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Posted: 14 years ago
par mene abhi tak post nahi
i need to edit it guys
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oye hue!!😲 yaahaaan race lagi hi hai aur mujhe pata hi nahi!!🤣
Mine
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Originally posted by: Noor_PremHeer

oye hue!!😲 yaahaaan race lagi hi hai aur mujhe pata hi nahi!!🤣

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mine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so many people came before me😡
its all schools fault!!😡
im going to cry now😭😭
your all elder than me
have some mercy!
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Updating after a long time, I promised I would continue posting my stories wheneve I write them further so here is the remaining part of the OS Jaane Do Na
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Summary of the Jaane Do Naa (OS)

Prem had a nightmare where he saw Heer was dead. Now he will do anything for not letting this turn into a reality. Even if this involved seducing his wife for not leaving the house.

First part of this OS is on pg-17, do read that first to get an idea about this OS.
This part is again dedicated to Waqas as he desperately waited for it and if it wasnt for him motivating me again and again I dont think I could hv ignored my writer's block and wrote this. So bro this very passionate OS is dedicated to you. Thanx for always being there.
Thank you everyone who has liked my Os and who took out some time to comment for it. thanx a ton, it means a lot to me.
Warning: Its very (I mean it) a very passionate OS. Read it at your own risk, you have been warned.
Disclaimer: Lyrics of this song dont belong to me, infact they are lyrics of an old famous song from a movie named 'Sagar'.
Hope you like it, here is the second part for you all😃:
Second Part
Why Heer is so stubborn when it comes to her career? Can't she for once give in to my wishes while keeping aside her career? Now what should I do? I can't lose her. There is no question about it. Now there is only one way to stop her. To make her forget everything but me. I have to remind you about my presence in your life Heer. Nobody can take you away from me. No one, thought Prem determined to stop her.

He went towards his closet and took out a pair of shirt and jeans which he knew Heer loved the most. There was no way she would be able to resist him tonight. You are not leaving me tonight Heer. I will make sure of it, thought Prem and smiled devilishly.

Heer came out of the bathroom drying her hair with her towel. She was wearing the red saree. In saree she always felt comfortable, so she decided to wear this. Water was not only dripping down her hair, but also hugging her body at every place where the saree wasn't draped around her. When Prem saw her like this, he was hit by uncontrollable surge of need'need to touch her, need to kiss her, need to hold her, need to take her in his arms, need to make her his all over again. The anxiety of losing her, had amplified this feeling hundred times within him. By every passing moment it was becoming very difficult for him to stay away from her, to control himself from letting her know what he is feeling for her right now. His eyes scanned her body from head to toe, especially the areas where water was touching her. He couldn't see or focus on anything else but on Heer standing in front of him'looking very enticing'.her figure inviting him. Gradually, it became difficult for him to breadth as he saw his sexy wife in front of him, making it unbearable for him to stay at his place or say to keep his hands with himself. He wanted to touch her everywhere, wanted to feel her body coolness beneath his body heat, and then find a way to mix their body temperature. Now he didn't even want to hold himself back. From the moment he saw water all over her, he wanted to suck it away and now he will do just what he wanted. There was a chance to be with his love'.his wife'.and there was no way he would give up on it. She has completely dazed him and there was no way he would let her keep him away from what he desired.

Feeling his stare upon her, Heer looked up and was completely taken aback by the look in his eyes. She had never seen this yearning in his eyes'as though he desperately wanted her close. The passionate look and the hunger in his eyes for her, was enough to arouse an exciting feeling within her. When a shiver ran down her body, she became aware of the fact that he was dressed differently now. Infact very differently. When she left him to go in the bathroom, he was wearing his usual white kurta with his pajama but now he was wearing white shirt, top buttons of which were open. She can see his naked chest from the top view, but as last two buttons were clasped together yet, he had detained her from getting the complete look of his chiseled chest. He knew this would ignite a fire within her but the restrained view will also make her feel terrible. Oh how much she wanted to have that full view and she also knew a trick or two to have her way but now wasn't the right time. If she did, she knew she would not make it to the airport on time. Prem knows this and still he is dressed in such a way to raise an arousal in her. Heer control your feelings, thought Heer. She closed her eyes for a second and took a deep breadth to put stop to her desires and trying to block the image of what she could with Prem's body or how she could torture him for tormenting her at such a wrong time. Ok Heer stop now, thought Heer scolding herself.

