continue sooooooooooon
nd thanx alot 4 ur PM
Edited by H-xx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 66

Morning, Heer got ready to go to college. She picked up her things thinking of asking Prem to drop her. She saw Prem arranging his files inside his bag. She is about to step into his room but stopped when she heard his mobile ringing. Prem attended the call. Heer decided to move away. Hearing Sanjana's name Heer decided overhear their conversation. To her luck, Prem switched on the speaker and kept it on the bed. he continued turning papers in a file.

Sanjana 'Prem, there is an Indian costume exhibition. Will you take me there today.' Prem 'what time Sanju?' Sanajan 'i have only half day class today. will you pick me up around 2? We can go for evening outing after that.' Prem 'I'm sorry Sanju. I have a very important meeting with a client at 1.' Sanjana 'its okay Prem. I go with my mother. You give me a call if your gets over before that.' Prem 'bye.'

Before Prem didn't sense Heer presence inside his room , Heer quickly walked out silently thinking about their conversation. One side she is happy that he didn't agree to take Sanjana to that exhibition, on the otherside she is unhappy the way he talked to her.

Heer went down and sat in living room. She is searching some plan to make Prem fall for her. Her eyes fell on the newspaper advertisement. The same exhibition. She picked up the paper in her hand. she is lost in her own thought.

Prem sat next to her 'what are you reading dear?' he looked at the paper. Heer without lifting her eyes from the paper, 'there is an Indian costume exhibition.' Prem 'I know.' He pulled the paper from her hand and started reading. Heer in a pleading tone turned to Prem 'Prem, please take me there.' Prem shook his head 'no way. I have a meeting today.' Heer 'please Prem, after 2.' Prem shook his head and headed towards the table for breakfast.

DJ who came there saw Heer with a pleading tone asking something to Prem. Heer again asked him but Prem refused. Biting his breakfast 'Heer, I'll drop on my way. Come fast.' Heer with a defeated face ate her breakfast.

When Prem moved out, she too followed him. Prem 'you go with Veera.' Heer in a angry tone. 'she never likes Indian dresses.' Prem 'she can just give company.' Heer 'I don't need your ideas. I know how to manage on my own. I'm not kid.' She got into the car. 'sorry for disturbing you. I'll ask dad to get me a car so that I can go on my own.' She pressed 'I don't have to depend on anyone.' Prem curved his lips in surprise. 'do it.' Heer in anger turned her face to otherside.

Until they reached the college, both didn't utter a word. Prem dropped Heer in her college. Without looking back Heer walked into the college. Prem shouted 'Bye Heer.' Heer didn't reply.

In the college, Heer is totally upset and playing with her paper and pen. Scribbling Prem name several time on the paper. Veera noticed her behaviour. Heer didn't concentrate not even for a second in the lecture. After the college hours, Veera 'Heer, either you tell the love to him or forget him. behaving like this not good.' Heer 'I don't have strength.' Veera 'try before its getting too late. Lucky that they didn't get engaged. You have time till that.' Heer with a sad face looking down and walking towards the parking with Veera. Suddenly, Veera hit Heer's hand with her elbow. Heer sensing something important in her hit, looked at her with confusion. Veera with her eyes signed her to look forward.

Prem leaning on his car, legs crossed and hand folded across his chest smiling at Heer. Heer for a second stopped and then increased her speed towards Prem. 'Prem, are you waiting for me?' Prem looked around 'I thinK you are my Heer.' he looked around 'Then surely for you only.' Heer looked back at Veera 'bye Veera.' Veera happily waving bye to Heer went to her car.

Prem took Heer book from her hand and kept it in the back seat. He opened the front passenger seat for her. Heer still unable to understand the situation sat inside. Prem started the car. Heer 'where are we going Prem?' Prem 'don't you want to go to that exhibition.' Heer happily 'ha'.

Heer 'you had meeting?' Prem smiled 'I postponed it.' Heer 'for me.' Prem shook his head 'yes. for my Heer.' She leaned onto him and kissed his cheek 'thanks.' Prem smiled.

They went to the exhibition. Heer enjoyed looking at the collections of Indian costumes. Prem helped Heer to select few dresses. When they moved to the sarees section, Heer liked two sarees. She placed her hand on it to pick it up. 'I like these two Prem.' Another hand too touched the saree 'I like this Prem.' Prem and Heer with a shock looked up. Prem smiled while Heer stared at her with anger. 'I selected it first.' Sanjana 'its only for me.' Heer took the sarees in her hand 'no its for me.' she turned to ask help from Prem. Sanjana 'Prem, tell her to give that to me. I liked it.' Prem 'no Sanju, Heer selected it before you. You select something else.' Heer gave victorious smile. Sanjana got angry.

