FF - Marriage Contract Part 33(18/04)148 UPDATED!! - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
hiiiiiiiiii
awesome update
finally prem got a girl to get married ..........
that is none other than heer
waiting for their marriage
pls update soon
ur 2 ff's make me crazy
this ff is also drove me in the ssame way
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update this ff daily
and plzzzzz add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Hay love ur ff!!
Great start!
Cant wait to read more!!
Plzz pm me when u update!!
Thanks!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
awesome... cant wait to read what you have in their future!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
Very nice update...
haha... ur talking abt Meher and Preet
even I cant stop laughing.. really prem's grandpa was a prophet..
lol... very nice... so heer agreed... nice... please continue...
Thanks soo much....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
stunning ff.....prem's grandpa s wise 😆
heer agreed....hope marriage changes prem
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
awesome part 2
i wanna know what happens next update soon and do pm me when you update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
sorry friends making you all wait.
i didn't send PM for the last part.
give me on hour time. i'll do it.
Thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

Part - 3

Prem decided to introduce Heer to his parents. Heer was silent during the drive. She was lost in her thoughts. She thought her decision is quick. 'can I ask him time to think so that I can reconsider the future problems?'

Prem is carefully noticing Heer face getting confused. But he kept quiet. She turned to Prem after a long struggle. 'Mr. Prem, will you please give me 24 hrs time to think. I'll tell the result t'row?'

Prem parked the car in the roadside. 'I think you are not ready. No problem for me. I'll try other girls who are willing. But I cannot give you time. Every day is precious for me.

In his heart he doesn't want to lose her. He wants her. He don't have any other girl in his list. He simply lied to her. He patiently waited for Heer to react to his words.

Heer thought 'he is a rich man. any girl will agree for this for money.' She looked outside. Her thoughts went to her mother 'I won't get another chance.' She came to conclusion 'now I need my mother other things are secondary. I have one year time to think.' She nodded 'yes Mr. Prem I'm ready. We can meet your parents now.'

Prem happy about her decision and started his car. He whispered 'thanks Heer.' Every time when he call her name made her body shiver in unknown happiness. Heer 'will your parent agree for me?'

Prem smiled 'they want a DIL that's all. But you should not tell them about our contract.' Heer agreed. Prem called his parents and informed that he is coming to home with their DIL.

Prem parked the car in the mansion. He quickly got out of the car and opened the door for her. Heer stepped out of the car and looked the mansion. She thought 'is it a house or a palace?'

Prem walked ahead of her. Heer walked slowly behind him. Lalit and Gaya3 are anxiously waiting in the living room to meet their DIL. Heer with fear stepped inside the house. Prem walking to his parents 'Dad, she is Heer. I love her.'

Lalit thoughtfully 'morning you said you don't have anyone as lover. Now.'

Prem 'I love Heer but only today I confessed my love to her. I was little bit feared that she will deny my love.' After a silent he smiled 'luckily she agreed.'

Gaya3 smiled and moved towards Heer. She gave an observing look to Heer. 'nice selection. She looks beautiful.' Heer smiled and touched her feet. Gaya3 is happy 'I'm happy that you have selected a traditional girl.' She pat her cheek. She pressed a kiss on her forehead.

Lalit 'Heer, nice name.'

Heer touched his feet. He gave his blessing to her. Gaya3 held Heer hand and took her to mandir. Prem is little bit tensed. 'what Ma is going to ask her now?'

Gaya3 stood in front of the mandir with Heer. She looked into her eyes 'Heer, are you sure?'

Heer gave a confusing look. Gaya3 understood her confusion 'Heer, I don't know how he behaves with you but he is a playboy. He doesn't care about anything.'

Heer thought 'it's a contract why should I bother about his character.' In clear voice 'Ma, I know about him. He will surely change after the marriage.'

Gaya3 is speechless about her confidence 'I have confidence on you Heer.' She pat her cheek 'I like you very much.'

Prem relieved when Gaya3 came with smiling Heer. Gaya3 turned to Lalit 'I like Heer very much. She is DIL of this house and wife of Prem.' Lalit happy 'then okay for me also.' He turned to Heer 'Heer, I like to meet your parents.'

Heer 'my father passed away two years back. I'm living with mother. I'm only daughter.'

Lalit 'okay, I'll come to your house for further talks.' Heer agreed.

Prem drove her to home. When she is about to get out of the car 'Mr. Prem, I think you will not forget your promise later.'

Prem 'I made the contract and will not forget it. I'm not a cheater. Your contract starts from the day we marry. You are free to leave me the second after you deliver my baby.'

Heer felt sad for asking him a harsh question. Looking at her sorry face, Prem 'its okay. You wanted to clear your doubt.' Heer surprised. She said 'bye' to him.

Prem happily drove the car to a park where Preet and Megher are waiting for him. When they saw Prem car, both literally jumped in anxiety. They jumped with joy when they saw Prem happily getting out of the car showing his thumbs up. Preet and Megher hugged. Preet shouted 'congrats.'

Prem 'I'm happy Preet it worked out nicely. Its all happened because of you both.' He hugged Preet.

Preet 'its good that she agreed and your parents. Now her parents should agree.'

Prem 'she has only mother. I think she will make her mother agree for this.'

Megher 'any mother will agree if her daughter is getting a prince.' Prem and Preet too felt the same.

Preet 'but you have tough tasks ahead.' Prem confused. Preet putting his hand around Prem shoulder 'marriage can be done but without the knowledge of your father and mother how are you going to take her to the hospital?'

Prem 'I too thought about it. We have to find the doctor.'

Megher 'you cannot risk with unknown doctors.'

Prem confident 'I'll try to take her to some other place even outside India.' Preet and Megher wished him good luck. Prem ran towards the car shouting 'marriage will be in two days.'

Preet turned to Megher, who was lost in her thought. 'Megher, shall we move?' coming out of her thought she looked at Preet with a sad face. Preet confused about her sudden sadness. Preet shook her holding her shoulder 'Megher what happened?'

Megher thoughtfully 'thinking about Heer. She needs money. So she agreed. What will be her life after one year?' Preet noticed tears in her eyes. 'Preet, Prem will be happy after one year because he is getting crown and his baby. But what about Heer?'

Preet 'she is getting money for her mother heart surgery.'

Megher 'when her mother comes to know about her daughter's for her surgery, surely she won't be alive.' She looked at Preet 'then who will be with Heer. She will left alone in this world without her mother and baby.'

Preet 'she will find her own partner after that.'

Megher cut in 'who will marry a divorced women?' Preet understood her words 'we are also part of drama which is going to spoil one girls life.' He hugged Megher 'we can't do anything now but we can pray that they should remain together forever.' Megher agreed and they walked back to their car silently.

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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
Rishi87 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
great update
like meher i too have the same confusion regarding heer anyways interesting update waiting for the next...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
nice part.....
even i hope that premeer'll never have a divorce!
waiting for the marriage.....
continue soon!
and thanks for the pm

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