She opened her eyes and realized what a big mistake it was as every warning she had given to herself was turning futile when she saw that along with white shirt Prem had wore blue jeans. It was completely tight on his body and Heer could imagine what it was resulting at his back. He was looking so delicious, ready to be eaten by her. Ommmp, oh God what is he planning to do to me? She let her eyes to take his complete attire in one go. She knew may be this is not right but may be for few minutes she can enjoy this magnificent specimen God had created to torture gals. He was easily succeeding in his task to create havoc inside of her. He was teasing her by not giving her complete view of his chest, which Heer wanted to desperately touch now. To feel his body under the tips of her fingers. She wanted to explore his body again, know every part of his body again. She could feel goosebumps starting to form on her body. Her fingers started to itch to touch him, to feel him. He knew exactly what to do to give rise to her desires. Why was Prem doing this? Why is he teasing her? He knew she can never resist him like this. He knows that she soon has to leave for the airport, but if he is standing like this'so tempting and alluring'in front of her, how will she able to go. Now how she will able to concentrate on her driving or rather anything else? All the time she would be thinking about him or just to say about the image that he had inhabited in her mind. Why is he doing this? What he has in mind to dress up like this and tormenting her, thought Heer biting her lower lip in anticipation.

Seeing the flushed face of his wife, Prem smirked and started walking towards her. He knew there would be inner battle going on her head and so he had to do something soon. He again looked up and down her body and couldn't stop the wave of desire burning within him. He could feel his breathing getting short as he moved closer towards her. Heer saw his eyes turning dark with lust and passion. She had never seen Prem directing such a lustful gaze towards her, and she could feel herself getting nervous by anticipating what he had in mind.

He can't live without her and he has to make her feel this. Just once Heer come near me and I will ravish you all night. I promise, I wouldn't give you a moment to think and regret your decision to stay with me, thought Prem. He moved confidently towards as though he was dazed by something. Infact he was dazed by the beauty of his beautiful wife. Heer took an anxious step back, completely in dilemma about what she should do? Prem don't do anything please, thought nervous Heer.

Heer: Jaane doo naa

Prem held Heer wrist stopping her from moving further back. The moment they touched each other, she felt as though time froze between them. That touch was burning her skin and making her feel unknown desires. His eyes were full of fire, love, lust and need'.a deadly mixture. Heer had a feeling that if she had to make to airport then she had to give a tough fight and problem was that she was on verge on giving up to his demands now. She knew that there are very few chances she can avoid Prem tonight.

Prem: Ae pass aao naa

Prem tightened his grip on her wrist and pulled her, softly but firmly, towards him. She hit his chest immediately. Having her so close to him, on one hand was bringing a soothing feeling to his heart and on the other hand, was igniting passion more within him. Heer gasped when she felt his chest with her hands because of Prem's pull. Where you think you are going Heer? Think you can escape me, thought Prem.

Heer: Oh Jaane doo naa

Heer tried to get free of his hold though not whole heartedly. But the more she struggled, the more Prem's hold tightened on her soft waist. His other hand held her hands at her back which made her front completely meet with his. There was so less distance between them that Prem had tightly pressed her against him. And the more she was struggling the more he was liking this moment. Heer could feel his heart beating fast being very close to hers. She looked up him, and her heart gave a quick beat. Prem's lips were so close to her. If either one would have made even one single small move, they could easily kiss each other passionately. Just one step. And Prem knew how much he wanted to touch his Heer's soft lips. He groaned with the torture he was feeling to keep himself from not touching her lips.