Prem took those sarees in his hand. 'Sanju, do you want anything.' Sanjana shook her head 'no.' Prem went to the counter and paid the bill. Heer happily dumped the bags inside the car. She saw Sanjana following them angrily. Sanjana 'I want to talk to you Prem.' Prem stopped and listened to her. Sanjana 'alone.' She looked at Heer.

Prem opened the car door and made Heer sit inside 'Heer you sit. I'll be back.' Heer nodded. Sanjana took Prem away to a distance. Heer is happy that there is a tension between them. She was able to see them clearly but can't hear their conversation.

Sanjana in anger 'Prem, how can you do like this? first you said you have meeting. But you are here with Heer. you gave her the saree which I selected. you are giving more space for her.' Prem 'listen Sanju. My meetings got postponed so I decided to pick Heer. she asked me in the morning but I refused. You have your mother to accompany but she don't even know the route in this city.' Sanjana 'don't you see the way she is taking advantage of you. I didn't like the way she is moving with you.' Prem 'We grew up together. We shared each and every thoughts and moments. You should understand my relationship with Heer. You are going to be my wife but for that I cannot ignore a person with whom I spent time my child.' Sanjana somehow felt that Prem is caring for her too when he said 'you are going to be my wife.' Sanajan gave understanding smile to Prem. Prem is happy.

Inside the car, Heer observing their expression, she understood Sanjana's angry face and Prem's trying to clear his point. Heer got confused when Sanjana smiled at the end. She got disappointed. She thought Sanjana will burst into anger form the way she started the conversation. But it ended in a smooth way. She walked away with a sweet smile. Heer looked at Prem who is happily getting into the car.

Heer 'what did you said to her? She seems to be happy.' Prem 'its between me and Sanju.' He looked at her with tough face. 'See how polite she is. She understood when I told to respect you. but you are looking at her like enemy. Why can't you think her as your sister? Nothing wrong in giving one saree to her. She is going to be my wife.' Heer got a blow on her face. She felt as if she is lifeless. Tears threaten to come out of her eyes. Her heart started bleeding. Prem without looking at her drove the car. Heer silently biting her lips to control the tears looked outside. Only his last statement is ringing in her ears.' She is going to be my wife.'

Sanjana looked at her mother with a smile. Mother gave a confused look. 'ma, I just acted as if I understood his explanation for their relation. Wait till our marriage. After that I'll chase Heer out of his life forever.' Both got into the car. 'I was keeping my eye on Prem from the day I saw him with Heer in a party. I won't leave anyone to take away from me.'

Geet 'that is why we planned carefully and moved through his parents.' Sanjana 'I have to thank you and dad for helping in this.' Geet 'we have planned to ask Heer for our Rishab.' Sanjana 'why? I don't want to see her with Prem again.' Geet 'you are going to stay in Prem's house. And she will be in our house.' Sanjana 'even then' Geet 'Sanjana, if Heer marries someone else other than Rishab then her parents may allow them to stay in JM mansion that is why we planned in this. Heer will be out of Prem's life forever and under our control.' Sanjana is happy about this idea.

When Prem and Heer reached the home, she angrily walked inside. Prem casually opened the back seat and picked up all her books and shopping bags and headed in to the house. Heer went to the table and took one glass of water, she drank water in one gulp. DJ got shocked.

Prem 'Heer, here is your bags.' Heer shouted in anger 'I don't want. Give that to your would be.' Prem calmly 'Heeeer.' DJ 'what happened?' Heer 'Mausi, I selected a dress saree. Sanjana too wanted it. I didn't give that to her. Prem is angry on me for that.' with tears 'he wants me to give that to his would be.' She ran upstairs wiping her tears. Prem just stared at the way she is running. DJ shook her head in disbelief.

Prem ran behind Heer. Heer with anger sat on the bed hugging her knees. Prem entered behind her 'Heer, listen to me. just for you I came to the exhibition. I supported you when you choose this dress. she too didn't fight. I suppose to spend time with her but ' Heer shouted in anger 'i don't want to listen anything Prem. I understood everything. Its my fault that I expected you with me. I know I don't have any rights on you anymore.'

Prem 'I didn't say like that Heer.' he is about to sit next to him saying 'you have all the rights on me.' Heer 'please Prem leave me alone. I don't have any rights on you. Friendships are meant to be nice only in movies not in real. No one likes to see their partner with someone else.' She turned her face away. 'I won't come between you and Sanjana.' Prem touched her shoulder. She shrugged off his hand 'Prem, please leave me alone. Please' Prem got up leaving shopping bag on her bed. Heer words broke 'take that away. I don't want that. I don't want to break any one's heart. Give that to your wife.' She fell on the bed hugging the pillow 'you are not my Prem.' she cried 'you are not my Prem.' Prem walked out with the heavy heart.
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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap

Edited by sweta2005 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
ohh my bothhh r heart broken nd m toooo

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