Prem: Ae pass aao naa

But Prem had to control his urge as he knew Heer would not be turned on so easily. He would have to work her up a lot more. So he turned her around and hugged her from behind, with his hands still holding hers, on her stomach, not giving her any chance to make any to move to contradict his plan.

Heer: Cho naa, cho na, mujhe cho na cho na

Dekho cho na, cho na, cho na

Prem started trailing his fingers on her arms touching each and every drop of water in his way. Heer closed to feel him against her, loving his touch in every way. She could sense the heat building between them. But she knew she shouldn't give in to his tactics infact try to go away for him. I can't let him weaken my resolve, thought Heer.

Prem: Aao na aao naa, pass, aao na, aao naa

Dekho aao na, aao na, aao na

She tried to move a bit in front but Prem pulled her back and she hit his chest tightly. He lowered his head at her neck and inhaled her smell. God he loved it and it was driving him crazy. Her fresh shower smell combined with her unique body smell which always reminded Prem of vanilla, was enough to put him on edge. He nuzzled her neck slowly with his nose. Then he got an idea, he touched her slim neck with his tongue. Heer gasped and closed her eyes. Prem chuckled as he knew that his hot tongue would be doing wonders on her cold showered body. Even Heer should get taste of her own medicine. Enough with her teasing him, now she would have to go through the same and know what he was feeling.

Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God, these were the only thoughts in the mind of Heer now. This will not end well, Heer knew this. She suddenly turned around and looked in the eyes of Prem and gave him a look of full of passion. Prem was stumped for a moment. Heer started closely the distance between their faces. She looked at his pink lips and her mouth started watering. She was so tempted to give in and kiss those luscious and enticing lips of her lover. She looked in his eyes again and knew by the look in his eyes that he knew what she intended to do. His eyes had darkened from lust and Heer gulped by the intensity of that expression. According to him she was taking too long to do inevitable so Prem touched back side of her head and starting pulling her lips to meet his. But before he could pull her face towards him, Heer steadied her hands on his chest and pushed him. She had taken him by surprise and as a result he had taken a step or two back. But ultimately Heer was out of his arms and before he could know what's happening, she ran out towards the garden.

Prem immediately felt the loss but smirked knowing she can't escape him tonight. If she was in for the chase so he will give her what's she wants but ultimately do what his heart and body desires.

Heer ran towards the garden, she knew she has to get away from him if she plans to board that flight tonight. But the movement she entered the garden, she knew it was the wrong move on her part as it was raining heavily. Not fair, thought Heer. Now I will be soaked from head to toe and would have to change. But what if Prem saw me like this'NO, thought Heer while still standing in rain.

Prem found her standing in rain, which was soaking her completely. Her red saree was clinging to her body tightly giving her very sensuous look. Heer turned and saw Prem looking up and down her body. She blushed and was about to move when Prem caught her wrist.

Heer: Chodo kalai, dekho roo dongi

Jao main tumse nahi bolungi

Heer tried to get her wrist out of his hold but of no use. She looked at him as though ordering him to leave her to which Prem simply pouted. She narrowed her eyes at him when he started moving forward, not looking anywhere but at her eyes. Heer made face at him showing him that she is not pleased with him. Prem raised his eyebrow then smirked. He looked at her wrist which was still in his hand and then looked in her eyes. While still looking at her to know what her reaction would be, he kissed upper part of her hand. Heer tried to hide her smile and keep her stern look. Prem started moving forward towards her while kissing her arm.

Prem: Maan bhi jao meri baat sanam

Hatton mein rehne do yeh hath sanam

Prem kissed her shoulder and went towards her back while encircling her hand, which was still held by his hand, around her. Now she was against caught against his chest, under his arms. He moved closer to her neck and drew out his breadth. His hot breadth made her shiver against him. Heer kept her another hand too on Prem's which was around her chest holding her other hand. Prem brought his other hand towards her stomach and at first just touched it. Heer closed her eyes. Then second she slowly but steadily started touching her stomach with his fingers. Then he started moving them slowly, not leaving any inch where his fingers didn't trace her stomach's soft skin.

Heer: Cho naa, cho na, mujhe cho na cho na

Dekho chooo na

Heer leaned in his strong chest. His body heat was engulfing her, giving a soothing feeling to her insides. She felt so warm as though it was not raining. She felt so good, protected in his arms, not wanting to go anywhere, just remain like this forever. She was liking it so much.

She wanted to have grip on her emotions, didn't wanted to feel what Prem was trying to make her feel, but she knew that there is no way out now, and that she will ultimately give in. She didn't want to fight anymore with this urge to have a passionate and memorable night with her husband.

"Don't fight Heer. Just give in. Be mine again this night", said Prem nipping her earlobe. Heer took a deep breadth and made a decision. She turned around and looked in his eyes and said "I am always yours. Yours and only yours." Prem was feeling like he was losing himself in her eyes. He tried to tell how much he loves her. Heer got his message, she smiled and brushed her lips lightly against his.

Heer saw Prem giving her his best smile. She blushed. She pushed him again away from her and ran inside towards their room. Prem saw her enticing form going towards their bedroom, he smirked and knew he will materialize her small peck into a full passionate kiss.

Prem: Pyaase hoton ki jo kahani hai

Pass aake tumhe sunani hai

He found her standing in dining room while holding her phone. She saw him and kept her phone on the table and looked at his body from head to toe. He was looking so sexy in white shirt which hugged his chest. Heer could feel her hands twitching to touch that hard chest. She gave him the seductive look and as a result Prem smirked. He made his way towards and she took steps backwards, still distancing them. Not good she is still teasing me, thought Prem. He cornered her against a wall. God how much I wanted to touch her, make her mine all over again, thought Prem. Heer got anxious from this closeness, it was not the first time that they were this close but in anticipation of what is going to happen. She was afraid and yet excited about what the night would unfold for the lovers. She licked her lips, and immediately Prem's eyes followed towards this action. He touched her soft lower lip with his thumb and wiped the drops on it. He extended his hand towards her cheek and caressed her cheek with his thumb. Heer leaned unto his warmth and Prem knew she is enjoying it. He cupped her other cheek too and moved her face towards his lips. Heer felt he was going to kiss and indeed she waited this move of him. She closed her eyes and Prem tried to stop a smile coming on his face. Instead of kissing her straight on her lips, he first kissed corner of her mouth and then licked that area. Heer gasped first because she wasn't expecting it and second by the sensation caused by this simple move of his. Satisfied with her reaction he kissed another corner of her mouth. But this time instead of licking just the corner of her mouth and licked her entire lower lip. When she moaned, Prem pressed his teeth lightly on this lip.

Heer: Yeh baatein main na kar paongi

Pass naa aana mar jaongi

Heer eyes widened with this move by Prem. She has never been acquainted with this wild side of Prem. She wanted to feel and know more what was in store for her so she pushed him again, with all force she can muster. But Prem just chuckled not even moving an inch from his place. Heer gave him a sexy pout and pushed him lightly and this time he moved easily moved. She moved backwards towards the couch, still looking at him. She surely know ways to entice me, thought Prem. She sat on the couch. He still had that passionate look in his eyes infact she had ignited it more.

Prem: Aao na aao naa pass aao na, aao naa

Dekho aao na

Prem went towards the couch and sat very close to her, leaving no space between them. Heer gave him mischievous smile, giving him the look which meant she will not give in so easily. She got moved further away from him, while looking straight at him, as though challenging him. Prem lips twitched up and he further again lessen the gap between them. Heer moved again but this time Prem held her by her wrist and made her sit on his lap. Her hands were on his chest and Heer couldn't resist and finally and slowly ran her hands on Prem's chest. Prem tried hard to stop himself from moaning. Those hands always did magic to his body, always making him lose control. Heer looked at him and he was very serious this time, giving intense look as though saying play time is over. He held her back of her head with palm of his hand. Heer tried to move back but Prem pulled her towards him. The more he pulled her towards him, the more he shifted back. This time even Heer didn't resist, as though she was in some kind of trance. In last pull, Prem was lying flat on couch and had pulled Heer completely over him.

They looked at each other for long time and then nobody knew who made the first move but they were kissing each other fiercely. And suddenly their world burst in flames. Prem lips were soft and like petals brushing against Heer's soft and honey sweet. Heer held him by neck and caressed his hair. Prem licked her lower lip and then sucked it. Heer moaned, enjoying every moment of this heaven. Prem tried to pull away but Heer pressed their lips more firmly and as a result moved more towards his body. Prem was liking this warmth immensely that her body was providing him with. Heer opened Prem mouth and slipped her tongue inside his, deepening the kiss. But before she could explore his mouth, Prem started the battle for dominance, increasing the excitement between them more. He growled when he succeeded in entering her mouthing in exploring it. The kiss was intoxicating just like him, addicting her with his every move.

When they broke the kiss, they were breathing heavily. "You are not going anywhere tonight beautiful..." said Prem, while nipping at her chin. Heer's heartbeat increased for a moment. "You've got the softest, smoothest skin I've ever touched", Prem said and planted a soft kiss on her neck. After a moment Prem straight went towards her face and started trailing kisses there. Then he kissed her jaw, her neckline, collarbone, sucked on her earlobe and then lightly bites it. As his mouth was reacquainting itself with her upper body, Prem's hands wandered at her other body parts. He was making her feel different sensations now, with which she was never accustomed. But, she wanted him so badly. She wanted him in ways she had never truly wanted a man before. She felt as though only he can quench her thirst.

He faced her again, letting her know how much he wants, desires her right now, and there is no way he can control himself. He spoke his thoughts by saying "you have no idea what you do to me Heer?" Heer knew this was resulting a lot more then she anticipated it, she looked up and saw in his eyes asking her should he go on or stop now? She didn't want to stop him now, infact she never wants him to stop, always want him to desire and pleasure her like this. She nodded her head in confirmation of her answer and in one moment, he was still just staring at her, and in the next moment, he had her in his arms. He got up from the couch and made his way towards their room.

Heer: Dil jaise karvatein badalta hai

Mera toh sara tan jalta hai

When they entered the room electricity went off, the only light that was coming in the room was the moonlight, making the atmosphere more romantic for the lovers. Prem lowered Heer to the ground said "I will go and check what's wrong". He turned but Heer held his wrist and moved towards him, going into his arms, her body pressed against his chest, where both could feel each other's heart beats. "No need. I like this way more", said Heer while leaning more into Prem.

Heer started swaying her body against his, making Prem groan in pleasure. Prem moved his hands starting from her legs upwards towards her arms, clearly feeling her body heat and curves. Heer could only close her eyes and feel his hands moving on her body, sending shivers down her spine. Prem looked at her face knowing what his touch what resulting within her, her face was so soft, her lips were so enticing and parted, inviting and tempting him to capture them again. He wanted to taste them again till he was satisfied. But Prem knew he never will have enough of his wife.

Prem: Armaan jo dil mein machalte hai

Tan yunhi jhalte bhigalte hai

He kept his hand on her shoulder and squeezed it a bit and turned her around. Prem eyed her beautiful and smooth neck, he remembered he still have not marked her. He touched his next target and immediately his mouth was on her neck, giving her an open mouth kiss. He chuckled after a second when he heard Heer groaning. He bite on the spot where he had kissed first. He didn't bite hard but good or say sensuous enough to arouse different, unknown sensations in her. He then licked it and nipped at that point. He wanted Heer to know that there is no way he would let her rest any moment tonight. He decided to make this night memorable for them. He wanted to make her conscious of his desire whole night. He raised his head a little to look at his work and smirked knowing that in morning a mark would adorn her neck. Mark stating that she belongs completely to him. He was hit by a wave of possessiveness as he tightened his hold on her waist, trying to bring her body more close to him if it was possible.

Heer: Cho naa, cho na, mujhe cho na cho na

Dekho chooo na

He felt Heer taking long breadths and decided to bestow same attention to the other side of her neck. She moved her head backward to give him better excess. A warm feeling was arising within Heer from the way Prem was exhibiting his wants. He wanted to make her weak with the force of his passion. And Heer knew he was succeeding in it. Heer turned around and unbuttoned his shirt immediately, throwing it aside. She needed to touch, feel his body next to her, the longing building within her, was driving her crazy, trying to find a release.

Prem: Aao na aao naa pass aao na, aao naa

Dekho aao na, aao na, aao na

Prem turned around and while still bestowing kisses on her neck and upper body, he made his way towards their bed. They fell on bed with Heer underneath Prem. The moment they touch the bed, Heer captured his lips and immediately her tongue entered his mouth. Making use of surprise, she savaged every corner of his mouth. When she pulled apart Prem had the devilish grin and said "Finally". "You better not make me wait Prem", said Heer narrowing her eyes at him. He chuckled and held her both hands above her head, not letting her use them to touch him. He started kissing her arms one by one, igniting wild fire within her. He then held both of her wrists in one hand and used his other hand to caress her stomach and then squeezed it. Heer moaned and suddenly when Prem stopped, she opened her eyes and said "Don't stop Prem. I want you so much". Then she noticed the look in his eyes- the look of pure love and affection. "Don't ever leave me Heer", said Prem. She smiled and said "I love you Prem. I will never go away from you."

"I love you too, love you so much", said Prem with all the love he felt for her and then slowly he lowered his head towards her.

Jaane do naa

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After hours of passionate love making, Premeer were both tired but still they didn't want to separate from each other. They had the look of satisfaction, elation which one have only when they spend time with the person they love the most. Heer was lying on Prem's chest and Prem's hand was on her back, running smooth circles on her naked form.

"So I guess u aren't leaving now?", said Prem smiling. He was proud and happy with himself that he had been successful in stopping her from leaving him.

"Took you long to figure that out", said Heer while raising her eyebrows, looking straight at him. Then she smiled and said while brushing her nose with his "Tum agar aise rukoge toh main tumhe kahin chod ke nahi ja paongi."

"Aur tumhara project?", asked Prem

"First nothing is more important than you. And second, I have already messaged my assistant to go in my place and if she couldn't handle it then I will go after two days", said Heer coming more close to him.

Prem was about to interject when Heer silenced by kissing him quickly on his lips and said "We both will go. I won't go away from you. Now is it fine?"

Prem gave his best smile and said "Perfect. Who doesn't like to have a second honeymoon?"

Heer raised her eyebrows while smirking and said "Who said anything about it?"

"You will when this night ends", said Prem while sucking her earlobe and interlinking their legs.

"Premmmmmmmmmm", squealed Heer when Prem encircled his arms around her sexy body and pulled her down on the bed. What started as a nightmare ended in being their best night till date.

Oh Pass aaooo na
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😲😲😲😲😲
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
OH MY GOD !!!!!!!!! I AM SPEECHLESS...
Dii Yeh aap ne kya kar diya☺️??? I dont have words☺️☺️☺️...
Started Imagining Premeer, really, It was driving me CRAZY ☺️☺️☺️...
and My Heartbeats increased increased while reading this OS ☺️...
Enjoyed Every Bit of it...😍
Dii Yeh Kya tha, GOD !!!!!!!!!
Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome !!!!!!!!! 👏👏👏
Words are less to describe feelings, really words are less... this emoticon can describe everything ☺️...
Forum mein sab kaam se gaye !!!
I am toh Already DEAD ☺️☺️☺️ !!!!
^^^ Okay that was only Intro, comment abhi baaki hai😉😳...
Okay Starting of OS is perfect, Prem's dream and then he is trying to stop heer from leaving 😉, nice concept !!!!
Second part
{From the moment he saw water all over her, he wanted to suck it away and now he will do just what he wanted.}
This line is soooooooooooooo ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️, i dont know what to say☺️...
{Heer came out of the bathroom drying her hair with her towel. She was wearing the red saree}
@Bold: Hayeee Heer in Red Saree 😍☺️☺️☺️... starting mein i am dead...
{Prem started trailing his fingers on her arms touching each and every drop of water in his way. Heer closed to feel him against her, loving his touch in every way.}
😍😍😍 I am phreaming !!!!!!
{Prem found her standing in rain, which was soaking her completely. Her red saree was clinging to her body tightly giving her very sensuous look. }
I can imagine, Heer in Red Saree ☺️☺️ and Rain ☺️...
{ (1)Prem brought his other hand towards her stomach and at first just touched it. Heer closed her eyes. Then second she slowly but steadily started touching her stomach with his fingers. (2)Then he started moving them slowly, not leaving any inch where his fingers didn't trace her stomach's soft skin.}
@Bold (1) & (2): HAWT ☺️☺️☺️ !!!!
and light kiss in the garden, Loved it !!!!
{She closed her eyes and Prem tried to stop a smile coming on his face. Instead of kissing her straight on her lips, he first kissed corner of her mouth and then licked that area. Heer gasped first because she wasn't expecting it and second by the sensation caused by this simple move of his. Satisfied with her reaction he kissed another corner of her mouth. But this time instead of licking just the corner of her mouth and licked her entire lower lip. When she moaned, Prem pressed his teeth lightly on this lip}
MY GOD MY GOD MY GOD !!!!
This whole part is soooo hot☺️☺️☺️ !!!!
When prem kissed and licked her face, i was imagining and was about to Faint ☺️ !!!!
I am Dead !!! ☺️☺️☺️
The way you described Couch working out !!! i dont know what to write ☺️ (thousand time this emoticon ☺️)
{ In last pull, Prem was lying flat on couch and had pulled Heer completely over him. Heer opened Prem mouth and slipped her tongue inside his, deepening the kiss. But before she could explore his mouth, Prem started the battle for dominance, increasing the excitement between them more. He growled when he succeeded in entering her mouthing in exploring it. The kiss was intoxicating just like him, addicting her with his every move. When they broke the kiss, they were breathing heavily. "You are not going anywhere tonight beautiful..." said Prem, while nipping at her chin. Heer's heartbeat increased for a moment. "You've got the softest, smoothest skin I've ever touched", Prem said and planted a soft kiss on her neck }
Ahem Ahem Ahem !!!!!!! Driving me Crazy !!!
☺️☺️☺️
{When they entered the room electricity went off, the only light that was coming in the room was the moonlight, making the atmosphere more romantic for the lovers.}
WOW !!! Magical and Romantic !!! 😍
and Bed Romance ☺️☺️☺️
{The moment they touch the bed, Heer captured his lips and immediately her tongue entered his mouth. Making use of surprise, she savaged every corner of his mouth.}
Loved the Way you described Romance !!! Hot and Passionate ☺️☺️☺️
{Prem gave his best smile and said "Perfect. Who doesn't like to have a second honeymoon?" Heer raised her eyebrows while smirking and said "Who said anything about it?" }
@BOLD: ☺️☺️☺️, loved this line😆... Dii you should write sequel of it, Second Honeymoon☺️☺️☺️... I am sure you will ROCK IT as well !!!
{"Premmmmmmmmmm", squealed Heer when Prem encircled his arms around her sexy body and pulled her down on the bed. What started as a nightmare ended in being their best night till date. }
@BOLD: ☺️☺️☺️, Best Night of Premeer till date... and Best OS Till Date 👏👏👏 !!!
Okay !!!
I Enjoyed each and Every bit of it... It was driving me crazy and my heartbeats toh ☺️☺️☺️...
Soooo Much HOT and PASSIONATE !!!!!!!! It was beyond My Expectations ☺️
There is X-Rated Factor in it... Loved it ☺️...
Perfect Starting and Perfect Ending !!!!
Mostly i loved in this OS is HEER IN RED SAREE !!!
You know dii, its my weekness, Heer in Red Saree... yeh word sunte hi, mein apne DREAMLAND mein with Heer in Red Saree☺️☺️ !!!
and Now Part for YOU !!!
I know how much you love Prem in White Shirt and Blue Jeans, same like me, Heer in Red Saree 😍... So You also enjoyed the same way i did...
Loved the Way you described each and every scene, Couch Making Out, Bed Romance, Heer ran to garden and Rain, everything was perfect and phreamy... Passionate too !!!
Overall FULL PACKAGE OF PASSIONATE ☺️☺️ !!!!
and you know dii, this is my longest comment since i joined I-F... and it specially for you...
Thanks a lot dii for dedicating this OS to Me...
Love You Sooooooooooooooooooo Much *Muah* !!!!!!!!!
and I love my Heer in Red Saree 😉😉
Thanks Once Again !!!
Love Ya !!!
Edit Add: Now Their all scenes are not going out of my mind, imagining each and every scene again and again and again and again ☺️☺️☺️, all scenes making me insane, i have highlighted (BOLD) the parts which was sooooooo ☺️☺️☺️ infact i loved each and every word of it... ☺️ each and every word is hot and passionate...
You are very much talented Dii... Writing OS and FF is not Easy Job, you did it very well... Hats Off To You !!! 👏👏👏👏👏
Words are less to Appreciate Your Work !!!
Premeer can PHelt our BRAINS with light romantic scenes, and aghar yeh scene kis desh mein hota toh ☺️☺️☺️, no one can imagine hum konsi duniya mein hote... ☺️
will add more later, as extra time is allowed na... 😆
Note: and you havent lost your touch !!! this is the best OS till Date !!!
and i give you 10/10 for it !!!!!!!
Edited by Waqas... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Sia.."Waves"😆

The WHOLE IF knows ki mujhe sharam nahii atti 😳😆,I am very Bindaas
Likin tera yeh OS par kar tu Paani paani hogaye ....🤣

Very beautifully Written, The way you described Wet Heer in red saree, bhai tu latto hogyae the 😆
and my prem in white shirt...Mere dil ki dhadkhane tez hogaye 😲, i can imagine him 😍

It was Zarrorat se ziyada se Passionate,Hot and sexy 😍,After a long time I read something Good
in IF.😆 Surprisingly it wasnt bashing,Teasing,Pointing fingers and etc etc.😆😆

Each and every movement Yo described it so well that i could imagine it was happening in front of me and i so wanted to capture it with a Camera for my Vmz 😆 .

Loved it..Super HOt and sexy....Ziddi Heeriye aur us se bhii ziyada ziddi and naughty Prem ☺️😍
Ahhhhh i love him 🤗.....Thank you For Completing this OS....and making my day
I will PHrool for a week now, i already rad it thrice 😳 and still reading it 😛

PS: when we will get Opposite attract??🤔
Get Well soon...Miss you....Take care....
With lots of luv and hugs
Pari

Edited by -Parisa- - 14 years ago
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me not allowed to read?😭 im so emotional after hearing about the update*wipes tears*
Edited by pwincess1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pwincess1

me not allowed to read?😭 im so emotional after hearing about the update*wipes tears*

check ur inbox
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have done👍🏼🤗

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